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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2014 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 20

Seth is a smart boy.  Edward is very good with shoping lol

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Date: 16 Jun 2014 4:40 PM Title: Chapter 20

I am all caught up on both versions and ready for more. I love it so much.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 8:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

Online shopping rules.

It was wise of Edward to confide in Eleazar about Heidi.

Seth could be a problem, but hopefully he'll be an ally.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

I just started reading this part of the story and I am mad at myself for not reading it at the same time as the other. I love this other view. Now I am reading the other one over again so I get the whole story. I love it.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 20

Gotta love Amazon for holiday shopping. The key is to get it ordered and shipped in time.

Sounds ilke things are going to get interesting with Seth...

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 20

Glad to get this update.  I have been missing you and your story. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 10:32 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 20

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Reviewer: TeamAllTwilight Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 20

This is an amazing story and I am excited to read more.  I am so glad I found it and thank you so much for writing it and sharing it with us all.  Kasi~

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 20

Okay, now Eleazar , as well as Garrett is in the know! I'm kind of glad the cat's out of the bag with the boss! It spikes Heidi's guns pretty well, the stupid woman! I can hardly wait to see what Edward thinks of Seth finding out about his relationship with Bella! Looking forward to your next update! Good luck with the apartment move and in the your new position!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 20

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 20

Glad Elezar listened to him rationally about the Heidi and other crap.   dun dun dun for seth.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 May 2014 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 19

I'm hoping it goes as planned.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 May 2014 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 19

He is such a good man and loves her so much.  I dont see how they can wait much more.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 9:56 AM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 May 2014 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 19

It's always nice to hear Edward's point of view. it's cute that he has a countdown clock going. Now i wonder if it will ever be an issue of the kids questioning Garrett about this thanksgiving or do they not meet very often?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2014 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 19

E is such a sweetheart.  Gottalove him

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 10:51 PM Title: Chapter 19

Love their weekend together. Who was the guy that made Bella feel uncomfortable? Will he be showing up again?  Can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 18

LOVE LOVE LOVE this chapter.  Glad that they talked some things out.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 19

It's going to be a little more difficult for the both of them to carry on the fiction of merely employer and emploee. This taste of freedom and privacy must make them long for time to fly!

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 19

I really do hope nothing hinders their plans!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Apr 2014 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 18

I like seeing them moving forward.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 18

God I love him

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 3

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 2

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Date: 23 Apr 2014 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 1

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 18

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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2014 6:30 AM Title: Chapter 18

I'm so glad they are hashing all the details out with each other, it's going to be the saving of many misunderstandings. They seem to be right on schedule and hopefully nothing goes too much off track. I'm pretty sure Tanya will be okay with the news, maybe not joyful, but okay, as will Alice and Jasper. Rosalie is probably going to be a ryal brat over it, but what else is new? Carlisle and Esme, I'm not quite sure, but the girls should be fine with it!

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Apr 2014 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 18

i loved the chapter(:

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2014 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 18

I think telling a Tanya first is a good idea. 

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2014 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 17

I love him.  Heidi is a bitch

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Apr 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 17

i loved the chapter(:

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 17

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 16

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:23 PM Title: Chapter 15

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 14

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 13

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 12

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 11

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 12:55 PM Title: Chapter 9

Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 8

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Apr 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 7

Edward is an amazing boyfriend!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 09 Apr 2014 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

Great chapter!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 17

Riley and Heidi are so ridiculous.   Glad E is standing firm with Marcus' backing.

Rose is going to hit the roof when she finds out

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 17

So glad that they are finally getting some alone time together. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Apr 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 17

I have a feeling Heidi will be quite the problem child at work. She's not gonna go down easily.

Glad to see Edward and Bella moving forward. Though I think this is the calm before the storm.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 17

looking forward to more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

I had a feeling Edward would still be having grief from Heidi. She is going to be one surprised young lady when she finds herself out of a job! Can't wait! Alice is so sweet and sensitive to other's feelings! I sure would like Rosalie to come home woth a new attitude, but I suppose that won't happen. On to the big holiday weekend!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Apr 2014 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 16

Hate when parents are clueless about their kids behavior.  

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 16

It helps to hear both povs, even with the overlap. 

Glad Edward has set the big reveal date but he has to talk to Tanya first and hopefully in person. 

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 16

Love it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 16

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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 16

Things are moving forward life is good.

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 16

i loved the chapter(:

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 16

I love reading Edward's POV. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 16

love it

Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 16

I'm sooo looking forward to their Thanksgiving trip!!  I think it's hilarious that Alice "outed" Bella. Can't wait for next weekend's post!

 

 I am bad about slamming doors myself and it's really hard to get my kids to not do it but it's a work in progress for all of us. 

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2014 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 16

Nothing like finally getting some grown up time when you are surrounded by kids, even if it's only for a few minutes. Thanksgiving will be most interesting.

Reviewer: Humble Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 16

I like the idea about removing the doors.

 

I would have never dreamed of slamming a door in either parent's home....

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 16

looking forward to moree

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Mar 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 16

Finally Edward has set a date to reveal his relationship with Bella. I seriously doubt Tanya or Rosalie will be to happy about it. I'm also concerned how Carlisle and Esme will react. I think Esme may be okay with it.

Looking forward to more.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 15

Love it!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great chapter!

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Mar 2014 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 15

I would say send Rosalie to the all girls school, but she'd find a way to blame Bella for it. That little girl needs some old school punishment to straighten her out.

Tanya and Edward need to find a new groove to discipline the kids.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 15

Ya Edward fucked up with Bella. Bella handled Edward a lot better than I would have.  I would have been pissed. Glad that Tanya took Bella ' s side right away. 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 15

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Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Mar 2014 12:03 AM Title: Chapter 15

Oh Edward, still trying to feel his way. That parenting stuff is hard. At least he has Bella to lean on but that brings more complications. Everything usually has good parts and bad parts. But nothing worth having comes easy.

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

I LOVED THE CHAPTER(:

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 10:37 PM Title: Chapter 15

Not being a big fan of corporeal punishment, I still had a fleeting wish to turn Miss Rosalie over my knee and paddle her butt! Being a teen is difficult, having one is part-time agony! Loved the fact that Tanya stuck up for Bella right from the first look at Rosalie! Have to keep reminding myself, it won't be quick, but hopefully it will be sure!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 15

Poor man it is just beginning but I bet he will take Bella s words over the kids

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 8:11 PM Title: Chapter 15

Glad that he and Tanya are able to talk and agree on kid stuff.  Kinda reminds me of me and my ex.  

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Mar 2014 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 15

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 14

i loved the chapter (:

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

That would be so hard to leave each other at night after what they did.  I love the promise of no more hiding in the future.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

As well as things are going for Edward and Bella on a personal level. Edward better keep an eye on Heidi, now that she's lost the promotion and suspects his relationship with Bella. She could cause some trouble. A woman scorned and all that.

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Mar 2014 6:07 AM Title: Chapter 14

love it

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love getting both POV's. I am wondering if Heidi is going to be a problem for Edward and for Bella. What is Tanya going to think about Bella and Edward being together? I know that Tanya likes her now but that is as the nanny not as the step-mom. Thanks for the update. 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 14

hmm Heidi sounds like she's going to be trouble.  Hate catty biatches.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 8:15 AM Title: Chapter 14

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Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Mar 2014 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 14

Edward has an enemy in Heidi that he had best keep an eye on, she will be the type to play dirty, if given an opportunity! It was a foregone conclusion that he would get the promotion, just as he predicted, for simply doing a better job than anyone else! Now he and Bella can look forward to Thanksgiving at Atlantic City!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

God I love him he will protect her and if anyone talks to her like that they will be sorry.

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