Date: 28 Feb 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 28
I think this was an excellent time for Edward's guardian angel,to make an appearance! The only thing that puzzles me is why Edward seems not to have foreseen this situation! Crossing my fingers and hoping for the best, see you later!
Author's Response:
I"m so sorry. I just was notified of this review!
I hope you enjoyed my rescue.
Hope to hear from you again soon.
Hard Hugs
Carol/Dinia
Date: 22 Feb 2014 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 27
Bella had a moment where she questioned how they would continue after Dr. Gerandy/Babalu-Aye. Probably she doesn't yet realize they will have more freedom to pursue him without the "authorities" breathing down their necks! Looking forward to the team hunting down the man who did such horrible things!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for taking the time to review. I don't get notification when there is a review so it takes me a bit longer to get back here. I'm so sorry for the delay.
Yes, she did, and you are correct. Don't forget that Edward is still a FBI Special Agent and now without his own resources. I promise you they get their man even though there are some very hair raising moments yet to come. Trust in the HEA. I would never desert Edward Cullen!
Thanks for your support and will try to not be forgetful of these reviews again.
xo
Dinia
Date: 21 Feb 2014 11:47 PM Title: Chapter 27
Thanks for the information. I like updates often. Better smaller than one a month. I really hate that type. Especially when you have lots of detail. I forget things.
Author's Response:
Thank you. It's always so wonderful when the reader understand why I do what I do. There are 4 chapters left of this tale and I promise you that Edward Cullen gets his man, even though there are some very hair raising events yet to come.
I hope you'll follow the sequel to this story.
Thank you for your support.
xo
Dinia
Date: 15 Feb 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
Oh boy, things are about to get very interesting I'm thinking! My guess is the team will be able to work even more effectively now that their ties to LAPD and the FBI are severed!
Author's Response:
Thank you for reviewing. You are most correct. Just remember Lauren's perdiction. Edward is still an FBI member, that I suspect that will change in the future. :)
I look forward to your further thoughts.
xo
Dinia
Date: 14 Feb 2014 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 26
More, more more please
Author's Response:
Thank you! You'll be getting more each week until it's finished. So happy that you are enjoying this.
xo
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 14 Feb 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 26
Can't wait for more
Author's Response:
Thank you. Stay tuned to the same Bat channel, Same Bat time! See you next week.
xo
Dinia
Date: 08 Feb 2014 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 25
Love it. Finally something out of the norm in this fictional world.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I too had/have gotten tired of the "normal" story line. Only so many way you can write a romance. *smiles* Stay tuned and buckle up. It's gonna be a bumpy ride.
xo
Dinia
Date: 07 Feb 2014 9:29 AM Title: Chapter 25
No sweat, if you don't have time to answer reviews, that just leaves more time to write, right? Anyway, this answers the question I had about how Bella comes to be a part of the team! Hope she gets to tell them all on LAPD that hate her, what she really thinks of them!
Author's Response:
Thank you! Bella leaves the LAPD with grace. She has a future ahead of her that many people only dream about in their chosen profession. She manages to get a "bit of her own" back in the coming chapters.
xo
Dinia
Date: 31 Jan 2014 11:38 PM Title: Chapter 24
This has been a fascinating read just for the magic and spells! Of course I also hope it leads to something between Edward and Bella. Maybe that's why Lauren sees Bella in all their futures! Now I hope they neutralize Babalu-Aye!
Author's Response:
Thank you. I've done extensive research into everything I've written about. Maybe I should have a caution to "Not try these at home"? You seem to be the only one who remembers Lauren's perdiction. I'm thinking that Bella and Edward will "find" each other in the sequel that I've already starting to write. *sorry carrot time*
Believe me, the bad guy really gets it in the end!
xo
Dinia
Date: 26 Jan 2014 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 23
Damn good chapter, keep them coming
Author's Response:
Thanks! Sorry for the latelness. I find it a little difficult to nagivage this site. There are a total of 31 chapters for this tale, and there is a sequel. I hope you continue to read through this.
xo
Dinia
Date: 24 Jan 2014 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
I understand this is a very serious situation, but can't help chuckling at Sam teasing Bella with that old saw , German accent and all! It was a good feeling that the team and the cops got to this one before damage was done! This Babalu-Aye is really ticked at Edward and friends from the sound of it!
Author's Response:
I am so sorry for not getting back to you. My only excuse is I'm so used to receiving notification with email that I have reviews. I thank you for following my story. You apear to be enjoying it. Thank you. I've enjoyed writing it. There are only 31 chapters including the epilogue, but I have a sequel in the works and I hope you'll continue to read it too. I'll post at the end of the epi what the name of the sequel will be soyou can be looking for it.
Again, thank you for taking the tine to review. Please don't let my lateness getting back to you prevent you from continuing to enjoy the rest.
xo
Dinia
Date: 17 Jan 2014 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
Here's hoping that the team gets to this guy who knows the killer before something happens to him! Then perhaps Bella can smirk to the guys in the bullpen as she takes down this killer! A sequel might be very intriguing!
Date: 10 Jan 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 21
I guess the body without a heart would trump looking for Babalu-Aye all right! What a ghastly picture in my mind! How awful for Angela to absorb that terrible scene! She's sure to have a bitch of a migraine now!
[Report This]Date: 10 Jan 2014 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 21
Can't wait for more
Date: 03 Jan 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 20
Good chapter.. Bella is strong and level headed.
Don't sweat the guest reviews that get ugly.. Cyber bullying is rampant.
Date: 03 Jan 2014 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
I too, hope your guest readers sign in with names, and I hope there's lots of them. This is too good a tale to warrant so few reviews, in my opinion. Sounds like their foe is very powerful and very angry with Edward, so I assume it will be difficult to capture or destroy him. I look forward to your solution!
Date: 26 Dec 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thank you for the background on Sara, and some of Angela and Lauren. That marriage of Lauren's sounded awful. Glad she's out of it. Weird that she couldn't see what a monster he was before they wed! Now they will be finding a way to stop Babalu-Aye from these horrible murders, I hope!
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 18
What a Christmas gift, a cliffhanger! Now we are all going to speculate who it is and why Lauren is so afraid! Happy holidays anyway!
Date: 21 Dec 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
There was sure to be someone who knew about the ritualistic murders, and this crew is the right one to find that out! I felt sorry for Edward's sorrow all over again, at the end of chapter sixteen. I'm very curious about this future ritual Edward sees that will be a protective rather than dangerous one!
Date: 13 Dec 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm sad for these people that heve come to seem like real folks, interesting to get to know! They all seem to have their own personal sorrows, some more than others. What they all do is fascinating!
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your comments on my story Edward Cullen, FBI. Yes we all have our own Individual personalities and I find it comforting to get to know characters in stories that I read. I try to keep mine interesting as I like to read interesting characters. Please forgive my not responding soon. I'm still trying to figure TWCS out. It's a little complicated for me. I look forward to hearing more from you and I will try to be quicker to respond in future.
xo
Dinia
Date: 06 Dec 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
I wonder if Bella is curious about how she and the four of them will have a "long, fruitful relationship" ? I would like to know what they discovered when they joined in the silent circle? Maybe they will discuss it when they have replenished their energy?
Date: 30 Nov 2013 9:49 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good to hear some of Sam's history, especially with Edward. I almost wish Bella had not asked how that poor man died, though! How awful and horrifying! These are nasty, nasty people they are trying to find!
Date: 22 Nov 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is such a unique team of investigators, quite unlike any other ever, I'm guessing! Bella let out a bit of personal information, which kind of surprised me. Of course she hasn't any thought of sharing her horrifying experience at school, but I feel it will come out when she and Edward become closer. Since I've always been a fan of strange and weird, this story suits me to a T!
[Report This]Date: 22 Nov 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
She is on Edwards side and understands now whats the whole gangs story
Date: 17 Nov 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 12
She did not ask for a boy friend. Just coworkers.
Author's Response:
You are so right. Maybe eventually B&E will get together. I'm just the typist after all, and I have to wait for the characters to tell me what they want to say. Seriously.
Thank you so much for your support. It's vital to me. I'll try to be better about responding to my review here.
Looking forward to hearing more from you in the future.
xo
Dinia
Date: 16 Nov 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Lets focus on the story and stop the Edward Bella drama. I really like these intense well thought out mysteries and crime stories.. looking forward to the next chapte
Date: 15 Nov 2013 7:28 PM Title: Chapter 12
Fascinating how all these different gifts work! It must be awful for Angela to suffer so after experiencing the crime scenes! Dedicated woman to undergo that kind of punishment, to help others! I'm on Sam's side about Edward getting to know Bella. Certainly he will always grieve his wife and child, but that doesn't mean he has to bury himself along with them! It can't be a coincidence that she looks so much like Sara!
[Report This]Date: 15 Nov 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 12
Loved it
Author's Response:
Thank you so much for your reviews of my FBI guy tale. I hope I can continue to entertain you. I've been thinking about writing this story for some time. I suspect the characters will have a great deal more to say than for just this case that they'll start getting into more, now that most of the backgrounds have been covered. I suspect Bella will eventually resigne from her LA cops' job and form a detective agency with the psychic trio and that Edward and she will become more than just working partners, but we're not going to rush that aspect. Gotta keep the HEA crowd coming back for more. *evil grin* Please keep the reviews coming. I've just figured out how to even read them. I normally respond immediately when I get them. I can't seem to get TWCS to deliver them to my email. Haven't found the right magical spell for that. :) Again, thank you so much for your kind words and support.
xo
Carol
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 11
Sure, sure, just the typist! I completely understand this is not the time for romance, when there are murderers to be brought to justice. They can kiss later, and perhaps heal each other. Bella had a horrible thing happen to her, not once but twice, with Alice's death! It made her stronger, so I guess that old saying, what doesn't kill you, is true!
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
So that's what is going on! She seemed concerned that he's down and dispirited and wants to help, thus the call to Sam.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 9
What a strange reaction to revisiting the scene, to head to IHop and chow down! That demonstration Jasper showed Bella was kind of scary. Wonder what was in that little bag?Bella is still a bit skeptical of all this, but adapting well, I think!
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
Sounds like some sort of ritual, religious or otherwise! Creepy sounding too! The purpose of said ritual is the mystery here, I hope Edward and his friends can discern that purpose! It was kind of Edward to offer the number of the counseling service to the widow.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 12:29 AM Title: Chapter 7
Of course, just as they are starting to relax and have a bite, duty calls and another murder to investigate happens! The reading of crime scenes sure would be a handy talent to have, for detectives, cops, etc.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 6
Bella seems to be wrapping her head around the various 'gifts' at her disposal, now Edward is involved in the case. When Jasper , Angela and Lauren get there, she should be even more convinced. I'm a little surprised Bella accepted Edward's offer of dinner, she must think he's okay and not a jerk after her body!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 9:57 AM Title: Chapter 5
This chapter was attached to the end of the last one, so I guess I already reviewed it! Hi anyway!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 4
Detective Swan was a real hard nut to crack, she's sceptical of anything she can't see or touch. Guess a lot of people are like that. Now that Edward has told her the secret stuff, I think she's closer to believing in the paranormal world!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 9:42 AM Title: Chapter 3
Kind of fun that they both are a bit surprised at each other, that's always more interesting. I'm betting they learn to work with each other rather quickly, and even come to appreciate their differences! I'm curious as to what forces they will have to deal with to solve the cases?
Date: 13 Nov 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 2
Sadly , nothing paranormal in my life! I sure do love to read about supernatural stuff, though! This sounds like Edward will need his friend's support to solve this rash of strange murders, and all his own powers also! Looking forward to his meeting with Bella, too!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 9:13 AM Title: Chapter 1
Fascinating character, this Edward Cullen. Love his job and his friends and the fact he has a Guardian Angel named Micheal! With his genetic background and education, he's in the perfect line of work! It's so sad his wife and child were murdered, but I have no doubt he will hunt down the evil-doers and avenge them!
Author's Response:
Oh it get's complicated about the murder of his wife and child. I hope you'll make all the way through the story line. Some of the elements combine. Looking forward to your thoughts.
See you next chapter.
Hard Hugs
Dinia
[Report This]Date: 11 Nov 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 11
Such a wonderful story. I am glad they get to focus on the case as well as friendship. She seems to have fault so hard to get her standing. Let her enjoy if for awhile. If they do get together don't let him take her independence away. She was a detective when he met her so he knows what he's getting if they do become involve. You are doing an amazing job with this story. Keep up the good work.
Author's Response:
Thank you for a very well thought out review. I agree 100% with you. Friendship is more important than Romance in the long run. Need to have a strong base of it in any relationship. I will not allow Bella to be taken over by another characters. She will always have a strong voice as well as actions. I love Bella this way. Can't abide a mealy mouthed characters. I want "juice"! Thank you for your encourgement. I am working hard to keep the story moving as well as as human as is possible.
I look forward to more comments from you. I am so sorry I've not gottenaround to these before. I'm just figuring TWCS system out. It's kinda complicated! But I'll do better, I promise.
xo
Dinia
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:08 PM Title: Chapter 10
Yes Bella is developing feelings. Edward is still in love with his wife. So no go there.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
that is alot to absorb. I would be skeptical too.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 8
well I am old as well and I read on a computer, how old fashioned of me. LOL
Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well this is a good story you are writing. Looks like Bella and Edward will only be associated with the murders, no romance. That is fine.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Just found your story I am thoroughly enjoying it.
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
so he hears her thoughts. I guess I missed that tidbit..
Date: 03 Nov 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 2
So far so good.. I like these type of stories. Not every character has to be the same be creative.