Date: 13 Jul 2015 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 25
Well i loved the story but not the way it just stopped, really hope you update it soon.
Date: 04 Apr 2015 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm really enjoying this story. I hope you finish it!
Date: 26 Feb 2015 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 1
I hope you are well. I just discovered this story and I am thoroughly enjoying it. It seems as though there has been no activity since early 2014. As it is 2015 now, I am assuming you have abandoned this story. That is a shame because I loved your slant on the Ana/Christian story. There were many plot points that I wish were resolved. Will Ana and Christian stay together through all their issues? Where is Ana's drunken mom and stepdad - will they re-appear? Will Elena get out of prison, and what hell will she wreak? Also, I noticed your use of the sub names (Leila and Susannah) and the birth moms name (Ella). Will these characters prove true to form? So many possibilities.... please reconsider completing this story if you are able.
Author's Response:
Thank you for the review! I have continued this, you can find it on Fanfiction.net, same penname and same title. Time just wasn't enough to keep the story up to date on multiple platforms... I look forward to reading your take on the rest of the story (not quite finished yet) if you decide to continue reading it!
H
Date: 16 Apr 2014 11:02 AM Title: Chapter 25
I enjoy this story. It started out moving fairly smooth and now seems to almost stopped. Are you going to continue and complete this story.
Please update soon.
Thanks.
Date: 30 Mar 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 25
Really enjoyed the chapter, so sweet CG chat with his dad. I did not like the doctor much!
Date: 15 Mar 2014 11:41 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love these two crazy kids and I am enjoying this story very much.
[Report This]Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wow, what an amazing chapter. I can't wait to see how this go. I totally love this cg & Ana. Thank you so much.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 26 Feb 2014 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 24
I like your Christian!
[Report This]Date: 19 Feb 2014 10:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
I absolutely love this story. I found it 26hrs ago & now I'm caught up & sad. Thank you for you all you do to bring this story to us. I can't wait for a whole lot more (I hope).
I was kinda wondering what repercussions would come with Ana taking Ben to the park. Maybe this can give Ana & CG an idea of CG getting a place for the shelter that would have a place for a private park or have an indoor playground (he has the money. Lol). CG & Ana might want to think about her moving in with him too. I had an idea about the car thing too, if your interested you can let me know. I'm kinda new to this site, so not sure how things work. Anyway, thank you again. I really do appreciate all your hard work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review! I'm happy you enjoyed it, hope you'll continue enjoying it! H xx
Date: 07 Feb 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 23
Brilliant, it is going to continue.... I hope just how we like it.
Author's Response:
:) Thank you! H xx
Date: 06 Feb 2014 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 23
He loves her! We knew that.
Author's Response:
Yeah, he does :) And we knew it before he did! H xx
Date: 04 Feb 2014 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 22
This is really good. I like the alternative storyline.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
They are great together, so good to get home and have more chapters. Just need more now. Thank you
Date: 30 Jan 2014 1:57 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapters! I can't wait until Christian takes care of Rob.
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:15 PM Title: Chapter 22
I need more...
Date: 30 Jan 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 1
Please update....
[Report This]Date: 11 Jan 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
OMG!!!! I love Christian and Ana. I wish Christian got to meet Ben, I think that would be cute. Next chapter, please.
Date: 10 Jan 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 20
This was a nice sweet chapter but I am certainly missing CG and Ana being stuck together. I hope he returns home soon!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 19
Loved it! I like this Christian a whole lot!
Author's Response:
Thank you :)
Date: 01 Jan 2014 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, that was a pleasant meeting break; I think they need a strong tea and coffee now. I am looking forward to Ana giving CG her Charcoal picture.
Author's Response:
Definitely a refreshing break to the meeting :)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 18
I'm really enjoying how this is moving along. They are so caring with each other. I like how things are moving along in the relationship too. can't wait for the next chapter.
merrily
Kat
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 29 Dec 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 17
Interesting development with Leila.
Author's Response:
Thank you, there's more of Leila to come.
Date: 12 Dec 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 14
My heart hurts.
Author's Response:
I first read it as My head hurts. Had to think twice - what did I write. LOL. Then I read it again. He has a heartwrenching history, doesn't he.
Date: 12 Dec 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
<sigh> Wow, I love that your Christian is able to get everything out in the open with Ana so quickly!
Author's Response:
Thank you! I decided it was for the best, you know, like ripping off a band-aid. :)
Date: 11 Dec 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 13
Can't wait to hear how Christian answers her.
Date: 07 Dec 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 12
I have to say that that was better than the original for Ana at least!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh yes, just what the doctor ordered, great chapter!
Date: 05 Dec 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 10
This story is so sweet!
Date: 03 Dec 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great read, I can feel their passion, the suspense is getting to me. I wish the chapter was longer, but I am most certainly looking forward to the next one!
Date: 02 Dec 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 9
This is such a sweet story.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 01 Dec 2013 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 9
It seems weird that she is flat mate of Leila, I hope this does not mean something horrible coming up in the, story. Looking forward to Christian and Ans's first night together!
Author's Response:
To be exact she rents Leila's appartment. As for A&C being together... A few chapters to go ;) Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2013 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
Another great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 29 Nov 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 8
Very enjoyable, looking forward to more!
Author's Response:
I'm happy you are enjoying it!
Date: 27 Nov 2013 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 8
Wonderful chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 24 Nov 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 7
They both had a really hard start in life. Can't wait to see who makes the first movebecause they both have some amazing energy.
Merrily
Kat
Author's Response:
They have had their share of darkness in the past. Thanks for reading and reviewing!
Date: 24 Nov 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 7
Seems these two have worked their way into each other's heart. I am looking forward to see how their relationship progresses. Thank you for the update. xo
Author's Response:
Thank you for reading and reviewing! You are very welcome!
Date: 23 Nov 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 7
Very nice chapter!!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: 21 Nov 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am so happy your have updated! I really am enjoying this sweet story. Christian and Ana are destined to be together. They can help each other heal. Seems there is a lot of pain going around. Love ya.
[Report This]Date: 21 Nov 2013 12:51 AM Title: Chapter 6
I just love this! I love how Grace is so thoughtful and caring and Christian is so surprised by his feelings. Can't wait for more.
Merrily
Kat
Date: 20 Nov 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
Awww, I love this Christian!
Date: 20 Nov 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am really enjoying this story.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 5
I am reallhy enjoying this precious story. Please continue it. Thank you for the update!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
This story is so sweet! I like the way you have written Ana and Christian. So different from all the others. I really look forward to more.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I'm happy you are enjoying my version of the A&C romance.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 3
This story is so beautiful!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
I just found your story. I think I'm going to like it!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 4
I am enjoying this story so far, it is a little different which is nice.....
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'm happy you are enjoying it! Yes, I agree, it's a bit different
Date: 12 Nov 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am really liking this story.
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing, it means a lot to me. I thought I replied your earlier review, but apparently it has vanished into thin air... Anyway, I'm happy you are liking my version of the A&C saga.
Date: 11 Nov 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 3
So I love your story so far . I have never read any other fan fic except for twilight but I think this is sort of realted in a strange way. Can't wait to see how this goes.
Merrily
Kat
Date: 11 Nov 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 3
This is so sweet!
Date: 10 Nov 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait for update you have done a wonderful job with this so far again thank you so much for sharing you writing with us
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing! I'm always happy to hear that people are enjoying my story.
Date: 10 Nov 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 2
Oh I really like where this is going keep up the good work your writing is very good and I like that you are giving us both sides if the story
Date: 10 Nov 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 1
Your are off th a great start I can't wait for the next cchapter thank you for sharing with us
Date: 08 Nov 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
I love this story so far! I am glad that Christian is trying to deal with his teenage abuse before he meets Ana for once. I can't wait to read more.
Author's Response:
Date: 08 Nov 2013 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow. Seriously, it would be creepy in real life, but freaking awesome to read!
[Report This]Date: 05 Nov 2013 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
What a beautiful start to a story.