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Reviewer: Ashmerlin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 1

Fantastic story! So good I couldn't put it down.

Author's Response:

Thank you so much, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much :)

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oh, I loved that so much.  Thank you for sharing it.  Lisa



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, Lisa, I'm glad you enjoyed it so much.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 23

YIPPEEEEEEEEE!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Riley should trade rooms with Paul!  Keep the bigots together...

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 17

So glad Jasper is on the mend.  I hope his father breaks his damn neck, the bastard.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love Carlisle and Esme.  So glad they are supportive of Edward.  

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 14

God, that poor boy.  I'd like to take a buggy whip to Mick Whitlock, that bastard!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for all the reviews.  I'm glad you're enjoying the story so far, except for what's happening to the poor boys at the moment :(  They have some struggles ahead but it will get better eventually ;)

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 13

God, my heart is breaking.  Damn that Mick Whitlock!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 12

Oh, those poor boys.  I want to give them a hug.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 May 2014 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 11

So sweet.  These boys make me smile...and sweat a little : )

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

Oh, I hope their wishes come true...

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

Good for him for standing up for himself.  I think they're good for each other.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love these two.  Really enjoying it.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yay!!!!  So glad they're being honest!

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 2

So loving this.  Glad his first experience as an adult was a good one.

Reviewer: samekraemer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 May 2014 7:57 PM Title: Chapter 1

I was excited when I found this story, but I'm ecstatic it takes place on a ranch!!!  Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: snappher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:51 AM Title: Chapter 14

Someone, pleasevtell me someone in this fucking story kicks the everlovin FUCK out of jadpers father. Im so pissed im spitting!!!

Reviewer: snappher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 13

Idiots! Nuow could they not bamg on the door and ask to see jadoer!?!  Hes 18...his fuckheaf father beating him is assault and battety, and domestc violence. Gah!  Hes probably beaten badly.mdumb carlisle! Snd whats with esmes shit about jadper being a manwhore and just a fling?  Gah!

Reviewer: snappher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 6:50 AM Title: Chapter 9

Im so damned anxious reading this...inkeepnwaiting for jaspers ignorant nszi father to catch them!!  I want esme and carlisle to take him away from texas. :(

Reviewer: snappher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Jan 2014 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 3

Thank u jebus!!  A gay buddy. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I hope you enjoy the story :)

Reviewer: no sleep Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Dec 2013 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 5

I had virtually left Twilight fan fiction. This story reminds me why I never should have left. I have not been able to put it down once I started it. Spectacular!



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for your review - I'm delighted you enjoyed the story so much, it has been one of my favourites to write :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Dec 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 21

I need a shower... warn a girl next time! LOL

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo Mina



Author's Response:

Haha, that was a bit of a steamy one! I should post warnings on my FB and Twitter.

Glad you enjoyed - I'll be working on the next one at the weekend.

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2013 10:14 AM Title: Chapter 19

More good news and some bad. I'm glad Marcie left that monster and I can't wait for them to bring Sandy home ;)

Thanks for the update, loved the meadow rendevouz ♥ 

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - glad you enjoyed their midnight adventure ;)  Sandy will arrive in the next chapter!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 18

NO LEAVING BEHIND, please?

Now, I'm off ot take a shower... a very cold shower.

Thanks for the udpate!

xo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the steamy update :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Nov 2013 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 17

Well, at least Carlisle was quick and to the point! LOL

I don't know if Jasper is ready to press charges. I think he should, but I don't think he is ready to face that. I think he needs to see a therapist, it's clear he is dealing with some rejection issues.

I'm glad Em and his Dad stood up for Jasper, Mick doesn't derserve shit!

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one. xo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading :)  Jasper certainly isn't ready to press charges. He needs to heal first both physically and mentally before he decides what to do. At least he now has a whole family to care for him, not just Edward.

Reviewer: OsseWokr Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 16

I voted for you. :)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and voting :)

Reviewer: seba nefer Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 7:53 AM Title: Chapter 16

Voted! I enjoy this story.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and for voting :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Nov 2013 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 16

Is it wierd that the only thing I can think of is the fact Edward didn't wash his hands before getting in bed with Jasper? Ew...

I'm glad Jasper is getting better, I was so worried!

xo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading.  Haha, Edward would have washed his hands when he went back to his room to get a clean tee shirt for Jasper, I just didn't detail that part ;)

Jasper will be sore for a while, but he'll soon get better now :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 15

OMG! I'm so relieved Jasper is finally there... but Esme is right, Jasper never took care of his injuries, he probbly has an infection.

I understand Carlisle's hesitation, but I think that when he sees Jasper, he will change his tune.

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing. Jasper is in a bad way, but Carlisle will definitely change his tune when he's taking care of him :)  

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 14

UGH! I HATE JASPER'S DAD SO MUCH! But I'm glad Jasper was able to get away and now we know why he didn't answered his phone. I can't wait for the next chapter, how is Jasper gonna find Edward in Seattle?

 



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - Mick needs a taste of his own medicine!  Jasper won't have much difficulty finding Edward - he knows Edward is from Forks and he'll find Carlisle in the phone book, since he's a doctor and has his home phone listed :)  

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 13

glad Edwards parents were as understanding as he had hoped, but so worried about Jasper.........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Jasper's POV for the next chapter, so we will find out exactly what happened to him after Edward left .

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:00 PM Title: Chapter 13

Oh no... I hope Jasper is okay! GAH!!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, and I love the clip! Jasper's POV in the next chapter to describe what happens to him after Edward leaves :(

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 12

That sweet and hot, with the perfect adash of awkward... just perfect ♥




Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed their sweet awkwardness :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 12

beautiful-just as awkward as a first time should be, gay or straight! I will put my vote in for Torn!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the first time ;)  And thank you for voting!

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 11

Oh no, I think Jasper rebelling will raise some flags... I was reading this update with the feeling something bad was gonna happen and then they almost get caught! ARGH! I don't want them to hurt... 

Can't wait for the next chapter.

xo Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; just finished writing the next chapter and they get their first time! No drama quite yet but it's on its way :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Nov 2013 1:27 AM Title: Chapter 11

I have a bad feeling about this........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. They will be ok for a little while longer ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 31 Oct 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 10

This was hot, sweet and just perfect... Loved it!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading :)  Now they just have their first time to look forward to! ;)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2013 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 9

*sniffs* made me sad that ending... and i'm kinda scared to read the next chapter... i need more coffee...



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading - the next one will be sweet and hot as well; no drama quite yet :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 30 Oct 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 10

hot loving!!!!!!! (but love how Edward was his typical awkward self...lol)



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you enjoyed the hotness -more on the way :)

Reviewer: she-rah Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 8:35 PM Title: Chapter 9

I'm really enjoying this story.  Surprised it doesn't have more reviews.  Always happy to see an update.  Please, please let them explore their feelings completely for Edward's entire visit.  No getting caught!  I would hate for Edward to have to leave early.  You really make us want a HEA for these two!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you like the story. My main account, and the majority of my followers (and reviews) are on Fanfiction :)

I can promise the boys will get to enjoy the rest of Edward's visit and get to have their first time without interruption ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 26 Oct 2013 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 9

It is such a shame that what Jasper is going through is real life for so many young people.....I hope in your story, Edward's love and family can keep him safe!!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. There will be tough times to get through for the boys, but I do plan on an eventual HEA :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 8

That was sweet, and hot, and just plain fun.

But bad things are coming (pun not intended), aren't there?

Thanks for the update!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. There is more sweet hotness to come, but yes, bad things are on the way :(

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 8

now the boys are getting some where!!  lol always love the lemons-you write them so well!



Author's Response:

Thank you for your reviews and I'm glad you're enjoying the lemons - there are more to come ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 7

such novices to the world of love...........

Reviewer: narita Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Oct 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 8

This is such a sweet story. I have an awful feeling they are in for some heartache. I love this shy innocent Edward. Great job! Looking forward to more.



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading and reviewing, I'm glad you're enjoying the story. There is certainly some heartache ahead of them :(

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 7

Damn, the boys like their touching, huh?

Why do I get the feeling this is the calm before the storm?

Thanks for the update, can't wait for the next one.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; it is indeed the calm before the storm although they have a few more chapters to make the most of it first :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 6

Something tells me they are gonna find out before Edward tells them, it's a hunch. I just adore this Edward. I do! I can't wait for the next chapter.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Glad you love Edward so much and yes, he won't get the opportunity to tell his parents before they find out ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 1:45 AM Title: Chapter 6

just waiting for everything to fall apart!!!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. It eventually will, but not for a while ;)

Reviewer: maryhell Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 8:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

It was soooo good, I just had to relive the experience over here too. xx



Author's Response:

Hehe, thank you again :D  xx

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 5

poor Jaasper,  easy to see how the scars from the mental damage can be harder to get over than the physical ones...........



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. At least they both now have each other's support and can enjoy spending some time together :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 5

Oh jasper... my heart breaks for him. The scar was on his mind all along.

I can't wait to read the next chapter, that kiss was hot and sweet!

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Glad you enjoyed the kiss - there will be plenty more of those :)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 28 Sep 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 4

enjoyed the progress-hope Jasper does not have problems though!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; Jasper's dad will be a problem when he finds out :(

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 9:47 PM Title: Chapter 4

I wanna kill Jasper's dad, that small minded homophic asshole!

I can't wait to read the next chapter, the ride under the stars sounds romantic, maybe Edward will get his first kiss?

Thanks for the update,

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading. Jasper's dad is a nasty piece of work :(   Midnight ride coming in the next chapter and there may well be a kiss ;)

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 25 Sep 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 3

awww missed this update on the weekend, and when checking your stories, saw that I had missed this new chapter! Now things are getting good! But you do such a wonderful job of driving us crazy, slowly leading up to the good parts-that is what makes it a story-well done!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reviewing; glad you are enjoying the slow build-up of this one. At least they can now be more open with each other and will quickly grow closer now :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 7:48 PM Title: Chapter 3

Aw.... can give Edward a hug without him freaking out?

I can't wait for the next chapter! I wonder what Edward will say....

Thanks for the update, hon.

xoxo

Mina



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; glad you enjoyed the update. Edward is going to feel a whole lot better now he knows Jasper is gay too; talking about it will help him a lot :) He'll soon be up to hugging...and kissing...and...

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 2

like how you take care to build the scene now-but I am ready for more action!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading; there is action coming soon :)

 

Thanks also for reading Outcasts and Never To Late - I'm happy you enjoyed them :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

Loving it! Jasper is so gentle and kind... *swoons*



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I'm glad you're enjoying this one so far. It'll continue with one update a week until Torn is finished and then be more regular :)

Reviewer: MinaWritesFanfiction Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 1

FINALLY I was able to start this and I cannot wait to read more!!!

Edward sounds like me in a way... are you sure you aren't spying on me? *looks around for hidden cameras* LOL

xoxo

Mina

Reviewer: frekles Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 1

okay-this sounds different-anxious to see where you take us!



Author's Response:

Thank you for reading, I hope you will enjoy this one.  Also, thank you for reading 'One Kiss', I wasn't able to reply on Fanfic as you weren't logged in. I'm glad you enjoyed it and I'm happy you noticed improvement in my writin :)

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