Date: 16 Jan 2015 9:14 PM Title: Epilogue
awesome story even reading it a second time around ;) i'm not sure what parts are added on this site though? i really hope you will finish the epov companion to this story asap it's only on chapter 8 and i really want to read that again also ;D
Date: 16 Sep 2014 2:24 AM Title: Epilogue
It took a lot of pain to get there but we all got a wonderful happy ever after! I love Bella and Edward love stories!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 1:51 AM Title: Helping Hand
Both Jake and Edward sort of think Bella is too easy on Cain, but that is just how she is, kind and selfless and concerned for others!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 1:36 AM Title: Asylum
That was really tough for Bella, good thing she had Edward's help! It's scary to tink if not for ber gift, Edward and Alice might never have been turned, to become Cullens! I guess stuff really does happen for a reason and when it's supposed to!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 1:23 AM Title: Biloxi
My heart breaks for Mary Alice Brandon, and the horror she experienced! Bella has all this guilt, but I think she may have been what ultimately saved Alice!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:57 AM Title: Ghost
That was scary, to the max! This gift/talent of her's seems to be growing exponentially and doing amazing things!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:32 AM Title: Shield you from pain
My lord, Bella is, in effect, a time traveler with the ability to affect what she sees! That is the coolest gift any vampire has ever had!
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:16 AM Title: Experimentation
I really don't blame Edward for being amazed by his wife! This is going so well, it's nearly unbelievable! Of course I'm not surprised that Bella is concerned about Cain.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 11:48 PM Title: Timeslides
What really unique talent! Trust Bella to have one nobody has ever had before!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 10:24 PM Title: Back to Reality
What a blessing to avoid the fires of transformation and to relive so many wonderful memories! I figure she deserves it after all the pain Bella has suffered recently! This is great!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:37 PM Title: Every move you make
When in the hell is this woman going to get a break? Besides the bones in her poor, battered body, that is! Thank God, Jacob is hard to kill! Now if Edward can just make it in time!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:26 PM Title: Back to School
Too bad it had to take such agony to pull off, but perhaps it's best this happened the way it did. I kind of wondered when the boy came to the hospital, but didn't think it was him that started the trouble!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:45 PM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
Bella's dress sounds beautiful and their vows might be short and sweet, but are very moving! I loved that Carlisle married them, too. It was kind of sweet that Jacob gave her into Edward's keeping. Ireally like that he and Edward and the rest of the family are growing closer.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 10:44 AM Title: Investigations
I'm crossing my fingers that this sharing flashbacks with Edward isn't caused by a medical condition!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 10:29 AM Title: Ultimate
The game sounded like fun, especially after Jake started phasing. I wasn't too funny when Emmett accidentally broke Jacob's leg, though. The amazing part was Edward hearing Bella's flashback!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 10:10 AM Title: Audi
Sure, like the last baseball game was such a roaring success! It is amazing though that Jake has changed his attitude towards the Cullens so radically!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:59 AM Title: Cain
I'm willing to bet she is thrilled to be out of the hospital and home with Edward!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:41 AM Title: Conciousness
How very thoughtful of Edward to ask Jake to come be with Bella, and how nice that he did! Now, if they can just find the bastard that nearly killed her!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:30 AM Title: Consequences
That was horrible! Poor Bella, she'll be lucky to make it to the hospital from what that son-of-a-bitch did to her!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:22 AM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
So far the whole family is putting up a good front, I just hope it's enough to take the heat off the situation!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:09 AM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
Hell yes! If you have the name, you might as well have the game! They lost seven years, that's a whole lot of catching up to do!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:50 AM Title: Trouble
I was afraid this would happen when she threw those pictures into the back seat!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:37 AM Title: Numb
This is miserable for all concerned! Thank heaven she had Edward to support her and Renee to take care of the details! I feel so sorry for Bella, and yes, Edward also!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:16 AM Title: Broken
Now the guilt will work on her like poison! She's really going to need Edward now and that isn't going to be easy! Poor Charlie, what a tragedy!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:07 AM Title: Dreaming
Pretty hard to deny what you know to be true! It's going to be interesting to see where this is headed!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:57 AM Title: Difficult Conversations
They really are going to have to be so careful not to give away the fact they care for each other! I am real glad he told her the truth though, even if she's not quite ready to do anything about it.
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:43 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
Poor girl, trying to convince herself that she no longer had feelings for Edward! She really needs to stop kidding herself! Thquestion now, is who was at Charlie's?
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:28 AM Title: Leave me alone
Hopefully the truth is going to come out one of these days! Bella will be glad to see the Cullens, except maybe for Rose!
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:13 AM Title: Late for Class
Well, life didn't happen for Bella the way Edward intended it should. Wonder how that makes him fee?
Date: 22 Mar 2014 9:20 AM Title: Epilogue
Fantastic story on fanfiction that I had to read it again on writers coffee shop once I saw it. Still as awesome tbe second time around.
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:15 PM Title: Epilogue
Very lemony lol but the plot beyond that was interesting
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Late for Class
Awesome start.
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:27 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
they are always so hot together
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:19 PM Title: Trouble
well you won't have your job soon... one obstacle out of the way
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:12 PM Title: Numb
okay so they are breaking up again? i am a little confused...
Date: 05 Jan 2012 8:38 PM Title: Broken
okay that just sucks she sent jake to help and it caused his heart attack? that just sucks
Date: 05 Jan 2012 8:35 PM Title: Dreaming
well you know bella it's not going to be easy... i have a feeling..
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:07 PM Title: Difficult Conversations
oh ed you just want to jump right back in.. you can be an ass sometimes too.. but i always love you!! not jacob
Date: 05 Jan 2012 6:56 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
jacob you are an ass! sorry i never can stand him!! i suppose it was ed that was at charlie's getting that stuff he hid in the floor.
Date: 05 Jan 2012 6:48 PM Title: Leave me alone
wow, that has to just suck...to have them the same and you are the teacher... love it so far!
Date: 05 Jan 2012 6:41 PM Title: Late for Class
oh boy that must have been a shocker!! wow!!! can't wait to read more
Date: 30 Nov 2011 4:53 AM Title: Epilogue
I'm sorry I didn't realize this was done. I think you took it off Twilighted? Any way I was going through my list of stories and this was not marked off as finished, I checked, and found you, (not stalking by the way) and read the rest. I love this story, such a great imagination and d different twist. I loved it. Thanks again.
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:06 AM Title: Epilogue
Thank you for finishing the story it was great! Looking forward to your next one.
Date: 24 Nov 2011 2:44 PM Title: Epilogue
Great story. Thanks for writing
Date: 23 Nov 2011 3:19 AM Title: Epilogue
great ending.
Thanks for letting us know how everyone got on
Thank you for writing and sharing.
Date: 23 Nov 2011 2:59 AM Title: Helping Hand
she is so sweet.
Check formatting hun. One big paragraphs.
Date: 23 Nov 2011 2:44 AM Title: Asylum
wow rough for Bella having to live with this stuff.
Date: 23 Nov 2011 12:25 AM Title: Epilogue
Heh-heh!! Had to LOL at parts of this!! :-P
Date: 12 Jul 2011 8:49 PM Title: Biloxi
Oh man, poor Alice.... I can't believe her Mom and the rest of the family did that. I hope Alice never finds out about it I can't imagine what it would do to her....
I wonder what all this flashing is doing to Bella and will she change something she wasn't maybe supposed to? :)
Date: 23 May 2011 6:54 PM Title: Biloxi
OhNo I got to the end. Can't wait to read more. This is such an awsome story!
Date: 23 May 2011 6:25 PM Title: Ghost
I really like her power it is so different.
Date: 22 May 2011 7:44 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
I have forgotten who the visitor was the mystery is great.
Date: 22 May 2011 7:13 PM Title: Leave me alone
Yea she gets to see the rest of the family;)
Date: 22 May 2011 6:48 PM Title: Late for Class
I'm glad your putting in all the outtakes in this version. I 'm excited to read this again;)
Date: 21 May 2011 7:34 PM Title: Biloxi
wow glad she took the memories now.
Date: 21 May 2011 12:18 PM Title: Biloxi
Bella's 'gift' to Alice seems surely a blessing. As painful as it is for Bella to see now, it was not HER father doing these things to HER. Who knows what damage these memories would have done to Alice, able to remember decade after long decade.
Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:38 AM Title: Ghost
Wow I wonder what that extended vision was? And if that will continue. I am glad to see Edward came back and am curious to see what Bella can do to help Alice.
I thought it was totally cool how Bella was the one that planted the seed in Edward's Mom's head to save Edward any way Carlisle could :)))
Date: 05 Apr 2011 3:32 AM Title: Audi
sounds like a fun game - vamps vs wolves!
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:52 PM Title: Shield you from pain
wow I really like the cool spin you put on Bella's talent. I love how she can recall others memories and how did she remove those? How did she manage that all those years ago? Will she look at everyone elses??? and Edward was her singer too??? I kinda like the idea of how you are each others but really one has to be a vamp and the other a human so you would never really know that.... cool :)
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:33 PM Title: Experimentation
Wow so Bella pasted the test I can't wait until she can go see Cain... And I love how she's playing the piano.
I like how she's only pulling hte memories of bad times up when Edward isn't around and I kinda thought how after having a rough day like she did remembering all that stuff and then still resisting the blood was a really good sign :)
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:29 PM Title: Shield you from pain
Incredibly well written, fabulous concept. I shall be most eager to see what comes of Edward's conversation with Carlisle.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:35 PM Title: Shield you from pain
Quite the gift Bella has.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:34 AM Title: Shield you from pain
Wow, other than some grammaratical issues, and some structural misses,
I'm floored...Execellent Story
One of my favorites, actually it's a stand alone work of art.
My only wish is that it hadn't ended, I'm left longing for more
Thanks
3D
Date: 05 Mar 2011 9:15 AM Title: Shield you from pain
wow intersting power.
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:08 AM Title: Leave me alone
Really nice work on this chapter!!!
I know I had few critical things to say last time, but I'm loving this one.
YOu did an excellent job on the angst, and I really love your work on the conversations.
I almost cried a few times, and chuckled at those funny times
I'm liking it!
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:55 AM Title: Late for Class
I'd like to start by saying that I really like the concept of this story.
It's direction seems very interesting.
I'd also like to draw your attention, I hope I'm not offending you, but...
Too many of the same words are used close to each other.
If you'd like I could point them out, and a few sentences need to be reworded, as window is used twice in the same sentence.
With just a little shuffling, the sentence could be a work of art..just a little nudge and only one use of window.
I'll keep reading and will review as I go.
Keep in mind I have no idea how long this story has been out...
Once again, lovely direction
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:16 AM Title: Consequences
Being malicious is one thing. This was beyond believable.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 10:22 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
Really like the story. The only thing that disappoints me is that she married Jake so Edward isn't her first.
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:55 PM Title: Trouble
So if she loses her job she can move on with Edward, right?
Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:06 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
Interesting to say the least. Was it Edward at Charlie's or the Volturi?
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:52 PM Title: Leave me alone
Did he leave for the same reason as in NM?
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:38 PM Title: Late for Class
Did Edward not know the others were at the school?
Date: 19 Feb 2011 12:36 PM Title: Experimentation
Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:38 PM Title: Experimentation
absolutely loved it. i started reading this story last night, I'm finally up to date with it now. i have to say that this is one of the best -- in the place of new moon -- stories i have ever read. the amount of detail you put into it and the emotions you show are incredible. i love the twist in bella's talent/power to the original one. i love how Edward and bellas relationship progressed in it, a tonne better then 'seducing miss swan' although that story was good to. I'm just amazed at your talent for writing, i think it is simply amazing and i will defiantly have to check out you other teacher/student story? love this story. it's amazing! x x
Date: 12 Feb 2011 4:43 PM Title: Experimentation
W.O.O.T!! Go VampElla!! :-P
Date: 12 Feb 2011 6:58 AM Title: Experimentation
wow cant believe jake pushing her for a kid when he imprinted and would end up leaving her eventually
Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:54 PM Title: Timeslides
this was by far one of my most favorite stories I've read to date. and i have read ALOT of them Fantastic writing. Love Edward and Bella and how you brought Jake into it. Hope this isnt the end look forward to the next chapter in my in box.
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:37 AM Title: Timeslides
awesome = love it
glad Im caught up witht he story
thanks
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:18 AM Title: Back to Reality
perfect loved it
thanks
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:41 AM Title: Every move you make
wow - excellent chapter
love it
thanks
Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:07 AM Title: Back to School
excellent chapter
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:57 PM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word
perfect
;loved it
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:11 PM Title: Investigations
excellent
love it
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:19 AM Title: Conciousness
great
loving it
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:08 AM Title: Consequences
wow poor bella
great chapter
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:00 AM Title: Dinner with the Cullens
great chapter
loving it
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:30 AM Title: Allegations & Transgressions
great chapter
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Trouble
oh no
love it
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:07 AM Title: Difficult Conversations
love it
thanks
Date: 15 Dec 2010 4:07 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces
great chapter
thanks