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Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 7:34 AM Title: Chapter 13

She is already getting her but red and taking it like a champ lol.



Author's Response:

:D Yes she is!

Reviewer: queencullen0527 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 13

yes. hmm parents..



Author's Response:

:D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 13

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 13

he spanked her and provided no aftercare shame on him



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 13

I enjoyed this chapter.  Thank you and Happy New Year!



Author's Response:

Thanks! Happy New Year to you too!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Jan 2014 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 13

this ch was great



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Dec 2013 9:01 PM Title: Chapter 12

Wonderful chapter.  HOT!  Thank you.



Author's Response:

 I am glad you liked it. Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 12

That was HOT!!!!!!! I have really enjoyed reading your story. I can not wait for you to update again. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am so glad you enjoyed ready my story. I should be updating again sometime this week!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 3:00 AM Title: Chapter 11

OMGosh!!!! I can't wait to see how Edward knew what she did. lol. She is gong to be in so much trouble :)



Author's Response:

;)

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 10

This was one HOT HOT HOT chapter!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you thought it was hot!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 9

This chapter was perfect!!!! I am glad that Bella did not flip out on Edward when he told her what he wanted with her. 



Author's Response:

Thanks, so glad you liked it!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 8

Wow!!!!! Edward has thought of everything. He is definitely thinking ahead. 



Author's Response:

:D Yes he has!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 7

Wow, your Edward is HOT!!!!!!! and demanding and controling 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I think so too!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow, how did get all her numbers and everything from her sims card without her sims card? Can't believe that he did a background check on her. 



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 5

OMGosh!!!!! I can not believe that she just flipped him. LOL!!!!!



Author's Response:

:D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wow, me thinks that Bella is a little tipsy!!!!! lol



Author's Response:

Just a little!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 3

I knew it!!!!!!! This could get really interesting. 



Author's Response:

:D Glad you like it!

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 2

You know that they are going to see her at the other bar. lol. She is so going to get caught. 



Author's Response:

Yes she is. ;)

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Dec 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 12

I don't know if you realize that in an earlier chapter. Bella took her nook to the beach, so she does have one. I just thought you might want to fix that fact. I love this story. This was a great chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks for telling me. :) I will fix it today or tomorrow. Thanks again for letting me know, and I am glad you like my story!

Reviewer: Foreverpeetaslove Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Dec 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story. I really love a dominating Edward. He is so sexy. Also, I love that you are setting this on St Simons. That was my playground during high school and on weekends home from college. Hearing you write about the locations is really cool. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you liked it! I grew up  on St. Simons, so it is easy to write about it, though I do miss it.

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

Bella is really have a bad day.



Author's Response:

Yes she was. Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: Roon1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

Oh my...... hot stuff.



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: PetralouiseSahriSahri Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 12

Was so glad to read your post I hope Edward gets dirty w/ Bella 



Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad to hear you were exicted to get it! :D Thanks for reviewing to let me know you liked it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Dec 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 12

The punishment was worth it she will take it over and over again lol



Author's Response:

Yes she will! :D Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: mrsvixter Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Dec 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 11

ohhhhh naughty bella



Author's Response: ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 11

My God, is Edward psychic?  How could he possibly knos?  Not like its tattoo'd on her face.....  



Author's Response: We will see ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2013 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 11

She is busted lol she must have looked to realaxed lol.  Renee is a very caring mom NOT!



Author's Response: Lol! We will see ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 10

I love this story. I think it will be very good.



Author's Response:

Thanks! I am glad you like it!

Reviewer: ladicullen Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 10

Oh my i love this so far can't wait to read more please.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing! Glad you like it!

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 10

This story is real good so far!  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

I am glad you like my story. Thanks for leaving a review!

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 10

I'm loving this story!!



Author's Response: I'm so glad you love it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 10

love it  can't wait for more



Author's Response: Thanks so much for reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 10

She is fustrated and what will Edward think of her little suprise for him??



Author's Response: We will see ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: opeltigra Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 1

Please keep the longer chapters!!!!

I am already addicted to your story ; )

Pllease keep writing and posting.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am going to try with the longer chapters. I am glad you are addicted. ;) I will keep writing and posting. I should have a new chapter posted by tomorrow night.

Reviewer: Pricklypearess Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 1

The veggie of the day is macaroni and cheese?  My kids would love veggies like that!  Ha



Author's Response:

Yes it really is, though at Barbara Jeans the Macaroni and Cheese is only the veggie of the day on Fridays.

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 4:35 AM Title: Chapter 9

I love chapters any size :)   That sounds like a wonderful day..  Edward got right to the point ;)



Author's Response:

Glad to hear it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 4:32 AM Title: Chapter 9

i fig he tell her she staying where his dom persona now



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 9

alot if information it seems for the girls to process

seems bella is in heaven in the kitchen. that is where i would be

love how the all jive really well together

can't wait to see how it all plays out

thank you, love it



Author's Response:

I am glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing to tell me!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 9

Dom? HA!!! I Thought you said Don, like the mob. So funny.



Author's Response:

Lol! Glad I made you laugh, even if it was unintentionaly. :) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: twilightchick79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 10:11 PM Title: Chapter 8

I am loving this story. Keep them chapters coming.



Author's Response:

I am so glad you love my story. I will keep them coming. :)

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 8

talk oh no ?



Author's Response: We will see! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Nov 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 8

I think Edward plans to keep her lol.  I cant wait for there talk.



Author's Response: We will see! Thanks for letting me know what you think!

Reviewer: lissalou72 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 7

I can't wait to see what happens on their day out. Hopefully they won't try and kill each other. Are they going to see Alice, Rose, Emmett and Jasper? I can't wait hope you hurry back soon

 

Keep up the great work.

 

Lissa



Author's Response: I am writing about their outing now, though it probably won't be ready until tomorrow. I am glad you like my story! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 7

Umm can she at least brush her teeth please............

Author's Response:

We will get to that! I have included it in the chapter I am working on now just for you! :D

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 11:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

he can be that dom with me



Author's Response:

Me too ;) Thanks for reviewing!!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 7

Shit he can take charge of me too! But I am curious as to where they are headed. 



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for reviewing! We will see! :)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 7

He is everything she needs even though she didnt know it lol.



Author's Response:

We will see ;) Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: dms1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Nov 2013 3:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

Love everything about this story!



Author's Response: I am so glad you like it! Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: Bobbysgirl Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 11:55 AM Title: Chapter 6

LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE. UPDATE SOOOOOON!!!!!!!



Author's Response:

Glad you like it!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 6

He is not going to let her get away ;)



Author's Response:

No he is not. :D

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 6

stand bye your guns girl



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!

Reviewer: EN426 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

LOL! Love this story, and can't wait until the next update.

 



Author's Response:

Thanks, I am so glad you like it!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

one for girl power



Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you liked it!

Reviewer: AstridGreenEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 5

That was great!
Go Bella!

Author's Response:

Thanks! ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 5

Been there not spread eagle but down no matter it hurt like hell.  She showed him lol I loved it but I want to hear what he has to say



Author's Response: Thanks! My goal is for them to have their conversation within the next two chapters. Hopefully the next one but I just have to see how it plays out on the screen. No too much more of a wait ;)

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

looking forward tomore



Author's Response: Thanks! Glad you are enjoying it!

Reviewer: lynard69 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

Ha! Serves him right. And way too funny.



Author's Response: Thanks for leaving a review! I am glad you laughed, I love to make people laugh.

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 4

atta girl bella! wonder why he did't apologize hmmm love the story!



Author's Response: Thanks so much for leaving a review! And I am so glad you love my story!

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 4

go bella



Author's Response: Thanks! I am glad you like her!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 4

She is going to get to the bottom of it

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

She cant get away from him lol



Author's Response: Not right now at least. :D Thanks for responding!

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 2

he wants more of her



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! Maybe ;)

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 1

Why didnt he help her up ass hole



Author's Response:

Thanks for your review! You will see :)

Reviewer: AstridGreenEyes Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 3

Hey!
I'm very exited to read more!

Hugs
Astrid

Author's Response:

Thanks for everything!!

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Looking forward to more



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: lovedimitri Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 3

looks like events are steaming up!!!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review! We will see! 

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 3

wow love at frist sight



Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review!

Reviewer: golightly38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 3

Can't wait to read more!



Author's Response: Thanks for reveiwing!

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