Date: 07 Oct 2013 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 16
Oh. He is so gorgeous.
"I'm coming baby"
Ohhhh
Edwards a coming.
Watch out then
Date: 06 Oct 2013 7:46 PM Title: Chapter 16
But if he hasn't been back surveillance won't do any good right? Great talk Carlisle!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 1:57 AM Title: Chapter 16
hurry! where has Sam been????
Date: 05 Oct 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 16
hurry edward! hurry the next update please
Date: 05 Oct 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 16
Suspenseful!
Date: 04 Oct 2013 5:21 PM Title: Chapter 15
Why? never had the idea that Sam was involved, hmmmmm interesting
Date: 04 Oct 2013 12:00 PM Title: Chapter 15
What noooooo Sam ..... Oh come on nooooo.
How could the guess Sam .... Lol.
dam I was sure it was Mike because of the past thing.
Dam gonna have to go back & read again to get the clues cause ....what ..... Lol...Sam..
Why?
Dam it girl ....... Lol
good one
Date: 04 Oct 2013 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
great chapter I didn't know. A steel door? Where is she?
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2013 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 15
I am totally shocked at who the killer is! I did not see that coming! Great work, as always! Hope you are doing well. Until Saturday! Dana
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 15
So Sam had a camera in Edwards apartment? ?? Hope they find her soon
Date: 03 Oct 2013 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 15
Nope, not shocked. I figured it was him almost from the begining. Of course, I am usually wrong about things like that! Glad to be right for once.
[Report This]Date: 03 Oct 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 15
looking forward to more
Date: 30 Sep 2013 9:58 AM Title: Chapter 14
Oh O
Bella's in trouble now.
Oh Edward.
Sorry to here about your lose. Any lose no matter how close or far is sad.
Date: 29 Sep 2013 8:04 AM Title: Chapter 14
That is a horrible cliffhanger. Edward please learn how to verbally complete a thought. ;-)
Date: 28 Sep 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 14
great chapter, cant wait to read more
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 14
arrrgh! i could choke him for not clearing everything up! he better run after her~!
p.s. so sorry for your loss :( ((hugs))
[Report This]Date: 28 Sep 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 14
Edward's a stubborn idiot!!!!
Date: 28 Sep 2013 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 14
Oh no don't leave us hanging can't wait t read more please.
Date: 28 Sep 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 14
Great chapter! Well, except for Edward letting Bella storm out without telling her how he feels. Oh, and her getting kidnapped and all. lol. I am looking forward to the next chapter.
I am sorry for your loss. Don't worry about posting schedules. Just take care of your family.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Well it will be a good thing if Edward pulls his head out of his AXX. Great chapter. Bella should really knock some sense into edward though - idiot.
Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 12
I was shocked it wasn't James. Now I have no theory. Great job.
[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 13
Yay - progress!!! A yea jump? What will we miss in that year??
Author's Response:
Nothing. I promise!
Date: 25 Sep 2013 9:18 PM Title: Chapter 13
A year ahead? Huh? Can't wait to read it.
[Report This]Date: 25 Sep 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 13
She took that a lot calmer than I think I would have. I would have just straight freaked out. Looking forward to more, thanks for the update!
Author's Response:
I think she's seen enough to know that this was about her. She'll talk about that next chapter.
Date: 25 Sep 2013 12:36 PM Title: Chapter 13
Jumps a year.
Holly cow batman.
So there going to be living together for a year.........yeah not gonna be able to keep it together.
Oh to live with Edward for a year.....that would be such a horrible thing to have to put up with, pity the girl & since I'm a nice person & wouldn't wish that on anyone I will put my hand up & I will take her place. :) ...... Just sayin lol
Date: 23 Sep 2013 10:44 AM Title: Chapter 12
Nah not shocked....LOL
Gotta be Mike gotta be lol.
Sorry for asking for longer chapters its just that its a really good story & I get into it & stop .... Lol
You do good cliffies lol
[Report This]Date: 22 Sep 2013 4:16 AM Title: Chapter 12
I was definitely shocked. I really had peg James as the killer. Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 12
No, I didn't think it was James this time. My money has always been on Sam. Didn't Emmett call Bella like Edward asked him to?
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 12
Is it Wednesday yet!!?? loved this
[Report This]Date: 21 Sep 2013 12:52 PM Title: Chapter 12
and Edward's not rushing down there when he finds this link???? freaking stubborn man! Bella's gonna have another breakdown :(
Date: 21 Sep 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 11
Great chaopter. Kick btt Edward. Loved it. Now, I think she responded because she knew he wouldn;t let her get away with crap but, I do hope they have another kiss soon.
Date: 21 Sep 2013 2:27 AM Title: Chapter 11
Loved it, can't wait till tomorrow to read more.
Date: 20 Sep 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 11
good one. i'm just asumeing be i take it jake was...um...is castrated the right word?
Date: 20 Sep 2013 4:25 PM Title: Chapter 11
Good chapter, but the overachiever in me is dying because she took C's for the semester. lol
[Report This]Date: 20 Sep 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 11
yay edward .... now maybe a little hug or smoochy pooch???
Date: 19 Sep 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
I don't know the movie. :-(. I think she will rebound.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
Come on you gonna make me wait to Thursday, I can't believe it... Lol.
Yeap, yeap gotta say still reckon its Mike.
Don't know the movie, think I've heard it somewhere but can't think where.
He cut of his ....what tongue or ........ Hmmm.
Yeap Mike, gotta be.... Lol
Can't wait, bring on Saturday... You sure you have to wait till Saturday.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:25 AM Title: Chapter 10
omg......talk about traumatizing.....
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
I just started reading the story and could not stop. Let's hope Bella snaps out of her funk soon, maybe Edward will have a talk with her.
The quote is from the movie Where the heart is.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 10
the movie is"Where the heart is" novalee says it to lexie to explain violence against them and her(lexie). great story so far, more pleez!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 2:00 AM Title: Chapter 10
That line was from Where the Heart Is. I've seen the movie way too many times.
[Report This]Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:54 AM Title: Chapter 10
Edward!!!!!!! Go console this poor girl!!
Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
ugh, why did you stop there??? Great story, keep it up and please please update soon with longer chapter.
Date: 18 Sep 2013 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 10
poor bella dont know what movie its from but i like it cant wait til saturday
Date: 18 Sep 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 10
Where the heart is. I love that movie. I can't wait till the boys find out that he talked to Bella twice. Edward needs to pull his head out of his ass. He is really about to loose Bella. Because I bet James is more then willing to comfort her.
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 9
Edward si an idiot! PLQ update sooon
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Damn. This doesn't bode well at all. Can't wait until Weds. Thanks for the update
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 9
HELLOOOOOOOOOOOOOO Edward???????????
[Report This]Date: 15 Sep 2013 4:24 AM Title: Chapter 9
Oh wow...so not Jacob or James...hmmmm. um I think Edward's true feelings will shine thru when he finds out that she was walking by herself. ....oh boy fireworks!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 10:17 PM Title: Prologue
sounds good ! keep up the good work !
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 9:41 PM Title: Chapter 9
ugh i hate james!!!!!!!!!! hes probably the killer or if hes not i hope he dies no one needs to get in between edward and bella!!!!!! edward better be the one to comfort bella in her bad place!!!!!!!
Date: 14 Sep 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 9
What you stopped there? ugh
Date: 14 Sep 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 9
Totally shocked. And stupid Bella I promise to never go anywhere alone. She never listens. Great chapter. You made Edward cry:-(
Date: 14 Sep 2013 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 9
Can't wait to read more
Date: 14 Sep 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 9
What a cliffie! Ach. Can't wait until Wednesday.
Date: 14 Sep 2013 2:03 PM Title: Chapter 9
Naa....... New Jake wasn't the killer to obvious .
James hmmmmm naaaa :)
Lol for once I thinkJames is going to be a nice guy...but will he end up dead hmmm now that's the question.
I still lean towards it being Mike for what happened when they where young & about the birthday party & him not being able to go.
Yeap yeap that's my guess.
BUT .... What did she stand on hmmmmmm
A body part hmmmmm, oh no just had a thought maybe its James & the killer has killed both Jake & James OMG .......
OK you got me on this bit lol
Keep up the good work.
[Report This]Date: 14 Sep 2013 1:37 PM Title: Chapter 9
Stubborn Edward!!!!
Date: 12 Sep 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 8
Humph. Edward, get with the program.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2013 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 8
ok - he just needs to get that stick out of his ass and soon!
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 8
Yeah. Ed's gonna end up regretting that. Good luck getting her back, Dude! Thanks for the update.
[Report This]Date: 11 Sep 2013 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 8
They're both stubborn
Date: 07 Sep 2013 4:09 PM Title: Chapter 7
I would really like to read that conversation that Edward and Jasper must have had about the kisses.
Date: 07 Sep 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 7
Yet she rins from one end of campus to another by herself. This girl! But the kiss - perfect
Date: 07 Sep 2013 1:21 PM Title: Chapter 7
Of course he did ...not....but was going to do the whole "we should just be friends" crap ....lol.
OMG I totally forgot about Jake.. How could I forget him.
hmmm Jake seems to obvious though doesn't it, but......hmmmmm
Bring on the next chapter girl .....lol
Did I mention well done, but not lon enough ..... I know impatient much lol
Date: 07 Sep 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 7
I can't wait for the next chapter.
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 1:01 PM Title: Chapter 7
Over-thinking there again, Edward!!!!
[Report This]Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:50 PM Title: Chapter 7
:( I hope he doesn't want out! He needs to find he and explain in person
Date: 07 Sep 2013 12:25 PM Title: Chapter 7
I think he's confused since he knew Bella since she was a kid.
[Report This]Date: 05 Sep 2013 2:40 AM Title: Chapter 6
please don't let Jasper beat Edward up...lol who's sitting with Bella??? the killer???!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 6
Ugh you stopped there!!!! Ugh, great story.
[Report This]Date: 04 Sep 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 6
A kiss ... Something, finally ... Yay!
Date: 04 Sep 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 6
eeek looking forward to more
Date: 04 Sep 2013 2:15 PM Title: Chapter 6
Edward won't regret kissing Bella if Jasper doesn't shoot him. Where the heck is Alice?? Is it the killer with Bella now? Answers!!!
Date: 04 Sep 2013 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 6
OMG you left it there.
hmmmm
ok so not mike cause she knows him.
Not the guys boss cause they know him.
my guess maybe sam
unless it's a girl then it's Tanya, Kate or victoria
so yeah hmmmmm
lol
[Report This]Date: 28 Aug 2013 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 5
Oh gosh ... Update soon, please?
Date: 28 Aug 2013 5:03 PM Title: Chapter 5
' they will stop',your not gonna kill off one of our girls, are you? can't wait for more!
Date: 28 Aug 2013 1:05 PM Title: Chapter 5
Would love longer chapters. I like the story and can't wait for more.
Date: 25 Aug 2013 10:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
Nice. They are all together and of age now. I am happy.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great chapter. Can't wait. You are really pulling me in.
[Report This]Date: 25 Aug 2013 12:13 PM Title: Chapter 4
hmmm, i'm thinking it's Uley......
Date: 25 Aug 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 4
Enjoy the story, wish you posted more often.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 6:43 PM Title: Chapter 4
Glad for the chapter! It really moved the story along.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 4
Can't wait to read more.
Date: 24 Aug 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 4
I can't wait until Wednesday.
Date: 22 Aug 2013 12:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
I just caught up with the story. Short chapters are fine when you post frequently. I'll be waiting for the next one.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 10:22 PM Title: Chapter 3
Great Chapter. Looking forward to more.
Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 3
Enjoying this story, I can't wait for more
Date: 21 Aug 2013 4:17 AM Title: Chapter 3
Love it I can't wait until the girls are older.
Date: 21 Aug 2013 3:56 AM Title: Chapter 3
I love what you have so far. Can't wait to read more :)
Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 3
Can't wait to read more please.
[Report This]Date: 21 Aug 2013 2:19 AM Title: Chapter 3
=O he's leaving?!?