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Reviewer: VioletVirgo79 Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Aug 2018 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 20

What a Twist!  So good.

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 18

Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 18

Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Jul 2017 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 7

My dream is bella escapes... I hate seeing her unhappy and in this abusive relationship. 

Reviewer: my mermaid bella Signed half-star [Report This]
Date: 24 Feb 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13

I really want to get into the story, I really don't but Bella and Edward's relationship is extremely unhealthy. There are no transitions from abusive bastard to loving fiancee, Bella being in love with such an abusive man without showing ANY signs of her feelings changing or even Stockholm syndrome makes no sense.

It's like there are two stories here and they're fighting for control but both are failing.

Reviewer: winterfae22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Apr 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter One

Loved it! Poor Bella!

Reviewer: ChristinaAguileraFan Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Dec 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you so much for writing this!!

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24

an amazing journey

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 19

lol, an ignorant reviewer who doesn't have any balls to claim their opinion

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 7

he is an ass

Reviewer: Celebrityhound Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 5

interesting

Reviewer: lamelurker Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Nov 2015 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you for writing and sharing your story!

Reviewer: smurff88 Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Apr 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 19

Well I have to tell you that I am really liken this story, it different.

But Edward sure can be a duchbag thats for sure, lets hope he gets better

as the story progresses...

 

                                       Sincerely, L. Jacox

Reviewer: wolf15 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Jan 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 25

this is really good 

Reviewer: SANDRINE76 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Dec 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 25

UNUSUAL BUT GOOD STORY . I LIKED IT

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 25

Love it and the p,erfect ending...her yelling like that in the beginning would have edward threatening to beat her but glad to see edward lets bella be herself

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Dec 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 24

Now i like edward once he got his head out of his ass lol

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 13

So bella was ok with fucking this time...nice

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 12

Does bella love him? I think when she told him she hates him and doesnt love him is the truth

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 10

Edwardshould be threatened after all shes only with him by force....is it wrong tgat i actually want edward dead and her with jake when I've always been team edward

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 9

Does he really want her to be herself....you can only beat someone till they break

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8

I would if carisle is abusive to esme as edward is to bella

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 7

I hate edward, he just raped her twice and threated to keep doing it if she acted up. Edward doesnt love her at all! I would of shot him with that gun yesterday and been done with it. I love your writing and how you get my emotions going

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 6

Seems edward only loves her cuz he controls her with fear

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

I love it and you call to my emotions and right now i hate edward

Reviewer: Azlady2003 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Dec 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 2

So did edward have a feeling that she was the one and thats why he kidnapped and forced her into a relationship instead of killing her. I think I would of begged to be killed instead of forced like bella.

Reviewer: ChristianMom54 Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 25

Thank you it was good. Short and to the point. I enjoyed it.

Reviewer: the real teacher Signed [Report This]
Date: 28 Oct 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

New story sounds good. 

Loved this little fic here....I wanted to strangle edward sometimes but he turned out okay!

 

i would love to,see some future takes of him being daddy-mob-ward! Lol :)

Reviewer: smileya987 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 23 Oct 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 25

I can't belive this truely captivating story has come to an end sniff, sniff!!! THANK S4 ALL U HARD WORK!! I will be inpatiently awiting ur next story!!

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Oct 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 25

Sorry to see the story come to an end, but all good things must.  Loved the story.

Reviewer: VickiShy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 25

Great story ladies.  

Reviewer: csp4 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 25

"I'm pregnant," "With a baby?" "No, a with a dog," lol lol good one::))

Great story! I think reading the reviews was almost as entertaining as reading the story:) Definitely a button pushing story. Love it! Thanks for sharing

Reviewer: nubian cutie Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 25

Cute, I like how big bad Eddie was scared to come home. Hillarious!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for the story

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 24

Oookay 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23

Like I said what a turn around for Bella 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 22

Ok you just changed her from a total doormat to mafia girl....yeah right

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bella just proved to me how dumb she is...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter 20

Ookay

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 19

I don't trust this at all

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 18

No,,,

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:19 PM Title: Chapter 17

Okay

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 16

Ok I just don't like your Bella...I really don't.  How can you locpve someone who treats you like that?  I just don't get it 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 15

Crazy just crazy!

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 25

Loved it :)

Reviewer: Scared icy Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 25

Well done as always ladies I thoroughly enjoyed it '

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 14

Crazy. If you loved someone you wouldn't rape then or treat them that way.  That is not love

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 13

He is freaking crazy...can't keep up with his crap...and she is just plain dumb

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 12

Wow just wow

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 11

Yeah but he sucks the most?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 10

Sad...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 9

He is an ass of epic perportions! 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 8

Just take Ed out there is more of you

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:27 AM Title: Chapter 7

How terrible :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 6

Wow just wow 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5

Wow you are a complete doormat bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 4

Nice guy and she has sex with that?  Not a sharp tool in the tool box bella

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3

Oh Bella how sad :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 2

Don't know what to think

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:05 AM Title: Chapter One

Oh boy...

Reviewer: troberts Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 25

Loved the story how they worked it out and he learned to trust her .

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Oct 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 25

Enjoyed this one, eager to read more from you.

Reviewer: monkey22marie Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 25

I can't wait for the new story

Reviewer: toomanycats Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 25

yep been there

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 25

loved this story

Reviewer: twilightobession Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 25

I am so sad to see this story end. But I have enjoyed reading it. You did an excellent job. Thanks for sharing. 

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 25

OMG IT ! ITS OVER? ILOVED IT ! CANT WAIT FOR NEW STORY!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 25

great ending loved it cant wait to read the new story sounds great

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 25

at least she got her happy ever after, and that he lightened up a bit on being a jerk all the time to her, keep up the good work

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 25

great ending.  TY for writing and sharing ladies.

 

ty

Reviewer: jenik Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 25

YAY Loved it!

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 25

good

Reviewer: romance4me2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Oct 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 25

Thanks for this story. It really took a while to get over Edward being an ass, but the ending is sweet. Looking forward to the next story!

Reviewer: ddiva Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Oct 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 24

Aw wow,I'm gonna be sad to see this story wrap up! The wedding was absolutely perfect for them. I hope you are open to giving us little future takes, little glimpses into their lives as the years pass. I, for one, can not wait to see Edward as the father to at least one little girl, especially one with Bella's spunk! 

Reviewer: tff000 Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Oct 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 24

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 23

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 22

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 21

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 20

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 19

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:49 PM Title: Chapter 18

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 17

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 16

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:32 PM Title: Chapter 15

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 14

hmm

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 6:16 PM Title: Chapter 12

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:16 PM Title: Chapter 11

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 10

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:06 PM Title: Chapter 9

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 8

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 7

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 6

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 5

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 4

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Date: 13 Oct 2013 4:33 PM Title: Chapter 3

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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 24

Awww E is finally growing up.   Sweet chapter.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 23

Jazz can be pissed all he wants.  Alice had it coming   LOL for Esme and Aro

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