[Report This]Date: 09 Sep 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 20
Interesting turn of events. So Sam was partaking in a threesome with the "leeches". I wonder how they took care of the wolf stench and why Emmet's vamp senses didn't pick up the semen sent from another male??? I'm not sure i trust Alice. She already encouraged Edward in Alaska, then she conveniently didn't see any vamps in the mall, and now she is encouraging them to meet Aro.....hmm.....coincidence???......or does someone have her hand in the cookie jar???? Can't wait to see what happens next!!!!!
Author's Response:
I have always thought the wolves to be arrogant assholes and hypocrites .... Protectors my ass I wonder how protected Emily's face feels. Don't hate Alice just yet .. she isn't my favorite but there were other factors at play....
Thanks so much for taking the time to review the story
Seph
Date: 09 Sep 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
I love Emmett and Maggie awesome idea i might have to steal *grins* Great chapter :)
Author's Response:
I thought they made a great couple ... and steal away .... remember to send me the link thanks for taking the time to review
Seph
Date: 09 Sep 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 20
Good chapters (as usual) lol Loving this story.
Author's Response:
thanks so much ... I'm really glad you like it
Seph
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
woo hoo Good for Em!!! So happy for him. Ugh Aro and his "reward" what a dickhead
Author's Response:
Yeah Emmett deserves to be happy .... Aro has always been a weird ass .... thanks for the review
Seph
Date: 08 Sep 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 19
Hope esme finds her real mate. poor thing.
Author's Response:
I don't know about a mate but perhaps a better companion thanks for your review
Seph
Date: 08 Sep 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 18
oooh Hope Esme makes both of those bigmouths pay. Of course Greedy Aro needs to die too.
Author's Response:
LOL ... I think everyone will get what is coming to them ...thanks for your review
Seph
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2013 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 18
great story so far
Author's Response:
thank you
Seph
Date: 08 Sep 2013 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great idea to have Rose as the bad guy.
Author's Response:
thanks ... I always thought she was just a little too big for her britches .... she isn't off the hook yet..
Seph
Date: 08 Sep 2013 2:45 AM Title: Chapter 18
Another great chapter. Geez, Aro is so deluded if he thinks he is getting Bella.....
Author's Response:
Aro is certainly a weird duck ... and you are right he isn't going to get Bella... thanks for the review
Seph
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 9:16 PM Title: Chapter 18
This just gets better and better!!!!
Author's Response:
thanks so much I'm glad you like it
Seph
Date: 07 Sep 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 18
Please update more soon :)
Author's Response:
thanks I will get them up as soon as possible
Seph
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
ya i found you on ff site and found you on ch 20 can't wait for more
Author's Response:
yeah I started posting a few days earlier over there .... that is how I was able to post a couple of chapters a day here ... I was hoping to get all caught up so they were both on the same chapter ... maybe in a couple of days ....
Seph
Date: 07 Sep 2013 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 17
Oh boy its getting good now. I hope Rosalie gets what she sows. At least Esme sees through her act
Author's Response:
Rosalie will get exactly what she is asking for ... thanks for the review
Seph
Date: 07 Sep 2013 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 1
I have to say I have just started reading this story and i already love it, can't wait to read more
Author's Response:
Great!!! welcome and I hope you enjoy the rest of the story .... thanks for the review
Seph
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 17
Sounds like Rosalie and Carlisle might have a fling going on??? Something's up. The gifts for Edward and Bella are so cool. I'm really glad to see you take such a unique approach to things. I'm so excited that Alice won't be able to order Edward and Bella around anymore. She really isnt my favorite character. I find her pushy and selfish. I'll be looking forward to future chapters.
Author's Response:
I agree with you about Alice ... just too damn bossy thanks for the review
Seph
Date: 06 Sep 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 17
oooh E is maturing. Cool. Glad Esme has a better head on her shoulders.
Author's Response:
yeah I had to give him a little boost .... LOL thanks for reviewing
Seph
Date: 06 Sep 2013 8:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
Carlisle is an idiot. Sigh
Author's Response:
Carlisle has his own agenda ... he likes his "perfect family"
Seph
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
I like this story. The powers you have given Bella are very unique. I'm not quite sure about the Cullen family. I thought I understood Carlisle also pushed Edward towards Tanya as well as the other family members. I can understand Esme and Emmet being in the dark about the Tanya issue, but not the others because of the talents or in the case of Rosalie her rudeness and Carlisle his simple need for control. Should we expect some drama from that? If I were Edward and Bella I would have zero tolerance for that behavior.
Author's Response:
Carlisle has his own thing going on .. he wants his "perfect" family we haven't heard the last of Tanya thanks for taking the time to review
Seph
Date: 06 Sep 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 16
love it love it !!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
:) thanks
Seph
[Report This]Date: 06 Sep 2013 5:07 PM Title: Chapter 16
she a bitch and don't get me started on carlisle
Author's Response:
she has always been a bitch ... and it will get a little worse thanks
I see that you found my on FF ... :)
Seph
Date: 06 Sep 2013 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 15
Walmart and Emmett, a dangerous combo. Like the story to this point.
Author's Response:
thanks ... yeah Emmett can get into some mischief and he will take Edward along with him
Seph
Date: 06 Sep 2013 9:50 AM Title: Chapter 14
Emmett will always be Emmett.
Author's Response:
yep and I wouldn't have him any other way LOL thanks for the review
Seph
Date: 06 Sep 2013 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
I have never liked Aro and Caius. Keep up the writing.
Author's Response:
me either ... thanks for the review ....
Seph
Date: 06 Sep 2013 2:57 AM Title: Chapter 15
Cool chapter. love this story!
Author's Response:
thanks, your reviews have meant a lot to me ....
Seph
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
lol i love it can't wait for more
Author's Response:
thanks I hope you continue to enjoy it
Seph
Date: 05 Sep 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 15
lol Can just picture all the trouble Em could cause in Walmart
Author's Response:
LOL .. yeah he could and he even gets Edward to join in ..thanks for the review
Seph
Date: 05 Sep 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 14
love it
Author's Response:
thanks, I glad you like it
Seph
Date: 04 Sep 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
Good for Bella thinking to use her power to save the little boy. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
thanks ... yes it is a good use of her gift ... now if there was only a way that she could do it more ..
Seph
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14
that was good to do for that boy
Author's Response:
Thanks ... her gift can help more than just vampires and I wanted to show the potential that is there.
Seph
Date: 04 Sep 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great way to use her talent. Bet the Parents are so happy
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review .... I wanted to show that her talent could be beneficial to humans and vampires alike ..
Seph
Date: 03 Sep 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wow that was an interesting thing em thought of.
Author's Response:
yep, I want to shoe that Emmett isn't the big goofball everyone always makes him out to be, An RV just makes sense Thanks for the re iew
Seph
Date: 03 Sep 2013 4:03 PM Title: Chapter 13
Great chapter! Love it
Author's Response:
Thanks I glad you like the story
Seph
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
wow i love it
Author's Response:
Thanks I'm glad you like it
Seph
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2013 1:41 AM Title: Chapter 12
aw that's no fare get them all with her
Author's Response:
they don't all have her best interest at heart ... she needs to stay safe and hidden for now ... thanks for your all your reviews they really mean a lot ..
Seph
Date: 03 Sep 2013 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
Best.buy huh? Portable microwave?
Author's Response:
Nope not a microwave ...LOL thanks for all the support you give
Seph
[Report This]Date: 03 Sep 2013 12:47 AM Title: Chapter 11
Aww gotta love big bro em
Author's Response:
Yeah Em's the best and he comes up with the perfect solution for staying hidden thanks for your review
Seph
Date: 03 Sep 2013 12:45 AM Title: Chapter 12
oooh a cliffy! this is so good. love it!
Author's Response:
thanks , I'm glad you like it .... see you next chapter
Seph
Date: 02 Sep 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
Love this chapter. You can always depend on Emmett to want to help. Great chapter.
Author's Response:
Thanks, Yeah Emmett will always be there to help protect his family.
Seph
Date: 02 Sep 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks for your review ... I'm glad you like it
Seph
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 5:24 PM Title: Chapter 11
love it please update real soon
Author's Response:
Thanks I'll do my best :)
Seph
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 10
Your story is freakingly amazing. I look forward to read more of this story. Keep up the excellent job.
Author's Response:
thanks for your review and I'm glad you are enjoying the story.
Seph
Date: 01 Sep 2013 9:25 PM Title: Chapter 8
hmmm Yes she does need to be protected from Aro.....or better yet, take aro out if he wants to get greedy.
oooh hiding from alice cool
Author's Response:
yep, alice is just too damn nosey LOL thanks for the review
Seph
Date: 01 Sep 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 9
Poor Em. Glad Jasper is there for him. Good idea cutting off the bitch's access to his money.
Author's Response:
Yeah Jasper was thinking about what steps he needed to take but Emmett hadn't reached that point yet, it's good to have family watching your back. thanks for the review
Seph
Date: 01 Sep 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 10
oh Rose. I so hope Bella gets to kill you.
Author's Response:
Rose won't be dying anytime soon but she might wish she could. thanks for the review
Seph
Date: 01 Sep 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter! Can't wait for the next.
Author's Response:
Thanks ... Next chapter Emmett will join up with them
Seph
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2013 4:01 PM Title: Chapter 10
i can''t wait for more please and keep uo the great work
Author's Response:
Thanks ... I'll do my best
Seph
Date: 01 Sep 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 9
Another good chapter. Good story.
Author's Response:
thnaks for taking the time to read & review the story ....I am glad that you like it
Seph
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 9
love it
Author's Response:
Thanks ... I'm glad you like it
Seph
Date: 31 Aug 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 8
Aw crap, a cliffy! I can't wait for tbe next chapter. Great story.
Author's Response:
thanks for your review ... by the time you get this the next chapter will be up and cliffy solved.
seph
Date: 31 Aug 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 7
Great chapter! On to read the next...... ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you for your review ...I'm glad you are enjoying the story
Seph
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 8
wow i love it
Author's Response:
I'm glad you like the story ... thank you for letting me know. i really appreciate it.
Seph
Date: 31 Aug 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
i like that the story doesn't drag. i hate those.
Author's Response:
Oh I'm glad I'm not the only one LOL I'm glad you are enjoying the story. Thanks for taking the time to review
Seph
Date: 31 Aug 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 7
woo hoo for reunion.
Author's Response:
yes together again ... no need for angst ... time to move on ... thanks for taking the time to let me know your thoughts.
Seph
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
take her the family so the wolfs don't get her
Author's Response:
The wolves won't get her and they will have problems of their own in the not too distant future. Thank you for letting me and my story be a small part of your day.
Seph
Date: 30 Aug 2013 10:14 PM Title: Chapter 6
love it
Author's Response:
I'm glad you are enjoyin the story and thnks for taking the time to review I appreciate it
Seph
Date: 30 Aug 2013 9:19 PM Title: Chapter 6
Rose needs to pay. Poor Em.
Author's Response:
Rose won't be walking away scott free and I have a pretty little redhead in mind to cheer Emmett up
Thnks for taking the time to read & review
Seph
Date: 30 Aug 2013 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh, this is getting really good.... can't wait for the next chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you for taking the time to read & review I really appreciate it and I'm glad you are enjoying the story
Seph
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
AWWWW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! i just wish the chapters were longer
Author's Response:
I'm sorry ... some are a little longer than others and I am working on getting them longer still. Thank you for taking the time to read and review.
Seph
Date: 30 Aug 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
what a chapter! well done.whHolyw
Author's Response:
I am very happy that you are enjoying the story .... thank you so much for taking the time to read and review
Seph
[Report This]Date: 30 Aug 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
more please
Author's Response:
First I would like to apologize ...when I replied to your previous reviews I was not aware that IE would not send it through to you.. Thank you so much for taking the time to read & review my story.
Seph
Date: 30 Aug 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 5
Can't stand Rose. Poor Em. awww Charile
Author's Response:
not a rose fan ... Charlie will be ok I have a pretty little redhead in mind for emmett
Date: 29 Aug 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter 4
naughty wolves coming to find Bella.
Cool sounding powers
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Date: 29 Aug 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 3
Rose is such a biatch. cant stand her. oooh B new powers sound cool
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Date: 29 Aug 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 2
oh no....poor Demetri. ooh Silver eyes...This is different.
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Date: 29 Aug 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 1
oooh interesting start.
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Date: 29 Aug 2013 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 4
Interesting story. I can't wait for more!
Author's Response:
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 4
never heard of Dowsers before...intriguing
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[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 3
oh boy i can't wait and he needs to hit rose and alice update soon please and keep up the good work
Author's Response:
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 2
oh man i hope they find her soon so she don't hurt the wolfs or anyone please update realsoon i love this story keep up the good work
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[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow i what more please
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