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Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Oct 2013 7:58 AM Title: Chapter 40

Brilliant! I'm loving this story. I wonder what Carlisle is up to...



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you are enjoying the story .... thanks for taking the time to review ... as for Carlisle we will have to wait and see.... :)

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 39

Finally some justice for Marcus!   yeaaa.  I can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

thanks ... the next chapter will be up shortly

Seph

Reviewer: LoviV Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 3

Seems like an interesting story.  One constructive thought watch the changes between first person and third person.  I noticed it in Chapter 2 and 3.  If someone has already mentioned this, please forgive me for pointing it out again.  

 

It it will be interesting to see where you go with this.



Author's Response:

Thank you for bringing that to my attention ... I thought I was staying away from that but I guess I missed the boat on those two chaps. 

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 39

WOLVES YES THE WOLVES LOL



Author's Response:

yep, the wolves .... next chapter will be up in a few minutes

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 39

Go Caius!!!!    Great punishment for the Ice Biatch too.



Author's Response:

LOL ... glad you like it ...

Seph

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:43 PM Title: Chapter 39

love it



Author's Response:

Thanks ... next chapter will be up soon

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Oct 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 38

Oh wow..... Aro has so much more to answer for.....sounds like Sculpicia does too.   



Author's Response:

thanks for the review ... yep Aro needs to answer for his actions .... but first the wolves

Seph

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 38

Felix got his punishment. I hope Aro's punichment is also fitting. He is a monster... And then Suplpicia as well. Thanks for your update.



Author's Response:

yep ... no one that knew about what was happening to Didyme will walk away without some punishment.

Thanks

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Oct 2013 12:27 AM Title: Chapter 38

Whoo  Hoooooo!  Yea Bella!  Aro needs to be taught a lesson.



Author's Response:

oh they will take him to school .. LOL 

seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 37

Glad Bella was there to talk them out of just killing Aro.



Author's Response:

yeah it feels like he would be getting off too easy to just kill him ....I'm working on the next chapter so hopefully it will be ready soon

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Oct 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 37

Thank you for this chapter. Great story!



Author's Response:

Thanks ... I'm working away on the next chapter so hopefully there will be an update soon .... :)

Seph

Reviewer: Majo-23 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Oct 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 36

I hope you update soon!! love the story



Author's Response:

thank you for the kind word ... I am glad  you are enjoying the story ... update tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 36

lol  vampires calling wolves strange.   They are all strange, but I'm glad the girls are alll out ok.  

Yey for Didyme and Marcus.



Author's Response:

yeah the girls are innocent in all this so they needed to be rescued .... thank you for the review ... next chapter will be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 35

Glad Esme told off jake.  Don't blame Esme or Bella for being pissed at them. 

 

Aro is going to pay dearly I hope.



Author's Response:

oh yeah wolves won't get off easy .... and Aro will pay

I am so sorry it has taken me so long to answer ...but thank you for all you do

Seph

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 36

thank you for the update....I'm happy your felling well..I'm  enjoying the story....I hope Aro gets what's coming to him...Caius & Marcus don't know Jacob is a wolf?.....I can't wait for the next chapter...well done



Author's Response:

thank you for the well wishes ...  Aro will absolutely get what is coming to him ... next chapter will be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: Tinkerbell Blake Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 36

A lot happened and really pleased that the mated pair are back together. Looking forward to seeing what happens next.



Author's Response:

thank you for the review .... the next chapter will be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 36

love it



Author's Response:

thank you .. next chapter up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 36

Interesting!  This is really getting good.  Glad you are back.  I missed your updates.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the welcome back .... next chapter will be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 36

I'm glad everything is OK with your surgery. Thank you so much for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you .... the eyes are both healing nicely the right one was just a little worse than they thought ... thank you for taking the time to review ...  next chapter will be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 35

Short but interesting.  Hope the surgery went well.  Love the story!



Author's Response:

thank you for the well wishes ... this surgery was a little tougher than the first one .... but the eyes are healing nicely .... I am sorry it has taken me so long to answer .... the next chapter should be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: fairfax19 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 11:42 PM Title: Chapter 35

What an enjoyable read! I've just spent an entire afternoon reading all 35 chapters. Looking forward to more. Thanks.



Author's Response:

Well thank you for giving up an afternoon for my story .... I am sorry it has taken so long to respond  the next chapter should be up tomorrow

seph

Reviewer: Bigma Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 35

I like how your story is unraveling. Thank you for taking your time to write and post this story.  



Author's Response:

thank you for the review ... sorry it has taken so long to respond ... next chapter should be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 35

good luck on your surgery hun. :)



Author's Response:

thank you so much for your good wishes ... next chapter should be up tomorrow

sorry it took so long to respond

Seph

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 01 Oct 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 35

I will miss seeing this story updated!! I will pray ur surgery goes well good luck. Hope to see u back sooon!!

I can't believe this beautifully captivating story has almost come to an end with only 1 last remaining chapter left!!! sniff, sniff!! Anyway I truelly have enjoyed following this most amazing & wonderfully well written story!! Thanks for all ur hard work & I definaly give this a 10 star rating.



Author's Response:

Thank you for the review and the prayers ... sorry it took so long to answer ... next chapter should be up  tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 34

Glad the rescue went well.

Author's Response:

yes very quick ... in and out ..  thank you for your review sorry it took so long to respond

Seph

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 7:12 AM Title: Chapter 34

Poor Dydime. I wonder what tricks Aro used to keep her there. Thanks for the update.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review ...  I am sorry it has taken so long to respond

the next chapter should be up tomorrow

Seph

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 6:52 AM Title: Chapter 34

Wonderful!  To think of all the changes the world has gone through while Didyme has been imprisoned is so very sad!  On the other hand, she must be one dynamic lady to have survived this long mentally!  Marcus at least was not truly imprisoned - but in a way he was.  I sure hope those responsible don't die too quickly!  Voltera must have a couple of spare cells at the bottom!   Can't wait to find out more!



Author's Response:

thank you for your review .... I am sorry it has taken me so long to answer.   I'm sure Aro will get what's coming to him ..  next chapter should be up tomorrow

seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 34

Glad Esme for Claire out. Yey for Didyme getting out

Author's Response:

I missed this one... sorry about that ... thanks for the review ...

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 33

Good chapter.  thank you!



Author's Response:

Thanks ... the new chapter is up ...  I hope you like it ...

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 33

glad Esme and Marcus are going to help the girls.   Jacob is being smart.  



Author's Response:

yes, the girls are innocent in this ... Jacob is going to have a very difficult decision to make ... and that is coming up soon

Seph

Reviewer: jalee1118 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 33

Love it!



Author's Response:

thanks .... new chapter is up

Seph

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Sep 2013 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 33

We already have Marcus and Cauis against Aro. I'm very curious to learn what is Carlisle's role in all this. Thank you.



Author's Response:

Carlisle is just basically greedy ...   Thanks for the review .. 

Seph

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 32

I swear Iam sitting here practically salivating at the idea of Aro realizing oh so many things he has screwed up!  Note the smile on my face!  Loving it!



Author's Response:

the new chapter is up and Aro is one step closer to losing everything ... and Marcus is one step closer to gaining everything  ...

Seph

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 32

:o)~~~ love it



Author's Response:

oh good .... thanks  .... new chapter is up

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Sep 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 32

Evil Aro! Thinks he is sneaky doesn't he. Jacob's situation is reminding me of the song 'The Farmer in the Dell': the cheese stands alone, the cheeses stands alone, hi ho the derio the cheese stands alone. LOL!!!! I bet that puppy ain't so tough now!

Author's Response:

ROTFLMAO ..... I haven't thought of the Farmer in the Dell in ages ..... but yeah you're right .... new chapter is up ....

Seph

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 32

Oh boy...

Thanks for the update. I'm really looking forward to see how this is going to polar out!



Author's Response:

we are getting closer ... new chapter is up ...  :)

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 9:06 PM Title: Chapter 32

good chapter!  I can't wait for the next one.  ;)



Author's Response:

okay no more waiting ... new chapter is up   ..LOL   thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Sep 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 32

Cant wait for Aro to get what is coming to him.   Uh oh  Jake is gonna go nutso.



Author's Response:

Aro is in for a huge surprise ... LOL  Jake handles things better than Sam ... but he is still a jerk

Seph

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 31

This truely is such a uniqlyly different story, which is what I abslolutly love about this truly amazing story. This story is beautifully breathtaking & absolutly awe inspiring!! This story most definatly is captivatating & absolutly intrigingly!! This story truely has wonderfully well  developed story line!! Thanks 4 all the efffort & hard work!! 



Author's Response:

ahhh ... you made me blush .. thank you so much for your kind words ...

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 31

Another great chapter.  Thank you!



Author's Response:

ahh ... thanks for taking the time to read and review

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 31

ah so caius is crucial.  I knew it was Didyme.  Yea for Marcus.



Author's Response:

see ... I told you  LOL ... Aro is going to be in deep deep doo ...

Seph

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 31

Wow! The key to stop Aro indeed. This story is getting better and better... 



Author's Response:

thanks ... I'm really glad you are enjoying the story ... Aro is in sooooooo  much trouble

Seph

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 31

I had my suspicions that the woman was Didyme, hopefully, finally she will be freed to be with Marcus.  God help Aro then!  Great work! 

 



Author's Response:

Thanks .... yep there won't be anywhere for Aro to hide .... he has broken one of their most absolute laws ....

Seph

Reviewer: Marya1918 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 30

Just came upon this story and read it non stop. I love it! The wolves are real jerks, specially Sam. And Carlisle? Unbelievable! I loved the silliness with the drinks. ans lastly Caius... Is was so unexpected and is quite a twist. I really excited about his evolvement. Great story.



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story.  I never have liked the wolves, too arrogant. Carlisle is always a goody goody and that gets boring so i thought he could be a jerk for a change.  Caius has the answer needed to stop Aro.  next chapter should be up today

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 30

What the HELL!   Caius?  Wow, didn't see that coming.

 



Author's Response:

LOL ...  Yep he has the answers they need ....

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Sep 2013 10:55 PM Title: Chapter 30

hmmmm Caius huh?  Hope peter knows what he is doing.



Author's Response:

Yeah, Peter wouldn't put the major in danger ... Caius has the answers they need

Seph

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 5:25 PM Title: Chapter 29

Silly, silly Luca!  I can't wait to find out who's heading for the holding cell!  So many possibilities!  Nice work!



Author's Response:

Yep ... just too greed ...he would have gotten along with Carlisle ... thank you for the review

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 29

oh no I caught up to you............. Great story.. How is your eye?



Author's Response:

yes you did .... there should be another chapter tomorrow ... the eye is good but it gets tired very easy so I'm not able to just sit and type ...  thanks for asking

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:04 AM Title: Chapter 27

Well it is all getting really busy. Jacob taking over still means nothing he was going to kill Bella as well.



Author's Response:

Exactly ... Jake still isn't a good guy in this ... he didn't want to kill her himself but he was willing to watch ...  Jerk ...

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 25

Good luck on your eye surgery.



Author's Response:

Thanks for the good wishes ...

seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 24

oh my Drunk Vampires. This should be good.



Author's Response:

they have to have some fun .... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 23

Bella is really smart in this.. Yea Bella



Author's Response:

yeah ... I wanted to show a strong, smart Bella ...

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Sep 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 21

ut oh.. I guess Sam is a gonner.



Author's Response:

oh don't count him out yet ... he still may not survive this

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:43 PM Title: Chapter 29

Wonderful chapters!  I love this story.  Can't wait for the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you .... I am very glad you are enjoying the story ... next chapter should be tomorrow ...

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 20

You can not run from everyone. Need a wig.



Author's Response:

nah,  she'll be ok without one for now  

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 18

Well Esme will not be happy with Carlisle and Rose after this.



Author's Response:

No she won't  but she will be alright in the end ...

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 17

Maybe Carlisle has something more for Rose.



Author's Response:

oh ... he does .. LOL

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 16

Too bad he just falls into that trap..



Author's Response:

yep .... thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 29

love it



Author's Response:

Great .. thanks so much for the review

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 15

I love your story.. Walmart and the Cullens how very cute.



Author's Response:

yep ... wanted to see a little bit of the teenager that Edward truly is .. 

thanks for taking the time to review

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 14

I love your story.. Finally a thing of use the vampires can do. YEA..



Author's Response:

thanks so much .... yeah I wanted something that was useful to vampires and humans ...

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 29

oooh go Jazz and E!!!



Author's Response:

you make a great cheerleader ... LOL   I wanted to show their vampire side a little .. and Edward really needed to make a stand and show everyone what would happen if they went after Bella

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 13

Well they left Carlisle to deal with his daughters mess. Dear Rosalie.



Author's Response:

It isn't only Rosalie's mess .... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 8:46 PM Title: Chapter 29

can't wait intil forks



Author's Response:

We're getting closer ...  

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 11

really good.



Author's Response:

Thanks I'm glad you like it

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 10

You need to Roast that blonde. Oops she has a sunburn.. Poor Rose



Author's Response:

Rose will get what's coming to her ... don't worry

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 7

this is a cool twist you have going on and I like it.



Author's Response:

thanks, I am glad you are enjoying the story

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 29

Great as always!!!

Author's Response:

Thanks

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 6

well now he will run home to Bella.



Author's Response:

yes, he knows she needs him and nothing will stop him ...

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:16 PM Title: Chapter 5

Rose gets her just rewards. I hope Em gets a lovely woman to love him and be there with him and never make fun of him. Rose is a hag.



Author's Response:

I agree, Rose has never been a favorite of mine .... Em meets a pretty little redhead ...

Thanks

Seph

Reviewer: MaryMary Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 1

nice start. Too bad he did not take her with him.



Author's Response:

thanks for reviewing ...  I don't keep E & B apart for too long 

Seph

Reviewer: rodeinti Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:43 PM Title: Chapter 28

thank you for the update......interesting thought Aro being Carlisle Sire....until next time



Author's Response:

it makes sense to me ... Carlisle was hunting down in the sewers and what better place for Aro.

Thanks for reviewing

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 28

ahhh another traitor.  OOoh  Carlisle's sire huh?  interesting.  hmmm now who is the woman?  Maybe Didyme and Aro has her locked away?



Author's Response:

You might be closer than you think   LOL

thanks for reviewing

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 28

you love leaveing me wonting more lol



Author's Response:

Hey I gotta keep you coming back don't I ... thanks for reviewing

Seph

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 27

Your story is excellent and I just spent the late afternoon, evening and night reading it to date.  I love the title.  It can refer to any of several immortals in this piece.  Bella, Esme, Emmett, and even Carlisle and Rose have been broken at times in the story.  Bella's mixology made me laugh and I could just picture she and Alice  experimenting with new blood drinks while Jasper sat happily back with his whiskey.  I was thrilled to see Emmett finally happy with Maggie.  They must make quite the sight!  You make your readers feel as if they are traveling down a well known corridor, only to have it suddenly turn where there was no turn and grow confusing.  Brilliantly done!  I look forward to reading more.  Thank you for a wonderful read!



Author's Response:

Thank you so much ... your words have really made my week ... and you are the only one that gets that there are many broken immortals ... 

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 27

Wow, alot of stuff going on in this chapter.  Interesting .....



Author's Response:

yeah we're getting closer to the meeting with Aro so things will be happening  thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 26

Love the story and the way you continue to surprise me with your ideas.

Author's Response:

yay ...  I am glad I am keeping you on your toes .... LOL

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 27

Wonder if Jake will have a smarter head on his shoulders.



Author's Response:

Jake does seem to have a calmer head but he will be faced with a very difficult decision  thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 26

Great chapter!  I hope your surgery went well.  love th

is story!



Author's Response:

The surgery went very well thank you .... thanks for the review I'm glad you like the story

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 26

ewwwww Carlisle.    hee hee for the cutting off the $$.  oooh Peter is coming!!!  love me some peter.



Author's Response:

yep gotta lose the money ... and Jasper couldn't confront Aro with Peter there, were would be the fun in that  thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Sep 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 26

you repeaded the chapter check it out and you'll see... Great chapter. Carlisle is a douchbag and I hope Bella gives him a punushement he rightly deserves. Please update soon :)



Author's Response:

thanks for letting me know ... I'm not sure how that happened LOL 

I'm glad you are enjoying the story

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 26

love it so much



Author's Response:

thanks for taking the time to let me know ..

Seph

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Sep 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 26

i love this story



Author's Response:

Thanks so much for taking the time to let me know you like the story ...

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great chapter as usual.  I wish you luck on the eye surgery.  I look forward to the next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thanks ... thank you for the good wishes .. the surgery went very well ... I have one more on Oct.1 ... the next chapter will be up shortly ...

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 25

can't wait for ch 26 lol



Author's Response:

LOL  you won't have to wait long ... it will be up shortly

Seph

Reviewer: Bigma Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 25

Great story, keep the chapters coming, just found the story and kept on reading.



Author's Response:

Thanks, I'm glad you are enjoying the story

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 24

Creative as always. You were right. I loved the drink names you came up with. I hope everything goes well with your surgery tomorrow.

Author's Response:

LOL  I thought you would ....  Thanks for the review and the good wishes .... the next chapter will be up as soon as I can ...

Seph

Reviewer: moodyval59 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 3

Interesting talent.



Author's Response:

Hi, yeah I wanted to do something different .....  thanks for taking the time to review.

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 25

oooh taking back the $$   I like that.    Yup Sam you are screwed.  



Author's Response:

yep Carlisle won't be a happy camper .... I wanted to point out that he is not the breadwinner of the family ... those little hospitals can't pay enough to cover Alice's shopping .... LOL

thanks

Seph

Reviewer: campyrs2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 24

Great chapters.  Love this story!



Author's Response:

I'm so glad you like it ... The girls have been busy so tonight is party time  

Seph

Reviewer: carebare1 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Sep 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 24

i love that they can drink alcohol



Author's Response:

the party starts in a few hours .... The girls have been busy ...  thanks for reviewing

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 6:24 PM Title: Chapter 24

Good thinking about Carlisle's motives.   LOL for silly Jazz



Author's Response:

yep Carlisle is a sneaky SOB  and Jazz is always so serious so he needed to mellow out  don't miss the party coming up .... Bella  &  Alice have been busy  

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 24

wow i love it i what more please



Author's Response:

Hi, glad you liked it ... the party starts in a few hours 

Seph

Reviewer: pianogirl05 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Sep 2013 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 23

Hi-Mal cocktails......hahahahs!!!!! That's so funny. I'm so eager for more.

Author's Response:

thanks ... just wait for the bloody - rita .... thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 23

GOod idea bella.



Author's Response:

yep and she isn't finished ... she is the breath of fresh air they needed ... thanks

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 22

Sounds like Caius isnt a very happy camper.  LOL



Author's Response:

Nope not happy at all ... LOL   thanks for the review

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 7:29 PM Title: Chapter 22

can't wait for more



Author's Response:

okey dokey ... coming right up on both sites ..... thanks

Seph

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 21

ewww Rose and Skankya both.   Stupid Sam.   Grr for Aro and his blood "reward"



Author's Response:

yep ... nasty  ... just nasty ...  that one surprised me ... LOL 

Seph

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 21

yep your catching up ya



Author's Response:

I think I might be there by the end of the day ... 

Seph

Reviewer: aixa00 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Sep 2013 2:07 PM Title: Chapter 21

Ok I'm glad that the wolves were not innocent in this and that Sam's death was actually deserved. Awesome update hun :)



Author's Response:

Sam isn't dead .... yet .... I have always thought the wolves were way too arrogant and hypocritical ... I hope you like what I have planned for them .. thanks for the review

Seph

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