Login
Register a New Account


Follow Us
      

You must login (register a new account) to review.
Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2015 12:20 AM Title: Chapter 29

I like  getting  both POV of this story. 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 29

Bella needs to rest.  She is doing too much too fast.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2015 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 29

Poor thing,  I know how she feels. Good for Rosalie! 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 29

Leah, Sue and Charlie are so supportive, it really highlights how crummy Carlisle and Esme are being! Edward sure hates how it hurts Bella. Luckily, Rose is kind of making up for that by her changing attitude. I'm thinking she and Bella will even be friends someday!.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 29

Sounds like things are coming together for the family.  Sue and Charlie are def godsends.

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 29

:)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2015 1:29 PM Title: Chapter 29

They're blending together as a family. Looks like Rosalie has finally settled down, but I have my suspicions about Royce being the one that carjacked Bella and Rose knows it. 

Sherry

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2015 2:53 PM Title: Chapter 28

Edward and Tania probably did marry earlier than planned, but that doesn't mean he didn't love them.  It wasn't like a one night stand.  They were in a relationship.  She needs to think of it as he loved them so much that he married Tania,  so they could be a family. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 28

Bella is easing right into being a co-parent. I'm surprised Rosalie talked so well to Bella. I was half expecting her to have some attitude.

Sherry

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Jun 2015 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 28

One thing that has been real to life throughout these two fics has been Rosalie's behavior. I was once a teenage step daughter. Besides normal teenage trouble, me and my step dad always had our ups and downs.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Jun 2015 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 28

Glad Rose talked to Bella.  Love Bella's idea about the room. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 28

Dare we hope this is the beginning of a better relationship between Bella and Rosalie? Bella has such a positive influence on this family, it should certainly offset the pissy attitude of Carlisle and Esme! Those two should really be ashamed of themselves!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 28

:):)

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 28

That went much better then I figured it would have gone with rosalie

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Jun 2015 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 28

Great thinking and talk on Bella's part.  She is def being quite patient with everything going on.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 27

Esme??? Carlisle??? What the hell?!?!?!!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2015 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 27

Yeah for them. I am so mad at Esme and Carlisle.  Do they hate Edward?  It makes no sense to me.

Reviewer: Daydreamer40 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 9:43 PM Title: Chapter 27

Aww, yeah! I'm really angry with Esme. I mean it's not like Bella slept with Carlisle. She's being ridiculous! I hope her Gil's make her regret it. I really hope Rosalie has to take care of Bella...that's brilliant!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 27

wow  Esme is being a self righteous biatch.  Glad B is going to be ok

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jun 2015 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 27

:-)

Reviewer: sanchez1385 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 27

OMG!!! Can´t wait

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wow, Edward did not waste anytime.  No more hiding.

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 27

Yay:)

I hope this means the worst is over...

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 27

So heartwarming.

Sherry

Reviewer: tlwatkins36 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 27

Yay!!!! She said yes!!!  Can't really believe esme right now, I do hope she comes around

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 27

She said yes! As for Esme, if you are a true friend you support your friends even when you don't agree with their decisions. Plus Edward is their family. Hopefully they will work it out in time. Glad Bella is going to be ok.

Reviewer: Iteachu4600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 27

Esme is being a judgemental bitch. Screw her Bella is better off without Carlisle & Esme if they're going to dismiss her so easily.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2015 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 27

Looking forward to more 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 27

:) :) 

Reviewer: Gelsa Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 27

Not liking Esme.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2015 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 27

Bella came through this much better than she might, even with Esme's nasty attitude. She and Carlisle are not my favorite people right now! I had a sneaking hunch Bella would calm Edward down about sending Rosalie to boarding school. Hopefully life will now slow down just a bit and calm and healing can take place.

Reviewer: Cassandra Davenport Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2015 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 26

please please please update this story is absoloutely awesome

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 7:05 AM Title: Chapter 26

OMFG she was mugged that is just icing on the cake SHIT!  Rose is a little brat she will grow up sooner or later.  Edward is going to be freaking out when he gets all of her texts and messege but he is going to lose his shit on the last one.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 25

OMG cant wait for all to know I hope it goes well I dont think it will be as big of a surprise as they think.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2015 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 26

looking forward to the next chatper 

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 May 2015 6:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

Why didn't Ben walk her out or she should have went back to the apartment when she saw the creeps.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

Yea  Knew Rose would pull something.  Ugh teenagers.

Reviewer: janell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 26

Not that what happened wasn't awful but it could have been so much worse.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 May 2015 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 26

So, Bella basically got mugged. They stole Edward's car. I am just glad that they did not rape her. I was worried. I probably would have slapped Rose. That would have been my 1st reaction. Can't wait for your next update. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 5:24 AM Title: Chapter 26

What a cliffy. The shit has hit the fan. Rosalie and her little friends are in for an ass whooping, they have to be behind Bella's attack. I hope Ben or Angela find her soon.

Sherry

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2015 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 26

Not the best day for Bella by any means! First Rosalie's rant and not being able to reach Edward, then Esme's reaction to the news and finally assault and car theft! I just hope someone finds her soon!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2015 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 26

poor Bella

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2015 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 26

I do not even know what to say.  i cannot believe that Rosalie is that evil that she would have Bella attacked and possibly raped.  Who is she?  The level of devastation this will cause.  Not to mention Esme letting her out (willing or not) will be heartbroken too.  Then there is poor Edward on a plane and helpless.  I sure hope the next one is a long one because I do not know if my heart can take another cliffy.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 May 2015 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great times are coming. 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Apr 2015 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 25

Glad Sue is on her side.   Be nice to be in the open.  Has me wondering who is going to be the troublemaker in everything

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Apr 2015 5:14 AM Title: Chapter 25

:-)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 25

I'm anxious of them 'coming out' to everyone.

Sherry

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love love love this chapter!  So very glad to get this update.  Hope to hear from you soon. 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2015 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 25

So far, so good, with Sue on her side, Bella shouldn't have a bad time getting her dad to accept Edward. I think she worries more about his family's reactions, perhaps. I'm almost certain Tanya will be okay with it , but who knows about Rosalie? All in all, a pretty nice holiday season!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Apr 2015 8:50 PM Title: Chapter 25

:):)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 24

Sue is right it only matters if they make each other happy o if they are happy other s will see it and be happy for them

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Mar 2015 9:45 AM Title: Chapter 23

Wow that was a big step for Rose

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Feb 2015 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 24

At least Sue knows the truth and can help with Charlie when the time comes.

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Feb 2015 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 24

Love Sue's advice.  Tyler seems really sweet

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Jan 2015 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 24

Loved Bella's POV. Laughed at Tyler. Can't wait for your next update. 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 24

Charlie took the news about Edward better than expected, but he doesn't know everything either. Sue gave Bella really good advice to her.

Sherry

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 24

:-)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 24

A lovely holiday so far for Bella! Her dad took the news of Edward pretty well, since he doesn't know it all yet. I hope she takes Sue's advice to heart, because that's a very good way to handle it!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

:)

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 24

I'm glad that Bella is getting to see her family. And that was excellent advice that sue gave. I hope Bella remembers it in the future. 

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

loved it!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jan 2015 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 1

loved it!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2014 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 23

I feel bad for Bella. She should have taken a picture with the Cullen. She is family whether she marries Edward or not. They consider her family, well maybe Rosalie will soon.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2014 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 23

So glad to see these guys again. I hope things have settled down for you.

Sounds like things will get really interesting for this family after the holidays. I am glad Bella finally told Edward about her past. I think that the more they know about each other is better. It will help show they are serious and Edward can't be surprised by Bella's family bringing stuff up.

As for Rosalie, all i have to say is don't you just love teenagers. But I like that she is declaring a truce for the holidays. I think it would be good for her to have a talk with Bella about what issues she has with her. Maybe when everything goes public and Rosalie realizes Bella is not leaving. Of course it could just make things worse. Now on to Edwards pov.

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 23

<3 heart *.*

Reviewer: mrs_rsmith_thecure Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 9

<3 

*.*

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 23

:-)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 23

I laughed at Rosalie at the end.

Reviewer: Jane3105 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 23

Great chapter

Good to see you updating again

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 5:41 AM Title: Chapter 23

Honesty was the way to go for Bella with Edward. Now he knows what he could be up against. Rosalie couldn't have offered a better gift to Bella, let's just hope it last.

 

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 23

Glad Bella told him everthing and that Rose is starting to act a little nicer

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2014 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 23

Quite the gift from Rosalie, but probably appreciated, none the less! I'm glad Bella told Edward about the men she knew before him. I will help him beat hell out of James if they ever cross paths! I'm hoping evryone comes to accept Bella and Edward as a couple, without too much drama!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2014 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 23

let's hope Rose takes the news well.  Not feeling optimistic though

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2014 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 23

Looking forward to the next chapter

Reviewer: vampirenites Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 22

 i am dying here need to know what happens it has been too lonf 10/19/2014 i await update excitedly

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Aug 2014 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

Bella is right. She needs to tell Edward everything, so he is prepared for the fury that will come from her side of the family. He needs to know that it isn't personal. It has more to do with her past.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 22

Curious about those skeletons.

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 22

Thank You, Thank You for finally updating this absolutly beautifully captivating story!!! Next time u take a break I would appreciate u letting me know that u haven't abanded this story....

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Aug 2014 9:53 AM Title: Chapter 22

life is going as planed what is going to go wrong??

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 22

Can't wait to hear about Bella's past. Esme does mean well. She just cares a lot for Bella. 

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 11:24 AM Title: Chapter 22

:-)

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 22

They should know everything about each other's pasts. Confiding in Edward is the best thing to do.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 22

I really like the way Bella's friends care about and support her. Their gifts to her weren't bad either! I'm glad she has decided to tell Edward about Jake, Felix and James. I hope he can handle hearing it!

Reviewer: TheLadyKT Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 22

Glad she has some people being supportive in her corner.  These stories she needs to tell seem very ominous and scary

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 22

Getting closer. I think Bella is playing it smart by having Edward know everything beforehand. They will have enough to deal with without Edward being caught off guard or without all the facts.

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Aug 2014 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 22

Now she is going to tell him about the skeletons of her past, why hasn't she told him sooner, I smell trouble.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Aug 2014 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 22

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it and can't wait to see what will happen next!

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2014 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 20

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 19

Loved it!

Reviewer: Snowflakebaby4 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2014 8:28 AM Title: Chapter 18

Loved it! They are perfect for each other!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jun 2014 12:59 AM Title: Chapter 21

Great chatper!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jun 2014 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 21

They are making the perfect family

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 21

At first I was concerned Seth would be a problem, but now he seems to understand Bella and Edward's relationship is honest and true. Just hope everyone else accepts it as easily.

Reviewer: acullenfan Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jun 2014 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 21

I think its interesting how Seth jumped to the idea that this was an affair where Edward was taking advtange of Bella, without asking Bella's thoughts about it. I can imagine that is what a lot of people will think. Hopefully Bella can work some magic on her family over christmas. Bella is proving that she can integrate all the aspects of her life. Nobody would question her giving up her career if she was a guy.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 21

I hope Seth keeps his word. No one has a right to say anything negative about Bella and Edward. They are both adults. They have thought of the children and are trying to make an easy transition into the relationship.

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 3:02 PM Title: Chapter 21

Loved it!!  Let's make babies!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: janell Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jun 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 21

:)

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 21

It worried Bella before Seth agreed to hold his peace, until she could tell her dad, Sue and Leah. The first one down and many to go, I'm afraid. The fact that Edward and Bella met the way they did is going to be held against them both, until family and friends can see how solid their relationship really is!

You must login (register a new account) to review.