Date: 27 Jan 2014 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 6- There is No Easy Way Out
Thanks for the warning up front. Now we hav to see how it shakes out. So I guess he dazzeled her and made her forget him?? Waiting with bated breath for the next chapter. Let's see how Cristian takes the news
Date: 27 Jan 2014 3:09 AM Title: Chapter 6- There is No Easy Way Out
So Edward is willing to leave Bella in an abusive relationship...yeah that is love NOT! I hope she gets away from both of them! Both are users and abusers! I doubt Edward 'imprinted' on Bella cause if he did he would get her away from that no matter what the cost. They are both liars and players!
Bella run, leave them in the past and hopefully you will find love in the futrure that won't want to abuse you or your child.
You missed a small part, Ed looked ahead and knows her future will be safe at that time. He is making a selfless choice. Bella is confused and trapped, Ed is protecting her the only way he can.
Date: 25 Jan 2014 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Coveted Apple
Questions: Why Greeen eyes? Contacts?
I doubt it is possible there are information on shapeshifters on the internet.
This is a take on the characters but doesn't follow them exactly so Ed has green eyes. And this is a "story" so there is information. I doubt that the information Bella googled was on the internet in Twlight either.
Date: 24 Jan 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 1- The Lure of the Forbidden
what is a rp charachter? not all acronyms are clear?
I would like to read but you havent' updated for almost 3 months. I'll read if you continue updating.
The story was just updated three days ago and it is in progress.
It is based on a roleplay character that I created.
Date: 17 Nov 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 4- When Paths Cross
I am feeling oddly protective of the Christian character and don't like him written this way. Edward needs to get himself together quickly and stake his claim to Bella. Christian needs an appointment with the good doctor.
I think in part you are seeing him as the Mr. Grey we all know from 50 Shades but this Mr. Grey is a pre Ana version. Remember he had a very dark past. This explores it.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 4- When Paths Cross
This story I swear gets better and better. I hope that Edward kills Christian for what he is doing and has done to Bella. Can't wait for another update.
Thank you for your review, it makes my day when my story gets a response like this. Working on next chapter now.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 3- How Can You Love Me?
I Love This story!! Please Update Soon.Its definately a plot I've Never Read Before.
Working on next chapter now and it is a unique plot. Based on my rp character and her newest guy.
Date: 13 Nov 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 3- How Can You Love Me?
This story is to amazing for words, I love how sexy Edward is and how confused Bella is. I can't wait for more.
Thanks for that, you made my day. This story is a fave of mine, I love the way Edward is and he will get more sexy as time goes on too.
Date: 08 Nov 2013 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 2 - The Coveted Apple
This story is amazing, I love the way the way that Edward is so mysterious with Bella. I can't wait to find out how long Edward can go without seeing Bella. Update soon.
I always wanted to explore more of Edward holding back with her, in this story he will dangle his love in front of her and wait to see what happens.