Date: 04 Sep 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 9
agreed he is still a dick. Will see if he changes. b was right on everything she told him.
Date: 04 Sep 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 10
I'm impressed she hasn't gotten in trouble.....yet.
Date: 04 Sep 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 10
Last night when reading the last chapter I was thinking how funny it would be if Emmit got all hugs an knee slaps an fake jabs with Edward. This getting Edward to see that family an friends can be close without it Being romematic.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:14 PM Title: Chapter 10
Glad that Edward and Bella were having a good time with her family and friends at the club. I was worried about it. Why is Edward jealous of Jake? He did not mind her writing to him. He trusted her with that. Plus Jake brought his girlfriend to the club. I just hope that Edward was not coming out of the bathroom when Bella hugged Jake bye.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2013 11:53 AM Title: Chapter 10
I like that he can joke around but still not let anything slide.....As in Jake lol. Now Alice I hate, she's a know it all busy body and I never liked her character so that fact that people don't seem to like her in this story is great
Date: 04 Sep 2013 5:57 AM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter again. Love this story. Edward ALMOST acted normal. (almost)........
Date: 04 Sep 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 10
Oo no....i bet edward saw the hug
Date: 04 Sep 2013 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 10
looking forward to more
Date: 04 Sep 2013 12:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
Yeah, I am thinking that Edward is going to find out about that hug and then there will be hell to pay. However, he was exceedingly nice in this chapter. Maybe there is hope.
Date: 03 Sep 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 10
Foreshadowing? Jake drinks and takes pain meds? Edward may have a problem with him, but I don't see him acting out irrationally. The background info and details you give are always marvelous. Case in point : Mr. Cope, the popcorn, and Bella's lack of skill at darts. Nice chapter!
Date: 03 Sep 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 10
bet he saw thehug!!!! :)
Date: 03 Sep 2013 12:38 AM Title: Chapter 9
I figure she'll get in trouble tonight, especially if she gets drunk.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 9:43 AM Title: Chapter 9
I loved the chapter (:
Date: 02 Sep 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
I hope she doesnt get in trouble being herself I hope he will like what he sees.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 5:22 AM Title: Chapter 9
HOW LONG BEFORE HE STOPS BEING A DICK? IDONT LIKE HIM.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 9
Not sure this is gonna go well tonight :-)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 9
Did Edward could with the old Bella?
I do not think he will hold losing control, is who he is, I just think he already dominates in so many ways, it does not need to physically abuse.
I'm eager for more.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 8
Jaymee is in trouble?
Gtande chapter!
Date: 02 Sep 2013 4:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
Slowly, and a lot impatiently, Edward is beginning to listen and to learn about the woman who happened into his life so long ago. Love the fascination on Edward's part and can't wait to see how it works out for them. You make it outrageously wonderful!
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 7
Alice is really crazy, I do not understand Edward leaving Bella Jasper yell that way.
Edward does not regret his actions when Bella get pregnant it will continue as physical with her? His family find it surprising your changes, but two years is really too long, they may find that she has matured, they can see the sadness in her eyes.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 6
WOW!! So many things in one day, Edward Bella can not be happy, he wants to dominate it all the time.
Parents may find that Bella Bella only matured, but Jake realized that Edward is bad for Bella.
Great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 5
Your family will find that there is something wrong, the way Edward leaves barely breathe. I have the impression that Edward is much older than Bella.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
looking foreward to more
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 4
I want to punch Edward and Jasper, yeah I know that violence can not be solved with violence, but he is being a jerk, she said nothing, he is bipolar, can only be that.
Great chapter.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Go Jaymee!!! What an interesting turn of events.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 9
i hope she doesnt get shit off him for being 'real' :)
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 3
Bella's brother has a sixth sense, Edward actually
not a good person, but Talve, it is changing.
I loved their interaction with brother and niece, but I think Edward is jealous.
Date: 02 Sep 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 9
Well, that was a little better Edward.
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 2
WOW!! Edward surprised me, I thought he was yelling and screaming, but he sabia.Eu still do not understand their relationship, but I feel that a lot will happen in their stories always happen.
I loved it!!
[Report This]Date: 01 Sep 2013 7:43 PM Title: Chapter One
Poor Bella, worst place to find, close to a bloodthirsty mob, but she was lucky to attract him, or he would have killed her.
I think Bella is about to explode, I hope Edward does not forbid to go to his mother.
Great story, I may be crazy, but I love a possessive Edward.
Date: 31 Aug 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Edward needs a bullet in his brain. It an accidental near drowning so Bella can torture him after the brain damage leaves him helpless
Date: 31 Aug 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 8
Well, at least he wasn't physically abusive in this chapter.
Date: 31 Aug 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 8
Jaymee is protective of his sister. I do not blame him. Edward is definitly a control freak. I can not believe that he left the house just to prove a point, jerk.
Date: 31 Aug 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 8
Looking forward to more
Date: 31 Aug 2013 3:52 AM Title: Chapter 8
Edward is trying and Bella is being a very good girl just to bad she cant be who she wants to be
[Report This]Date: 31 Aug 2013 3:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
bad bella he will know
Date: 31 Aug 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 8
jaymee is going to get her in trouble. at least e wasn't an abusive prick in this chapter
Date: 30 Aug 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is so mean to Bella. He does not love her. He just wants to own her. He just wants to control her. The Bella that he says she is is NOT her. That is HIS Bella not the real Bella. That does not surprise me about Alice. I have been meaning to ask.....Does Esme know what Edward does for a living and does she know how Bella became to be with Edward???
Date: 30 Aug 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward's mood swings are killing me. He is ok and then he is mad because she shot a gun then he seemed ok with it and shot against her. Now I am assuming that he is mad because she hugged her best friend.
Date: 30 Aug 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 5
Edward is keeping a tight rein on Bella. I hate that Edward does not trust Bella after two years.
Date: 30 Aug 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 4
What in the hell happened????? Edward jreaaly has a bad temper. If Aro was with her, then why does Edward not ask him. Glad I can go on to the next chapter and find out what happened.....hopefully.
Date: 30 Aug 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 3
Jaymee sounds pretty cool. Can not believe that Edward let her out of his sight.
Date: 30 Aug 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 2
Wow!!! What has happened to Edward to make him change?????
Date: 29 Aug 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
Geez, Edward is such a prick in this story. I sure hope he get his ass handed to him soon. :(
Date: 29 Aug 2013 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm. Can't figure Alice out yet, but something is off.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 7
Looking forward to more
Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 7
Edward is a control freak I think it is going to have to learn a lesson.
Date: 29 Aug 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter One
OMGosh!!!!! Sounds like Bella adapted to Edward and his life
Date: 29 Aug 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 7
I love this story!!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Aug 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 7
i think alice is a cop
Date: 29 Aug 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 7
im done threats hitting controlling its all abuse there is no way he could redeem himself no heart and a black soul
Date: 29 Aug 2013 12:42 AM Title: Chapter 7
ok I want to cut off his hands and his balls. Hope he gets better soon. Don't like abusive E much
Date: 28 Aug 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 28 Aug 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 7
I see no redeeming characteristics in this Edward. Is that going to change? Or is Bella finally going to kill him? Does Esme know how he treats Bella? Is she treated that way? I think someone needs to spike his cake at the wedding.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 7
I still want to junk punch him, but now I want to attach jump lead clips to his balls aswell, bloody bastard. P.S. enjoying the story :)
Date: 28 Aug 2013 8:13 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh god when is Edward gonna stop being an ass??
Date: 28 Aug 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think Alice's game really is Jasper. As for Bella, I have a feeling that her time with her family will be short. They are sure to tease her about her new manners and appearance and if she curses, Edward will decide to leave. As for brothers and Jake, they are sure to be suspicious of the complete turnabout. I can't wait to read the upcoming chapter!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward needs to learn that he'll draw more bees with honey than vinegar. The cooler he is under pressure, the more he'll learn - especially about Bella. Marvelous chapter. Edward is beginning to meet the girl he ran across so long ago. Bella's relationships with her family are also great to explore.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 6
He needs to relax he is afraid that she will leave him??
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 6
Hmm ... Edwards a bit much. Is she gonna break him down or what?
Date: 28 Aug 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 6
Is this a abusive Edward just wondering....
Date: 28 Aug 2013 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 6
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 27 Aug 2013 11:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
I hate the way he is trying to change her. It seems she rely shines when she is herself.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm sure Edward is pissed off about Jake showing up, I hope he doesn't prevent Bella from seeing her family. Thank you for the update, looking forward to the next one.
Date: 27 Aug 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm really enjoying the story but I want to junk punch Edward :)
Date: 27 Aug 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 6
what is his problem!
Date: 27 Aug 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 6
I HOPE THIS STORY HAS AN HEA! I LOVE IT BUT NOT EDWARD!
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 6
thank you for the update......why was Edward mad?....Bella can shoot a gun.Edward didn't know that..ummm....She even beat him...Is he mad because of Jake or her beating him.I wonder.can't wait foer the next chapter
Date: 27 Aug 2013 7:59 PM Title: Chapter 6
Aww... Eddie... You can't be mad at her for being herself.
Date: 27 Aug 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is just plain pissing me off right now, but then again he is in the mob. Sooo guess he staying true to form.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 6
can't she even have a good family day
Date: 27 Aug 2013 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 6
Wow E is real dick. Hope B hands him his balls soon.
Date: 27 Aug 2013 3:56 PM Title: Chapter 6
I am ready for Bella to turn her gun toward Edward.
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward is an Ass!!! I hope he improves
Date: 27 Aug 2013 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
I'm glad for the chapter and Bella having something normal in her life.
Date: 27 Aug 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 6
Looking forward to more
Date: 27 Aug 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 6
She should have just shot him. I don't like this Edward at all.
Date: 26 Aug 2013 6:13 PM Title: Chapter 5
I'm sure the family is noticing how Edward controls everything Bella does. Not good.
Date: 25 Aug 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ok. The whole Alice thing is weird and I need to know more about that situation. Good chapters.
Date: 25 Aug 2013 8:14 PM Title: Chapter 5
He better be sorry
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 5
wow so bella seems to be a loud mouth rude and as far from a girl as possible
but with edward she is all prim and proper
maybe that is why bella said he might not want her after the visit. he doesn't know the real bella
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 4
high strung a little my goodness
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 3
like the tame edward for now
hope
i hope bella gets what she wants
Date: 25 Aug 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Something needs to be done. The poor girl cannot even be herself around her family. Not trusting her is one thing but turing her into a stepford wife is another.
Date: 25 Aug 2013 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 5
Something tells me that Edward will be throwing the shooting match. It would not do for Bella's family to question his expertise with a gun. Also, I'm guessing they will be watched quite closely during their visit. Love the story!
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 5
man eddie a asshole
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 5
Thank you for the update, I love th progression of the story. :)
Date: 24 Aug 2013 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 5
Yea but I'm sure he has his own gun..and probally a goog shot as the rest...
Date: 24 Aug 2013 11:50 PM Title: Chapter 4
A little high strong, shit he has no trust in her even after 2 yrs...I think I would rather die then marry his sorry ass..
Date: 24 Aug 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 5
Are we supposed to want her to end up with a person she should have a domestic violence restraining order against?
Date: 24 Aug 2013 11:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 24 Aug 2013 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 5
She needs to show me what she's made of. Love it