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Reviewer: foxyloxy324 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2023 1:37 PM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

Not updated since 2014? :( I am literally crying! This story is soooooo amazing and 7 chapters isn't nearly enough! Hoping against hope that you see this comment and come back to write more because I read a TON of fanfic and this story has some serious, serious potential. I would love to read more! 

Reviewer: Llamas05 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2019 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

This has so much potential! I hope you finish this one day :)

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2019 6:27 AM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

Please update and finish this story 

Reviewer: turtle1954 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2019 6:26 AM Title: Chapter 7

Please update and finish the story 

Reviewer: lovely Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2016 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 7

Update!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: Jenneneannalice Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Jul 2015 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 7

I found this story today and so glad i did. Love the story!

I really hope you continue with it 

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2015 4:27 PM Title: Chapter 7

I LOVE this story.  I had to re-read this last chapter and make sure to comment bc I hope you one day come back & finish it. 

Reviewer: katmom1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 May 2015 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 7

Okay, please tell me you intend to finish this story because I love it.

Reviewer: Veronique24 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 27 Jan 2015 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 7

Loving your new story... well it's new to me!

Looking forward to reading more.

Reviewer: 1tinac Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Nov 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 7

So sweet so lovely. 

Reviewer: Birdde Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 01 Nov 2014 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 7

When is this going to be updated... its too good to stop now!!!

Reviewer: tlebaby Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Aug 2014 7:34 PM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

please hurry and update! this is such an interesting story, dont give up on it!

Reviewer: twilightgirl1690 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2014 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 7

love it carnt wait for next chapter xx

Reviewer: HawaiiLovelove Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jun 2014 12:32 PM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

Hurry and update! I'm so happy I stumbled upon this story! Xoxo

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 3

what??? How do they know. 

Reviewer: vamps09 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jun 2014 5:21 PM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

I like it!!

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jun 2014 12:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

im sooo excited that this story is going on!! yay!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jun 2014 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 7

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: ToAshes Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:07 PM Title: Chapter 7

I am literally over the moon that you've updated this story, it is amazing!!! I love it. Such an unique take on the characters. Can't wait till you update again.

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 7:45 AM Title: Chapter 7

Thanks good chapter

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

I'm SO happy to see this continued.

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

CHRIST! ANOTHER STORY OF YOURS IM OBSESSED WITH! I LOVE YOU SOOO MUCH  THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!!!

Reviewer: mct Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jun 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Just found this story and am absolutely loving it!!!  Love Esme and can't wait to see what they can do with their powers!!  I feel so bad for the new Bella to have to hear all those things that her sister did and live with the repercussions.  Can't wait for an update!!

:)

 

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 8:57 PM Title: Chapter 7

I'm a bit surprised that Edward unleashed all his ire towards his "wife" in that tirade. He believes that she is suffering from partial memory loss. What did he hope to accomplish?
Now I'm wondering, if he ever finds out he has been set up by the twin, if he will unleash that anger on Isadora?
Esme needs to aid this family in building a new life together. The kids are now living with their aunt. How will the truth affect them? They all need to grieve the loss of Isabella.
Did Esme use her potions on her family? Foes Carlisle know she still practices her craft?

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

wow i like the way it is going

i am shocked how their lives got so turned around and to learn she was meant to be with edward makes it better to take on bella's life

it is hard to deal with how different they both are but she has alot to change and it seems it is worth the risk

 

love it

Reviewer: Blueflowers Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 7

I really enjoyed! Thank you :)

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 7:29 AM Title: Chapter 7

:)

Reviewer: BigBsMom Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 08 Jun 2014 3:21 AM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

Very happy to see new chapters, can't wait to see where it goes.

Reviewer: queenbee311 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 6

Aw, JJ I'm so glad that you picked this story back up. It's wonderful. Thank you as always for sharing.

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Jun 2014 1:56 PM Title: Chapter 6

Does Edward know his mother & sister are witches?

I can't imagine the damage they're doing by keeping Isadora's identity from Edward.

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 6

I like the magic mixed in with the switched twin story. Look forward to more.

Reviewer: Moltz Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2014 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 6

Will Edward ever figure out that Isadora replaced his Isabella?
How will he feel when he finds out that Esme has known all along that there were two of them?

Reviewer: smp8421 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 6

I am really enjoying this story.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 6

I just found this story and I love it. Can't wait for more.

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 6

Glad it's back lol

Reviewer: seeker Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 6

Thanks good chapters

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 6

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: rclaurel3 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 6

So the real Isabella was an empath but noone help her to control her gift, Isadora can freeze and blow up things and she is training with Esme....why did Esme not help Isabella and what will happen when Edward finds out

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 8:34 AM Title: Chapter 6

loving this

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 6

oh things are working out

wow i am loving the story and hooked

want more chapters please

 

love it

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 4

love it

thank you

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 4:25 AM Title: Chapter 3

oh goodness, bella was so awful. sad that someone was so mean to everyone especially her own family. i am glad she asked isadora to step in for her

her family deserves a do over

 

wow blow me over esme knows isadora. love t

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 4:02 AM Title: Chapter 6

I'm so excited by this update! I love lemons but it is really funny how the kids keep getting in the way of poor Edwards needs,  ;). 

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 2

love witches

was a little shocked but can't wait to see what happens next

hooked

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 3:37 AM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

love it

hooked

Reviewer: bommer1and Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 2:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

So glad you're back!

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2014 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 6

:)

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 11:45 PM Title: Chapter 6

i loved the chapter

Reviewer: zho9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jun 2014 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 6

Thank you so much for the update.  I love this story!

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 5

Poor Edward finally has the wife he wants & still can't have his needs met. ;)

Reviewer: 2mpix Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Apr 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 4

This is such an interesting story!  The whole witch thing is an interesting twist!

Reviewer: Melcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 20 Mar 2014 3:04 AM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

I just stumbled across this story and I need more! Please keep writing it, it's soooo good. The plot is so unique, I can't wait for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Kimmiesan Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Feb 2014 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loving this!!

Reviewer: nikyta Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Feb 2014 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 5

LOVE ITTTTTTTTTT

Reviewer: sailorgirl Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Feb 2014 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 5

ok i am in love with this story too!!! btw i love witches!! they are my favorite supernatural thing.  magic is awesome!  i am so excited for this story!!  i do notice it havent updated in a while.  well i hope my review gives you some good vibes and helps if you are feeling stuck!  i cant wait to see what happens next!! 

Reviewer: joytome123 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 22 Jan 2014 12:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love all yr stories. have read them all now. just found "ReDo"". love it. pls update when u get time. U are an excellent & interesting author. always something different. thks again, Pamela
pamhanley@tadaust.org.au

Reviewer: PreciousAPerez Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jan 2014 5:56 AM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

its been so long since you updated!! such an awesome story should not be neglected.

:D please update.

Reviewer: ssbksmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jan 2014 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 5

more please :)

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:54 AM Title: Chapter 5

Can't wait for more!! Awesome story!!!

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Jan 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 3

Definitely different but you've got me eager to read the next chapter. You truly are amazing.

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

I like this  story you should finish it....or is that it...they got a re-do

Reviewer: vampirelover1234 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jan 2014 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 5

Update please

Reviewer: epicdreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jan 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 5

There are no words, I love this so much! update soon!

Reviewer: phoenices24 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Dec 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

You have got to update asap pretty pretty please!!!!! All of your stories are amazing because you are such a talented author and I know your up and coming book will do great! I will surely buy anything you write but as a fan I implore you to update your fantastic stories and not forget about any of them here.

Reviewer: beckey Signed starhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 9:47 PM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

I have to agreebplz dont stop here  i love this story because it is so different then alot of twilighjt stories  so plz update soon out of all the stories i have read  i would put it   in the top 10 stories and ihave read about 400 stories twilight   Great job

   

PLZ UPDATE SOON 12-05-13 

Reviewer: GARNET Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 5

Okay, these 5 chapters have hooked me. Please don't stop here!

Reviewer: sinister thing Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Nov 2013 8:45 PM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

PLEAAASSSEEE update soon I love this story!

Reviewer: crissyboo94 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Nov 2013 3:20 PM Title: Chapter 5

Updated plz love this story 

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Nov 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 5

great story so far cant wait to see what happens next time

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Nov 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

This was a new discovery for me.  I love it!  I sincerely hope you continue on with this story because it has a lot of potential and promise.  In many ways it reminds me of "Practical Magic".  Thank you for a wonderful read!  I hope to see an update in the near future!

Reviewer: Bbkjv2008 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 5

Really enjoying this story hope u can do an update soon. :)

Reviewer: maja296 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 12:26 PM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

Love it! Can't wait for more please keep on writing

Reviewer: ToAshes Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 8:44 PM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

this is amazing, I can't wait till your next update. amazing take on normal e and b stories, and good luck with your book launch!

Reviewer: Myhubbyissoedward Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Oct 2013 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love it! Can't wait for more

Reviewer: chantiemaya Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 7:18 AM Title: Chapter 2

Your story was rec'ed in my group on Facebook: Hidden Little Gems Rec Group! We rec stories with less than 500 reviews.

What an awesome plot idea! I love how sweet Isadora/Bella is with the kids and Edward's surprise at her behavior, and I'm looking forward to read more about Alice and how she will deal with Bella. This story has a lot of potential both for readers who love AH and the slightly supernatural! I do think you need a good pre-reader and beta, because I've seen quite a lot of technical mistakes in your writing. I can't help going into edit-mode when ever I read, because I write as well and always get everything edited by a beta ;) I think you need help with the punctuation, such as where commas should go. You can try with SRP or PTB to get a pre-reader and a beta. Otherwise, great story, and keep writing :)

Reviewer: scmm Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

Oh, I love this story! It's so different from what you write but so lovely, still. :) please keep on writing! <3

Reviewer: goldseadragon Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 5

I feel terrible for real Bella. This guy forced her to have kids when she was clear that she didn't want any, then she suffered from serious mental illness, so she's killed off and Edward gets a "better" version of her? Harsh.

Reviewer: Iluvlil lion Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it!! I'm glad that Isadora got her second chance and aww I wonder if Edward will find out that it's Isabella's twin?? Can't wait for the next update!! :D

Reviewer: sjdavis84 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 5

I was so excited to see an update! I have all these questions running though my head that I can't wait to have answered. Can't wait for more!

Reviewer: mass88 Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love this story!!  Of course I love all your stories!!!  Thanks for sharing you're wonderful talent with us!!

Reviewer: Bigma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 3:01 AM Title: Isadora Meet Isabella

Nice start to the story.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it can't wait for more :)

Reviewer: bellawitch75 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 5

At first I was reluctant to read this story, but damn, I'm loving it now. Keep updating as fast as you can.

Reviewer: Twilighter17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 4:15 PM Title: Chapter 5

Just found this story yesterday and I love it!!! 

Reviewer: madyson222 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 5

loving the banter between them but need more background or at least another conversation between her and esme or alice

 

love it

im looking forward to much more

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 5

How often do you update this?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Oct 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 4

Wondering why he said he broke his wife?

Reviewer: beachlover Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 3

Loving!!!!!

Reviewer: sassycook Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 5

oH GOODNESS. I FOUND THIS STORY THIS MORNING AND PRINTED IT OUT. I AM AT WORK ANd could not stop reading it. i am hooked. i am so loving this story and want more. Love it. the concept of twins being split apart and the reason why? i could not believe the concept but once you start reading it is so plausible. So heartbreaking that renee passed after giving birth. Wow that the girls couldn't be in the same room with out having issues. how strange the girls did not know about being witches. One got the good life and the other a bad hand dealt to her. But wow isadore turned out so much better. so really appreciates what her sister had and wants it with a fever.her sister didin't appreciate what she had. I am curious if her father will be coming forward. but again esme said she didn't know who the father was. I wonder if her father also has powers or is it just the women. it seems the men are not in the loop of the women's powers. is that true or do the cullen men know what their wives can do? I love the way bella is with the kids. the kids deserve so much. i am glad bella or dora will be sticking it out and giving her sister her dying wish and taking her life and living it to the fulliest. they all deserve a happy ever. bella/dora has so much to learn. Wow wouldn't that be funny for her to get pregnant with twins--what a hoot. I love your stories can't get enough. i can't wait for the next chapter. this story is to die for. i can't tell you how much i love it. can't wait to see how the cabin outing goes. edward is in for the time of his life and he too what have a new world opened up to him. yes they all get a re-do, and it seems they will all take advatage of it. mama esme will be happy with the new bella. love it

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love how they are reconnecting. Isadora needs to be herself, that is who Edward loves. She just has a new name and life. She needs to enjoy it. It is what Isabella wanted.

Reviewer: cusic1981 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 5

Love it!!!

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:39 PM Title: Chapter 5

I love this story, cant wait to read more.

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:00 PM Title: Chapter 2

This story is starting out so  good.

Reviewer: ally909lovesyou Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 5

I loved the chapter (:

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 5

loved this

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 5

WOW I LOVE THIS! I love ur publishing i just want to know the how.

Reviewer: lanigirl96003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 5

Looking forward to more

Reviewer: Snow one Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the update. Great chapter 

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 5

Loved it

Reviewer: dreamngo4it9 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

man i really freaking love this story so much! i love that bella/isadora is finally feeling love that she enver had before.... and the same for edward. cant wait for more!

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