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Reviewer: twirob13 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Jan 2015 9:14 PM Title: Epilogue

awesome story even reading it a second time around ;) i'm not sure what parts are added on this site though? i really hope you will finish the epov companion to this story asap it's only on chapter 8 and i really want to read that again also ;D 

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 2:24 AM Title: Epilogue

It took a lot of pain to get there but we all got a wonderful happy ever after! I love Bella and Edward love stories!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 1:51 AM Title: Helping Hand

Both Jake and Edward sort of think Bella is too easy on Cain, but that is just how she is, kind and selfless and concerned for others!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 1:36 AM Title: Asylum

That was really tough for Bella, good thing she had Edward's help! It's scary to tink if not for ber gift, Edward and Alice might never have been turned, to become Cullens! I guess stuff really does happen for a reason and when it's supposed to!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 1:23 AM Title: Biloxi

My heart breaks for Mary Alice Brandon, and the horror she experienced! Bella has all this guilt, but I think she may have been what ultimately saved Alice!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:57 AM Title: Ghost

That was scary, to the max! This gift/talent of her's seems to be growing exponentially and doing amazing things!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:32 AM Title: Shield you from pain

My lord, Bella is, in effect, a time traveler with the ability to affect what she sees! That is the coolest gift any vampire has ever had!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Sep 2014 12:16 AM Title: Experimentation

I really don't blame Edward for being amazed by his wife! This is going so well, it's nearly unbelievable! Of course I'm not surprised that Bella is concerned about Cain.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 11:48 PM Title: Timeslides

What really unique talent! Trust Bella to have one nobody has ever had before!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 10:24 PM Title: Back to Reality

What a blessing to avoid the fires of transformation and to relive so many wonderful memories!  I figure she deserves it after all the pain Bella has suffered recently! This is great!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:37 PM Title: Every move you make

When in the hell is this woman going to get a break? Besides the bones in her poor, battered body, that is! Thank God, Jacob is hard to kill! Now if Edward can just make it in time!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:26 PM Title: Back to School

Too bad it had to take such agony to pull off, but perhaps it's best this happened the way it did. I kind of wondered  when the boy came to the hospital, but didn't think it was him that started the trouble!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:45 PM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word

Bella's dress sounds beautiful and their vows might be short and sweet, but are very moving! I loved that Carlisle married them, too. It was kind of sweet that Jacob gave her into Edward's keeping. Ireally like that he and Edward and the rest of the family are growing closer.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 10:44 AM Title: Investigations

I'm crossing my fingers that this sharing flashbacks with Edward isn't caused by a medical condition!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 10:29 AM Title: Ultimate

The game sounded like fun, especially after Jake started phasing. I wasn't too funny when Emmett accidentally broke Jacob's leg, though.  The amazing part was Edward hearing Bella's flashback!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 10:10 AM Title: Audi

Sure, like the last baseball game was such a roaring success! It is amazing though that Jake has changed his attitude towards the Cullens so radically!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:59 AM Title: Cain

I'm willing to bet she is thrilled to be out of the hospital and home with Edward!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:41 AM Title: Conciousness

How very thoughtful of Edward to ask Jake to come be with Bella, and how nice that he did! Now, if they can just find the bastard  that nearly killed her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:30 AM Title: Consequences

That was horrible! Poor Bella, she'll be lucky to make it to the hospital from what that son-of-a-bitch did to her!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:22 AM Title: Dinner with the Cullens

So far the whole family is putting up a good front, I just hope it's enough to take the heat off the situation!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 9:09 AM Title: Allegations & Transgressions

Hell yes! If you have the name, you might as well have the game! They lost seven years, that's a whole lot of catching up to do!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:50 AM Title: Trouble

I was afraid this would happen when she threw those pictures into the back seat!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:37 AM Title: Numb

This is miserable for all concerned! Thank heaven she had Edward to support her and Renee to take care of the details! I feel so sorry for Bella, and yes, Edward also!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:16 AM Title: Broken

Now the guilt will work on her like poison! She's really going to need Edward now and that isn't going to be easy! Poor Charlie, what a tragedy!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 8:07 AM Title: Dreaming

Pretty hard to deny what you know to be true! It's going to be interesting to see where this is headed!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:57 AM Title: Difficult Conversations

They really are going to have to be so careful not to give away the fact they care for each other! I am real glad he told her the truth though, even if she's not quite ready to do anything about it.

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:43 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces

Poor girl, trying to convince herself that she no longer had feelings for Edward! She really needs to stop kidding herself! Thquestion now, is who was at Charlie's?

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:28 AM Title: Leave me alone

Hopefully the truth is going to come out one of these days! Bella will be glad to see the Cullens, except maybe for Rose!

Reviewer: k1942 Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Sep 2014 7:13 AM Title: Late for Class

Well, life didn't happen for Bella the way Edward intended it should. Wonder how that makes him fee?

Reviewer: sofakingloopy Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Mar 2014 9:20 AM Title: Epilogue

Fantastic story on fanfiction that I had to read it again on writers coffee shop once I saw it. Still as awesome tbe second time around.

Reviewer: Geminiroyalty Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jun 2012 7:15 PM Title: Epilogue

Very lemony lol but the plot beyond that was interesting

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jun 2012 12:04 PM Title: Trouble

Great twist!

Reviewer: mselyn28 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2012 12:56 AM Title: Late for Class

Awesome start.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:27 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions

they are always so hot together

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:19 PM Title: Trouble

well you won't have your job soon... one obstacle out of the way

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jan 2012 2:12 PM Title: Numb

okay so they are breaking up again?  i am a little confused...

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 8:38 PM Title: Broken

okay that just sucks she sent jake to help and it caused his heart attack?  that just sucks

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 8:35 PM Title: Dreaming

well you know bella it's not going to be easy... i have a feeling..

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 7:07 PM Title: Difficult Conversations

oh ed you just want to jump right back in.. you can be an ass sometimes too.. but i always love you!! not jacob

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 6:56 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces

jacob you are an ass!  sorry i never can stand him!!  i suppose it was ed that was at charlie's getting that stuff he hid in the floor.

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 6:48 PM Title: Leave me alone

wow, that has to just suck...to have them the same and you are the teacher... love it so far!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jan 2012 6:41 PM Title: Late for Class

oh boy that must have been a shocker!! wow!!!  can't wait to read more

Reviewer: edlovesme Signed [Report This]
Date: 30 Nov 2011 4:53 AM Title: Epilogue

I'm sorry I didn't realize this was done. I think you took it off Twilighted? Any way I was going through my list of stories and this was not marked off as finished, I checked, and found you, (not stalking by the way) and read the rest. I love this story, such a great imagination and d different twist. I loved it. Thanks again.

Reviewer: sapho99 Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Nov 2011 7:06 AM Title: Epilogue

Thank you for finishing the story it was great! Looking forward to your next one.

Reviewer: dwright Signed [Report This]
Date: 24 Nov 2011 2:44 PM Title: Epilogue

Great story. Thanks for writing

Reviewer: vicki219 Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 5:42 PM Title: Epilogue

Wicked story!!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 3:19 AM Title: Epilogue

great ending.

 

Thanks for letting us know how everyone got on

Thank you for writing and sharing.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 2:59 AM Title: Helping Hand

she is so sweet.

 

Check formatting hun.  One big paragraphs.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 2:44 AM Title: Asylum

wow  rough for Bella having to live with this stuff.

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Nov 2011 12:25 AM Title: Epilogue

Heh-heh!! Had to LOL at parts of this!! :-P

Reviewer: Nicoconsd Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Jul 2011 8:49 PM Title: Biloxi

Oh man, poor Alice....  I can't believe her Mom and the rest of the family did that.  I hope Alice never finds out about it I can't imagine what it would do to her....

I wonder what all this flashing is doing to Bella and will she change something she wasn't maybe supposed to? :)

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 6:54 PM Title: Biloxi

OhNo I got to the end.  Can't wait to read more.  This is such an awsome story!

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 May 2011 6:25 PM Title: Ghost

I really like her power it is so different.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 7:44 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces

I have forgotten who the visitor was the mystery is great.

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 7:13 PM Title: Leave me alone

Yea she gets to see the rest of the family;)

Reviewer: HappyEndingLover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 May 2011 6:48 PM Title: Late for Class

I'm glad your putting in all the outtakes in this version.  I 'm excited to read this again;)

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 7:38 PM Title: Biloxi

How incredibly sad .

 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 7:34 PM Title: Biloxi

wow   glad she took the memories now.

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 May 2011 12:18 PM Title: Biloxi

Bella's 'gift' to Alice seems surely a blessing. As painful as it is for Bella to see now, it was not HER father doing these things to HER. Who knows what damage these memories would have done to Alice, able to remember decade after long decade.

Reviewer: Nicoconsd Signed [Report This]
Date: 17 Apr 2011 6:38 AM Title: Ghost

Wow I wonder what that extended vision was?  And if that will continue.  I am glad to see Edward came back and am curious to see what Bella can do to help Alice.  

I thought it was totally cool how Bella was the one that planted the seed in Edward's Mom's head to save Edward any way Carlisle could :)))

Reviewer: BellaRoseBelikov Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Apr 2011 3:32 AM Title: Audi

sounds like a fun game - vamps vs wolves!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 27 Mar 2011 5:47 AM Title: Ghost

poor confused b

Reviewer: Nicoconsd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:52 PM Title: Shield you from pain

wow I really like the cool spin you put on Bella's talent.  I love how she can recall others memories and how did she remove those?  How did she manage that all those years ago?  Will she look at everyone elses???  and Edward was her singer too???  I kinda like the idea of how you are each others but really one has to be a vamp and the other a human so you would never really know that....  cool :)

Reviewer: Nicoconsd Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Mar 2011 8:33 PM Title: Experimentation

Wow so Bella pasted the test I can't wait until she can go see Cain...  And I love how she's playing the piano.  

I like how she's only pulling hte memories of bad times up when Edward isn't around and I kinda thought how after having a rough day like she did remembering all that stuff and then still resisting the blood was a really good sign :)

Reviewer: twilightmenrhot Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:29 PM Title: Shield you from pain

Incredibly well written, fabulous concept. I shall be most eager to see what comes of Edward's conversation with Carlisle.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 1:35 PM Title: Shield you from pain

Quite the gift Bella has.

Reviewer: 3D_Dreamer Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 10:34 AM Title: Shield you from pain

Wow, other than some grammaratical issues, and some structural misses,

I'm floored...Execellent Story

 

One of my favorites, actually it's a stand alone work of art.

My only wish is that it hadn't ended, I'm left longing for more

Thanks

3D

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 9:15 AM Title: Shield you from pain

wow  intersting power.

Reviewer: 3D_Dreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 3:08 AM Title: Leave me alone

Really nice work on this chapter!!!

I know I had few critical things to say last time, but I'm loving this one.

YOu did an excellent job on the angst, and I really love your work on the conversations.

I almost cried a few times, and chuckled at those funny times

I'm liking it!

Reviewer: 3D_Dreamer Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Mar 2011 2:55 AM Title: Late for Class

I'd like to start by saying that I really like the concept of this story.

It's direction seems very interesting.

I'd also like to draw your attention, I hope I'm not offending you, but...

Too many of the same words are used close to each other.

If you'd like I could point them out, and a few sentences need to be reworded, as window is used twice in the same sentence.

With just a little shuffling, the sentence could be a work of art..just a little nudge and only one use of window.

I'll keep reading and will review as I go.

Keep in mind I have no idea how long this story has been out...

Once again, lovely direction

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 26 Feb 2011 1:16 AM Title: Consequences

Being malicious is one thing. This was beyond believable.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 10:22 PM Title: Allegations & Transgressions

Really like the story. The only thing that disappoints me is that she married Jake so Edward isn't her first.

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 9:55 PM Title: Trouble

So if she loses her job she can move on with Edward, right?

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 5:06 PM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces

Interesting to say the least. Was it Edward at Charlie's or the Volturi?

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:52 PM Title: Leave me alone

Did he leave for the same reason as in NM?

Reviewer: janm Signed [Report This]
Date: 25 Feb 2011 4:38 PM Title: Late for Class

Did Edward not know the others were at the school?

Reviewer: twilightmecrazii Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Feb 2011 12:36 PM Title: Experimentation

Loved it awesome can't wait for the nxt chapter

Reviewer: ImYours1901 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 14 Feb 2011 5:38 PM Title: Experimentation

absolutely loved it. i started reading this story last night, I'm finally up to date with it now. i have to say that this is one of the best -- in the place of new moon -- stories i have ever read. the amount of detail you put into it and the emotions you show are incredible. i love the twist in bella's talent/power to the original one. i love how Edward and bellas relationship progressed in it, a tonne better then 'seducing miss swan' although that story was good to. I'm just amazed at your talent for writing, i think it is simply amazing and i will defiantly have to check out you other teacher/student story? love this story. it's amazing! x x

Reviewer: Noble Korhedron Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2011 4:43 PM Title: Experimentation

W.O.O.T!! Go VampElla!! :-P

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Feb 2011 6:58 AM Title: Experimentation

wow   cant believe jake pushing her for a kid when he imprinted and would end up leaving her eventually

Reviewer: luelue1968 Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jan 2011 7:54 PM Title: Timeslides

this was by far one of my most favorite stories I've read to date. and i have read ALOT of them  Fantastic writing. Love Edward and Bella and how you brought Jake into it.  Hope this isnt the end look forward to the next chapter in my in box.

Reviewer: parkesy23 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:37 AM Title: Timeslides

awesome = love it

glad Im caught up witht he story

thanks

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 2:18 AM Title: Back to Reality

perfect loved it

thanks

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:41 AM Title: Every move you make

wow - excellent chapter

love it

thanks

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Date: 16 Dec 2010 1:07 AM Title: Back to School

excellent chapter

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:57 PM Title: Matrimony isn't a dirty word

perfect

;loved it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 2:11 PM Title: Investigations

excellent

love it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 1:48 PM Title: Ultimate

love it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 12:20 PM Title: Audi

loving it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 11:57 AM Title: Cain

loving it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:19 AM Title: Conciousness

great

loving it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:08 AM Title: Consequences

wow poor bella

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 10:00 AM Title: Dinner with the Cullens

great chapter

loving it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 9:30 AM Title: Allegations & Transgressions

great chapter

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:32 AM Title: Trouble

oh no

love it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 6:13 AM Title: Numb

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:39 AM Title: Broken

poor bella

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:32 AM Title: Dreaming

love it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 5:07 AM Title: Difficult Conversations

love it

thanks

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Date: 15 Dec 2010 4:07 AM Title: Old Friends & Familiar Faces

great chapter

thanks

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