Date: 24 Aug 2018 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 20
What a Twist! So good.
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free
Date: 20 Jul 2017 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 18
Edward doesn't want her scared but that's bulls hit abusers want their significant scared.i really hope bella gets free
Date: 20 Jul 2017 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 7
My dream is bella escapes... I hate seeing her unhappy and in this abusive relationship.
Date: 24 Feb 2017 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 13
I really want to get into the story, I really don't but Bella and Edward's relationship is extremely unhealthy. There are no transitions from abusive bastard to loving fiancee, Bella being in love with such an abusive man without showing ANY signs of her feelings changing or even Stockholm syndrome makes no sense.
It's like there are two stories here and they're fighting for control but both are failing.
Date: 20 Apr 2016 2:25 PM Title: Chapter One
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 13 Dec 2015 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you so much for writing this!!
Date: 07 Dec 2015 6:51 PM Title: Chapter 24
an amazing journey
Date: 07 Dec 2015 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 19
lol, an ignorant reviewer who doesn't have any balls to claim their opinion
Date: 07 Dec 2015 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 7
he is an ass
Date: 07 Dec 2015 12:23 PM Title: Chapter 5
interesting
Date: 27 Nov 2015 10:43 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
Date: 25 Apr 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 19
Well I have to tell you that I am really liken this story, it different.
But Edward sure can be a duchbag thats for sure, lets hope he gets better
as the story progresses...
Sincerely, L. Jacox
Date: 18 Jan 2014 5:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
this is really good
Date: 07 Dec 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
UNUSUAL BUT GOOD STORY . I LIKED IT
Date: 05 Dec 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter 25
Love it and the p,erfect ending...her yelling like that in the beginning would have edward threatening to beat her but glad to see edward lets bella be herself
Date: 05 Dec 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 24
Now i like edward once he got his head out of his ass lol
Date: 04 Dec 2013 11:25 PM Title: Chapter 13
So bella was ok with fucking this time...nice
Date: 04 Dec 2013 11:13 PM Title: Chapter 12
Does bella love him? I think when she told him she hates him and doesnt love him is the truth
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 10
Edwardshould be threatened after all shes only with him by force....is it wrong tgat i actually want edward dead and her with jake when I've always been team edward
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 9
Does he really want her to be herself....you can only beat someone till they break
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 8
I would if carisle is abusive to esme as edward is to bella
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 7
I hate edward, he just raped her twice and threated to keep doing it if she acted up. Edward doesnt love her at all! I would of shot him with that gun yesterday and been done with it. I love your writing and how you get my emotions going
Date: 04 Dec 2013 10:04 PM Title: Chapter 6
Seems edward only loves her cuz he controls her with fear
Date: 04 Dec 2013 9:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
I love it and you call to my emotions and right now i hate edward
Date: 04 Dec 2013 9:13 PM Title: Chapter 2
So did edward have a feeling that she was the one and thats why he kidnapped and forced her into a relationship instead of killing her. I think I would of begged to be killed instead of forced like bella.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you it was good. Short and to the point. I enjoyed it.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 25
New story sounds good.
Loved this little fic here....I wanted to strangle edward sometimes but he turned out okay!
i would love to,see some future takes of him being daddy-mob-ward! Lol :)
Date: 23 Oct 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
I can't belive this truely captivating story has come to an end sniff, sniff!!! THANK S4 ALL U HARD WORK!! I will be inpatiently awiting ur next story!!
Date: 20 Oct 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 25
Sorry to see the story come to an end, but all good things must. Loved the story.
Date: 19 Oct 2013 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great story ladies.
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
"I'm pregnant," "With a baby?" "No, a with a dog," lol lol good one::))
Great story! I think reading the reviews was almost as entertaining as reading the story:) Definitely a button pushing story. Love it! Thanks for sharing
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 25
Cute, I like how big bad Eddie was scared to come home. Hillarious!
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for the story
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 23
Like I said what a turn around for Bella
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 22
Ok you just changed her from a total doormat to mafia girl....yeah right
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:37 PM Title: Chapter 21
Bella just proved to me how dumb she is...
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:31 PM Title: Chapter 19
I don't trust this at all
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:14 PM Title: Chapter 16
Ok I just don't like your Bella...I really don't. How can you locpve someone who treats you like that? I just don't get it
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 15
Crazy just crazy!
Date: 19 Oct 2013 9:30 AM Title: Chapter 25
Well done as always ladies I thoroughly enjoyed it '
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:46 AM Title: Chapter 14
Crazy. If you loved someone you wouldn't rape then or treat them that way. That is not love
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
He is freaking crazy...can't keep up with his crap...and she is just plain dumb
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 11
Yeah but he sucks the most?
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 9
He is an ass of epic perportions!
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 8
Just take Ed out there is more of you
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:19 AM Title: Chapter 5
Wow you are a complete doormat bella
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 4
Nice guy and she has sex with that? Not a sharp tool in the tool box bella
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 3
Oh Bella how sad :(
Date: 19 Oct 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Don't know what to think
Date: 19 Oct 2013 1:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved the story how they worked it out and he learned to trust her .
Date: 19 Oct 2013 12:48 AM Title: Chapter 25
Enjoyed this one, eager to read more from you.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
I can't wait for the new story
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 25
yep been there
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
loved this story
Date: 18 Oct 2013 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 25
I am so sad to see this story end. But I have enjoyed reading it. You did an excellent job. Thanks for sharing.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 25
OMG IT ! ITS OVER? ILOVED IT ! CANT WAIT FOR NEW STORY!
Date: 18 Oct 2013 4:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
great ending loved it cant wait to read the new story sounds great
Date: 18 Oct 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 25
at least she got her happy ever after, and that he lightened up a bit on being a jerk all the time to her, keep up the good work
Date: 18 Oct 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 25
great ending. TY for writing and sharing ladies.
Date: 18 Oct 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 25
Thanks for this story. It really took a while to get over Edward being an ass, but the ending is sweet. Looking forward to the next story!
Date: 15 Oct 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 24
Aw wow,I'm gonna be sad to see this story wrap up! The wedding was absolutely perfect for them. I hope you are open to giving us little future takes, little glimpses into their lives as the years pass. I, for one, can not wait to see Edward as the father to at least one little girl, especially one with Bella's spunk!
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 24
Awww E is finally growing up. Sweet chapter.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:46 PM Title: Chapter 23
Jazz can be pissed all he wants. Alice had it coming LOL for Esme and Aro