Date: 20 Nov 2016 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 25
You women wreck me in the most delightful and delicious ways with this story. It is an all time favorite that I can't help but read again and again. Thank you! Love. Love. Love. If you ever think 'hey let's pull this story' please don't or at least give your loyal readers a pdf option. You rock! Off to my other all time favorite This Thing of Ours. ;-D X
Date: 09 Sep 2015 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 19
i understand about being empathetic, compassionate, loving and understanding.
bella, of course, has all of these good attributes...
but, having too much of a good thing can also be detrimental to oneself.
i hope these good attributes dont cause more problems for bella than
they already have in her life to the point of frustration and wanting to just
bang your head against the wall.
Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:09 PM Title: Chapter: One
I'm pretty sure I wrote a review on the last chapter and apparently on the 2nd to last chapter the last time I read this story so I decided to write another review on the 1st chapter. Again I absolutely loved this story it is at the top of my list as one of my favorite BDSM fics along with Tara Sue Me's 3 part Dom/Sub/Training series. Thank you again for all the work you all put into writing this erotic, sexy, emotional and loving story that I definitely will come back and read again!!
Date: 03 Aug 2015 9:07 PM Title: Chapter 24
I'm pretty sure I wrote a review on the last chapter the last time I read this story so I decided to write another review the chapter before. Again I absolutely loved this story it is at the top of my list as one of my favorite BDSM fics along with Tara Sue Me's 3 part Dom/Sub/Training series. Thank you again for all the work you all put into writing this erotic, sexy, emotional and loving story that I definitely will come back and read again!!
Date: 18 Nov 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 21
stopping here for today. i must say, although i'm sure the retribution and revenge was deserved, i really can't see any difference between what all those people did to Bella and the revenge Edward and James and the others took out on those that hurt her. 2 wrongs don't make a right.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 15
as for Tanya, I think she will try to retaliate against Bella in some way. as for Renee and Charlie, I think both will ignore her for Christmas. I love that Edward gave her the building for her new dance studio, but hate that she still has trouble thinking she deserves anything like this.
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:58 AM Title: Chapter 11
I like how he is easing her into their play time. She will fuck up at some point and I have confidence he will give her the correct punishment that won't make her feel like she is a failure, that everyone does things to fuck up and that doesn't mean they ARE fuck-ups. Renee, I think, does not love Bella any more than Charlie does, but I hope to be wrong about that....
Date: 17 Nov 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm loving everything about this story and finding it difficult to stop reading it in order to take care of other things around my house today. LOL! I really love where their relationship is leading and wonder if there is a leak somewhere that allowed Jacob to slip into the college undetected...
Date: 16 Nov 2014 8:39 PM Title: Chapter: One
I don't know how I missed this one of yours! I'm reading it now, on a rec from Love Twifics. I have read many of your stories so I know the quality you put into stories. BDSM stories are some of my favorite and I look forward to immersing myself in this one. The first chapter sets a great tone and I am eager for more. I may not review every chapter as this is a completed story, but I just wanted to make my interest in this known to you two...
Date: 01 Jul 2014 2:47 PM Title: Chapter 25
I loved the look into their future, 5 kids! They sure kept themselves busy, lol. I can't believe that Charlie got in touch again. I don't know how it happened that Bella and Seth turned out so well without any of their parents crazy genes, but I'm glad they did. Lauren was a surprise, I'm glad she apologised to Bella and is now a different person from who she used to be unlike others that just never learn.
Thanks for sharing your story, it's been a bit of a rollercoaster but then so is life, I've loved every minute. I always enjoy your stories and I'm looking forward to sinking my teeth into more of them.
Date: 01 Jul 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 24
The Roses Ceremony was lovely and touching. I can't believe Renee is still trying to worm her way out of things, that woman needs a lot of help. As for Charlie he's just confirming what a complete arsehole he is and given time Seth will come to realise this and that he would never have got any sort of explanation or closure from him. He's so lucky to have Bella and everyone else. I'm so happy that Bella's finally getting the life she deserves with the man she loves.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 5:53 PM Title: Chapter 23
Woohoo!! A boy, Edward was right, lol. Finally things seem to be settling down and their lives are becoming less fraught. I'm so happy that Leah's gone to prison, I hope she makes many 'close friends' if you know what I mean. Thank goodness Seth got off so lightly. He's a good kid, he just made a bad decision in a highly emotionally situation, I don't think he'll do that again.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm exhausted, their lives are just full on, it never stops. Pity that police officer only got Leah in the shoulder and didn't shoot to kill. Please say it was Leah who shot Harry, I so want her skanky self to go to prison, she'll have so much more in common with Charlie then and she'll meet so many girls just like herself as well, she'll feel right at home, lol. I love that Seth was able to talk to Edward.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 21
Oh my God! I can't believe Renee turned up at Bella's wedding. I loved the fact Bella stood up to her and then what Esme said and did, 'shit floats' lol, it most certainly does. The trial's going to be difficult but it does signify the end of the abuse for Bella, some closure maybe.
Date: 30 Jun 2014 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 20
Loved all the revenge. Tanya being taken away in a rubbish truck was brilliant, definitely what she deserved. Jessica's and Lauren 's unfortunate encounters were fantastic, the STD posters were genius, lol. Finally Paul, Jacob and Charlie are getting their comeuppance, although I bet they're still saying they didn't do anything wrong. I can't wait for the wedding and then the baby to just bring all the family together especially Seth, he seems to be struggling at the moment, but he will get better. Now, who is Phil bringing with him?
Date: 29 Jun 2014 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 19
I loved the showdown, good for Bella, she was so strong. I'm glad that Sue piped up and told Charlie that Leah's not his daughter but I'm disappointed that she's not more supportive of Seth. She's letting Bella and Edward look after him so she can help Charlie and Leah, I don't see what's to help they're both abusive. Somehow they've controlled her and she's let them, she needs to take a leaf out of Bella's book and stand up for herself and come for her son. Charlie's an arsehole, if it was up to me he would fall 'victim' to an embarrassing end. I hate that worm.
Date: 29 Jun 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 18
Woohoo!! They're having a baby. I love that Esme got to see the proposal and Carlisle got to see the baby, now they both have bragging rights, lol. I'm glad that Edward has come around on the whole going to see Charlie thing, Bella needs to do this, she needs her answers and she deserves them. She's come so far and become so much stronger she needs to show Charlie that he can't destroy her and she's in charge of her own life. Now, what are those other two dickheads up to?
Date: 28 Jun 2014 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 17
I'm so glad that Bella is getting stronger and is more able to assert herself, she's finally becoming the girl she should be. Lol, I can't believe that Edward was naive about that party, as if a group of women would be excited about that, and he thinks he knows them, haha!! I knew Tanya wouldn't quietly disappear, she's determined to ruin Bella's reputation, but to what end? Does she think Edward will dump Bella and come running to her? She's so stupid. Now I'm wondering how the he'll Paul and Jacob got into the club unless Tanya helped them.
Date: 28 Jun 2014 4:51 PM Title: Chapter 16
Well that totally explained why Phil gets to play on the team. I can't wait for Renee to get the divorce papers and be left without a penny. Bella will survive with the love and support of Edward and everyone else. I'm wondering if Jacob is Charlie's son, it really wouldn't surprise me at all. I also think Jacob was planning to get rid of Bella completely or harm her to such an extent she would either kill herself or be institutionalized. Jacob still being registered at Harvard gives him a perfect alibi, he can't be in two places at once. I'm sure that money is at the bottom of all this.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 15
I loved their date, Bella really had a good time, some fun and dancing is just what she needed. I'm so glad that Phil has kept in touch despite Renee, that woman has a screw loose. Thank God someone at Bella's college has finally seen her for the beautiful girl she is and also doesn't trust Jacob. Tanya's going to want revenge on Bella now she's lost her job. Not only is she popular with all the Doms she has what Tanya wants, Edward. Bella will be a fantastic teacher especially in dance, she should definitely go down that route and sod the law degree, life's too short to be miserable at work.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 3:58 PM Title: Chapter 14
Thank God Renee's gone! I don't think I could have stood much more of her. It is beyond sad for Bella but she is better off without either of her parents. I really hope Phil stays in touch and builds some kind of relationship with her. I got the feeling he was a good guy and Bella needs to know that not everyone in her life is like her mum and dad.
Date: 27 Jun 2014 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 13
Oh my God! Renee nearly killed Bella. She truly is the most selfish person on the planet, I think Phil has had his eyes well and truly opened, now will he step up and become the parent Bella's been craving? Will he stay with Renee now he's seen her true colours? I can't believe how cruel she is. I know Bella just wants a proper mum to love her but she really needs to think about allowing Renee into her life. Personally I'd cut her out of my life but then I'd cut my nose off to spite my face.