[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:28 AM Title: Leave me alone
great chapter
thanks
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2010 1:59 AM Title: Late for Class
sounds interesting
thanks
Date: 12 Dec 2010 3:14 AM Title: Timeslides
Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 11 Dec 2010 4:34 PM Title: Timeslides
Very cool talent, indeed. I love the say you changed it.
Date: 11 Dec 2010 11:07 AM Title: Back to Reality
Loved it amazing
Date: 11 Dec 2010 10:14 AM Title: Every move you make
Loved it awesome & epic
Date: 11 Dec 2010 2:17 AM Title: Timeslides
Hmmm I wonder if Bella will have control and where they will end up going??? I am sure it will upset Jake a lot that she won't be around.
I am curious to see how Bella's new talent pans out and if she can expand on it with some work :)
Date: 10 Dec 2010 10:53 PM Title: Timeslides
I think Bella's power is the coolest thing ever. Never heard someone giving her a power like this, its almost like Renesme's but she doesn't have to physically be touching someone and she can view the scene from a 3rd person perspective.
Date: 10 Dec 2010 7:16 PM Title: Timeslides
The memory thing is cool.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:41 PM Title: Back to Reality
Still have to ask, does Renee now think she's dead.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 9:09 PM Title: Every move you make
You are the "Mistress" of plot twists and changes. Damn.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 8:11 PM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
Visions, maybe from venom ingesting orally and internally. She said it was wonderful.
And it sounds like (though only suggested) she getting loads of it. ;-)
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:26 PM Title: Ultimate
I don't think anyone has gone back and written something about the 'THunderstrom game", good on you for finding your own voice about it.
Great new twist, BTW.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 4:49 PM Title: Consequences
MOFO, did she get a good look at him??????????
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:33 AM Title: Trouble
okay now this is a 'holy f' moment.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 6:18 AM Title: Numb
I don't see how she can function - losing her Dad and Edward (again) at the same time. I couldn't.
Date: 09 Dec 2010 5:53 AM Title: Broken
oh god no. Charlie is one of the really good guys.
Date: 08 Dec 2010 1:29 AM Title: Back to Reality
Yay I am excited I am all caught up. :)
I am loving vampire Bella and I am curious about her visions too. What do they mean? What type of Talent other than shield does she have?
Looking forward to exploring that and more Edward Bella time cuase whew that was hot :)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:49 PM Title: Every move you make
Wow okay so I take back my last review I don't feel bad for Cain anymore cause he went from sad to just plain crazy in one chapter! :)
I hope Edward gets there in time and man is he going to totally freak out! :)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:46 PM Title: Back to Reality
Hmmm the memory thing looks to be interesting.
Yummy forest time.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 11:38 PM Title: Back to School
Wow those flashbacks are kinda scary. I have to ask though I don't get the "miss" thing? What does that solve? Maybe I am just confused...
I feel bad for Cain I mean he is one messed up puppy with a messed up father figure. I felt bad for Edward too having to stand there and not be able to do much that had to kill him.
I am curious where they are going to go from here and how Edward will respond once he gets home and alone with Bella. :)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:45 PM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
Bella's dress sounded beautiful! Man I know I am many chapters behind and am looking forward to catching up :)
wedding night sex on a chair, I like it! :)
Date: 07 Dec 2010 8:18 PM Title: Difficult Conversations
Continues to be a really great story, doesn't lag or drag flows smoothly from one situation to the next and flies right along. Good consistancy and fluidity. Great writing. KimiD
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:55 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
Well we all know the "vampire" at charlie's was Edward, trying to figure some things out. How does Jake not know it's him? Dream sequence, of their honeymoon that did not take place... but all through the original stories she is always dreaming things before they happen, like a clue of things to come... soooo future events, maybe? Great writing love how you brought the dream it for her to ponder. KimiD
Author's Response:
I see you've caught up to date while I've been at work. Thanks for your reviews, they've made me smile. I just wanted to post on this one to say the reason Jake doesn't know it's him is the same reason Jake didn't know it was Alice in New Moon, he wasn't a wolf when the Cullens were around so he wouldn't know their distinct scents, and it's been so many years since the Cullens were in the picture (and in the meantime they've had two other vamps to deal with at least) that his mind wouldn't automatically link the two events.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 7:31 PM Title: Leave me alone
Progressing nicely very well written really like the base and the development.
Date: 07 Dec 2010 6:53 PM Title: Late for Class
I absolutely love this story already!!! You are taking it to the next level and I cannot wait to see where you are going with this. I have not seen this particular storyline before so in that it is original & unique. Should be fun...
KimiD
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2010 1:28 AM Title: Back to Reality
This chapter was so good. I love your description of the transformation and the flashbacks.
Date: 06 Dec 2010 5:04 PM Title: Back to Reality
Hmmmm, citrus.....
Date: 01 Dec 2010 11:28 AM Title: Cain
"I think if Jacob hadn't already imprinted, I am pretty sure he would have done so on Edward in that second. Then there was their love of speed and hunting, although Edward meant animals and Jacob meant vampires -- which was a little awkward."
Best line of the chapter!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 4:02 AM Title: Every move you make
AHHHHH, I hate cliffies...please update soon. I was scooting closer and closer to the edge of my chair and DENIED. It was an intense chapter...although I'm starting to wonder if Bella has some kind of bone deficiency, she breaks way too easily. :P j/j.
Thanks for sharing, hope to read from you soon!
Corina
[Report This]Date: 01 Dec 2010 2:36 AM Title: Every move you make
AFTER ALL THAT, YOU END IT HERE!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!? HOLY F*&*&** S*&*!!!!!!!!!
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:18 AM Title: Every move you make
Holy shit! You really DID make Bella the very epitome of magnet for danger! All sorts of crazies and monsters are attracted to our poor girl!
BTW, yet another masterful chapter! GREAT WORK
Date: 01 Dec 2010 12:15 AM Title: Every move you make
Needless to say, "Oh-oh, spaghetti-o!!" :-@
Date: 30 Nov 2010 10:49 PM Title: Every move you make
I was gonna ask how alice didnt see, but DUH Jake was there. Stupid boy Cain
Date: 30 Nov 2010 8:21 AM Title: Back to School
loved it amazing cant wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 30 Nov 2010 5:17 AM Title: Back to School
Aw - finally!! :-P I'm just sorry you didn't fit Nessie in somehow!! :-P
Date: 29 Nov 2010 3:26 AM Title: Broken
Ohh I love that cycle of Alice seeing the vision - but had Edward not said anything to her then it would have never happened.
Date: 29 Nov 2010 12:14 AM Title: Difficult Conversations
I always hated how Bella just welcomed Edward back with no questions after all he did to her. I'm glad you gave her more of a back bone :)
[Report This]Date: 28 Nov 2010 9:32 PM Title: Back to School
Wonderful, awesome story. Possibilities are endless with this story.
Date: 28 Nov 2010 4:11 PM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
Aw - even better here on TWCS 'cause you don't have to censor all that citrusy goodness!! :-P Bloody FanFiction!! :-@
Date: 28 Nov 2010 6:15 AM Title: Back to School
YAY!!! Ok, so logically I know that there will more than likely be a bit more drama to the story before it's end, but I really enjoy it! KEEP IT UP!
Date: 27 Nov 2010 9:18 AM Title: Back to School
Ok, so I totally sat and read every single chapter. I'm surprised I never found this story on FF. I followed a few others to this site after the drama. I really liked this story, I could so visualize the story line with the actual characters and see this happening. I hope that you update again soon, I am putting you on the fave list and subscribing to you. Thanks for sharing!
Corina
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:44 AM Title: Difficult Conversations
"silly teenage crush." is that what Edward is feeling? I don't think so but I don't blame Bella for not rushing back into his arms. It will be interesting to see how this pans out.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 7:05 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
Ooh could it have been Edward in Bella's old room? Cannot wait to find out who it was.
[Report This]Date: 27 Nov 2010 6:48 AM Title: Leave me alone
She seems not to mind that the rest of the Cullen's are back and has forgiven them. Interesting.
Date: 27 Nov 2010 5:59 AM Title: Back to School
ugh cain is defintely delusional
Date: 27 Nov 2010 4:45 AM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
Nice chapter. The consumation was sweet.
Date: 25 Nov 2010 1:07 AM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 24 Nov 2010 3:42 PM Title: Late for Class
This is an excellant beginning to your story. It is a different twist to New Moon.
It's really good!
[Report This]Date: 23 Nov 2010 4:05 AM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
Great story! Thanks for the update!
Date: 22 Nov 2010 11:07 PM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
woo hoo They're married.
Date: 22 Nov 2010 2:20 PM Title: Investigations
Hmm...interesting stuff going on. Can't wait for an update.
Date: 11 Oct 2010 3:26 PM Title: Investigations
wow! talk about being intense! i cant wait for more! please try to hurry!!
Date: 10 Oct 2010 8:36 PM Title: Investigations
Are you writing new material for this or just transferring over from FFN? Seems like this took ages just to copy...?! :-S
Date: 10 Oct 2010 6:12 AM Title: Investigations
Loved it amazing can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 10 Oct 2010 5:57 AM Title: Investigations
Oh, wow....I'm speechless. How sad.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 4:36 AM Title: Audi
It just got interesting! Nah, not really....it's been interesting. I'm really enjoying this story.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 2:52 AM Title: Investigations
I am glad that Edward got to feel what he did to Bella in the woods, he deserves to understand fully the impact it had. :) I'm a big meanie I know this :) hehe
So what's going on with Bella's head and how can Edward see and feel the visions I am curious to see what it is all from and what does it mean for the future :)
Date: 10 Oct 2010 1:21 AM Title: Investigations
YAY UPDATE!!! I have missed this story. Keep up the great work.
Date: 10 Oct 2010 12:59 AM Title: Trouble
Oh no! I knew as soon as she threw them in the backseat that it wasn't going to be good.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 11:46 PM Title: Broken
NO!!! Charlie can't die! Oh no, how sad!
Date: 09 Oct 2010 9:06 PM Title: Difficult Conversations
Man, that's got to suck! To be without him for so long and then have the chance to have him again and then it be forbidden. It just rips my heart out.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 8:01 PM Title: Leave me alone
Now where is all the other students while she's having these conversations in the parking lot with her "students" and they're getting into her car. I guess she covered that base when she let them know she knew them.
Date: 09 Oct 2010 7:21 PM Title: Late for Class
What are the rumors of Dr. Cullen?
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 7:28 PM Title: Cain
She should have let someone kill the slug...
[Report This]Date: 23 Aug 2010 5:12 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
Haven't read any vamp fiction lately. This is really good! Can't wait to keep going.
Date: 15 Aug 2010 4:02 PM Title: Ultimate
Really good story. Can't wait for more.
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:31 AM Title: Ultimate
Ohhhh so I am all caught up now which is probably a good thing since it's almost 2am I have to to work tomorrow :) So glad I found you story though cause it has been great!
I am really looking forward to finding out how edward could hear bella and what does that mean. :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 8:04 AM Title: Audi
Yay! baseball. I love how Jake is just fitting in with no worry of a love triangle it's such a nice change and it just makes me smile :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:49 AM Title: Cain
Bella's face doesn't sound good. I keep thinking that Bella just thinks they are going to be together and I worry something will happen. I am also curious when will they decide to do her change :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:30 AM Title: Conciousness
I am so glad Bella and Jake are friends again and Jake is being really cool abou hte whole thing. I hope that kick that nasty guys ass :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:14 AM Title: Consequences
Wow some people are just sick to beat up someone like that. when Edward finds out he's gonna freak out. whew this is going to get good :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 7:05 AM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
hehe drunk Bella you have to love it. I love that they all went out to dinner and it will be interesting what they end up telling bella about her job :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:43 AM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
yay! I am so gald Bella is giving in and realized she wants to be turned again! I know things are going to get messy before they get better but I am looking forward to see how you do it :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 6:02 AM Title: Trouble
Uh oh... that's not good. what is the principle going to say??? and June man I kinda want to smack her for being so nosey :)
I'm glad Jake apologized and they can be friends again. And hopefully Bella will realize she needs to be with Edward! :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:45 AM Title: Numb
Oh damn you are getting me all sappy and I hate being sappy. My cold heart just wants to break for Edward. He is just so broken about it but yet being so brave. And Bella well she's just a big mess but I feel bad for her too.
I wonder how things are going to go when they get back to their life. I have a feeling not as either expected :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:10 AM Title: Broken
Oh no!!!!!! I LOVE Charlie and he died! :( I wonder how this is going to affect Bella and Edward and how she is going to beat herself up. Okay reading on :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 5:00 AM Title: Dreaming
Awww that was so cute how Edward just lit up when he realized Bella still loved him. So sweet..... :)
Really enjoying the pace and how things are moving. It was so warm and fuzzy to know that Alice and Edward are becoming close again they are just meant to be brother and sister :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 4:36 AM Title: Difficult Conversations
Uh oh small towns are the worst they are going to have to be careful. Looking forward to seeing how dinner goes down. :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 4:13 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
Uh oh what was Edward getting out of her room??? And I love how Bella treats Jacob it just makes me smile even if that is mean :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:48 AM Title: Leave me alone
Oh I wonder where Edward went. I feel bad for Bella to get hit with Edward right after the whole Jake mess is rough. I wonder how long it's going to be before Edward owns up to the fact he was lying. but I am glad to see Bella and Alice friends again :)
Date: 04 Aug 2010 3:09 AM Title: Late for Class
Hi, so glad I stumbled on your story. Really enjoyed chapter one and am looking forward to reading more :)
Date: 26 Jul 2010 7:25 AM Title: Ultimate
OME epic loved it can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:48 PM Title: Conciousness
Loved it
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:34 PM Title: Consequences
OME day sick fuck..who beats a person up like that but loved the chapter
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:23 PM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
Loved it awesome
Date: 25 Jul 2010 4:02 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
Loved it
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:32 PM Title: Trouble
OME epic loved it
Date: 25 Jul 2010 3:13 PM Title: Numb
Loved it but so sad
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:43 PM Title: Broken
OME poor Bella can't believe Charlie is goneso sad but loved the chapter
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:34 PM Title: Dreaming
Awesome loved it
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:20 PM Title: Difficult Conversations
Loved it
Date: 25 Jul 2010 2:03 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
Loved it
Date: 25 Jul 2010 1:42 PM Title: Leave me alone
Awesome loved it