Date: 19 May 2022 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 7:22 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
Date: 19 May 2022 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love this story, I've read it on another site multiple times. Someone in a fb group said to read it on here because it's edited on ffn.. I didn't notice anything different. Just wanted to thank you for sharing your time and imagination, and parts of your life, according to a/n with your readers. You 2 are one of my favorite authors to follow and read. I re read your stories often.
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2021 7:11 PM Title: Chapter Four
I am sure Edward will take care of all of them
[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2021 1:14 PM Title: Chapter: One
great start
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
What a great story!
[Report This]Date: 29 Dec 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
What a great story!
Date: 29 Dec 2020 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 25
What a great story!
Date: 23 Aug 2019 9:44 PM Title: Chapter 25
Great story ladies! Thank you for sharing this with us!
Date: 26 Dec 2018 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 25
Oh how i have loved this story! i've spent that last week reading it and i have loved every moment! Great story!
[Report This]Date: 08 Sep 2017 10:16 PM Title: Chapter 25
I love your story
[Report This]Date: 07 Aug 2017 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 25
I loved it!!! Yet another great story from y'all.
[Report This]Date: 25 Jun 2017 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 25
I love your story
Date: 09 Apr 2017 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 25
Excellent ending!
Date: 24 Feb 2017 4:36 PM Title: Chapter 20
Excellent chapter!
Date: 23 Feb 2017 7:43 PM Title: Chapter 13
I really hate Renee!
Date: 23 Feb 2017 5:19 PM Title: Chapter 12
I hate Renee! Poor Phil!
Date: 23 Feb 2017 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 11
Great chapter!
Date: 23 Feb 2017 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 10
Great chapter!
Date: 23 Feb 2017 9:54 AM Title: Chapter 7
Jessica is a heartless bitch!
Date: 22 Feb 2017 7:26 PM Title: Chapter Four
Loved it! Charlie is a horrible father!
Date: 22 Feb 2017 6:58 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved t! Poor Bella! I don't like Jessica and Lauren!
Date: 22 Feb 2017 6:35 PM Title: Chapter: Two
Loved it! Poor Bella!
Date: 11 Feb 2017 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 25
Will you make a sequel
Date: 11 Feb 2017 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 25
Will you make a sequel
Date: 11 Feb 2017 5:31 AM Title: Chapter 25
Will you make a sequel
Date: 20 Nov 2016 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
You women wreck me in the most delightful and delicious ways with this story. It is an all time favorite that I can't help but read again and again. Thank you! Love. Love. Love. If you ever think 'hey let's pull this story' please don't or at least give your loyal readers a pdf option. You rock! Off to my other all time favorite This Thing of Ours. ;-D X
Date: 12 Aug 2016 8:41 AM Title: Chapter: One
This story is nothing short of amazing! I think I've read it twice already and now I'm heading for the third shot.... :D Just scrolled through a profile and saw it - now I have to read it again....
Date: 26 Apr 2016 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 3
Hi! I'm an Italian reader and I want to tell you that the story is very nice! But the parts written in Italian aren't right.... There are few mistakes! If you are interested in knowing which are, let me know!
Date: 22 Apr 2016 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 25
Awesome ending! Leah is crazy!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 5:33 AM Title: Chapter 20
Everyone that hurt Bella finally got what they deserved!
Date: 21 Apr 2016 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 16
Phil is amazing! Renee and Charlie are horrible people and parents! I hope Bella will be ok!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 13
Her mother is psychotic!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 9:12 PM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella! Her mother is horrible!
Date: 20 Apr 2016 8:39 PM Title: Chapter 11
Bella's mother is crazy and bossy! She kind of treats Bella as her assistant than as her daughter but it's better than the way her father treats her!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 7
Loved it! Poor Bella! I hate Jessica! She's a bitch!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 6:11 PM Title: Chapter Four
I hate Lauren and Jessica! Poor Bella!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 3
Loved it! Charlie is horrible! I hate Jessica and Lauren!
Date: 19 Apr 2016 3:43 PM Title: Chapter: Two
Loved it! Poor Bella!
[Report This]Date: 08 Mar 2016 9:25 AM Title: Chapter 25
Great story
Date: 21 Nov 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 25
Thank you for writing and sharing your story! I enjoyed it--especially how elements of D/s were implemented without going over the top.
Date: 09 Sep 2015 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 20
loved the revenges. wished they were much much worse :)
also wished that we could have gotten play by play about them especially
their reactions and how everything went down for each one of them.
Date: 09 Sep 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
i understand about being empathetic, compassionate, loving and understanding.
bella, of course, has all of these good attributes...
but, having too much of a good thing can also be detrimental to oneself.
i hope these good attributes dont cause more problems for bella than
they already have in her life to the point of frustration and wanting to just
bang your head against the wall.
[Report This]Date: 02 Sep 2015 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved this do much I re-read it. Thank you so much for writing it.
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter: One
I'm pretty sure I wrote a review on the last chapter and apparently on the 2nd to last chapter the last time I read this story so I decided to write another review on the 1st chapter. Again I absolutely loved this story it is at the top of my list as one of my favorite BDSM fics along with Tara Sue Me's 3 part Dom/Sub/Training series. Thank you again for all the work you all put into writing this erotic, sexy, emotional and loving story that I definitely will come back and read again!!
Melissa
[Report This]Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm pretty sure I wrote a review on the last chapter the last time I read this story so I decided to write another review the chapter before. Again I absolutely loved this story it is at the top of my list as one of my favorite BDSM fics along with Tara Sue Me's 3 part Dom/Sub/Training series. Thank you again for all the work you all put into writing this erotic, sexy, emotional and loving story that I definitely will come back and read again!!
Melissa
Date: 14 Jan 2015 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 25
Loved this story!
Date: 02 Jan 2015 3:40 PM Title: Chapter 25
I could not stop reading this story! I loved all the ups and downs and how much he loved her. This was an awesome story.
Date: 19 Nov 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 25
this was a wonderful read, ladies! thanks!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 23
This has been an almost fluffy chapter and it is a welcome addition to the story!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
Did Leah kill Harry? It sounds like you are wrapping things up here and that all is coming out as it should. Love the story!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
stopping here for today. i must say, although i'm sure the retribution and revenge was deserved, i really can't see any difference between what all those people did to Bella and the revenge Edward and James and the others took out on those that hurt her. 2 wrongs don't make a right.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
as for Tanya, I think she will try to retaliate against Bella in some way. as for Renee and Charlie, I think both will ignore her for Christmas. I love that Edward gave her the building for her new dance studio, but hate that she still has trouble thinking she deserves anything like this.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 13
JFC with a family like hers, Renee and Charlie, Bella doesn't need enemies! No wonder she really doesn't believe that Edward will stay with her....
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
I like how he is easing her into their play time. She will fuck up at some point and I have confidence he will give her the correct punishment that won't make her feel like she is a failure, that everyone does things to fuck up and that doesn't mean they ARE fuck-ups. Renee, I think, does not love Bella any more than Charlie does, but I hope to be wrong about that....