Date: 28 Oct 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 14
Another chapter so soon! This weekend gets better and better! Again, your characters are rich and three dimensional - like Arndis. She could have been written as being jealous or sulky. She isn't though. She is warm, friendly and secure. Kudos!
Again, I adore this work. It reminds me of some romance novels I have read. I never want to put them down and sometimes read them over and over. Thank you!
Date: 27 Oct 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 13
Words can not express how very much I adored this story! Having just discovered it, I continued reading - ignoring updates, e-mails, TV...you name it. I read it from chapter 1 on through this chapter and loved every bit. You have helped teach me about Viking culture, language, clothing, etc. along the way. The love stories are outstanding. I pluralize because I find it impossible to seperate Edvard/Bella from Emundi/Ro-se. One is the building the other the aspiration. To achieve the bond that Emundi and Ro-se have takes trust and work. That is Edvard and Bella at this point. Your characters are rich and dimensional and every part of this story is a marvelous gift. Thank you for a marvelous read! I look forward to more.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 13
AS YOU CAN SEE I COULD'NT NOT CONTINUE READING. IF I OFFENDED YOU IN MY LAST REVIEW I TRULY AM SORRY IT WAS NOT MY INTENT. FOR SOME REASON WHEN I READ THIS STORY I FEEL BELLA'S PAIN SO DEEP WITHIN ME IT HURTS IN A WAY I DON'T EVEN UNDERSTAND SO YOU MUST BE DOING SOMETHING RIGHT. I READ THIS CHAPTER A FEW LINES AT A TIME BECAUSE I FEARED FOR BELLA'S HEART BUT OBVIOUSLY " WE " GOT THROUGH IT. I LOOK FORWARD TO THE NEXT CHAPTER AND AGAIN I APOLOGIZE IF I OFFENDED YOU IN ANY WAY.
Date: 25 Oct 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 13
Well i feel better after this chapter last one left me crying. Who is you to i wonder. Will it be Ben? Do you know on your front says this story is on temporary hiatus? Just thought I'd mention it. Looking forward to next update.
Date: 24 Oct 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 12
Im so glad to read that rose will be able to have more children! thank you.
Now to edvard freeing bella - in a way it is a good thing, she is free and in a bad way that she is no longer with edvard in anyway.
So what is to happen for them to come back together?
Date: 22 Oct 2013 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 1
fanfic....sucks...... what ever happened to fredom of speech ......you have a hugh following from before wait till i tell everyone your posting again ... I really hope your personal greifs are subsiding ....I know it was awful for you and yous for a while
Date: 22 Oct 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
the fact that you are finally reposting this story is so WONDERFUL ....it one of my favorites andi am so excited to be able to recommend it to my book club ....your first posting had a few more chapters ....I am dying for some new ones ...this is wonderful ....
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
Just curious, what was the last chapter you stopped on before you left Fanfiction, please?
I had 18 chapters up on FFN and I'd really like to emphasize that I didn't leave, they took the story down without telling me first.
Date: 16 Oct 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 8
I ALMOST GAVE UP ON THIS STORY MID WAY IN THIS CHAPTER BECAUSE I COULD'NT TAKE THE PAIN OF THEM NOT BEING HAPPY AND FINALLY TOGETHER. I LIKE RUNNING AWAY TO A HAPPY PLACE IN A GOOD STORY A LITTLE ANGST IS OK BUT REAL LIFE CAN BE A PAIN IN THE ASS AND READING A GOOD LOVE STORY EASES THE UPS AND DOWNS OF LIFE. I HOPE HE MARRIES HER SOON.
Date: 13 Oct 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hi! Had been following this story on FF, checking in every now and then to see if you'd been able to update so am beyond delighted that you've decided to post it here. It's still a beautiful story even with the slight changes here and there. I really hope the RL is treating you and your family well and look forward to the next chapter, I know there are many more to come!
Best wishes, Nell