Date: 11 Oct 2016 1:39 AM Title: Futuretake - Happy Birthday!
Wonderful story. Loved it.
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I'm glad you liked the story. Responses were kind of controversial when it was posted. Take care.
Date: 15 Sep 2016 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Your place or mine?
I need an Edward just like this one
Author's Response: Thank you so much for reading and sharing your thoughts. I hope you enjoyed the rest of the story as well and were just too busy letting me know ;). Take care.
Date: 24 Jan 2015 1:15 PM Title: Futuretake - Happy Birthday!
Loved the story so much I stayed up all night reading. Now I am reading your other story. Can't wait for a update.
Author's Response: Thank yo so much! This story will always have a special place in my heart. And writing all the lemons was fun ;). I miss that a bit. See you over at TBL.
Date: 07 Jan 2015 10:26 PM Title: Futuretake - Happy Birthday!
Okay. I am enjoying your other story. Two Blue Lines sooo much. It was killing me to wait every otherweek so
I just decided to see if you had any other stories. I love ....love. ...love this story. I have read tons of fan fiction with lots of marriage popossals. This one is my absolure favorite! Their wedding was perfect. I hated getting to the end. I am loving TBL as well. Always looking forward to updates. Thanks for writing and entertaining me.!!...
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your review. I'm so glad you liked the wedding. I have to admit that, if I was to get married again, I'd like to do it just like that ;). The next TBL update will be Monday. See you then.
Date: 29 Jul 2014 3:42 PM Title: TBL - Prologue
One of my favorite stories of all time! You're an awesome writer!
Author's Response: Wow! No one ever told me that. Thank you so much. I loved writing the story and sometimes before falling asleep at night, I still go through it in my head. Take care!
Date: 27 Jul 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Dirty Talk
You did awesome with the dirty talk girl! I love this story
Author's Response: Thanks! It was a little hard for me writing it because it was my first attempt on writing dirty talk. So I'm glad you enjoyed it.
Date: 04 Jul 2014 11:00 PM Title: Futuretake - Happy Birthday!
BEAUTIFUL STORY ! KEEP WRITING PLEASE ! THANK YOU FOR SHARING :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I am writing a new story at the moment and I'm planning to keep writing for a while. It's so much fun sharing with all of you what my twisted mind comes up with ;).
Date: 18 Jun 2014 4:48 PM Title: Futuretake - Happy Birthday!
Yes, I loved it. Very sweet! I even had tears in my eyes :)
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you liked it. Knowing that you can make people cry is one of the biggest complements for a writer ;).
Date: 06 May 2014 5:06 PM Title: Epilogue - Part III
This was a great story from beginning to end! I absolutely loved it!! Hope to see read stories from you in the future.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your words mean a lot to me. About future stories, yesterday I started writing the first chapter for my new story. Maybe I'll meet you again when it's ready to post ;)
Date: 04 May 2014 6:51 AM Title: Epilogue - Part III
Wonderfull fic!!! I fall in love with all the characters and their story! I'm so happy for the ending and I can't really wait for seing them with their own baby!! :)
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your wonderful review. I'm so glad you enjoyed the story so much.
Date: 02 May 2014 9:54 PM Title: Epilogue - Part III
That was the best epilogue! You hit all the best parts & I loved that they were married secretly & it was only about them. This was a fantastic HEA!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! And thank you as well for your continuous support. I'm so glad you liked the HEA. Take care.
Date: 02 May 2014 6:20 PM Title: Epilogue - Part III
I am sad to see this story end. It was great. I think the ending was perfect. I will be looking for the next story! Thanks for sharing your talent.
Author's Response: Thanks so much for your nice words and for your loyalty throughout the story. It means a lot to me. I can't believe this is over already. But I started on a new story. Hope to be able to share that soon. CU
Date: 26 Apr 2014 12:30 AM Title: Epilogue - Part II
They have a bun in the oven. I loved it that they got married privately! I'm a photographer and have shot tons of weddings. I always tell the bride & grooms that I meet to keep the wedding about them. That is the best way to enjoy your wedding day!
Author's Response: A bun in the oven? Did they bake something? I must have missed that ;). I'm glad you liked the wedding. I wasn't sure how readers would react to it. After all it's not the usual. See you Friday.
Date: 25 Apr 2014 8:29 AM Title: Epilogue - Part II
Yep, I was thinking that he had everyone waiting for Bella to say, "Yes!" and that they would get married right then with all their friends and family. However, I love how much thought and preparation he put into all those lovely wedding details! I really don't see the need for them to have another wedding for everyone else. They could just have a big party/reception and wear their wedding finery. Besides, Bella's pregnant and they can't wait for long!! ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. There were some readers thinking the same things you were. We'll wait and see about the second wedding. Maybe they won't have it after all. And about the pregnancy, well, IF Bella's pregnant, she doesn't know it yet ;). See you next Friday.
Date: 16 Apr 2014 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Distance Between Us
I love your writing, and this story, but this chappy makes me GROWL. Sorry. I will continue to read, becaue I predict E/B will have HEA...eventually.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. Yeah, that chapter was hard to write, too. I had a lump in my throat the whole time. But I'm glad you read on.
Date: 16 Apr 2014 4:32 PM Title: Outtake - Photo Session
Amazing chapter, as always. So wicked of you to back track, so your readers have to wait to get to Edward coming back from his trip. Nice touch. Always great to build anticipation.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I loved this chapter and it was hard for me to take it out of the main story but it slowed the plot down. That's why reading it feels like I'm tracking you back.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 33 - A New Beginning
This was great! The tattoo was a really creative idea. I loved how Carlisle & Emmet were discussing E & B's sex life over breakfast. That was funny!
Author's Response: Thanks! But I have to forward the praise for the tattoo idea to my friend. She came up with the general idea. The design was my idea though. I'm glad you liked the breakfast scene. It was only added quite late. See you in the epi.
Date: 12 Apr 2014 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 33 - A New Beginning
If I didn't know the epilogue was coming, I'd be crying because the story was over. Thanks!
Author's Response: Thanks so much. AWWWW! It's really moving to hear you feel that way. But the story isn't over yet. Great things are yet to come. See you Friday.
Date: 07 Apr 2014 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Happy New Year
I am so happy for them. I can't believe the story is almost over when they are really just starting to be a couple. I bet Esme and Carlisle were a little surprised to see the clothes and buttons in a trail throughout their house. They will love Bella because she is the one that makes their son whole.
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for your nice review. I can't believe the story is almost over either. It's hard for me to let them go. But, it's not time for that yet. Well, Esme and Carlisle will be very nice but there will be a discussion about the trail of clothes. It'll be fun. See you Friday.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Happy New Year
I'm so glad the depression didn't linger on into too many more chapters-- thank you for an explosive reunion! Loved it! Looking forward to an update!!!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. No, I think it was time to end their misery. And yes, it was a reunion fitting for those two. See you Friday.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Happy New Year
Loved it! Great reunion...I'm glad it wasn't drawn out. Thx
Author's Response: Thanks a lot for the review. I thought there was no use in having them talk for several hundred words when actually with the "I love you" everything was said. Next chapter will be fun. See you Friday.
Date: 06 Apr 2014 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Happy New Year
I was wondering what his parents would think with the display of clothes tossed all around downstairs. I think next chapter is going to bring some laughs!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. Yeah, next chapter will be fun. See you Friday.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Mail Delivery
I had forgotten about the locket. It was the perfect gift & the engraving ties into the story perfectly. Good thing Emmet sent his letter & invite. It seems it is going to take the whole family to drag these two back together.
Author's Response: Thanks again for reviewing. Yeah, Emmett did good sending her the invite. But Edward did even better. His present showed Bella how well he knows her and how much he loves her. They'll be back together soon.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Blue Christmas
I'm a good gift giver & I can't figure out what he left. That was smart of him to leave it at Charlie's.
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. You'll know soon what it is that he gave her. It's really special.
Date: 03 Apr 2014 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 29 - All Alone
Oh man, it is so hard to even choose sides because you can see where they both screwed up & knowing how each other have been burned in the past they both walked right into it. :(
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. The great thing is, you don't need to choose sides. I don't. They both made mistakes. Their biggest mistake is not talking to each other enough. They'll correct that soon. See you Sunday.
Date: 02 Apr 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Mail Delivery
Loved, loved it! I knew he would look for the locket but I had totally forgotten about it. I am glad that Bella could see Edward's perspective. If you have already written a three chapter epilogue, why not a sequel? This couple deserves one!
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. About the sequel, I'm sorry but I don't think there will be one. This story was about learning to trust and love again. They both did that. So their journey is kind of over. I don't see anything worth reporting in their future beyond the epi at the moment. But I'll never say never. Maybe, with time, I'll make up a new interesting story about them :).
Date: 02 Apr 2014 8:38 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Mail Delivery
So I'm taking it that she went to the airport and Rose or Emmett picked her up and she is upstairs in the bedroom waiting to surprise him..
Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing. I won't reveal to much here and now but they will celebrate New Year's together. See you Sunday.
Date: 28 Mar 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Blue Christmas
That was sweet of Edward. I have been on my feet working for 10 hours and I am so tired I can't imagine what is in the bag! But I can't wait to find out.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review, especially after your long day at work. Next chapter you'll learn what's in the bag. See you then.
Date: 28 Mar 2014 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Horribly Wrong EPOV
I'm glad Edward went to her door & stayed all night. He has soooo much graveling to do!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, he's trying but she's not yet ready to forgive him. But she will eventually. See you soon.
Date: 27 Mar 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 1 - The Box
Hi! I'm over here because even though Bella's lack of realization that she has err'd in any way, along with her friends thinking she can do no wrong, AND. Edward putting her on a pedestal and crawling around the floor around said pedestal begging for forgiveness.... I still love this story and want to finish it. I also think it's stupid that anyone reports something on FF for an "angst" warning, really????
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm glad you're here. I hope FFn won't delete the story but who knows. After all I'm most definitely breaking the rules about explicit sex scenes ;). See you tomorrow with the update.
Date: 24 Mar 2014 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 29 - All Alone
I just want to slap Bella. She really caused all this mess. She can blame Edward for what he said, but she hurt him first. She denied him. She went out with Jacob. She did kiss him. She eventually pushed him away, but not at first. She is the one that slept with anything with a dick. Edward has loved her for a long time. She is the one that would not admit it. She could have love or she could choose to be lonely. It is all up to her. She should not play the victim.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I always like to hear your thougths. Anyway, I disagree with you in a few points. One, Bella didn't kiss Jacob. He kissed her and she didn't stop him in time. To me that's not the same. Second, she did sleep around but considering she's done it for seven years, she by far didn't sleep with ANYTHING with a dick. By the way, Edward had a much busier time over the past two years. But I know that a woman who gets around is a slut while a guy who does the same is a stud. I know you're stating the point to explain Edward's assumption and of course it makes sense. I'm just a little put off by all the readers just calling Bella a slut while conveniently forgetting that Edward wasn't any better for some time. However, I kind of agree with your other statements. I promise there will only be one and a half more angsty chapters. By the end of chapter 31 things will look a lot brighter again. Hope to see you again next chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2014 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 29 - All Alone
I'm glad you did a Bella POV from after the party-- now we just need them to see each other!!! Good chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm glad you liked that chapter. You're right, they need to see each other. The only question is when and how that's going to happen. See you next chapter.
Date: 23 Mar 2014 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 29 - All Alone
This story doesn't make any sense. Bella proclaims to be in love with Edward but she goes out with a guy she says she has no feelings for and he treated her badly in the past and then she got herself into a situation where he kisses her. Edward quite rightly thinks the worst based on her previous lack of judgment. He is somehow the bad guy? Did you mean to make her come across as a neurotic character? If so, why is Edward the bad guy in this? This is such a shame.
Author's Response: Thanks for sharing your thoughts. Bella was a little blind when she agreed to go out with Jacob and she was naive not to see where it was leading. And I agree that Edward was maybe right to assume the worst. He was not right calling her cheap though. That's what puts him in the worse position right now. But he's not the bad guy and Bella will see that eventually. It won't be long now.
Date: 23 Mar 2014 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 29 - All Alone
I think I am depressed. I feel Bella's pain. But I feel Edward's too. <sigh>
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. I'm sorry the chapter got to you like that. Imagine what I felt writing it. I feel both their pain, too. They both made mistakes and pay for them now. But they'll pull through it. It won't be long now. See you next chapter.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Horribly Wrong EPOV
Wow! He really messed up this time didn't he. He had his reasons for his insecurities but he used all he knew to twist the knife in her chest. Can't wait to see Bella's perspective of that night and the coming days.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. Yeah, he messed up. Bella's perspective will be next, probably over the weekend.
Date: 19 Mar 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Horribly Wrong EPOV
Well, I can understand her being upset, but she needs to let him explain and apologize face to face. ASAP. And for the record, I still think that Edward should have punched Jacob. ;)
Author's Response: Thanks for your review. They'll talk, just not now. They'll do a lot of things, just not now. Again, I'm not a violent person ;)