Date: 09 Jul 2014 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 8
It's going to turn out to be a very good thing that Edward took home the file on his sister's murder. That will be the thing that convicts Jacob and his dad. Thank God h and mike got home in time to save Bella! When this is over, I sincerely hope someone gets to strangle Alice!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 7
What a horrifying coincidence, that Bella is where she is because of the crazy bastard that murdered Edward's sister, and fathered Greg, maybe! That poor little thing to have gone through all that and lived, only to fear that he would find her and finish the job! It kind of makes me ashamed that I thought Mike was an abuser, when he would lay down his life for her!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 5:05 AM Title: Chapter 6
So, they're not married only in witness protection together! You may officially knock me over with a feather! If Bella is in dangerI hope Edward can keep her, and Greg, safe! The robberies could be someone looking for Bella, and Alice planning to meet someone besides Jasper could be a part of it also! I'm at a loss for solutions!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 4
So, isn't it cute that Tanya can't work for "common" people? Makes me wonder who she thinks she is? The more you tell us about Mike and how he treats Bella the more he worries me! Definitely something weird going on here!
Date: 09 Jul 2014 12:40 AM Title: Chapter 1
Not to pretend to be anexpert, but it sure sounds as if Bella is an abused wife! She has all the signs you raed about and her husband is kind of creepy! Edward jas had a hell of a life,too and is lucky he's not a worse mess than he is! Probably helps to have Greg to care for, especially since he's his nephew.
Date: 01 Apr 2014 5:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Just getting around to this one and other older stories of yours, because I love all I have read! My thoughts on this chapter are (1) he's not a very good officer if he ignored screams from next door, And (2) every state I know of requires by law, adults with knowledge of child abuse, no matter what profession or none, to report it to child protective services. Shape up, Edward!!
Date: 21 Jul 2013 4:55 AM Title: Chapter 10
i always love your stories
you keep us on our toes
i love that they all got there happy ever after.
i am glad alice served her time and had counseling and has scene her ways
bella yet won't be best friends with her but is accepting and knows she is now getting her second chance and isn't going to blow it
loved it all thank you
Date: 21 Jul 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 10
love this story. tk y for chap 10. Tried to find Isle of Dreams author savannavansmutsmut, had no luck. could y pls email a link to her, wld love to read her stories. thank you
Thanks for reading and reviewing. I emailed you too, but here is a few other links as well just to be sure you get them....
Jess2002 and I also write together under the name of JessAndTAT, here is our profile page: http://www.fanfiction.net/u/3252565/JessAndTAT
Date: 20 Jul 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 10
LOVE IT!!!!!!!!! I love that Greg got to help with the delivery. HaHa!!!! I am glad that Alice has realized how mean she was to everyone. Gla that Mike is back in their life. LOVED that Bella proposed to Edward, that was sweet. Excellent job writing ths wonderful story and thanks for sharing it with us.
Date: 20 Jul 2013 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 10
Beautiful, beautiful, beautiful story!
This story is incredibly well written, I never knew what was going on, Mike is now my hero, he was amazing with Bella, I'm glad that they were all so close. I think a person unbearable Alice, I'm glad she changed. I find it funny that I never liked the Alice books of SM, I thought Alice a little abusive.
Kisses, please keep in with incredible stories.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 9
Wowzer wowzer wowzer. Alice is such a moron. Wonder if she even realizes/understands what she's done, not only to Bella, E, Greg, but even to Jasper. This is going to affect him as well. I agree that B needs to be better for herself before she can be better forE and G. Great job ladies.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 1:58 PM Title: Chapter 9
OMGosh!!! I can not believe that Jacob got into the hospital. I am thinking Mike's crew need more training. HaHa!!! Glad that everyone is safe. I can not believe that Alice was still fusing with Mike after everything that she had done. I have to admit, I laughed when Mike arrested her. HaHa!! Glad Bella got to say goodbye to her parents. Can't wait to see what happens with Bella, Edward and Greg.
Date: 19 Jul 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 8
i have no idea where jacob would go hiding. i assumed he was looking for bella and wanted her. so i am surprised he left her for dead and took off
so i am curious what was it he wanted.
i am so mad at alice for butting in. she was too noisy neighbor for me. she needed to back off of bella she tried to hard
Date: 18 Jul 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 8
What in the world is Jacob looking for? If he was in the control room how in the world did Bella get in there and hide? Who is it in the department that has been helping Jaocb with the break ins? I know that Alice helped Jacob get into Bella's house. She is so stupid. I can not believe she did that. Thanks for the update. I am not ready for this story to be over.
Date: 18 Jul 2013 1:59 PM Title: Chapter 8
God Alice you're such a stupid ass nosey bitch!!!! Like seriously dont believe everything someone tells you!!!! And why the fuck would you make a copy of someone's house key without their permission!!!! Are you fucking stupid!!!! God if something bad happens to Bella it's all on Alice's stupid ass head!!!! How did Jacob get access to the control room???? And what did he find and or take???
Date: 17 Jul 2013 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 7
of course it's always jacob who's the bad guy not that i care cause i hate that douche!!!!!! i'm glad mike isn't bad but i still don't like him and damn bella's only 18 well damn! how old is edward??? they better catch jacob!!!!!!! can't wait for the next update tomorrow!!!!!!!
We have had Jake be the bad guy in a couple of our other stories, but we have also had Renee, Phil, James, Tanya, Harry, Alice, Rose, Siobahn, Aro, Marcus, Caius, just to name a few be bad guys too. We love changing it up, and do things out of the norm, it just fit with the story for Jake and Billy to be the bad guys... But Alice is not super lovable either. We like to shake things up and not be the same as everyone else, otherwise our stories would be the same stuff told a slightly different way. Edward is 30 and Bella is 18. Glad you're liking the story. Thanks again for all the love, we are grateful! :) Kasi & Nikky~
Date: 17 Jul 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 7
i am glad mike is the good guy. he is a protector
blown away how the same person who took his sister is mixed up in this crap and hunting for bella
how the web is weaved. sorry she lost her parents. and hoping the bad guys get caught and are held responsibe and somehow bella can somehow learn to live in the world with people.
wow hell of a story
Date: 17 Jul 2013 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 7
OMGosh!!!!!! Wow, I can not believe that the same person after Bella is the someone that killed Edward's sister. What a small world. I hope that Edward and Mike find Jacob and something happens Edward has to shoot Jacob and kill him. :) Glad that Mike is being nice to Edward now.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 6
ok this answers a lot of questions but what is with all the injuries?? is she hurting herself?? and why was mike being so hostile towards edward?? its not like he is really married to her. no jealous husband here. what is with all the "fear faces" when mike is around? why is mike trying to keep them apart?? why did bella leave greg?? so many questions still!! love this story so far!!
Date: 16 Jul 2013 6:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well, to be honest, I was not expecting that!!!!!!! I was really beginning to wonder if Mike was beating her. I was having my douts. Because he was not possessive enough. I was thinking that she was hurt in her past and he became her savior and that was why she married him but she did not truly love him. I was also begining to think there was link between Mike and the robberies.
Thanks for sharing this exciting story with us. Can't wait for you next update.
It kind of worries me that she has gotten that close to Greg and she is in the witness protection program. Hope nothing happens to Greg.
But I still do not understand the medicine.
Date: 16 Jul 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter 6
Well some of you guessed right in the Witness Protection idea. So now I wonder if they are even really married ? I don't think so. Could Mike be meeting Alice ? Or the bad guys found him that are after Bella.
Can't wait for more :)
Date: 16 Jul 2013 2:46 PM Title: Chapter 6
wow so i wasn't expecting that
i did think mike was in the robberies. now i am thinking the robberies are maybe staged to get information on bella. she must have witness something bad
now i am thinking maybe alice could be involved or is not as good as we think. i am so confused. but i know with your stories things are not always what they seem. you are very good at throwing us off the marker and pulling the wool over our eyes. look forward to more. thank you
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 5
GOD MIKE IS SUCH A DOUCHE NOZEL AND NO ONE BELIEVES EDWARD!!!!!!!!!!! AD OF COURSE MIKE'S DADDY WOULD BE THE CAPTAIN OR SOMETHING AND FORCE EDWARD TO STAY AWAY FORM BELLA!!!!!!! WE ALL KNOW THAT MIKE IS AN ABUSIVE ASSHOLE BUT DOES ANYONE SEE IT NO THEY SEE THE COOKIE CUTTER HAPPY COUPLE BUT NO THE POSSESSIVE DERANGED MONSTER THAT IT THAT ASSHOLE AND ALL EDWARD WANTS TO DO IS PROTECT BELLA BUT CAN HE NO BECAUSE NO ONE WILL FUCKING LET HIM INCLUDING BELLA!!!!!!!! GOD SHE NEEDS TO TRUST HIM AND TO LET HIM HELP HER!!!!!!!!!!!! update soon can't wait!!!!!!!
Date: 15 Jul 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 5
OMGosh!!!!!!!! There was so much in this chapter. Mike is drugging her???? I am beginning to wonder if he is abusing her or not. I am thinking something very bad happened to her in her past and Mike was her hero that saved her. I was surprised that Bella kissed Edward. I am glad that she made the 1st move. What is the deal with Marcus and Mike. Are they family? Can't wait for the next update. Hope it is soon.
Date: 15 Jul 2013 5:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
man i almost want to give mike the benefit of the doubt cause we really have no idea what is truly going on
noone has scene any bruises or mike is good at covering or hitting where noone can see
bella covers for mike so good.
i am puzzled
Date: 14 Jul 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 4
What in the world is really going on with Bella?? Is Mike beating her or not?? Some times I think he is and then there are othe times that Mike does not react like someone who is beating their wife.
Wow, I can't believe that Mike and Alice were going at it like that at a party. Also, can't believe that Jasper just sat there and let Mike talk to his wife like that.
I was wondering when Mike would start warning Edward. I am surprised that Mike has not started messing with Edward's work schedule.