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Reviewer: dazzleglo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2022 1:57 PM Title: Endings

Loving it.  Emmett is a riot.

Reviewer: kfoll Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 May 2018 6:17 PM Title: Endings

90 hours a week away from his kids? When the hell does he see them? They’re four, he must seem the at Weekends only, unless he’s working then too.

All these women dying in childbirth. Is USA a third world country?

Reviewer: ChristianMom54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 12 Mar 2018 6:28 AM Title: Outtake One

Loved readingthis storyline. Thank you for sharing your talents with us

Reviewer: Bimini2327 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2017 5:48 AM Title: Breakdown

Love

Reviewer: angel1215 Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2014 10:45 PM Title: Perspectives

How dare Bella assume that Edward wouldn't want to be a father to his own son.  To take that choice away from him is unforgivable as well as Rose, Em, Jake and Leah going along with her knowing how selfish she is.  Emmett's the worst because he's witnessed his brothers pain when Angela died and now to choose to put him through more agony is just cruel!  Why put Bella's feelings before his brother's and his family?  How can Bella hurt Edward knowing how much he loves her and she loves him?  I wouldn't have the strength to walk away like that.

Great story!      

 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2014 3:19 PM Title: Outtake Three

wow what a great story ;) thanks so much for sharing it here ;) 

Reviewer: twirob13 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2014 8:10 PM Title: Endings

cool beginning but in bpov it said rose was alice's little sister? so how can she be in a relationship with her cousin? and wouldn't they know each other already? ;)

Reviewer: alucas311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 11:04 PM Title: Tears

Does Edward have to be so mean to the medics and hospital staff?? Geez

Reviewer: alucas311 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 9:52 PM Title: Breakdown

It is really weird seeing how Bella acts about her fathers death. It just doesn't seem sincere. 

Reviewer: sweet2you Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Oct 2013 9:05 PM Title: Time

Enough is a enough! Who at 25 acts like this?  And what friend would Stand and watch you behave in this manner. A good friend listens, but tells you the truth even when you don't want to hear it.

This going on and on....really. low self-esteem.....my god Bella is killing me.

I truly enjoyed the fist half of the story. ..up until the accident,  but the chapters afterward really make me mad. The selfish coward. At this point I cannot read any more. I know they will get back together, but look at all the folks who gets hurt in between.  Cannot take it. 

Thanks for taking the time to write. Thanks for the story.

 

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Date: 18 Oct 2013 9:20 PM Title: Flirting

so sad that I couldn't get any of the above links to work ... story is great so far

Reviewer: desdemona Signed starstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 30 Sep 2013 7:14 AM Title: Perspectives

yep, bella is selfish and i don't like her

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:45 PM Title: Outtake Three

not that she wouldn't have deserved it.  LOL

 

Ty for writing and sharing.

ty

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:43 PM Title: Outtake Two

yummy yummy.  get her E.

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Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:41 PM Title: Outtake One

oooh LOVE this chapter

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 6:03 PM Title: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot

Gotta LOVE when all the kids are finally in school.  LOL for getting caught though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:55 PM Title: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene

Sam is such a great friend for them

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:54 PM Title: Epilogue: Part Two

Glad E and Em made up.   B&E are insatiable huh?   Awww Peter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:32 PM Title: Epilogue: Part One

Woo Hoo for Wedding.   So Em, Rose, Leah, Jake, and Alice weren't invited to the wedding?

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Aug 2013 5:20 PM Title: Finally

They need to have counselling if they want a chance to work.  Don't blame Lizzie for being gunshy at the thought of B coming back.   B cause almost all of this.   Sweet talk with E at Ang's grave though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 10:45 PM Title: Advice

BPOV:   Yup its a mess of your own making B.  sam is sooooooo right.

 

EPOV:  I'm with E.  I'd be pissed as hell too.  Esme is so cool.  Love her.   I kinda don't blame Alice.  The effect on the girls, not to mention E, would have made me do something like that too.

 

Ch 31 (inside ch 30 lol)

 

BPOV:  Glad E wants to take it slow.   Trust, esp regarding the girls, needs to be earned.   Sam is toooooo funny. 

 

EPOV:  Can't blame him for being cautious.

 

BPOV:  Glad she's acutally thinking about his feelings now.  Glad she's being responsible about BC now.     Seattle:  yea she should have told him sooner.   sigh she really needs to communicate better.   Glad they are getting some alone time, but I know it was hard leaving my first child.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 9:10 PM Title: Admissions

BPOV:  Sorry B.  You deserve every bit of hardness Sam et al give you.     The Cullen's would be right to never speak to you again,esp with how those little girls were hurt.   And just wait till they find out that Em knew.  

 

Awww for Sam and his new man and job.  I agree with Sam on the singing.   Can't stand Barbra or her little Celine Clone.   blech.

 

Glad Sam is being stern with her.   Although I'd meet at a neutral location, like Em's place.   They should have to endure some pain since they were complicit in the deception.  

 

Gotta love Esme.   Although how/why she kept it from Edward I'll never get.     ok  wierd note..Isnt the breast pump one of the great inventions for mommies!!!   E would be within his rights to dump her.   (yea I'm a bit bitter)

 

EPOV: You are Wayyyyyyy to good to her.   oh E if only you told her that before.  But she was still in the wrong.   Glad he asked for time.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 8:09 PM Title: Labor

Wish she had to go without the epidural.  Sooooo mad at her.   Sorry but Em should have reclused himself.   sooo wrong the way he is continuing to lie to his family.

 

EPOV:  Glad the girls are doing better.  Poor E.   Em is a bad brother lying to him

 

RPOV: ah So Em is trying to be sneaky.  Thats cool.  Still don't like Rose.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:53 PM Title: Time

Bella doesnt deserve a new friend right now, gay or not.  Rose doesn't deserve to have it either.   She, and Em, are still lying to the whole family.    Those poor little girls.   Wouldn't blame E for trying to get custody and shutting all the liers out of his life.  

 

Jan: if not for the health of the baby, I'd say she deserves everything she's feeling.   She def doesnt deserve Sam.

 

Feb: Pathetic that Sam get to experience that kick and not E

 

Mar:  Like you deserve any better.  Glad Alice left the diatribe.  Sam is too nice.

 

April: Wow Sam is really nice

 

EPOV: Poor guy.

 

May:  glad she's uncomfortable.   Wow  Can't believe Em is participating in that shower considering he is keeping his nephew away from the father, siblings, and grandparents.   Sam is funny

 

EPOV: At this point, E has every reason to hate Rose and Em. Wow Rose is just cruel, esp with yelling for Em the way she did.  

 

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:36 PM Title: Perspectives

Em pov: Wow   I'm def anti Rose right now.   Asking Em to lie is cowardly on her part as well.   E has a right to know regardless of his past conversations about no marriage.

 

Leah POV:  Leah and Jake are sooooo wrong about this.   hppft...Leah is not strong.  She just tried to force Jake into a baby.   Not fair to Em, Esme or Carlisle either.   

 

Lizzie POV:  Those poor girls.   So wrong hurting them as well, not to mention keeping a sibling from them.  

 

Alice POV:  Wow Rose et al lying to Alice too.   This is ridiculous.  Can't blame Alice for being pissed.

 

Rose:  Em deserves better than Rose at this point.   Wouldn't blame him for leaving her for her forcing him to lie to his whole family.     Wow  NOW she decides that B is wrong?    What a goober Rose is.  Kinda expected Bella's response to her tirade.

 

Carlisle:  He is so nice, even when Bella doesn't deserve it.  

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:21 PM Title: Connection

woah.....why would em, rose, jake, and leah help her leave him???????    WTH???    Very cowardly way to leave B.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 7:10 PM Title: Assurance

hmmmm now what is B planning?   She needs to tell him soon before someone one else drops the beans.

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 6:51 PM Title: Tears

OMG  what a way to find out about baby.   E is going to go nutso!!!!

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 6:43 PM Title: Declaration

he wants to talk while she's driving???  what an idiot

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 4:44 PM Title: Dilemma

Only Alice would deliver dinner invitations to FAMILY via messenger.   Silly woman.

Aww for dinner and for the start of after.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:47 PM Title: Revelations

lol for frustrated B.   lol for getting caught making out by the kids.

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Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:25 PM Title: Progress?

kinda bad timing.   Glad Carlisle was there for her.  was wondering who she was talking too.  Kinda figured Billy or Carlisle. 

Silly E thinking the worst that B would up and leave.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Aug 2013 3:14 PM Title: Surprises

Pixie and her parties.   aww for the ending and the private gift giving.

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 10:27 PM Title: Dates

oh Alice.   You bad girl.  Royce is a real piece of work.    E to the rescue!!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 10:10 PM Title: Games

Why do I have the feeling that Alice is going to cause a big rift.  Sure hope Royce doesn't hurt Bella.

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 9:33 PM Title: Comfort

oh E  you were doing so well....  Poor broody E is back.  Bella is gonna get whiplash soon

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 8:55 PM Title: Moving

lol for the Jake/Edward little love story.   yey for moving in.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Aug 2013 6:44 PM Title: Commencement

their banter is tocute.   Uh oh  Jealous E coming out to play

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 6:34 PM Title: Brunch

glad their meeting went well.  Considering the hours she'll be putting, I think the salary is good, esp if benefits are included too.

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Date: 06 Aug 2013 5:40 PM Title: Interviews (Part Two)

Get him Esme!!!    Aww for poor embarrased B

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 11:53 PM Title: Interviews (Part One)

 wow for Jake's issue and for the skank  twins at the interview.  love  esme.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 10:33 PM Title: Alone

ooooh Em avoiding E.   That's not good.  Prob under threat by Rose as not to spill the beans about B.    Wonder if B will show up to the interview or not.

E sounds like a work meanie.   Love the girls and how he is with them though

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 10:10 PM Title: Uncertainty

ooooh  naughty B sneaking out.   Ya know Em is not going to be able to keep his mouth shut.

Kate seems pretty cool.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 10:00 PM Title: Lemonade

Wowzer Wowzer Wowzer  What a first meeting!!!

 

dl

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Date: 05 Aug 2013 9:46 PM Title: Flirting

oooh they are getting to know each other a little.   Oh B.....dangerous game you are playing.

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Date: 05 Aug 2013 8:01 PM Title: Nuptials

Both our kids have some things to get over huh?   Ugh Newton.     Alice's wedding sounds lovely.

Aww for E trying to look out for her.  So sweet.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 7:40 PM Title: Possibilities

poor B.   Glad Billy was there to help her.   Alice is a force of nature that's for sure.    Ah E gets his first peek at B.  Hope he doesn't make an arse out of himself.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Aug 2013 2:17 AM Title: Breakdown

Glad that we don't have to worry about Jake sniffing around B.   Sounds like they are good friends.   Hmm now why does E not like Rose?  She seems pretty cool in this story.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 11:01 PM Title: Endings

well James is a horndog but at least he doesn't sound abusive. oh wow for the way she found out about her dad. glad she didn't wreck the car or anything. lol for the kid based ok intervention

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Aug 2013 10:42 PM Title: Change

Great start.  Cant wait to see where you take it.

 

Reviewer: tululah Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Jun 2013 5:33 PM Title: Perspectives

Neither Bella nor Emmett desreve forgiveness. This is utter betrayal. bella is being cruel and self serving. Not just to Edward but his poor little girls.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Oct 2012 3:43 AM Title: Interviews (Part Two)

loved it!

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 2:05 AM Title: Interviews (Part One)

loved it!

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 1:28 AM Title: Alone

loved it!

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 1:09 AM Title: Uncertainty

loved it!

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 12:51 AM Title: Lemonade

loved it!

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Date: 14 Oct 2012 12:24 AM Title: Flirting

loved it!

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 11:36 PM Title: Nuptials

loved it!

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Date: 13 Oct 2012 10:54 PM Title: Possibilities

loved it!

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 10:21 AM Title: Breakdown

loved it!

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 8:27 AM Title: Endings

loved it!

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Date: 19 Sep 2012 7:26 AM Title: Change

loved it!

Reviewer: karmagal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Sep 2012 12:41 AM Title: Commencement

labor of love edward widower

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 9:27 PM Title: Outtake Three

I'M SO GLAD THIS ISN'T WHAT HAPPENED THAT WAS SHITY OF EDWARD.

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 9:12 PM Title: Outtake Two

IT WOULD HAVE BEEN BEAUTIFUL ALSO IF IT HAD OF HAPPENED THAT WAY. YOU KMOW WHAT FOR ME ALMOST ANYTHING EDWARD AND BELLA DO IN BET IS BEAUITFUL.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 8:29 PM Title: Outtake One

SO THAT WHAT COULD HAVE HAPPENED IT WOULD HAVE BEEN GREAT AS WELL.

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 6:42 PM Title: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot

WOW SEX IN THE BACK YARD JUST WOW THATS ONE I NEVER DID BUT IN DID IN THE WOODS ONCE WITHOUT A BLANKET UNDER ME NOT GOOD AT ALL IT HURTS THE BACK AND ASS. LOL

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:51 PM Title: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene

IT WAS A VERY GOOD THING FOR SAM TO TALK TO LIZZIE IT WORKED AND SAM DIDN'T SEEM TO TRY TO FORCE BELLA ON LIZZIE AT ALL. SAM'S A SMART MAN.

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Date: 22 Jul 2012 5:00 AM Title: Epilogue: Part One

MARRIED AT LAST WILL THERE BE MORE BABYS?

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 1:04 PM Title: Admissions

She should beg for his forgiveness.

He missed the birth of his son, he miss watching Bella grow with him, he missed, the birth, he missed his first bath, first feed... the list goes on

I stand behind you Edward.

Reviewer: famaggiolo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Jul 2012 12:33 PM Title: Labor

I am sorry, but if Edward takes her back with a drop of a hat I will be pissed, not only has Bella put him thought he wringer, but his kids also, and with the help from his brother, I would never speak to them again and then I would go after partial custody for my child.

I would be so angry... and if you don't make Edward that angry, I am though with this story also.

So far Bella = bad and Edward = good. You will not change my mind, I don't care how messed up Bella is from her fathers death, you talk to the person you are having a child with, Edward never got to help choose the child's name, or see him come into this world... Bella did wrong by Edward.

Reviewer: PattinsonsDiscoStickIsMine Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2012 4:11 AM Title: Advice

I HOPE BELLA SAY'S YES AND MOVES IN RIGHT AWAY.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 8:03 AM Title: Perspectives

FIRST IF MY FAMILY KEEPT SOMETHING SO BIG AS THIS BABY I THINK I WOULD NEVER FORGIVE THEM I MEAN IF I WAS THE FATHER EVERYONE THAT KNOWS WHERE BELLA IS AND HOW EDWARD IS SUFFERING AND HIS GIRLS AS WELL THEY ARE JUST NOTSHOWING EDWARD OR THE GIRLS THE LOVE THEY SHOULD HAVE FOR THEM HOW CAN THEY WATCH THEM SUFFER LIKE THAT. I WANT TO KICK SOME ASS.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 6:40 AM Title: Connection

DAMMIT THIS WAS SO WRONG OF BELLA SHE SHOULD HAVE TOLD EDWARD ABOUT THE BABY ANYWAYS HE HAS A RIGHT TO KNOW. IF SHE HAD HE WOULD HAVE TOLD HER HE WANTS THE BABY AND TO MARRY HER I'M SURE I'M SO MAD AT HER RIGHT NOW. FOR HURTING EDWARD. AND I'M PISSED AT JAKE AND EMMETT TO BECAUSE THEY SHOULD HAVE TOLD EDWARD WHAT SHE WAS PLANING HELL EMMETT IS HIS TWIN FOR CHRIST SAKES.

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Date: 18 Jul 2012 1:40 AM Title: Assurance

WHAT WHERE THE HELL IS SHE MOVING TO AND WHY. IS SHE LEAVING EDWARD BECAUSE OF THE BABY? ANF WHY HASN'T ANYONE TOLD EDWARD YET THAT BELLA IS HAVING HIS CHILD.?

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 8:36 AM Title: Declaration

SO WHAT DOES THAT MEAN DID BELLA PASS OUT OR DID SHE WRECK THE CAN? WHAT?

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 6:55 AM Title: Dilemma

I DON'T GET WHY EDWARD CAN'T TELL BELLA HE LOVES HER HE DOES SO WHY NOT TELL HER?

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Date: 17 Jul 2012 5:40 AM Title: Revelations

HE BETTER OR I'D MAKE HIM WATCH ME MAKE MY SELF CUM

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 8:42 PM Title: Games

WELL WHAT BELLA SAID TO EDWARD SEEMED LIKE SHE ONLY WANTS TO BE FRIENDS AND NOT LOVERS PERTTY CUT AND DRY TO ME BUT EDWARD'S NOT HAPPY WITH THAT HE WANTS MORE HE WANTS THE WHOLE PACKAGE

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 10:38 AM Title: Comfort

OK I DON'T GET IT WHY CAN'T THEY BE TOGETHER JUST BECAUSE HE HAS THE TWINS THATS NO RESON THEY CAN DO THERE THING WITH OUT THE KIDS SEEING THEM

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 9:15 AM Title: Moving

I'M GLAD EDWARD WAS THERE TO COMFORT BELLA WHEN SHE NEEDED IT SHE MISSES HER DADDY SO MUCH.

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Date: 16 Jul 2012 7:32 AM Title: Commencement

WOW EDWARD HAS A LITTLE GREEN EYED MONSTER IN HIM AND I DON'T JUST MEAN THE COLOR OF HIS EYES.

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Date: 15 Jul 2012 10:26 AM Title: Brunch

NOW SHE REMEMBERS WILL THINGS CHANGE FOR HER, HER FEELING FOR EDWARD?

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 9:53 PM Title: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot

Too funny........ ;-) Loved the outtake !

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 7:03 AM Title: Change

Very promising beginning!

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Date: 14 Jul 2012 2:11 AM Title: FGB No. Two: The Future Shot

Oh... that outtake was VERY nice :)

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 9:54 PM Title: Change

This is the first story I have read that Esme couldn't cook...good for you!

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:41 PM Title: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene

Loved this outtake! Sam is a great friend.

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 6:24 PM Title: Epilogue: Part Two

Nice chap!  There is nothing like laundry room sex, especially when you have kids :)

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 4:19 PM Title: FGB No. One: The Lost Scene

Loved it xx

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Date: 13 Jul 2012 8:33 AM Title: Epilogue: Part Two

I loved this story so sad it ending xx

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Date: 12 Jul 2012 12:27 PM Title: Epilogue: Part One

Awesome!  Edward is so damn sweet.  And I love Caveward!

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Date: 12 Jul 2012 6:16 AM Title: Epilogue: Part One

I can't stop picturing Sam as John leguizamo from the movie "To Wong Foo" LOL 

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Date: 11 Jul 2012 11:31 PM Title: Finally

nice!!! But I think he gave in to her too quickly.  I would have made her wait a little longer. LOL

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Date: 11 Jul 2012 3:54 AM Title: Advice

Okay!!!!

Ahhhhh.....all is right!  Damn, E just kills me!

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Date: 11 Jul 2012 2:30 AM Title: Advice

Edward was to forgiving of Bella. She was in the wrong in so many ways it unbelievable!! I do not blame Edward for being pissed at Emmett. What he did to Edward was awful!  So much for being a twin, to Emmett  it  didn't mean anything!  I am surprised that Esme hasn't stepped in more.  

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:52 AM Title: Admissions

Glad that Bella finally got the courage to go see Edward. Too bad that he got too emtional

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 3:24 AM Title: Admissions

Edward, MAN UP and take Charlie and boot her out in her ass! Emnett TOO! 

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 2:31 AM Title: Admissions

Oh Edward......

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Date: 10 Jul 2012 12:27 AM Title: Admissions

Well, holy shit!  But hey, I'm not surprised.  I mean, she did leave and was gone for almost a year with no contact and then she comes back hoping Edward will accept everything. It's just too much and I bet he needs time to think LOL

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