Date: 30 Dec 2013 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm sorry to see this coming to an end. It is a beautiful story.
I loved the Rose Ceremony, very tender and meaningful.
Happy New Year to you and yours. I hope 2014 brings more of your talent our way. :)
Date: 30 Dec 2013 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 24
Guys. That was a perfect wrap up.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 24
I loved this chapter
Can't wait for the next up date
Date: 30 Dec 2013 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 24
Thank you for a wonderful story!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter: One
bellacan dance
Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:40 AM Title: Chapter 24
bravo bravo I loved it !
Date: 30 Dec 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 24
So much has happened so much closer some good some bad but Charlie is just bad and is in the place he needs to be.. I love the family that Edward and Bella have created sad it is almost over.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:59 AM Title: Chapter 24
I must say, BRAVO! Well done ladies! Well done! Loved the entire chapter!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 5:13 AM Title: Chapter 24
I loved it, I can wait for the epilogue!!!!!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
Love how Bella told off those women! Can't they do anything to Renee since she just basically admitted that she was trying to kill Bella???
Date: 30 Dec 2013 3:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
A very well written story. I believe this is one of the first stories I've read that hasn't left me with unanswered questions. Each situation that was faced had a solid completion to it.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm so happy they got their happily ever after. They both deserved it. I sort of want Seth to follow Edward and become a Dom. That would be interesting. As always, great update.
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 24
wow who would have guessed all this from a dare to bella
she is the one that won out in the end
an awesome family, belonging and alot of love
a wonderful man and husband and dominant
love it
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 24
Gosh I am sad to see this story is coming to an end. I really liked this chapter a lot. Especially the Ceremony of the Roses. When you hear about BDSM, you automatically picture something demeaning and brutal. Although I'm not into it, this story has really changed that picture. I'm glad you kept Sue in Seth's life. One of my most favorite thing that you guys have done in this story is totally changed up the characters. By that I mean making the usual bad people the good people and vice versa. Ex: James, Victoria, Aro, Jane, Alec are good. Charlie, Renee bad. You just gotta have some variety. That's what makes a great story. But guys already knew that. Can't wait for the next chapter.
Happy New Year you guys! Maria
Date: 30 Dec 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 24
I'm happy all worked out! :) I'm going to miss them!
Date: 30 Dec 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 24
great chapter loved it
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 24
Loved the chapter looking forward to the epi
Date: 29 Dec 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 24
I cried during the ceremony. That was beautifully written. I loved this chapter. I can't believe how stupid(nicest thing I could say) Renee is. Glad everyone that deserves it is getting their HEA.
Date: 29 Dec 2013 9:45 PM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter! Sad that this story is nearing the end.
Date: 27 Dec 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 23
This story and all the others are amazing as always.
Date: 27 Dec 2013 3:32 AM Title: Chapter: One
hi - happy holidays. will the stories for facebook only post on facebook or somewhere else as well. i am not sure what secluded wings is.
thanks and take care.
tff
Author's Response:
Secluded Wings is a group name on Facebook. https://www.facebook.com/groups/607198782650330/ At this time it will only post there, however when it is completely done and edited, we may actually add it to our accounts here, ffn and fictionpad. It will post there as a drabble and on the fan fic sites as a completed story all at once.
Date: 26 Dec 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 23
This was a great chapter. A lot of things happened, but it was all good.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 26 Dec 2013 1:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it!!!!!! Update Sooon!!!!!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 24 Dec 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 24 Dec 2013 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wow this is one of my Favorite stories I hate to see it end. but I am looking forward to the next story have a wonderful holiday
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 24 Dec 2013 5:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
I wish you both the happiest of holidays and I thank you both so very much for one of the most heart-tugging stories I've read in a long time. I hate to think of it being almost done, but I guarantee I will read it many more times!
Catherine
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 24 Dec 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 23
been a great story, Meery Christmas to you and yours
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 11:54 PM Title: Chapter 23
I love this storry I only descovered it a week or so ago, but I'll be sad to see it end.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 11:32 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awww their happiness is coming together, I love it!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 6:33 PM Title: Chapter 23
Awwww that was so sweet!!!
HAAAAAAAAAAAAA a check endorsed by Minni Mouse how stupidly perfect that Renee never once examined the check. Also I can hardly believe that she had the never to not only go back to the hotel she was staying at with Elisare but to still be there when long enough to get served. How stupid.
*sigh* that last part makes me think of what it's going to be like when my husband & I are able to have sex after the six week check up when I'm cleared for sex again after our baby is born.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:49 PM Title: Chapter 23
This one was packed. I thought it might be the last. This has been an amaizingly fun, dramatic, suspensful and lust filled story. I look forward to the last couple of chapters and to reading more from you all in the future.
best wishes for a safe & happy holiday season.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 23
Just love the story. You keep me wanting more after each chapter!!! Thanks!!!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 23
I just loved it. A beautiful boy. I'm do happy for these two. Great update.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 12:30 PM Title: Chapter 23
Thank you for the story, and happy holidays to you and yours...whatever you believe, too! I hate to see this story end. I love it and thank you again.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 23
Love the way everything is gwtting in line.
Thanks for the update and Happy Holidays.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 12:03 PM Title: Chapter 23
Ladies. Grat chapter cgreat story. I have loved every update. Merry Christmas.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 23
Loved this. Merry Christmas to you too
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 11:08 AM Title: Chapter 23
I love the name they went with. And a little boy is awesome.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 23
great chapter really loved it Merry Christmas to yall
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 9:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
Awesome chapter👍
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:16 AM Title: Chapter 23
What a great chapter! Lots going on here! Yes, we have little AJ's arrival, so pleased! Merry Christmas to you both!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 8:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
good chapter. only 2 left :(
happy holidays!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
I say happy holidays do with as you please but everyone be happy :) I love all the different names but I do like theres the best. Renee is a peice of work and she will be out of jail alot faster than she should.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 6:22 AM Title: Chapter 23
Let's see, so many things happened in this chapter! Charlie, Leah, and Renee all got what they deserved. Sue got help, although somewhat reluctantly. The baby arrived( loved his name)! And last but not least Aro and Sulpicia became parents to a little girl. I also laughed my butt off at James and Vicky's antics while Bella was in labor.
Cant wait to see what's in store for the last two chapters, I can't believe we are this close to the end. :)
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wonderful chapter. Glad James and Vicky were there for her. Wow that nurse was a real biatch.
Nice birthday for Seth and E.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 23
This is a great story:)
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 23
I hope you all have a wonder holiday, however you celebrate it...
I'm glad to see things coming together for them, they deserve happiness.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 23
awww, love the name AJ! So glad Renee got some just desserts!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 23
Great chapter!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 23
more please :)
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 23
Wonderful story, I have enjoyed it so much! Thank you. XOXO, Cheri
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 23
"Leah was stupid enough to have everything she did before and after Harry's murder written down" Definitely stupid but no less than I'd expect from her:)
"The First National Bank of Yourmama" lol I would love to be at the bank when she tried to cash it::))
James & Vicky dealing with Bella in labor is hysterical!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 23
I knew that Charlie and Leah killed Harry. I can not believe that Leah would do that to her own father. That is just soooo wrong. Glald that Sue is going to get some help. She definitely needs it. Glad that AJ got here and was healthy. I laughed at James!!!! lol. I like that your James and Vicky are good people in this story. They always seem to be bad people in stories. Can't wait for Edward and Bella to get back to they play time.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 23
The baby is here, Renne, Charlie and Leah are paying for their actions, I'd say things are looking very well for all of them.
Happy holidays!!
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 23
God I love this story ! I don't want it to end.
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 23
Yay baby AJ is here. Looks like everyone that should be happy is now. And everyone else finally got what they deserved. I do love Seth he is a good kid. Loved this chapter
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 23 Dec 2013 12:58 AM Title: Chapter 23
looking forward to more
Author's Response:
Thank you all for reading and reviewing. We love reading all of the nice things that you all have said. Thank you again for everything. Some of the biggest questions we had was these:
I thought Bella was having a girl? – Bella thought she was having a girl, but Edward thought boy.
Have Charlie and Leah been involved sexually? – No, Charlie is a real yuck, but he honestly thought Leah was his daughter.
How in the world did James get away with the things he did to Jake and Paul? – Money and having influential friends does a lot in any situation. Besides this is fiction and there are not many if any people who did not want Paul and Jake to both get a tiny taste of the stuff they all to willingly dished out to others.
Is there an Epilogue after 25 or is 25 the epilogue? – The story is 25 chapters including the epilogue, so no more after 25.
Do you have more stories coming out since this is coming to a close? – We currently have a one-shot we did for Christmas that has an epilogue yet to post. Then we have the one-shot we are writing for Moo AH, which we will post sometime in January. We will be starting our new story that is sort of an ugly duckling Bella story, and for a change it will be in Bella’s POV and we’re excited by this prospect. We also have an Escort story coming soon, and it will be fantastic. We have another story we are doing for a fandom fights program, this time it is for domestic abuse—this will be a story written with jess2002 joining us. We also will be posting a story to the facebook group page. The two groups it will post at are: TeamAllTwilight & AndTAT Fan Fiction and it will post at Secluded Wings. Everyone’s welcome, we are an adult only, drama free environment.
Is Phil going to end up with Sue? – No, but there is a bit of a story there yet to come for them both.
I think that wraps up the majority of the questions we have been asked. I hope that you all like this teaser it is COMPLETELY unedited, because we haven’t even gotten 24 to the beta yet—speaking of which the last 2 chapters – 24 and 25, may have a few more mistakes than normal, since we are down 2 of our team because of the holidays.
Thanks again for reading and reviewing our story, Nikky and Kasi~
Teaser: I hold Bella’s hand as we walk in with Adam into the doctor’s office. We’ve both been worried about today, this is his first set of injections. “You’re sure you’re okay to hold him?” Bella asks me again as she holds Adam close to her.
“Yes, I’m okay to be the mean parent today,” I say again with a little chuckle. “Beside you don’t like shots. Since they scare you when you get them done on you, I know this is really going to be hard on you,” I say. I remember that I had to hold Dean for his four month shots because Rose couldn’t even be in the same room when it was getting done, and Emmett was sick.
Bella frowns at me and I chuckle kissing her lips. “It will be fine, I promise.”
“But he’s only two months and still small.”
I pull her and our son to me and hold her close as I look down at my sleeping son.
“I know, believe me, I know. Sweetheart if weren’t important for him to have these done we wouldn’t be here.”
Bella nods and lets out a sigh.
“I really can’t believe she’s breast feeding him in public,” a woman says loudly to the other woman sitting next to her.
Both Bella and I turn to look at her and then to a young woman about Bella’s age who is breast feeding her baby.
“These teens today have no respect, whatsoever. They act like whores, get pregnant and then plop their breasts out for everyone to see,” the woman sitting next to the woman who first spoke replies.
I look to Bella who’s looking at the young girl that is being spoken about so rudely.
“It’s girls like her that go out lead a guy on and then cry rape when it gets taken further than they wanted. But just look at her showing all off all her goodies here in public. Whatever do these stupid trampy girls thinks is going to happen?”
My mouth drops open at the woman’s cold words.
“Hold our son for a second,” Bella says passing AJ into my arms as she gets up. At first I think she’s going to the restroom but instead she turns walking directly over to the two women.
“As you seem to make sure that your thoughts were spoken loud and clear enough to everyone that’s in the room, I thought I should make my thoughts clear. First, neither of you have any right to judge that girl on anything she’s doing. So what, she’s feeding her baby, it’s a baby who is clearly hungry and being cared for. If you don’t like it, then don’t flipping look!”
My eyes open even wider hearing Bella use one of her clean swear words. I start to get up to head over to her.
Date: 20 Dec 2013 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter!
So much happened... thankful that they have some peace of mind for now.
Harry... could he haved walked in on Charlie and Leah in a compromising situation? Maybe!?
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
"....and Leah's fist hits the female police officer that was standing behind Rose" lol lol Bravo! Even if Leah did this by mistake, it would keep her out of their hair for a while
Payback is coming along nicely::))
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 19 Dec 2013 2:07 AM Title: Chapter 22
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:50 PM Title: Chapter 22
wow. i read this story in two days. more please :)
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 22
Bella is doing great handling all of this stress. Edward is so great with Seth. He will be a great parent. I am so glad that all of these lawsuits are slowly getting settled. They need to enjoy their last few months of couplehood.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 18 Dec 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 22
Is it too obvious to say that Charlie and Leah killed Harry so that Sue would get together with Charlie and they could be one, big happy family? No matter what, I think one of them killed him and the other helped cover it up. Great chapter. Lots of stuff happening and Leah really is off her rocker. The charges from the office incident alone should get her life in prison. Can't wait to see what happens with Renee. I hope she gets everything she deserves and then some. Tanya's still out there, though. Is she the last of the troublemakers to go down or am I giving her too much importance? Really looking forward to the next chapter. Great job.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
Damn. So much jam packed here. It was awesome. Loved every minute of it.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 8:42 AM Title: Chapter 22
good chapter !
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 3:33 AM Title: Chapter 5
I'm only on chapter 5, but I love it. It's late and I have classes in the morning. Its your falt I'm going be grumpy tomorrow. I have to read at least one more chapter before I go to bed...Is what I said two chapters ago. One more...
Author's Response:
Sorry if you were grumpy, Thanks for readign and reviewing. We hope you still like the story at the end. Kasi & Nikky
Date: 17 Dec 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm looking forward to the rose ceremony!
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 1:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Aww baby Cullen on the way and Edward defiantly a great dad/model to Seth
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 1:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
I laughed at Leah!! I am glad that things are starting to turn around for Bella and Edward. I am thinking that Charlie killed Harry so he could finally be with Sue. I am glad that Edward was so honest with Seth on their talk about sex. Seth definitely would not have gotten that type of talk from Charlie. Love this story. As always I can not wait for your next update.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 17 Dec 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 22
Glad things are comingtogether. I'd bet on Charlie or Leah killing Harry Did you ever say what the charges against Charlie were?
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm guessing Leah killed Harry and Charlie helped with covering it up. They're all crazy but so far Leah seems to be the worst of all in that department.
as for Rennee... I prefer to wait and see what you've got planned for her that to guess. I'm sure it will be more than well deserved.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 22
great chapter loved it i think that charlie killed him and had leah help in some way
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 11:32 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you! T
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 11:31 AM Title: Chapter 22
Thank you for your update. I love that Jake and Paul finally got what they deserved. As for Charlie and Leah... well, It's coming. I think that Leah was in on Harry's murder. I hope everything will be cleared soon.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 11:11 AM Title: Chapter 22
sucha good story
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 22
Who killer Harry? Hmmm... my guess is Leah. I am dreading the sex talk with my kiddos. Thankfully my oldest is just now 4 so I at least have a little ways. My mom had the talk with me lots of times and then gave me a gallon sized ziploc bag filled with an assortment of condoms. It was eye opening. Can't wait to read more!
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 6:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think Leah did it with the help of Charlie of course if you ask me she's a little crazy!!
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 22
Wow, this chapter was great! Thank you so much.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 5:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
I'm so happy it is all falling into place. Finally it seems like Bella can be happy. What've twist with Harry. I betting on Leah. She has an unhealthy love for her 'daddy'. Great update.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 5:16 AM Title: Chapter 22
pending charges on renee?
harry i am thinking charlie and leah had something to do with his death. the relationship those to have is just strange. it is not a typical parent child? poor sue. she is just a doormat. she needs some profesional help that is fer sure. i am thrilled paul and jacob got the time they deserved
wow emily seems to have a new chance opening up to her. i hope it works with the new job and sam
poor seth. i am glad he told the truth and he is doing his sentence. he has a bright future and a great family behind him. love it all
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 22
I think they are going for attempted murder against Renee. So much happened in this chapter all good they are going down
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
This chapter was massive. What is the rosé ceremony? Leah just wow. And who killed Harry? Great job.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
Things do seem to be coking together. Chsrlie, Jacob, Paul and his dad have gotten some of what they desetve. At least they will be locked up for a long time. My guess is Leah killed Harry because she wanted Charlie to be her dad so bad. Charlie may have helped her bury him or they were were both in on it. I can't wait to see what happens. Great job...thanks!!!
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter 22
I really think it was Charlie since his gun and he wanted Sue so that could be a motive I think Renee will bitch and complain but will go to jail at attempt at killing can't wait for the next update :)
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 3:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Such a exciting chapter, so much going on!! :)
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 22
wow, so glad everyone is getting their just desserts! Charlie and Leah killed Harry, had to be. i hope the crazy bitch Leah is locked up for a long time
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 22
Just when the answers are coming in, you create more questions!
it would be interesting if it was Leah, but it probably isn't.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 22
Oh my goodness. So much was packed into this chapter. Very well written. Looking forward to the next chapter. Love this story thanks.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 22
Great chapter. So glad the court cases are going well. ROFL for the carvings in the head. They shouldn't have allowed Charlie ot plea bargain, esp when he lied about Sue and Harry's murder. Duh we all know it was Charlie and Leah somehow.
Rofl for Leah being stupid around Edward. What a manipulative biatch.
Glad Seth is being safe and asking questions
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 22
Awesome, now hopefully Leah will never try to go after Edward again. I'm glad that the judge was so considerate with Bella being pregnant & how appalled the judge & jury were when Bella told them about the backlash from the school after she reported it. Thank goodness Bella didn't have to talk about all that happened during the rape but at the same time everyone was able to see & hear it take place on the video; that can't have been easy to sit through. Thankfully Jacob & Paul have basically gotten life in prison. Charlie almost got off easy with 15 years but after the discovery of Harry's body it looks like he's going to get a hard sentence & Leah will be getting it too. ^_^
next chappy please.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 2:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
I loved the surprise James had for them. Great chapter, lots of closures.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 22
Love it! Cant wait to read what will happpen next!
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 1:17 AM Title: Chapter 22
Charlie killed Harry. What I'd like to know is how Sue fits into this? Seems like she may have been forced into it or somehow is/was tring to protect Leah who is definitely mentally messed up. Maybe Sue let Seth go knowing he was alright with Bella & Edward to try and protect/get help for Leah.
Thanks for all the mystery, it's been lots of fun so far.
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 16 Dec 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 22
Looking forward to more
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 15 Dec 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 22
loved this
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 15 Dec 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 22
I want to thank you so much for regular updates that means so much! I'm almost afraid to start reading stories of unknown writers or ones that so seldom update.......Thank you again are in my favorites forsure
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.
Date: 15 Dec 2013 11:30 PM Title: Chapter 22
Epic chapter. So much has happened. I am glad bella is seeing that justice is being served but I feel for her. She must be so tired of all the drama. Thx for the update
Author's Response:
We are so sorry for the lateness of this review reply. I (Kasi) meant to do it the other day and honestly between the flu that has ravaged my home several times over the last month making another round, and trying to get ready for Christmas I forgot to do it. Chapter 24 is almost ready to go to the beta. Chapter 25 is not yet started, but we will do our very very best to make sure it is posted on time. Most of the questions are answered in this chapter posting in less mere hours. Sorry again for the delay in the review reply and teaser being sent out. Nikky and I both wish you all the Happiest of Holiday Seasons for what or whom you celebrate. There are only 2 chapters left to post and this story will be complete. Kasi~
TEASER: Seth has been in shock from finding all this out, but thankfully, Dr. Banner has been working with him through it all. The school has also been doing well at keeping the kids focused on what they are learning and not what’s going on in the news. Seth’s school life has really not had many distractions—regarding his personal life. Sue has been seeing him a lot more, but the relationship still seems to be strained for Seth. Sue had gone along with Seth to one of his appointments with Dr. Banner. After talking briefly with Dr. Banner, he thought that Sue would benefit from seeing someone, too. Dr. Banner did say that he felt she should see another doctor so she had an unbiased person to speak with.
Seth has become very important to our whole family, so I set this up in order to help him. I know that he loves his mother, and so that he and his mom have a chance of building a healthy relationship, I wanted to do this for them both. He is still with us and Sue is living in an apartment close to where she now works here in Seattle.
Bella has finished college and is taking two years off before finishing the rest of her teaching degree. She will only have to do the required hands-on training as a teaching assistant. I’ve already looked into that, and she can easily fulfill her needed requirements at one of the local private schools.