Date: 10 Sep 2015 7:44 AM Title: Chapter 8-The Great Divide
Why couldn't you have paired Bella with a more likable wolf? Why the complete asshole and excuse for a being that is Jacob Black? Seth and Leah (and maybe Quil and Embry) are the only wolves that I can stand. Seth would have been a great match. Obviously there's a 4 (maybe 5) year age difference between Bella and Seth, but there's a 90 year age difference between Bella and Edward.
Overall, good story but a Wolf and a Vampire can not imprint/mate with the same person, as vampire mating indicates that the 2 are soul mates, I'm not sure about imprinting as it is not a mutual connection. One can not have 2 soul mates.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 8-The Great Divide
I hope Bella feels a connection to Edward when she wakes up. I don't like that she feels pain when the Cullens are around.
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 8-The Great Divide
Thank you for the update............what are the wolves and the Cullens going to do? Will Bella be alright? what about her child? her mate I mean imprint?..I can't wait to see how you tie it all together..well done...very interesting
Author's Response:
I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. The wolves and the Cullens will come to blows. Bella will come around and remember her past. Jake is angry. We'll just have to see how it all pans out. Thanks for reviewing.-JA
[Report This]Date: 06 Dec 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 7-Beasts a Plenty
thank you for the update.Bella is very powerful, will she learn to contol it?
Author's Response:
You're welcome! I'm glad you're enjoying it. Bella does have a piwerful gift, and yes, she will learn to control it. Edward and Jasper will teach her how. Thanks for reviewing-JA
Date: 06 Dec 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 5-The Rubber Band Effect
Fantastic description of her transformation! I'm shocked about the mother part & very intrigued with her gift! She seems like she will be a bad ass Bella!
Author's Response:
The transformation was a difficult portion to write, but I was pleased with the result. Yes, her being a mother is indeed unfortunate. Her gift is powerful, alright, and she will be "bad ass Bella". Thanks for reviewing-JA
Date: 05 Dec 2013 12:48 PM Title: Chapter 7-Beasts a Plenty
Interesting that she had Jake's baby...kinda hate that, but this is a really good story. This is well written and a ride to be on, I look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Yeah, she did, but I was just thinking that "maybe" had Edward not been in the picture, she might've gravitated toward Jacob after she returned to Forks. I'm glad you're enjoying the story, regardless. Thanks for taking the time to review -Jamie Anna
Date: 05 Dec 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 7-Beasts a Plenty
Carlisle and Edward have so splanning to do....oops didn't know her boyfriend was a shapeshifter and she will remember her child...is the child a shapeshifter too.
Author's Response:
Yep, she and one of the Quileutes had a kid, and no, the kid is only 3, so no shapeshifting going one. Since the kid is only half Quileute, I haven't decided weither or not it'll be a shifter. And yes, Carlisle/Edward will have a bit of explaining to do. Thanks for reviewing!! -Jamie Anna
Date: 04 Dec 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 6-The Merits of Light and Dark
Loved all the POVs....can not wait to read more...I didn't know she has a kid
Author's Response:
Yep, she had a life before she "died". That's going to make things difficult when she remembers who she is/was. Plus, the father isn't going to be all that happy, either. Thanks for reviewing.-Jamie
Date: 04 Dec 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter 6-The Merits of Light and Dark
Love it
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like it. I appreciate u taking the time to review. I'll updTe later tonight.- Jamie
Date: 03 Dec 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 5-The Rubber Band Effect
Well that went well didn't it. lol...I hope Carlisle or Edward can calm her down,before she hurts herself or a human..great story enjoy reading it
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I'll upload again tonight. Thanks for reviewing.
Date: 03 Dec 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 4-Chaos
well I hope her transformation goes well..
Author's Response:
Well, eventually it'll be alright. I just uploaded that chapter, so you'll be able to find out! Thanks for reviewing!
Date: 02 Dec 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 3-The Sands of Time
This is such a different twist on the original story. I'm looking forward to how you tell this! Oh & just to put my opinion out there.... Lemony goodness is always yummy! No need to keep it PG-13. ;)
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story. I always wondered what would've happened had Edward been unable to control his bloodlust. This is one of my first stories, the other is on this site, as well. And I'm with you on the lemons. All my other stories are NC17, I just wanted this story to be tamer.Thanks for reviewing! - Jamie Anna
Date: 01 Dec 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 1-Accident
Ok since I forgot to review chapter 1...so how many where in the car..Jake, Bella and ?.....so it would seem Bella's mind is blank to him and she asked him to do the right thing....her right and his right might be two different things.
Author's Response:
There were 3 people in the car. Bella was in the back, without a seatbelt. Yeah, you are so right about what she meant.
Date: 01 Dec 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 3-The Sands of Time
He's going to change her, well I hope she doesn't freak out to much once she is awakened....I really don't know how I would react to this myself..great chapter can not wait to read more
Author's Response:
Well, it's definitely interesting when she wakes up. I know I'd freak out! Thanks for reviewing! Have a good night!-Jamie
Date: 29 Nov 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 2-Death Becomes Her
I loved it so far...can not wait to read more
Author's Response:
I'm glad you're enjoying the story thus far. Thanks for taking the time to review! Have a good night!!