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Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4: 17 Candles and a conscience is born...
Date: 16 Nov 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 4: 17 Candles and a conscience is born...
What was he going to say to her, Is he playing her..
Author's Response:
He wanted to tell her the truth but he was chickening out.
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Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: You got Senioritis - find something constructive to do...
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 3: You got Senioritis - find something constructive to do...
Oh this is not going to end well at first, he will be using her.....can not wait to see how this unfolds to where she winds up with him 20yrs later
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Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bella's life, Edward's life
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 2: Bella's life, Edward's life
You lost me here, has she been at school for 3 years already...and didn't she meet Alice when she first arrived
Author's Response:
Good question - she got placed in a different grade then Bella so their paths didn't cross until they were roomates. Not to mention that her brother was a complete prick to her so Bella didn't really have a desire to meet his family. Thanks for the reviews - hope you like this!
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Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning there was a letter
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 1: In the beginning there was a letter
So it begins...England here we come
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Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:02 PM Title: Prelude
Date: 03 Nov 2013 4:02 PM Title: Prelude
I am in for the story
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