Date: 24 Apr 2015 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 7: Made in the USA
thank you for the update....will we find out whats going to happen
Date: 06 Feb 2014 7:41 PM Title: Chapter 6: Dates
They should have told their teachers that they were going on a hike. This would make it so Victoria would have nothing on them. They can't give her any power.
Author's Response:
Hello! I completely agree with you! But Edward acted on impulse. ..he's in love the poor guy :-) ♥
Date: 30 Sep 2013 3:39 PM Title: Chapter 5: Dinner under the Stars
Edward is such a sweetie. Bella needs to learn to live and enjoy life.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 5: Dinner under the Stars
thank you for the update.Bella & Edward having a nice time without any mishaps from Victoria.............well done.Edward please keep her safe from Victoria
Author's Response:
Hi there! Thanks for reviewing :-) he will do what he can!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 4: Hangouts and Electricity
Bella is a little clueless.
Author's Response:
that she is...edward wii break her shell soon.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 3: Closer
Bella says she loves herself, but she does not have self confidence. Edward likes her and she can't understand why. She must not love herself as much as she declares.
Author's Response:
Congratulations, you are the first reviewer! Thanks for pointing that out, Bella loves herself but she is not used to having guys around her like Edward is. Thats new to her, plus she is scared of the future. The rest of her issues come up on chapter 4 (its been added) Good reading, thanks again!