Date: 22 Sep 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 19
They are both getting on much better now, but she still hasnt read the damned notes. Glad Edward had a chat with her dad, although he is gonna have to watch him and that Marie took the news well. Let's hope Franny takes it as well as her sister, it would mean a lot to them both.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
Lexi.....this Edward is not the best person in the world, but he was in jail for 10 years and Bella has just caught his eye and I think his heart, but I do feel bad for Rose because she thinks that he loves when he doesn't. it is a shame for her, but love wins out. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher....Happy Birthday...Let me hear from you.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow.................... sHER
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
Your right.....when you play with fire you get burned.....but hopefully not with Edward. You shouldn't be teasing men because some men don't like it and some get off on it. THANKS FOR THE AWESOME WRITING. shER
Date: 21 Sep 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 18
That was very daring for their era, sex alfresco ..or near enough anyway. Glad they had a good time though, they need it. Also glad that Edward told her about her dad, a warning of sorts of what could happen in the future.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 17
About time these two got it together again and admitted their feelings. They still need to learn to communicate properly and she still needs to read the damn notes
Date: 21 Sep 2013 4:37 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow.....this is certainly a strange beginning..I now understand why people were so harsh with it. I am not saying that they are right because you are right to write whatever you want to....there is not reason to be mean to an author EVER.... I cannot wait to read on. THANKS FOR THE AWSOME READING. Sher
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
I wish she would just read the notes, I'm sure that would help clear up some of the issues. Her mum is gonna go mad when she finds out she is pregnant again and with Edwards child no less. I hope her dad doesn't try to kill him.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:25 PM Title: Chapter 15
Why don't they just let him die, afterall he made the shot first
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 14
I hope Bella does in fact read the notes, it might make her understand she is making a big mistake.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
Lexi: Well I didn't expect that Edward would be married to someone else and Bella is his daughter's friend.....This is certainly going to be interesting. I wonder how the family is going to take to Edward going with a girl who was so much younger than him and his daughter's friend....and ROSE......I know that this is set in the late 50s, but Rose is always a fierce one....but I will find out after I read on. But like I told you on facebook, I love Edward, however he is becuase he is just MOTHERFUCKING HOT!!!! THANKS FOR THE AWESOME READING. Sher
Date: 21 Sep 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh god, poor everyone in this fucked up triangle. Edward finally sees that he loves only to lose her..for now. At least he is divorcing roe, he is being kind to let her go no matter how much it hurts them both and the kids.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 10:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh Bella she sure is playing a dangerous game that could get people killed
Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh Edward, does he not realise that will take the spark out of her eyes anyway.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 7:33 AM Title: Epilogue
Haha, what a great way to wrap up a time piece. I must be slow I kept thinking Frankie, Petey, I should know who that is and thinking of your other story, RotS then you spelled it out. Frank Sinatra & Peter Lawford. What can i say, I was about the same age as Eddie then so don't really remember that time.
Another great story, loved the characters, and thank you so much for writing.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 4:43 AM Title: Epilogue
:) loved this story
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:10 AM Title: Epilogue
Well, you did it. You made me forgive Eddie boy for being such a dick. Oh, and cool tie in with Peter Lawford, the Kennedy brothers and MM. You rock. Seriously. Thanks!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
At least Bella got her baby with her, I just hope she doesn't get bored of her own company when Edward is too busy to come over.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:59 AM Title: Epilogue
Cool ending. Glad they are happy together.
Thanks for writing and sharing.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:52 AM Title: Chapter 20
Renee would drive me nutty too.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:37 AM Title: Epilogue
I enjoyed reading this. Great job.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 19
hmmm wonder if Aro was doing Carlo's business or not. Rose is gonna be an issue I think. Woo Hoo Get married.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:26 AM Title: Chapter 9
Her grandfather was very cool with things, especially if everyone did hear her screaming. Poor rose, Edward is being evil by leaving bellas panties on his jacket where she will see them. Is this there way of telling her he has a mistress?
Date: 20 Sep 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 8
Oh Bella, I suppose if everyone calls you a slut and treats you like one as well as an outcast then you might as well act like one. Her life is horrible at the moment anyway.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is crazy. Looking forward to carlilse joining him and what part he plays in the plot. Does Nay know that her husband ratted on Edward. Bellas parents definately know now...what a gesture.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
God I feel really sorry for Roe. Edward was dreaming of making love to Bella and Roe thought he was making love to her. She is gonna flip her shit when she finds out about Bella. And Tanya..I'll bet loads of whores used to go missing in that era
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 19
Will there be an epi after the next chapter? I've loved reading this, hope that Renee & Charlie don't cause trouble for Bella.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh oh...very dangerous game they are playing.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Oh dear, that's a dangerous game they are playing at the moment.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
Poor roe, but in those times wives were nothing more than someone to cook, clean and look after the kids. I don't suppose many men in his position were faithful.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 2
I'll bet that was a shock for Edward to learn that she had a baby.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 1
Edward is a naughty chappie. Dragging his wife upto bed with the kids awake and then eye fucking his daughters friend. Sounds good so far.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 18
lol about taking the playboy. His dad is funny. Her Ma is gonna be pissed. Of course if her Daddy keeps it up, he's gonna be dead.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 17
some crazy funeral rituals.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 16
B is all confused. Her parents are pieces of work, but that was how is was back then
Date: 20 Sep 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 15
oooh so Aro is a skeeze too. uh oh B's prego.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 18
Did someone go through Bellas suitcase? I'm glad they've finally admitted their feelings to each other. Hope everything goes okay for these two when they get back hone.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 18
I GUESS YOU'LL LET US KNOW WHO WINS THE BET.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 18
LOVE IT! THANK YOU!
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it, can't wait to read more
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 18
Awe, their sweet. I'm so happy for them.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 18
I remember hearing Earth Angel on the radio. I'm the youngest of 7 kids, my older sister was 11 years older than me. So all those 50' and 60's music really brings back memories. I was a teenager in the 70's. Still love all those old songs, but some new stuff too. Music really brings it all back. No rap tho, can't stand that shit.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 17
Finally is Exactly right. Wonder what's next.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Yeah! Finally
Date: 19 Sep 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Cant wait to read more
Date: 19 Sep 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 16
Why doesn't he just tell her what is in the damn letters? Arghh, stoopihd men.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 8:37 PM Title: Chapter 15
What a wakeful person Aro turned out to be, yay. I didn't want Bella with Aro, a lousy lover for life, I'm thinking, the worst kinda hell she could have. Ok maybe that's a bit of an exaggeration, maybe.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 17
They made you nuts? At least you knew the outcome, the rest of us had to suffer. It took long enough, but at least they're together, although I have a feeling her parents are going to try to cause problems. Thanks for the great chapter.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 17
Finally is right!!!!!
Date: 19 Sep 2013 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 5
So I am confused about how Bella ended up with Jacob. Was Alec the one she wanted but he lost a race where she was the prize? Was she forced? That was all so vague and I am still not sure.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow, i really hate this edward. thanks for that. you've finally cured me of my edward cullen obsession.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 12
She's playing with fire.....
Date: 19 Sep 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 14
The updates have been awesome and I can't wait to read more. Thank you so much for writing another great mob fic. This has been a page turner.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Now that was a break up, arghh, kinda painful. Ok, very hurtful. I hope to god Bella did not just go with Aro.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 14
Wowza! I'm login all this drama. I am dying to know what those notes say.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 12
Oh my lord, that girls is trouble with a capital T.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
He's the one who fell in love, is what I'm thinking.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 14
Im glad ur back, love the story so far, cant wait to read more
Date: 19 Sep 2013 2:31 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm loving you for these updates!
So, there's a bunch of angst coming this way, eh? It makes for good reading and of course, trust.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 14
1:) Could she be pregnant.? 2:) Read the notes Bella cause I'd say that Edward has confessed his true feelings for you.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 14
oh Aro. Afraid he's gonna get hurt.....assuming he's on the up and up and not just for citizenship.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 14
This chapter was easy to read because I skipped through the whole thing.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 9
Kinda sad about the Nonno treating her like chattel but I guess that's kinda how it was in this country then & still is in some places now.
Glad her took care of her first:-). He's gaining some points.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:44 AM Title: Chapter 13
thank you thank you thank you for all the chapter today, you are the best i have been looking forward for them all day, i really hope bella and edward can work this out before then end of the story for some happy time
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
She looks like a movie star! Like Natalie Wood with Jayne Mansfield's body...so she could probably get anyone but Edward got her first, or second if you count Jacob. Haha
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 13
hmm wonder how long the aro thing will last.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 13
Now I do feel sorry for Edward, is it too little too late for him and Bella?
Date: 19 Sep 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 1
Ik there are alot of people that aint feeling all the angst, but i must say after 12 chapters in I LOVE IT. Just thinking about the era with the "gangsters" in that time, to me the plot just fits. I dont review hardly but i repect great writing. Well done once again, im hooked into another one of your great stories.
BTW bad Bella (hehehehe) There are some of youse that pranked called a female before, for w.e. reason. we all were immature once in our life.
Edward deserves it also with his selfish sexy ass! lol
Date: 19 Sep 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 12
What's going on now? Will there be a HEA for E & B or E & A ?
Date: 19 Sep 2013 12:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
I am afraid now if she runs he would kill her.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 11:41 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh Bella, you naughty girl! hehe!!I'm not likin' this Edward, AT ALL! I hope she ends up with Aro. It would serve Eddie boy right.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:33 PM Title: Chapter 12
I really want to like this story but you're making it awfully difficult. I hope we don't have to wait for the last chapter for them to find some happiness. Some angst is good, but this story has too much. I don't think anyone's been happy for more than two sentences. Even though Edward deserves it, it would probably make me stop reading if she sleeps with Aro. This is the first story of yours that I'm actually not enjoying.
Author's Response:
Maybe you should stop reading. I know there are plenty of other stories you will enjoy. It's labeled angst for a reason because there's a lot of it. It's not your cup of tea, and I thank you for giving it a try, but there's no reason for you to read something you dislike.
Lexi
Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
oh B you are gonna get Aro killed if you aren't careful. Ya killin me woman!!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
:-)
wow you go bella she has some balls i tell you, now edward needs to grow some
Date: 18 Sep 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 11
oh E you've made a mess of things. Hope B doesn't get P from him being a selfish jerk.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:54 PM Title: Chapter 10
agnsty huh so long as E doesnt physically abuse B, I think I'll be ok. Can't blame Rose for being pissed but she knows what he's like.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 11
He's already fallen in love with her. I have a feeling that Bella will have fallen pregnant after that night, seeing as he didn't pull out. Edward just needs to accept the inevitable and plan his future with Bella.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:44 PM Title: Chapter 11
Who's Edward trying to convince not to fall in love - Bella or himself?
Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
wowza indeed. Cant blame her for wanting to get away with her kid
Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 8
Sad but true for those times. Jake is a big man and she's the whore. Poor kid.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
I hate that he's still sleeping with Rosalie. I can tell he doesn't want to, but he sees it as his duty. As a huge E/B fan, it's painful to read. One or two chapters, maybe, but it's eleven chapters in and he's still going back to her even though he's miserable. I hope Bella gets pregnant and it forces him to wake up.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
that was sad. This is what she got for being with him. I hope one day he comes there and she is gone. Her and the baby, long gone.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
This poor girl has laid it all down on the line. Well she did not have really many choices. One mistake and they buried her. He walks in to save her. Her mother, father, grandfather they were really not there for her. Her mother I think tried but in the end she dives for the baby.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:57 PM Title: Chapter 9
he is so mean to his wife.. Glad I am not married to him.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 8
poor Kid. in a corner no one to turn to. Bad decisions. If she was my daughter I would have packed her up and got her out of there.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
It always makes me incredibly nervous when an author warns you that you're going to hate the main character and that the angst hasn't even started yet. It makes me not want to read it until its complete so I can skip through the bad parts. I was enjoying this story, but now I'm waiting for the other shoe to drop. That's why Edward from Quiet Storm is my all time favorite. Mob guy who never thought of cheating from the first time he saw Bella. This Edward is a bit scummy, so it's not as fun. But I can't wait to see what happens.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 8
Poor Bella, she feels she's out of options
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
Do you have any bad stories? I am hooked to everyone.
Your writing and ideas amaze me, look forward to the next update. :D
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 7
Wow, he's a badass with a capital B.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yeah he's a peach, not;-/)
I'm enjoying this time piece and the trip down memory lane. The rabbit dying was what everyone said back in the day and I'd completely forgot about it.
thanks for writing, I love reading your writing.