Date: 16 Feb 2016 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 13
Thrilled for the update love this story...but never realized this much time had gone by...I'd say the unwelcome guests would be the squirrel munchers and maybe their sidekicks the pound pups...
Date: 16 Feb 2016 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 13
Wonderful Chapter thanks can't wait for more cu
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2016 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 13
god i love this new bella thanks for the update i love it
[Report This]Date: 16 Feb 2016 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 13
Hooray! A new and fabulous chapter for one of my favorite stories. Enjoyed Alec's conversation with Isabella. Can't wait to read the next chapters! Who's come for Isabella? Will Demitri take over the Volturi?
Date: 16 Feb 2016 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 13
This is one of my favorite Bella/Demetri stories! Love the update!
Date: 16 Feb 2016 3:30 PM Title: Chapter 13
I was so excited to see a new chapter and it was good. Thank you! Thank you! Thank you!
Date: 29 Dec 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
aaaaahhhhh please update
Date: 21 Dec 2015 5:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
I love the story very much ! Do you know when you intend to post again ? Or have you deicded to stop writing it altogether ? I sure hope not, because I can't wait to read what happens next !
Take care,
Date: 24 Sep 2015 10:52 AM Title: Chapter 12
Update soon please
Date: 14 Mar 2015 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 12
Just stumbled upon this story. I'm really enjoying it and I can't wait to see what happens next.
Thanks for writing
Date: 22 Feb 2015 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well, this is my third and final attempt to post a review (TWCS keeps erroneously telling me I've already submitted reviews for ch. 12 and 1). Skipping all the glowing remarks I don't feel like retyping on my not so smart phone, I'd just like to ask, why only 12 chapters so far despite the AN which tells of 14 prewritten chapters? Patiently waiting for the lemony claiming and Volturi retribution against the Cullens and other wonderful goodies you've planned. Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Because I mislabled the chapters in the story doc. I have part of the next chapter written, and it will see an update, just not real sure when. I am almost done with what I'm working on, then I have a OS I have to see to, then I will finish this one's update. It *should* be updated by the end of the month.
~Speklez
Date: 28 Jan 2015 7:19 AM Title: Chapter 12
Please update ASAFP.
Date: 26 Dec 2014 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 4
i really wished bella wasn't such a simpleton. she is acting like such a scared little human/baby with no courage, no backbone, no confidence... wish she wasn't so wimpy...
Date: 03 Dec 2014 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 1
When will u be updating this story??? I have fallen in love with it and would love to read the finished product!!!
Date: 18 Sep 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
Absolutely loving this story!!! Pls update soon!! Ur Demetrius is awesome n so hott!!
Date: 08 Sep 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 12
More please! Thank you!
Date: 23 Aug 2014 6:05 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love it! Are you still planning on writing more of this story?
-Kate
Date: 06 Aug 2014 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 12
Just realized today that you took your stories down on FFN. I'm rereading some of them.
I like that you don't romanticize everything in this story.
Please update soon.
[Report This]Date: 01 Aug 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 12
Please update!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Jun 2014 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 12
don't give up on this story. it's great so far. can't wait to read more chapters.
Date: 14 Feb 2014 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 1
Can't wait for update love this story.
Date: 07 Feb 2014 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 6
Great chapter update soon
[Report This]Date: 26 Jan 2014 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Oh I am so hooked on this story.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jan 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
this is really good please keep up the great work
Date: 15 Jan 2014 4:09 AM Title: Chapter 12
i love this story. so very much.
Date: 03 Jan 2014 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 12
great..as usual....claiming on the way...and the cullens in trouble....great!!!!!
Date: 03 Jan 2014 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
thanks for the chapter. Can't wait to see what happens with the Cullens
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
No fade to black! Lol. Pretty sure Bella will have something to say about how Demetri handles Charlie.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 1:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Hurry, loved the chapter, you have been missed
Date: 29 Dec 2013 6:13 AM Title: Chapter 12
Marcus saved her bacon w/demitri does this mean Charlie isn't going to make it? Fade to black how cruel. Nice to see you back. Hope everything and everyone is okay?😃😃😃a86;
Date: 28 Dec 2013 10:31 PM Title: Chapter 12
I am so fine with the fade to black. I am not concerned with lemons. Just update and keep it interesting.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 12
go boy go love this ch .
Date: 28 Dec 2013 8:16 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love Marcus covering for her. awww hope Charlie doesn't have to die for the Cullen's stupidness.
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 12
You are evil.... Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 28 Dec 2013 5:04 PM Title: Chapter 12
Very enjoyable chapter. Thank you.
Hope you had a good Christmas. :)
Date: 28 Dec 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 12
Love the story! Can't wait to see wait happens the next update.
Date: 28 Dec 2013 1:15 PM Title: Chapter 12
What a wonderful treat to have a new chapter of this story. A very good one indeed. So the Cullens find themselves in further hot water, if they show up in Voltera I have no doubt they will probably meet their end.
Charlie may prove to be a problem. Wonderful and I look forward to more.
Happy New Year
Date: 18 Dec 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 11
Aww...man...I hope you finish this story, it is amazing as all your stories are...looking forward in reading more...thanks, huggs. Peggy
Date: 02 Dec 2013 4:29 PM Title: Chapter 11
I love that story, and I just hope it continues. Although I have a question for you. I was following you on FanFiction.net, and I was wondering if the sequel to some of your stories that you had already posted there wil be posted here as well... because I liked them to... Anyway, whatever you decide, I simply hope you continue writing, because I find it fantastic.
Author's Response:
It will be continued, I just have a lot going on in the World of Real at the moment. As for the sequels... I only had one. It's posted on my fictionpad account, but it won't be posted here until I can update it more often than I currently can.
Date: 12 Nov 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 11
I Love This Story! UPDATE! GOOD LUCK!:D
Date: 12 Nov 2013 11:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
you are a wonderful writer i enjoy your stories i hope you update this one soon.
thank you
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 11
More, Pretty Please!
Date: 11 Oct 2013 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 11
wonderful chapter very excited to see if she ia in trouble
Date: 11 Oct 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 11
awww what a nice talk with marcus
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:13 AM Title: Chapter 11
I had to go searching today because I noticed this fic was missing from fanfic. So glad I found it again.
Loved the interaction with Marcus.
Can't wait to see Demetri's reaction
Date: 07 Oct 2013 2:34 AM Title: Chapter 11
Demetri is an evil genious the way he has Bella completely brainwashed. Loving this!
Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:53 PM Title: Chapter 11
ut oh.. bad girl.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 10
see you soon.. she is better but a mask. She must look like a thing from a horror movie.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 9
Manipulation.. Well I guess if it makes her more comfortable in her new future,okay.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
she is rather.. childish.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
cemented.. well there you go on that thought.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 11
Oh gosh I didn't realize you were updating over here, I'm behind! Need to catch up...ffn has just lost their minds, haven't they? They are hell-bent on killing their own website. Don't you be discouraged or anything by their nonsense...just remember to let us know when/where you update so we don't miss it! *hugs*
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 11
this keeps getting better and better
Date: 04 Oct 2013 6:26 PM Title: Chapter 11
Busted. Marcus' explanation cleared up some of my questions too.
Date: 04 Oct 2013 5:34 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oh boy...she is in trouble. Cannot wait for the next.
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 11
Oooohh.h... thans for the update, looks like Bella is in a LOT of trouble.
The talk with Marcus was nice, and I can't wait to find out what is gonna happen next.
xoxo
Mina
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 11
bad bad bella lol
[Report This]Date: 04 Oct 2013 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 11
cant wait for more :)
Date: 04 Oct 2013 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 11
someones in trouble great chapter loved it think she will feel at ease now with haven marcus talk with her like he did for now at least update soon
Date: 04 Oct 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 11
I imagine Demitri not going to be overly pleased with miss Bella for leaving his quarters. Love this story.
I need to take a moment to congratulate you...I find absolutely no fault in your pulling your stories from ff. under the circumstances..I have noticed as a reader their methods of censorship defy the logical mind at best. I was unaware that the nature of the stories you spoke of existed.
this type of deranged entertainment is evil. it is also illegal and could shut down their site completely...I think they need to take an inventory of their own shortcomings and their methods need a harsh dose of reality.
Thank you for being a woman of principles'.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2013 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm hooked! I CAN'T WAIT TO READ WHAT HAPPENS NEXT!
xoxo
Mina
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2013 10:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Hmmm... can't wait to find out what happened to Bella in the tub that made her head hurt.
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2013 8:54 AM Title: Chapter 5
OH MY GOD! WHAT DID HE DO? *runs to read the next chapter*
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bella can call him a jerk how many times she wants, but she gotta admit he's a charming jerk *sighs* LOL
[Report This]Date: 30 Sep 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 1
Started this one today and I'm already intrigued! LOVE DIMITRI!
xoxo
Mina
Date: 18 Sep 2013 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
i love it wondeeful chapter i hope you update soon
Date: 17 Sep 2013 11:06 PM Title: Chapter 1
update soon we miss your writing
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:21 AM Title: Chapter 1
I am used to reading this on fanfiction , when will we we a new chapter.
[Report This]Date: 13 Sep 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 10
I so love this story. i so can picture Isabella hissing at Caius lol.. i so cant wait for more :)
Date: 08 Sep 2013 1:24 PM Title: Chapter 10
Well think it's easy to say this story is really different. I love how he is with her but don't really like how he has changed her memories. I know he has done it for her own g good but we Will have wait and see for some reason I feel it could come back in the future to bite him in the bum. Looking forward next chapter.
Date: 07 Sep 2013 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 10
Glad B is doing ok. Aro is going to be an issue I think.
Date: 06 Sep 2013 6:03 PM Title: Chapter 10
I am loving this story. Cannot wait for the next update.
Date: 05 Sep 2013 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 10
great chapter
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2013 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 10
wow got to love him
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 9
He's so wicked and evil. I love it!
Date: 30 Aug 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 9
yes it was very successful cant wait to see wat happens next great chapter loved it
Date: 30 Aug 2013 12:16 AM Title: Chapter 9
Awww man.... plz tell me she isnt going to be some mindless Demetri slave?
Interetsting talk with Elizar
Author's Response:
*shakes head* Nope. I give you my word there will be no mindless slave like Bella.
Date: 28 Aug 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
great couple chapters love it update soon
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 8
That would make life tough if she gets a migraine every time she catches someone's scent. I have to tell you, I've never read a fic that wasn't Edward/Bella, but I'm really liking this one. Demetri is badass. :)
Author's Response:
Well, than it is a great honor for you to be reading my little tale. I'm glad you're enjoying it and that you continue to.
Speklez
[Report This]Date: 27 Aug 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 8
can't wait for more
Date: 27 Aug 2013 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 8
oh wow Dem and James' gifts. Guess its good she didnt get any of E's venom in her too.
Date: 27 Aug 2013 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 7
messy eater. haha. I like Luna
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 6
oh - is Edward a closet playboy? great story - can't wait for the next update
Date: 20 Aug 2013 5:26 PM Title: Chapter 6
Oh effin' hell, MORE please~ and soon! I am so lovin' this, even though I am a huge Edward fan, sometimes I just wanted to kick his stubborn arse! I want to see if Demetri can make Bella a kickass vampire. I'm thinkin' he can......
Date: 20 Aug 2013 6:00 AM Title: Chapter 6
Well he has programmed her. Edward won't have a chance to do this again. I am guessing he will be killed.
Date: 19 Aug 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 6
nooooo Don't want a brainwashed Slavey Bella...... wahhhhhh. The metal plate was a cute touch though.
Author's Response:
*giggles* Have a little more faith in me than that. I promise it will be worth it
[Report This]Date: 19 Aug 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
Ihope she remembers everything just to piss him off. muhahahaha.
[Report This]Date: 18 Aug 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
WOW!! This truely is an amazingly beautifully well written story!! I have been truely captivated & intriguied in reading this amazingg story!! This story definatly gets a 10 star rating in my book!!! I absolutly love the plot & story line very much so!
Date: 17 Aug 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 4
Hmmm. Sounds like the Cullen's are not vampires completely. I like Demetri.
Date: 16 Aug 2013 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmm so it seems the Cullen have been hiding a lot.
Date: 15 Aug 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
love it and congraz on haven your baby
Date: 14 Aug 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter 3
well bring on the eleven chapters you have..
What were the Cullens going to do to her? Alice obviously did not care they took her.
Date: 14 Aug 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 3
AMAZING, LOVE, LOVE LOVE IT!!!!! I cannot wait for more. Love Demetri!! Yummy!!!!
Date: 14 Aug 2013 3:36 AM Title: Chapter 3
wow Demetri is a kick ass fighter.