Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:15 PM Title: Late for Class
Loved it
Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:53 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
i swear even though there are big similarites with this story and seducing miss swan..it's good but i can't get pass that.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2010 9:01 AM Title: Late for Class
this kinda reminds me aof seducing miss swan ..but your bella is actually giving edward the time of day lol
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:51 AM Title: Audi
I HAVE always wanted them to have Jacob play ball with them.. This is going to be gooooooood. YEAH
Date: 24 Jul 2010 1:37 AM Title: Conciousness
I have a funny feeling about JAKE.. I wonder if he is thinking what i think he might me thinking.... HUMMMM.. only time will tell.
Date: 23 Jul 2010 7:21 PM Title: Trouble
OH GOD.. WOW.. I am on pins and needles... I saw that this story was featured this week and decided to check it out. I am glad that I did.. SO GOOD.
Great job.
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:12 PM Title: Ultimate
Oh hell now I am all caught up... really great chapter i am really loving this story.. I am going to put it up on recommended stories this week if you have any problems with that let me know..
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:11 PM Title: Audi
oh this should be so much fun...
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:11 PM Title: Cain
LOL I am glad you didn't take that any further it wouldn't be realistic.. well done..
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:11 PM Title: Conciousness
LOL at your a/n...
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:10 PM Title: Consequences
OMG that is horrid.. poor poor bella
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:10 PM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
awww that is so cute and i loved drunk bella!!
Date: 22 Jul 2010 12:10 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
that was really well done...
Date: 22 Jul 2010 9:00 AM Title: Trouble
omg poor Bella....
Date: 22 Jul 2010 8:13 AM Title: Numb
Okay I am crying.. that was so sad..
great chapter..
Date: 22 Jul 2010 7:29 AM Title: Broken
omg that is so sad.. poor bella...
Date: 22 Jul 2010 7:16 AM Title: Dreaming
okay yeah I haven't read this so I am super happy LOL
great chapter.. I am really enjoying your story..
Date: 22 Jul 2010 6:22 AM Title: Difficult Conversations
hmmm I don't know I think I am catching up I can't remember what happens after here..
so this is a good sign yes? LOL
Date: 22 Jul 2010 6:08 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
LOL I remember that chapter too.. LOL no clue.. what I was doing when I was reading this story.. most likely off line which is why I didn't review...
Sigh.. serves me right..
Date: 21 Jul 2010 9:22 PM Title: Leave me alone
I am sure I have already read this.. and I only read the first few chapters *rolls eyes* I had it on my to do list and I have only just gotten back to it.. I don't remember what actually happens LOL
So lets see how far I did read LOL
Date: 21 Jul 2010 9:09 PM Title: Late for Class
Nice first chapter.. looking forward to reading more.. poor Bella..
Date: 19 Jul 2010 9:54 PM Title: Ultimate
Looking forward to next update! :) I wonder why Edward was able to "hear" Bella all of a sudden?
Date: 14 Jul 2010 8:44 PM Title: Ultimate
poor B
Kewl game though
Date: 14 Jul 2010 3:20 AM Title: Ultimate
Glad to see everyone getting along.
Date: 14 Jul 2010 2:24 AM Title: Ultimate
Another great chapter. I'm really enjoying your story. You're doing a great job and this one had an intriguing ending.
One question: at the end, when Edward swerved the car, did you mean to say that he bumped the curb and not the gutter? Gutter didn't seem to make sense to me. I guess you might have meant the drains that are along the curb?
Date: 11 Jul 2010 7:53 PM Title: Audi
When is the next update? Jacob playing baseball with the Cullens, sounds interesting........
I'm into it, I want to read more, but there is no more, whe will there be more???????
Date: 11 Jul 2010 5:44 AM Title: Audi
hmmm wolfie baseball.
[Report This]Date: 11 Jul 2010 3:53 AM Title: Audi
Bring on the baseball game! Great chapter. Thanks for the update.
Date: 10 Jul 2010 12:37 PM Title: Audi
Hi!! Q. - are you changing the text from the FFN version? Or leaving it as is? Just thought I'd ask... A-.
Author's Response:
Hi :D
It's pretty much the same. There are a couple of outtakes at the end of the FFn version which I may go back & insert if they fit in seamlessly, but otherwise it's just a clean like a beta would do (fixing tense issues, grammar, incorrect words etc).
Date: 23 Jun 2010 3:38 PM Title: Cain
Oh poor Bella! sigh...great job so far!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 11:33 AM Title: Consequences
Jesus. I hope she identifies him.
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2010 6:09 AM Title: Cain
Bella is way more mature than anyone I know. I would so let Jake and Edward murder that guy. The word great is an understatement for this story and I can't think of a better word because of sleep deprivation. Ahem... Thanks for that.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:54 AM Title: Consequences
Holy crap... They can fake her death now. I'm going to say this again, I SHOULD BE SLEEPING. But you... you're sucking me in. I might as well catch up.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:28 AM Title: Trouble
CRAP. What the heck are they going to do? Why are you doing this to me? Don't you know I have a job?!
Date: 22 Jun 2010 5:07 AM Title: Broken
Oh my god, I've been reading this story with a lump in my throat and tears in my eyes. I don't know if this is just PMS, but you're story is getting to me. Lol, it's heartbreakingly good and I should totally be sleeping right now.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 2:44 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
I figured that's where he went off to. I thought he'd talk to J though.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 1:39 AM Title: Cain
yea..... she is going out of the hospital.
Date: 22 Jun 2010 1:26 AM Title: Conciousness
Great Story update soon.
Date: 28 May 2010 4:18 AM Title: Consequences
It's amazing how cruel and mean people can be. Passing judgment without the whole story. Even worse, taking things into their own hands. And worst a man, attacking a woman, leaving her lying like that on the street.
No one deserves that, even less Bella. I wonder what are the Cullens, and Edward going to do about it.
Date: 28 May 2010 4:10 AM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
They are putting a great front, and who would have thought that school gossip might help the case. I'm sure Edward, at least a part of him, wants to hurt the kids saying they have been involved with Bella, but he has to see it helps their case. Luckily for them, the principal seems to not believe the rumors, and he wants to not believe them.
Going out as a family with a close friend was a good idea, Bella getting tipsy not that much, at least no one noticed.
Date: 28 May 2010 3:56 AM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
How many things to consider in this situation. The consequences can be devastating for the Cullens more than to Bella. They have been around most part of the country; people might have forgotten them, but if this comes out into the light, they might begin to remember. They need to stay put, all of them, act as if it just a wrongful accusation and a lie. Speaking of which, Bella needs to work, a lot on how to lie. Class was supposed to start right away, however, it will have to wait, a while...
Date: 28 May 2010 3:37 AM Title: Trouble
Poor Bella, she feels so alone, and in a way she is, trapped between a real world and a mythological one, not belonging entirely to either.
Things now don't seem as uncomplicated as they were seven years ago. There's more thinking done over things, and consequences are apparently bigger now...
Date: 27 May 2010 8:37 PM Title: Consequences
OMG!! Its a wonder Edward didn't come anyway. I wonder who all had to hold him back. Will she be able to tell the cops who attacked her? I bet the Cullens will be able to find them and take care of him. Thanks for a great chapter.
[Report This]Date: 27 May 2010 1:13 AM Title: Consequences
Just read this story thru and I have to say that I love it. Great job and can't wait for more.
Date: 26 May 2010 8:48 PM Title: Consequences
You have done an incredible job with this story! I was planning to just skim it, but I was quickly won over by your story-telling talents. Your premise is excellent and the plot development compelling. The mechanics (grammar and spelling) are also very good. Too many writers don't understand that poor punctuation, spelling, etc. can really get in the way of an excellent story.
Please keep the chapters coming! I'm going to resist peeking at this on the fan fiction website because I want to see it the way you originally intended.
Date: 26 May 2010 8:10 PM Title: Consequences
I found your story today and couldn't stop reading!!! Can't wait to find out what happens!! :)
Date: 26 May 2010 8:06 PM Title: Consequences
Please please please update soon!
Date: 26 May 2010 4:41 PM Title: Consequences
poor b. Hope that man gets whats coming to him
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 4:12 PM Title: Consequences
That was disterbing the way he enjoyed what he was doing update when you can thanks....
Date: 26 May 2010 2:04 PM Title: Consequences
Hope somebody treats hillbilly back tenfold.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2010 1:37 PM Title: Consequences
shit good chapter thanks
Date: 11 May 2010 6:00 AM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
Wow, I love this story, Please post more soon!
Date: 11 May 2010 3:16 AM Title: Leave me alone
This story is really good so far, Im hooked...i need to know what he's done and why he's away! lol...I wonder what he will tell her.
Great writing
Date: 09 May 2010 8:05 PM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
Damn! It would have been awesome to hear about Jasper and Emmett shoveling down human food.
Date: 09 May 2010 4:46 PM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
Good chapter.
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 1:28 PM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
loved it very much update when you can thanks....
[Report This]Date: 09 May 2010 1:28 PM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
loved it very much update when you can thanks....
Date: 09 May 2010 1:08 PM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
Thanks for another great chapter.
Date: 07 May 2010 9:46 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
Great chapter. Can't wait to see how they get out of the trouble.
Date: 07 May 2010 8:09 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
Lovely story!
Date: 07 May 2010 2:44 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
Awesome chapter... I think the Cullens can think of something to get Bella and Edward to appear somewhat "innocent".
Date: 07 May 2010 1:46 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
AWWWWWW!!!!!
Date: 01 May 2010 6:57 PM Title: Trouble
Oh wow!! Great story! Great Chapter!! I thought for sure that someone saw them in her front yard or on the porch. The pictures are going to be much more difficult to explain. My vote is for her to 'change' and just run away with them to start over in a new life... :) But I suppose that wouldn't make for a very dramatic story. I can't wait to see what you have planned!
Date: 25 Apr 2010 1:15 AM Title: Trouble
This is a great story and I can't wait to read more. I hope they get to be together soon.
Date: 24 Apr 2010 4:14 AM Title: Trouble
Oh crap. That doesn't bode well.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:33 PM Title: Trouble
Uh oh! Pesky envelopes.
Date: 23 Apr 2010 11:15 PM Title: Trouble
uh-ohs.... its moving time
Date: 23 Apr 2010 10:47 PM Title: Trouble
Ohhhh! Guess it isn't gonna help that Bella looks like she did in that pic. I can bet they think it's a teacher/student relationship going on!!! Thanks for the update!
Date: 23 Apr 2010 9:56 PM Title: Trouble
Hi,
Can I ask why you've migrated this over here?! Wider audience? I have it alerted on FFN also!
Author's Response:
Few reasons - 1. Wider audience, 2. Back-up in case it goes poof from FFn for any reason. Ideally I want to get this up to date & post in all three places at once (Twilighted, FFn & TWCSLibrary) & 3. Supporting TWCSLibrary.
:)
Date: 23 Apr 2010 5:19 PM Title: Numb
aww the end was so sad
Date: 23 Apr 2010 2:36 AM Title: Numb
What, NO, you must keep going it wonderful
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:36 AM Title: Numb
I understand they can't be open and honest about this back home, but it's not as if the Cullens are moving away again, or they can't find a way around it. They are vampires!!! They have to find a way. Even more now that Bella is broken again. Please....
Date: 21 Apr 2010 4:17 AM Title: Broken
I don't think it was Bella's fault. Jacob said they were keeping patrols, so we don't even know if it was him he saw. Still that probably won't convince Bella.
Yes, her world seems to be falling to pieces, but Edward is close by, and I'm sure the rest of the Cullens will follow shortly.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 11:14 PM Title: Numb
No, don't let it end there. Somehow, they will have to find a way to be together again. Maybe they could move somewhere else and be together. Love it! Can't wait to read more.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:06 PM Title: Numb
AWESOME story! I had to read the whole thing before I review and I love it. I can't belienve Charlie is gone, poor guy... will Bella ever tell Jacob what caused his heart attack? How are Bella and Edward going to continue being "just friends" again after making love?!?! Keep up the great work, I look forward to your update!
[Report This]Date: 20 Apr 2010 8:00 PM Title: Numb
I was crying when I was reading this chapter.
Please dont let it end here. I hope that they find their way back to each other.
What a wonderful story.
Date: 20 Apr 2010 4:42 PM Title: Numb
Ok I'm not one of those who likes stories where after one time the girl ends up pregnant, but this time I think there should be an exception. That way they have to figure out a way to be together.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 9:38 PM Title: Dreaming
Looking forward to the rest of the story.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 2:06 AM Title: Dreaming
hmmm Me thinks June is going to start something.
Date: 16 Apr 2010 1:31 AM Title: Late for Class
ok this isnt the story I was thinking it was. The teacher story I remember is that B gets turned to a vamp before she meets back up with cullens so Now I can't wait to read your story
Date: 15 Apr 2010 7:26 PM Title: Dreaming
All the Cullens feel they have plenty to do make up with Bella. And in a way, they do. She cares for them too much, and yes, needs them in her life, as much as they need her.
With Edward, things are more complicated and intense. How long can they go on like this? Does Alice know?
Date: 15 Apr 2010 2:11 PM Title: Leave me alone
haha I love that line, " And you promised me it would be like you never existed. Well, look - here you are existing." nice
[Report This]Date: 15 Apr 2010 12:43 PM Title: Dreaming
good chapter thanks
Date: 15 Apr 2010 11:10 AM Title: Leave me alone
You've done a wonderful job capturing the angst in this story. I am enjoying it!
Date: 15 Apr 2010 10:57 AM Title: Late for Class
I love this idea. :)
Date: 05 Apr 2010 2:35 AM Title: Late for Class
Wow I read this on fanfiction and I was so sad when I got to the part about Alice's past.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 9:33 PM Title: Difficult Conversations
It was him, it was fast, he got what he wanted and came back.
As for Bella hearing what he had to say, considering that all she has believed for seven years is a lie, no wonder she fainted.
June is right, she needs to be extremely careful, she is new here and even if she knows the Cullens she hasn't been around lately and Edward's actions were a big, really big red flag. We'll have to see how they all act now.
Jacob was upset when he found out about the Cullens, Will he try to do something about it? He has no right to do so, but.... who knows.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 7:28 PM Title: Difficult Conversations
It was him, it was fast, he got what he wanted and came back.
As for Bella hearing what he had to say, considering that all she has believed for seven years is a lie, no wonder she fainted.
June is right, she needs to be extremely careful, she is new here and even if she knows the Cullens she hasn't been around lately and Edward's actions were a big, really big red flag. We'll have to see how they all act now.
Jacob was upset when he found out about the Cullens, Will he try to do something about it? He has no right to do so, but.... who knows.
Date: 31 Mar 2010 7:12 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
I think I have a really good idea as to where Edward went, and why he didn't want Bella finding out.
Bella knows it's risky to hang around the Cullens but she is lonely and in need of care and attention, and they are more than willing to provide her with it.
What will they think about this? And if it wasn't Edward, then who was at Charlie's?
[Report This]Date: 31 Mar 2010 6:58 PM Title: Leave me alone
Alice knows, and Bella felt relief by being able to tell someone about it. Even better if it was Alice.
Bella is still convinced Edward has no feelings for her, life has helped her believe it. Jacob, sadly, was a huge part of it. It's more than understandable, she wants to stay alone and away from heartache and pain.
Where did Edward go? How long? At least now Bella can go see the rest of the family. That has to be nice and fun.
Date: 24 Mar 2010 10:23 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
Really good update! Will be looking forward to the next update!
Date: 22 Mar 2010 1:45 PM Title: Leave me alone
Wow, really cool story. It's quite sad that it's been 7 years since she's seen Edward and her and Jake didn't work out but i hope they get together now :-) Hope you update some more soon!
Date: 01 Mar 2010 11:26 PM Title: Late for Class
It went down calmer than I expected.
I loved that Emmett is her student along with Jasper, or Bella would suffer thinking what might Emmett plan.
So Jacob imprinted and Bella was left alone. That had to be so tough...
And about that scholarship... if she only knew ;)