Date: 20 Dec 2011 9:34 PM Title: Epilogue
One of my favorites and one I have read a few times. I can't help but visualize a hotter Eminem with better manners as I read it. Not necessarily the thug-white trash type but his talent. Some may not see that Eminem has talent but I disagree.
Anyway, thanks for putting this out there!
Date: 29 Jun 2011 3:49 AM Title: Paroxysm
oh shit! this is not good. em was right though eddie needs to learn to turn velvet off when he is not needed. plus eddie better figure his shit out before morning. and poor bella it may have looked bad but eddie should have known better. this will definately be an interesting morning after. and what about the press?
Date: 29 Jun 2011 12:55 AM Title: Elphaba
tanya is dead. now eddie bella and abby can be the perfect little family they were ment to be. it is sad but this definately makes things easier for them to be happy.
Hi! I just wanted to pop in and say thank you to you for reviewing each chapter as you read. This story has been complete long enough that most people don't review at all, let alone each chapter so I wanted you to know how much I appreciate it. It's like reading the story all over again through your eyes and that makes each word woth writing. I hope you enjoy the rest of the story! When you get done, if you would like to read the one currently posted outtake of this story, let me know and I will hook you up! Thanks again! changedbyEdward
Date: 29 Jun 2011 12:32 AM Title: Change
wow that was a hot session in the studio, makin some sweet music! yummy. i wonder if eddie had the tapes still recording while they were in there? that would be fucking awesome evidence that eddie and bella were indispossed and sooo not thinking of anything to do with a gun.
Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:29 PM Title: Confrontation
well unfortunately for abby and bella tanya and her family choose to be fucktards again however that definately makes things easier for the court case! back together and on the road again. wonder who is outside the elevator?
Date: 28 Jun 2011 4:08 AM Title: Sacrifice
wow not really sure if bella knows what she is getting herself into with her offer to take abby. but hey she is and will continue to be a part of abby and eddie's life so as bella said why not?! time to turn on the sexy music because it is time to get it on!!!
Date: 28 Jun 2011 12:45 AM Title: Decompensate
wow eddie kinda flew off the handle there for a bit. but hey who can blame the guy? tanya is all kinds of fucked up and she is just causing more and more trouble. the only up side will be when they go to court for abby....
Date: 27 Jun 2011 10:48 PM Title: Mockingbird
Yay she is going! And abby seems to have just opened her heart and let bella in. They are gonna be such a good little family. So cute together. Now all we need is for tanya to od or get locked up for good to keep her outta the picture. So bad I know
Date: 14 Jul 2010 9:48 AM Title: Epilogue
Ok. Now normally I never have difficulty finding words, but SQUEEE! This story is just, just, just so fucking grown up. Perfection and High School plotlines have become so passé. Your tale is quite the breath of fresh air. Brava.
Hahahahahaha!!! I'm loving your reviews! Thanks so much for them! I'll never be able to sing John Jacob Jinglehiney Shit again without laughing my ass off!! I'm so glad to hear that you're enjoying this story!
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:11 AM Title: Harmony
Picture this, a livingroom full of overstuffed family members lounging about after a Thanksgiving feast. Your Niece *my Niece*, whilst dragging her very own Playskool step stool, announces to the room that she wants to share the song she learned in pre-school. After gushing grandparents and proud puffed up Poppa begin to ohh and ahh, your sister, looks over st you shrugging her shoulders as if to say don't blame me 'he's the outgoing one' helps said Niece to stand on her stool. After getting settled she begins a rousing version of “John Jacob Jingleheimer Schmidt.” However, apparently her preschool is VERY progressive and she sings “John Jacob Jinglehiney Shit.” Yup. Did you know that throw pillows aren't very tasty.
Love they story. Funny, sexy as hell, snarky and a fresh plotline. Love it!