Date: 24 Aug 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 5
Figures Edward don't want Bella to have a gun.He should .I l'd shoot his ass.Slapping a woman around not love.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 9:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Who does like Edward?
Date: 24 Aug 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Am I supposed to like this Edward? Does he have any redeeming qualities? He apologized because he can't trust her? He didn't apologize for knocking the crap out of her. I am not feeling this couple, but I am curious about where yoou are going with this story.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 5
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 24 Aug 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
oh i wish she had a gun! im not liking edward very much either i mean he threw her across the room im afraid for her
Date: 24 Aug 2013 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 5
He should fear for his privates for being abusive. Everyone is noticing the subserviant behavior. Dad has to be suspicious.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 4
Alright, I think Emmett needs to kick Edward's ass. Temper, temper.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 6:54 AM Title: Chapter 4
Shit this is not good Edward is going to feel bad when he find out she is telling the truth I hope
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2013 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 4
new reader to your story....That was a little harsh, throwing her across the room..I can't wait to find out what's going on...who got killed?...who's ALICE.UNTIL YOU POST AGAIN
Date: 23 Aug 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 4
She needs to call him out on his bullshit. I would say "fine kill me or I will do it myself because I refuse to live this way any more. " I bet he would calm down fast.
Date: 23 Aug 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ouch! Edward needs to take it down a step. By making Bella drop out of college he will only be breaking her even more... And I don't think that he really wants that in the longrun. Great chapter. There were smiles, tension and a small peak at "Bella". Edward really needs to get to know her!
Date: 23 Aug 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 4
Ok why is Edward an asshole?
Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
high strung!! id say out of control ! hope she can get away from him for awhile hes MEAN!
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2013 10:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
Edward's being a big meanie, I hope Isabella gets to continue visiting her family and doesn't have to drop out of school. Thank you for the update :)
[Report This]Date: 22 Aug 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
a little!!!! what the heck went up his butt and why the hell does he have jasper shouting at his fiancee. please tell me there is more updates later? :)
he was being so sweet to her as well, i feel sorry for her, love the story though so far
Date: 22 Aug 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 4
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 22 Aug 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 4
Wow bella is a class act swearing like a sailor and smokng pot with little kids present
Date: 22 Aug 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 4
More soon please
Date: 22 Aug 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 4
Polite Edward didn't last very long. I wonder what Alice said.
Date: 22 Aug 2013 5:52 PM Title: Chapter 4
OMFG. Time for B to put a bullet in his head. What a f'ing douche. What does going to see her family have to do with Malice and her big mouth to Jasper? Ya killin me woman!!!
Date: 22 Aug 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 3
Interesting story. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:18 PM Title: Chapter 3
I think the bonding time iChat be iffy. I love the idea of Edward coloring! Brilliant!
Date: 21 Aug 2013 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 2
It's good to know that Edward isn't a complete jerk. There's hope for the man! Love the story and the possibilities.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward might be a tad pissed about Bella's smoke time, but good for her she's bonding with her brother in their own way :)
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 3
Great chapter. Somehow I don't think Edward will like their bonding time activity. See ya next time.
Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter One
Great chapter! And yay for fast updates :)
Date: 21 Aug 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
love it update soon
Date: 21 Aug 2013 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 3
hmmm Jaymee sounds like the cool brother. E needs to get the stick out of his arse.
Date: 21 Aug 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
I think Edward is going to be pissed but he will get over it
Date: 21 Aug 2013 12:31 AM Title: Chapter 3
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2013 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
I like this side of edward. gives me hope
can't wait for her to get home. i want to know what the dollars are for love
love it
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter One
i am stunned
poor bella
[Report This]Date: 20 Aug 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
This was not what I was expecting and I'm not sure if I like it or not. I think you should have made Edward out to be an assward for atleast 5 chapters and then he turns around.
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 2
Still loving it
Date: 19 Aug 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 2
Stockholm Syndrome..... Is E really that delusional? Duh wonder why she was crying all the time. Silly man.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 3:42 PM Title: Chapter One
Esme's gotta know something is up? doesnt she?
Date: 19 Aug 2013 9:28 AM Title: Chapter 2
Looking forward to more
Date: 19 Aug 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 2
So he is not quite the ass whole we think he is?
Date: 19 Aug 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter One
sounds great. What a life she is living.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter,cant wait to for more
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
I'm really enjoying the story, glad we got to also see the gentle loving side of Edward. Thanks for the update and for the lemony goodness :)
Date: 19 Aug 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter One
Love it ! Can't wait for more!
Date: 17 Aug 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter One
Love it! and looking forward to reading more! update again soon
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter One
Great start, I love the story and I'm looking forward to reading more :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2013 12:29 PM Title: Chapter One
Loving it!!!!!!!!
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2013 9:20 AM Title: Chapter One
:) looking forward to reading this
[Report This]Date: 17 Aug 2013 8:06 AM Title: Chapter One
Edward is funny I'd make him work for the yes, if that's how he plans to ask can't wait for more :)