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Reviewer: PrincessNerra75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2016 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

Very Interesting and Emotional story! I would love for another update to see what happens next. This was a very touching chapter.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Aug 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

can't wait for you to update this story

Reviewer: kikis2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jun 2015 2:28 PM Title: Chapter 1-Jasper: A Chance Encounter

I just found your story, and I'm so happy I did. Your characterisations are wonderful, canon and ocs all seem to be written with love and multi-dimensional, even the bad guys are lots of fun. I hope you post more :)

Reviewer: Jimmyg67 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Apr 2015 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

Great chapter here. I like how you threw in spirtuality with imprinting here. The books really do not get into that. Interesting take on it.

I feel bad for Embry. He imprinted only to get rejection- a not completely, but a rejection on his love none the less. I can just hear his desperation when he pleads;: "choose me. Choose life." But I guess real love can even conquer an imprint, because true love captures the heart as well as the soul. Even Embry reluntantly realises it when he says "alright, I won't force you to accept me." and  accepts Bella's friendship.

I like how you portrayed Bella. Yu have stayed true to her character. She loves EDward, even though she at this point can't or won't admit it. I wonder though if her decision to keep Embry as a friend could end turnning against her later on. A clean break may have been preferable, because it may give Embry some false hope. Well let see what happens. Good JoB!

P.S.: I'm glad i finallly found the story. I noticed you deleted it from twilighted program. But I found and eagerly waiting to see what happens next!

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2015 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

Finally got a chance to reread and catch up!! Poor Embry :(  Can't wait to see more!

 

-Kate

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

I have the opportunity to read this all at once again after so long. I found it no where else so I have no idea where I read this before.

 

Poor Bella all these men love her and yet she is in a world of hurt.

 

I hope you are well.



Author's Response:

You either read it at Twilighted, FF.net, or Archive of our own. I've deleted it from every site except this one because this one had been sitting for yrs. When I'm finished with it, I'll re-upload it to every site but Twilighted. I don't always have a beta, so I can't upload anything to their site if there are any grammatical errors. Plus, I hate waiting fur sometime else. It's annoying. :-) Thanks for taking the time to leave ask those reviews. I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 12-Recollection

If I remember this story correctly, Embry imprinted on Bella that is why they keep coming into this.



Author's Response:

Then you have read it. You're right, it wasn't finished. Like I said, I had to iron out a few plot details and that's why it was never completed. I'm working on chapter 15 right now, editing. I have through twenty written. Thanks!

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Mar 2015 1:10 PM Title: Chapter 11-Clever Ploys and Ambushes

Yes I do rememeber reading this long ago. Just don't remember if it was finished.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 9-The Royal Courier

John Wayne lives in the hearts and minds of my family.  single ply toilet paper is John Wayne Paper according to my son. My daughter and her family have his picture in their den.  LOL

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 8-Osculum Proditione Mortiferum Est.

oh the Romanians..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 7-Daydreams and Weddings

Well Felix or Demitri has come to collect Bella. Or perhaps it is Aro himself. Sigh no matter about Embry now.



Author's Response:

It's not who you think it is! ;)

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 6-Werewolves, Vampires, and First Kisses

she has every right to do this. He told her to move on. She has been slow doing it after Vicky killing Charlie there is no love for the Cullens, that was the Straw..

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5-The Boy I Once Loved

Yippie it is time Bella stands up and says NO NOT NO BUT HELL NO.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 4-Destiny

Maybe Edward has a girlfriend in South America. There are vamps down there and he is all about not changing her so, really I think they should leave her alone. If the werewolves hurt her or she is run over by a car it is not their concern.

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Mar 2015 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 1-Jasper: A Chance Encounter

I feel like I have read this before. If you are sending it back through, great if you maybe finishing it great.

 



Author's Response:

Yeah, this unfinished story has been around for awhile (2012). I originally had the timeline at a ten yr separation, but I changed that to five and a few other things that just weren't right. I think I had written myself into a corner, and because of that, I was unable to finish it. It's posted in many places, including Twilighted and FF.net, and I'm slowly deleting and reuploading the new material. Thanks for taking the time to review!~J

Reviewer: LeslieE Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 7:24 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

Just found this story.  Very good and interesting premise.  Look forward to future chapters.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I have a lot of of interesting things planned for future chapters!

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 7:11 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

Love it 



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I have a lot of of interesting things planned for future chapters!

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

I freaking love this story. Keep updating it.



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I have a lot of of interesting things planned for future chapters!

Reviewer: Sephrenia Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Mar 2015 1:29 AM Title: Chapter 14-The Blue Flame of Hope

I am enjoying the story but it is confusing .... you keep flipping the time from 5 years to 10 years ....

 



Author's Response:

It was an accident. I've been combing through each chapter looking for that error and fixing it. I'm sorry you were confused. It really is only five yrs. im sorry about the confusion. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I appreciate the review!:)

Reviewer: tigger5600 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 9-The Royal Courier

Can't wait to read more! :)

-Kate

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2014 12:33 PM Title: Chapter 9-The Royal Courier

Great update

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Feb 2014 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 9-The Royal Courier

love it wood like to read more

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Dec 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 8-Osculum Proditione Mortiferum Est.

Great chapter!



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying it! Thanks for the review!- Jamie

Reviewer: ladydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 6-Werewolves, Vampires, and First Kisses

Wow I can't believe it Bella and Embry 

 

grate paring hope Embry kicks Edwards ass



Author's Response:

Well, it's an Edward/ Bella story, but yes, Embry kicks his ass. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: ladydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 5-The Boy I Once Loved

What where they expecting Bella to welcome them with open arms well they are all in for very serious surprise. I hope she kicks their asses 

Reviewer: ladydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 4-Destiny

Am with jasper on this one I too love angrey Bella she is funny. More pls

Reviewer: ladydee Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Dec 2013 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 3-Dinner at the Blacks'

What a fabulous take on twilight. I am loving evry second of the story. It's 1:00 am and I still can't put it down. 

 

Great work. Can't Waite for things to get hot under the covers for Embry and Bella lol 



Author's Response:

I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 5-The Boy I Once Loved

Great chapter!

Chapter 6 looks to be very promissing in the F you Cullen catagory, can't wait!



Author's Response:

Yeah, it's a good chapter. You'll definitely enjoy it. Thanks for reviewing. I'll update again tonight-Jamie

Reviewer: korenx Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 5-The Boy I Once Loved

loving it. please update sooooon!!!!



Author's Response:

Tonight! I'll update later today. I'm glad you're enjoying the story. Thanks for reveiwing.

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Dec 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 4-Destiny

Fascinating plot. Great writing, too. I hope you feel better soon.

Author's Response:

I'm honored you think so. I'm well at the moment, thank you! Just uploaded a new chapter! Thanks for taking the time to review!-Jamie Anna

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 3-Dinner at the Blacks'

So is Jasper there, will he tell her why Edward did what he did as to protect her....I can see why he left her in new moon but he went about it the wrong way..

Author's Response:

Oh, yeah. She'll find out why. Though she's not gonna be happy. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Nov 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 2-Bella

great so far, Is this a Jasper/Bella or will Bella/Edward be

Author's Response:

This is a Bella/Edward fic. Jasper may not be her love interest, but he'll be an extremely important person in her life. Thanks for taking the time to review! Have a good night.

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Nov 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 1-Jasper: A Chance Encounter

wow can't wait for more to read



Author's Response:

I'm glad you enjoyed it. I'll post again tonight or early tomorrow. Thanks for reviewing.

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