Date: 24 Sep 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
I actually thought Alice was a Fed. I'm amused that 3 offspring of a police chief are going to rescue one mobster from another
Date: 24 Sep 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm floored by the fact that Edward is open to her working outside the home after children
Date: 24 Sep 2013 8:48 PM Title: Chapter One
I like possessive, asshole Edward. I think it makes for a good story. Hope that he gets mad at Aro for letting Bella rescue him. I also hope this isn't a set up.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 20
Crazy crazy. Love it.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 20
Nice twist! Now everyone has to not kill Alice. Great chapter.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 20
To bella! I am glad her brothers are on board. Do you think Edward suspected the danger? Bringing her family early, telling her something was happening and that he loved her w his whole heart? Coincidence?
Great update. Loving it
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
I did NOT see that coming. LOVE that Bella is going to rescue Edward. But Edward is going to kill Aro for getting Bella involved. I am just glad that Emmett and Jaymee are there to help and they are not asking alot of questions. Can not wait for your next update. Aewsome story.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh Alice you are one sneaky witch. Wonder if Carlisle and Edward will let her live.
Date: 24 Sep 2013 5:28 PM Title: Chapter 20
Surprised that Alice is a Volturi! I was thinking more along the lines of a fed or something.
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2013 2:44 PM Title: Chapter 20
Please tell me Aro's really on her side and this isn't some crazy set up?
Date: 24 Sep 2013 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 20
bad bad alice had a feelin and now know its true wonder what will happen once everyone else finds out about her cant wait to see how it gos with them getting him back great chapter loved it
Date: 24 Sep 2013 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 20
Love the twist that you keep throwing out
Date: 24 Sep 2013 1:39 PM Title: Chapter 20
Looking forward to more
[Report This]Date: 24 Sep 2013 9:21 AM Title: Chapter 19
WOW, this story is so intense. I truly love a good MIA story and your Edward is so in charater. Great Job!!!
Date: 23 Sep 2013 8:56 PM Title: Chapter 19
I don't know... I have very mixed feelings about this story. I really don't like both of them - he is A***** and she is I don't even know how to describe her.
I usualy don't write bad review but like I said I have mixed feelings from one side I can't stop reading it but from other side I really don't like characters...
Date: 23 Sep 2013 2:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
I think their relationship is still going to be rocky, but it does seem to be on the upswing.
Date: 23 Sep 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
jealous edward is a hard ass because he will feel hurt if he is sweet
[Report This]Date: 23 Sep 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 15
wow that was intense edward didn't deserve the treatment her5 family gave him, yes he is possessive but he cares for her
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:38 PM Title: Chapter 19
Some people are just chicken shits with nothing better to do. i am loving it watching them grow as a couple and learning to trust each other. i think Bella is just as possesive as he is and she proved it.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wow, sweet Edward is back but for how long. I am hoping that Edward is truly trying to trust Bella. It seems like he is trying with the job and the house. I was surprised that he told her that she could work even after they had children. Loved that Bella attack the realitor, lol. I am a little surprised that Edward did not get all angry at Bella for doing that, that is a change for him.
I do not understand why reviewers are so negative. I understand being pissed at Edward for the way he acts, but to leave ugly comments to you, I do not understand. Thanks for sharing this story with us.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 12:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
I just found this story the other day and i happen to think its fantastic. I am shitty at reviewing, sorry : I love this Edward actually. I love E&B stories and I like to read different ones. My hubs has a possesive side, and while not nearly as bad as Edward, I find a possesive man rather sexy. You guys have a way of pulling someone into a story. And as for those annon reviewers, if you say it, own it. As you know, they have a little X at the top of their page as well. I think the story is fanfastic and you have a wonderful talent. I can't wait for the next chapter :0)
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2013 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 19
not long but i am hoping for the best
if he could see that when she is happy she is easy to be around and she wants the happily ever with him
give it to her edward have the happy family keep them on the outskirts and be happy in a bubble
Date: 22 Sep 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 19
I am happy that Edward declared his love and wanted to make Bella's dreams come true. I like he happy and would pov to see the trust build up. But full circle? I don't think I like the sound of that. Great chapter.
Date: 22 Sep 2013 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 19
lol got to love the hater cant seem to just sign in oh well are right about up ur review number they just cant wait like the rest of us thats the whole point of a story you have to read to find out wat happens and dont wrry alot of ppl think they can have mr perfect guess wat dont exist ur gonna have ups down and just straight want to kill each other moments what makes it so good bc u knw its real and not some bullshit if that made any since wat i was tryin to say well anyways great chapter loved it cant wait to see wat happens next time keep up the great writing love the storys yall make
Date: 22 Sep 2013 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 19
I loved the chapter (:
Date: 22 Sep 2013 12:10 AM Title: Chapter 19
Some people have nothing better to do. I'm loving this story, can't say I love Edward yet but that's a separate issue to liking a story.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 11:11 PM Title: Chapter 19
Yes I love to see how they are getting along now. I really hope that it stays that way!!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am so obsessed with this story. I kinda like this Edward. It's refreshing to see an Edward that is a slightly evil dominant and not the extra sweet or Emo Edward that so many stories are based on. Love this story!!!!!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 19
Well, I am wondering what brought this change about. Looking forward to what's ahead.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love this, please don't listen to a word those negative comments say
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 10:39 PM Title: Chapter 19
I love the story, write it as you see fit if someone doesn't like they are more than free to read something else or write their own. Thank you for the update.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
Great chapter. Somehow I just don't see their happiness lasting because they both get so jealous and possessive. I'm sure Edward's Rectal Cranial Inversion Affliction (Asshole Disease just in case you don't know the medical term;)) will come back with a vengeance before too long. I like these two. Yep, Edward's a complete ass most of the time but it's the only way he knows how to handle Bella and their situation. And we all put up with a lot for our families, so I can't really blame Bella for putting up with his crap. Love the story, love the chapter, love your attitude toward the "Guest" reviewers. See ya next time.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 19
not long, he gives me whiplash...
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:22 PM Title: Chapter 19
I am truely enjoying reading this truely amazingly well developed story I truely enjoying reading this story as it progresses. I just wanted to Thank You for all ur hard work in writing this amazing story!! I truely understand how much time & effort it takes to do so so thanks again!! This is very intriging & has left me captivated by this story!!
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 19
I'm happy for her but a little suspicious of his turn around x
Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:08 PM Title: Chapter 19
Wonderful chapter! What in the name of heaven do your anonymous reviewers have to trash?! Your plot is well thought out and your characterizations precise. You move forward emotionally at a rate that is reasonable for the characters - not the readers. Kudos for that, by the way! My first reaction to reading that there will be 23 chapters was, " awh! That's all?!" I will forebear, however. You know your world best. I can only say I am loving this and am NOT afraid to sign my name to this! Thank you!
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:20 PM Title: Chapter 19
Sorry no negative from me, I love the story as is.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 19
I like how you keep us on our toes never knowing how Edward is going to be from one chapter to the next. I love both sides of him the side that is open then that side you never know how he is going to act
Date: 21 Sep 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 19
I would have reacted the same way to some skank talking to my man that way in front of me.
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 19
It's sweet that they are finally on the same page but don't let Edward get all soft please...I enjoy the asshole side of him
Date: 21 Sep 2013 6:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
hmmm wonder what the catch to the job is? Naughty Tattling Marcus.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think he did. What school and how he's connected to it, that's another matter! I do enjoy when he shows his softer side though.
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 18
Mark is loyal to Edward, he will not be friends with Bella as Aro, Edward is still a controller, but I do not see him taking care of Bella, it seems only control, possession, maybe he has feelings for Bella, but does not show them.
Please continue, I think the brothers Edward Bella will still take extreme measures.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 6:29 PM Title: Chapter 18
Sucker for good stories and I'm a sucker for this one.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
I think Edward truly loves Bella, but she likes to push his buttons. Bella's brothers are jerks for not realizing that people change. I know Edward gets a little emotionally abusive, but I think it is based on fear of loosing Bella. He is so jealous of people spending time with her. He wants to be her everything. They would do so much better if they just talked honestly with each other.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 18
It is nice to see Edward acting human and not a asshole.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 18
Ok. He wasn't so bad this chapter. That's a lot of gifts. Great chapter
Date: 20 Sep 2013 12:26 PM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to reading more :)
Date: 20 Sep 2013 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 18
great chapter loved it and i think that he did since shes so happy
Date: 20 Sep 2013 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
I think Edward gave her the job she wanted(:
Date: 20 Sep 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 18
ahhhh love it
Date: 20 Sep 2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 18
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 20 Sep 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 18
He can be so sweet
Date: 20 Sep 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 18
Looking forward to more
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
probably so he can keep an eye on her, he didn't change that fast....he is too controlling
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
i am worried where he got her the job. he got her a job he wants her to have maybe not what she wanted. oh goodness things are going good i am scared
Date: 20 Sep 2013 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 18
Not sure if he got her the job she would want or not. Sometimes he's very sweet and a lot of times not so much. Look forward to finding out.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 1:47 AM Title: Chapter 18
Here's a thought, Edward: if you don't want Bella to be afraid of you, DON'T HIT HER.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 1:18 PM Title: Chapter 17
Such a good story. Hope he backs off the hard ass routine and shows her how much he really loves her. Thanks for all your hard work. It shows
Date: 19 Sep 2013 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loving it. Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 19 Sep 2013 11:19 AM Title: Chapter 17
The family visit seemed to go well. I hope Edward isn't such a prick in the next chapter.
Date: 19 Sep 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 17
Looking forward to more
Date: 19 Sep 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 17
Looks like Bella made it through unscathed. I was worried Edward would get pissed about something.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 17
love this story
Date: 18 Sep 2013 7:14 AM Title: Chapter 17
She had a great time with her family. It is a good thing Edward is being good.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 3:21 AM Title: Chapter 17
The visit went well! I looked up Bella's gown on images and it is stunning! Something tells me Marcus agrees with Bella about Alice. Also, her remark was a perfect way to offset anything Alice might say without thinking. Brilliant! Hopefully, Edward will enjoy the look of the wedding and his bride. It has to help their relationship! Wonderful chapter! I loved every luscious detail!
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 17
I think Bella should feel like a prisoner,
Edward really loves Bella? I miss them together, I hope Edward Bella trust, but this is a long time to trust Edward.
Kisses.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
I THINK IT'S ABOUT TIME BELLA GROWS SOME BALLS AND SETS HER FAMILY SRTAIGHT IF SHE'S DETERMINED TO STAND BY HER MAN.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 12:36 AM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. So glad the the ladies of her family behaved and they had a fun time while visiting. See y'all next time.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 17
the dresses sound lovely cant wait to see wat happens next update soon
Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:48 PM Title: Chapter 17
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 17 Sep 2013 10:15 PM Title: Chapter 17
Hope to see more of Edward on the next chapter.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 17
Great chapter. But when is edward going to tell and show Bella that he really does love her. Hurry back with more.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 9:51 PM Title: Chapter 17
nice chapter. And a def break from Edward.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:47 PM Title: Chapter 16
great couple chapters loved it
Date: 16 Sep 2013 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
Oh my God. Really, I'd just like to kick Edward in the balls. What an asshole. Not Bella's fault that Jake and her brothers were being idiots. That boy needs an intervention. Ha
Date: 16 Sep 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is so afriad she is going to leave him
[Report This]Date: 16 Sep 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 16
man edward what an ass
edward ever hear you get more with honey than bees. you are a real douche and need to get a life. i want bella to be able to kick edwards ass without any retaliation
Date: 16 Sep 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh, Edward is jealous alright! The funny thing is I keep wondering what it will take for Edward to appreciate Bella on any level. Will she need to be harmed in some way? Right now though he is doing everything he can to build emotional distance between them. I can't wait to see what happens when the ladies hit town! How will Edward snide things then? Love your work!
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 11:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward is really being a jerk, I would not condemn Bella for trying
escape, she has a security it does not want, that Aro was his only friend was taken and Edward mistreats and uses only sex.
I want more, I'm so greedy, I always want to read more about this
relationship suffered.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 9:17 PM Title: Chapter 16
JEALOUS, PISSED IS'NT IT ALL THE SAME?? IS IT POSSIBLE THAT MAYBE THE NEXT CHAPTERS CAN BE A LITTLE LONGER?????
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 16
OMG is he ever gonna treat her better? The man is crazy...I know her family should mind their own business but his family would worry if the tables were turned also she can't control what they do so why is he taking that shit out on her?
Date: 15 Sep 2013 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 16
Looking forward to more
Date: 15 Sep 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 16
AGAIN I HATE EDWARD!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 7:50 PM Title: Chapter 16
He needs to grow the hell up is what ha needs to do. Jealous or not he is all kinds of ass backwards. It is like at the witch trail where they burn witches because if they were a witch they would survive and if they died...oops I guess you were innocent. He really needs a wake up call. What is his intention and interest in her anyway?
Date: 15 Sep 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 16
To bad Bella doesn't just mentally shut off see how he likes that... Living with a robot
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 7:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Jealousy is definitely the cause of his Asshole disease. Gotta hate that green eyed monster makes him act like he needs to control every aspect of her life. Oh wait, he does that anyway. ;) hopefully Sweetward will come back before he kills her family. See y'all next time. Can't wait for more of this great story.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 16
Bella can't keep up the charade. How do you tell jake not to come?
Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 16
Edward just doesn't get it. He loves Bella and is not giving her a chance to love him back. What is Carliles's & Esme's life like? How does he treat her in front of them? Des he talk to her in front of his family as he does in front of hers? If so do they approve?
In earlier chapters esme said she wouldn't plan the wedding if B didn't want it. Does she know how B & E met?
Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 15
It had to happen sooner or later. Bella's brothers smell the hypothetical rat and want her home.Jake wants what Jake wants, and Edward wants what he wants. The only one without a voice because no one is listening to her is Bella. I have a feeling she's about to go from the frying pan into the fire because of Jake and her brothers. The scary part is that she doesn't seem to care anymore. Her spirit has finally been broken enough to make her bendable. How long before she must give up school now? Wonderfully done. You handled this beautifully and now have me wondering just how things can go downhill from here. I love this story! You make your readers invest in your characters. Kudos!
Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:35 PM Title: Chapter 16
ok this doucheness is getting old. He doesnt have one redeeming quality at this point.
Date: 15 Sep 2013 5:22 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well still an Ass I see, but in all fairness I wouldn't want Jake there either