[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 19
Thanks for sharing your amazing talent
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:17 PM Title: Chapter 17
Thanks for sharing your amazing talent
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2013 12:42 PM Title: Chapter 24
I just love happy endings.
Date: 07 Oct 2013 8:26 AM Title: Chapter 24
Awesome as always
Date: 07 Oct 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 24
Great chapter! Loving this story.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
im glad they got their wedding and that she got to have jacob be there for her special day. i hope that whatever happens in their future and with children does not make their relationship turn back to the way it was when he first got with her. keep up the good work
Date: 06 Oct 2013 5:47 PM Title: Chapter 24
Very sweet. Nice job.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 7:56 PM Title: Chapter 24
Thank your for the beautiful chapter ladies. I've really enjoyed the story and hope there's a baby or babies in the epi :)
Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 24
I enjoyed the story. I was very glad to see Edward grow up
Date: 05 Oct 2013 12:40 PM Title: Chapter 24
Wonderful! I knew it would be! Thank you so very much for all the hard work you put in on this story. It showed without a doubt, and it captured a lot of hearts! I look forward to any update!
Date: 05 Oct 2013 9:48 AM Title: Chapter 23
I like this side of Edward. And Esme cracks me up,"Yay,Babies" indeed. I'm also really glad that Bella's brothers are seeing her interact with Edward and his family on their turf.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
Geat story and so glad they are in love and Edward has pulled his head out of his ass thinking she was going to leave she has proved how much she loves him. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
Loved the chapter. All aspects of their wedding were perfect for them. They didn't meet in the traditional sense and they shouldn't marry following all the traditions. My husband and I didn't follow the traditions either since we had every picture taken prior to the wedding starting. When we walked down the isle as husband and wife, we immediately left for the reception. We were the first ones there and treated all our guests as they entered. Several people thanked us for not making them stand around forever waiting on all the pictures to be taken. It took a great deal of the stress away for everyone.
I can't wait for the epi. I hope it includes the honeymoon and a glimpse into their future.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 24
"I loved how my dad, the Chief of Police, and Carlisle, the father of the mob family I'm marrying into, act like long lost brothers" lol lol Yep!
"...but you couldn't have married into a better family." Does Charlie even know who they are? lol
Date: 05 Oct 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 24
I think she put up with more of his bullshit, then he had with her....
Date: 05 Oct 2013 12:34 AM Title: Chapter 24
aww great chapter loved it glad she had a good day and no drama was made to ruin it
Date: 04 Oct 2013 10:09 PM Title: Chapter 24
Great last chapter!Looking forward to the epilogue.
Date: 04 Oct 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 24
LOVE this whole story. Thank you for sharing with us. I hope we get see how Edward is as a father in the epiologue. Hope we also get to hear about all of Edward's thoughts of his and Bella's relationship from the beginning to end.
Date: 04 Oct 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 03 Oct 2013 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 23
Actually, I feel bad for Alice right now. She has no family and had to kill her own father because he was evil. She did save Edward's life by telling Bella where she could find him. I think Bella is being a bit of an uber bitch right now. Ok, I feel better now. Ha!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2013 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
This is a great chapter! I don't think there's a sane character in the bunch - either Cullen or Swan:) As long as Edward doesn't make Bella seriously cower, he can be his usual pissant self cause obviously she can woop his ass::)) I had a smile & laughed thruout
Date: 02 Oct 2013 9:31 PM Title: Chapter 17
Some how I missed reading this chapter. Wow!!!! I am so glad that Bella had a wonderful experience picking out her wedding dress.
Date: 02 Oct 2013 6:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
I some how missed reviewing this chapter. I hate that Edward turned back into an ass when they got back to NY.
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
Esme is a little excited lol. Edward is so sweet
Date: 02 Oct 2013 5:17 AM Title: Chapter 23
I loved the fact that Bella just went for it and clocked Alice! She sort of had it coming to some degree. Yet I believe that sooner or later, Bella and Alice will be good friends as well as sisters. Somewhere deep down, I think Jasper. Knows this and wants it for Alice too. As for Esme and Aro's family! Those kids are going to be so spoiled! Aro was wise to stay within the. Family. No matter what happens, his children will always belong and be protected and secure. I love how you've handled this story and especially these few chapters! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2013 4:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
Love the update ladies :)
Date: 02 Oct 2013 3:28 AM Title: Chapter 23
Ok. Fun chapter. I loved when Bella decked Alice. I'd love to learn more about Jasper and their relationship. Especially when Alice said Jasper had a "freak out." I'd love to know more about that.
Now, seeing as Edward can't really defend his nasty behavior towards Bella any more, I wonder how this will change him. And, his relationship with her family. His jerk behavior can no longer be justified.
Date: 02 Oct 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 23
lol great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 02 Oct 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter. Esme is a hoot! I love Bella and she is perfect for Edward. Laying Alice out was perfect and when she told her "we're not friends", that was so Bella and Edward all rolled into one. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
loved it - all of it!
Date: 01 Oct 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 23
*Sing-song voice* "Aro's in trouble, he didn't tell Esme he had kids" that is too funny. Love that Bella not only shot Alice but punched her as well. Don't like Alice at all
Date: 01 Oct 2013 8:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
LOVE me some Esme!!!!!!! I can not believe that Bella knocked Alice out. lol. I am wondering what Jaymee and Emmett think about ALL that has gone on.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 7:52 PM Title: Chapter 23
You have to love Esme. I am glad that she welcomed Aro and his family into the family. Edward is kind of funny how jealous he gets. Bella's family sure got an eye full of the Cullen family. I hope they can see the love.
Date: 01 Oct 2013 6:35 PM Title: Chapter 23
OK, I admit it: Edward is finally growing on me.
[Report This]Date: 01 Oct 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 23
loved this. Bella the Slugger
Date: 01 Oct 2013 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 22
I love seeing the carefree playful side of this couple. They are really very much alike.
Date: 30 Sep 2013 11:19 PM Title: Chapter 21
Hate & love. So will he let up now?
Date: 30 Sep 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 22
Looking forward to more
Date: 29 Sep 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more :)
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. I love these two because they don't cut each other any slack. I've definitely changed my opinion of Edward, to some extent. At least Bella isn't cutting him any slack any more. See ya next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 22
The last two chapters were, wow! You guys rock at writing.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 22
I love the chemistry you give these two! There's a real push - pull that really makes them work oh so well! It was fun here to see how things looked from Aro's POV. She's like a little sister. Edward would do well to get that and then pick his brain.
Let's see, for anything upcoming, I would love to see their wedding - POV from each of them - and possibly Edward's experience of Bella delivering their first child. A girl. His POV remembering how they began as he waits could be fascinating. What was he thinking about at their very beginning? What was he feeling, doing having Bella in his office after school all those times? Why did he let her go to school? I have a feeling that Edard's brain on their earliest days could be outrageously fascinating! Thank you for all your hard work!
Date: 29 Sep 2013 6:21 AM Title: Chapter 22
She is just as stuborn and in love as he is :)
Date: 29 Sep 2013 6:19 AM Title: Chapter 22
Fantastic! Love how they are together now. You tow are the best!
Date: 29 Sep 2013 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 21
Alice is the good guy she loves Jasper. Edward is shaking because Bella is there where she is not safe.
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
oh these two are great together
i am glad edward is opening his eyes
love it
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
wow go alice go. i am impressed
love it
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 20
wow i was expecting that
i am shocked by who alice is and that the cullens didn't figure it out
i am glad bella got her brothers to help
going to be a hell of a night
love it
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
Awe they kissed and made up! I wonder what Jasper is going to do/say to Alice. Do I sense fireworks in our near future?
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 22
love the way bella comming along
Date: 29 Sep 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Liked Alex's pic.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 3:16 AM Title: Chapter 20
Sneeky Alice will be lucky if Bella doesnt shot her ;)
Date: 29 Sep 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thanks for giving us Aro's POV. I was wondering when he came and got Bella to help save Edward, how he knew that she could shot a gun and how good she was. LOVED Edward's "Yes, Dear"!!!!!!!!
Date: 29 Sep 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
Of all the times I wanted Bella to slap the crap out of Edward, this was not one of them.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 1:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
Alright, nit really sure how I feel about this chapter. I am glad they are safe, but can't help but feel Bella is overreacting, especially with the slapping. But in true Edward and Bella form they had sex.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 22
got to love how that make up there on way great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 29 Sep 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love this chapter. In the next chapters I would like to see Edwrad and Bella's wedding and maybe a couple kids in the epilouge?
Date: 28 Sep 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter - well done bella!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 21
LOVED Aro giving her a gun back. Hope E understands she's trustworthy now and stops being an arse.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
Loved it. Bad ass Bella is perfect for Mafia Edward. Can't wait for more.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow, Alice going commando on her dad. Didn't expect that!
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 21
I didn't expect Alice to kill her father.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2013 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow !!! Girlpower...go Bella, go Alice - can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 27 Sep 2013 6:05 AM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 21
Let me just say I have been enjoying the story, I look forward to the updates and love the twist I didn't see coming. Thank you for the update :)
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 21
wow cant believe she did that but still dont trust her great chapter loved it cant wait to see wat happens next update soon
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
Wow! Great chapter! Love this story.
Date: 27 Sep 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 21
I'm impressed! Go Alice! She is not, it seems, as ditzy as was thought. She watched and learned what life and love could be and wants it desperately. She even knows Jasper will almost certainly want no part of her now yet felt the need to protect his loved ones. Let's hear it for Aro too. It took guts Togo against Edward the way he did. One thing is certain. Edward can never doubt Bella's love for him now. In a way they are even Steven now. I loved your work here!!
Date: 27 Sep 2013 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 21
I like it. please let edward not be an ass next chapter
Date: 27 Sep 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 21
i can see a hot steamy fight, make up session coming from edward and bella!
not sure how the family will take the news of the cullens!
update soon
Date: 27 Sep 2013 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 21
I HOPE THIS IS THE START OF ANEW EDWARD!
Date: 26 Sep 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 21
OMGosh!!!!!!!!! I can not believe that Alice just shot her own father. WOW!!!!!! I LOVE that Bella rescued Edward. He is NEVER going to live that one down. lol. Aro has a LOT of explaining to do. Edward is going to kill him for involving Bella. LOL!!!!!!!!! As always, you leave me wanting more.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 11:09 PM Title: Chapter 21
So Alice is a good guy? For some reason I'm still not sure. I figured Edward had a reason for Bella's brothers being there, he knew trouble was brewing. I loved how his first inclination was to protect Bella even though its more than evident she can protect herself, when the gunfire started,his first instinct was to protect her by laying on top of her. I wonder how poor jasper is going to react to the truth about Alice. Hopefully you won't make us wait too long to find out!
Date: 26 Sep 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 21
Looking forward to more
Date: 26 Sep 2013 10:49 PM Title: Chapter 21
Thinking Alice is crazy like they all thought!
Date: 26 Sep 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 21
Great chapter. Can't wait to see what Edward thinks of his woman saving him and what Bella's family thinks now.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bout time someone shot Alice. Can't wait to see what happens next, how Edward will react now that this has passed.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 12:06 PM Title: Chapter 20
Oh oh.... I knew something was up with alice asking so many questions... cqnt wait for more...
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 20
What a surprising turn of events, didn't see it coming.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 20
We knew Alice was up to something. Now, I'm pretty sure you two aren't cruel enough to kill Edward without warning us, so I will just sit here on the edge of my seat waiting or the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2013 7:23 PM Title: Chapter One
I'm really loving this story. can't wait 4 more!
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 20
I so didn't expect that. Great chapter and I can't wait for Bella and the boys to kick some Volturi ass and save Edward. See ya next chapter.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 8:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
I loved the chapter(:
Date: 25 Sep 2013 2:47 AM Title: Chapter 20
Touché! I did not see THAT one coming! I knew Alice was not what she appeared to be! but I assumed the law infiltrating the family. I hope Edward appreciates what Bella is trying to do, but if I'm right, he will be furious - or come close to losing her. Interestingly, that might be the one thing that gets him to understand how very important she is to him. Wonderful twist!
Date: 24 Sep 2013 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 20
I will be honest I didn't even think about Alice. I like the twist and love Bella is going after him. Can't wait for next update.