Date: 29 Oct 2017 1:31 PM Title: Chapter 100
Well now we know where James and Victoria are. Idiots like they had no part in their obsessions and actions. Congrats even though I've read your other fabulous stories before your first. Keep writing I truly enjoy what you do. Thank you.
Date: 29 Oct 2017 9:16 AM Title: Chapter 96
I can see jasper living in a pool house being single and all but Rosalie comes from money and is engaged shouldn't she want her own home? I guess they're still all college kids. It's funny they are leaving their education behind to tour college campuses.
Date: 29 Oct 2017 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 93
Sorry everyone making Edward feel like an ass for having a feeling of being left out of his band and making a face is bullshit. BTW Meghan and Nessie are a tad annoying and over kill. The band should make choices about lead singers. Not these chicks and copyright laws are shit protect the music Edward. Don't trust their motives or record companies they do this to groups all the time. I have Edwards side on this one and Bella's tears don't work on me. I mean all the guy does is give to her. Bella, Bella, Bella! Hehe
Date: 29 Oct 2017 7:39 AM Title: Chapter 91
Yay for Emmett and Rosalie. Poor Tyler. Alice, BP disorder is hard even with mesds because often people stop taking their meds because of how they make them feel. Tough road to follow. I don't think Alice and jasper should get back together for a few years. Let her get regulated on meds and give him time to sort himself out. In other words epilogue reunion? But he should come back to Emerson just get an apartment off campus. Girls lie all the time unfortunately. Don't let it alter everything in your life.
Date: 29 Oct 2017 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 90
Oh Alice selfish doesn't cover it but Jasper guys should never put their birth control in the hands of their partner if they don't want kids. Be responsible. Bailing on your best friends wedding, your friendship, the band, potential record deal and your school of choice not cool. At least give it time dude. It's early June. Things can and do change. JS also what the heck is going on with that Victoria mess?
Date: 27 Oct 2017 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 82
I get it! Why go into music without your education we know not everyone makes it past demos. Also record companies always screw you over. Plus they've had stalkers as high school and college students imagine them as rock stars. No and thank you!
Date: 27 Oct 2017 5:48 PM Title: Chapter 79
I guess I'm far to cynical to welcome senior back. One grave site chat and boom! His turn around feels false he had over a decade to change seek out his son his blood and his best friends (Carlisle & Esme) I'm not feeling bow on the package. Sorry *ducks behind sofa*
Date: 27 Oct 2017 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 76
I'm so disappointed that fabulous Barbie wasn't with Rose. It must have felt good to punch his father. Also, I love how when parents give up their parental rights they always say shit like ' I'm your father respect me'. Huh? What? ;-)
Date: 26 Oct 2017 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 65
So does anyone else think that James sent Victoria. Or she came for him (a la canon)? Because I mean Larry happens to have the next TA make a pass at a student and its Edward out of ALL the students(yes I know he's smoking hot) and she goes from zero to crazy. Well anyway...
Date: 26 Oct 2017 1:06 PM Title: Chapter 60
Jeeze I'm with Edward 'when will it stop?' I mean Tanya you were a FWB and it's been over since aug/sept and now Victoria has no boundaries and is sexually harassing Edward. It also seems like Larry can't catch a break either. *sighs and shakes head*
Date: 26 Oct 2017 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 57
See I always though SM played down Renee's nature for the YA audience but this is how Renee is...selfish and judgmental and of course a cray-cougar. Way to go Edward you spoke calmly and with respect but you 'said it with your chest.' Ha!
Date: 26 Oct 2017 9:44 AM Title: Chapter 56
Esme and Renee...no comparison at all. Esme was all mom here. Bella needs therapy she got kidnapped twice within one month. That's brutal. So is this Victoria going to be a problem like canon because she's already acting like James did with the staring.These kids can't catch a break. It seems they are surrounded by delusional people. No means no (Jacob/Royce) taken means taken (Tanya/James/Victoria) jeeze.
Date: 25 Oct 2017 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 47
Everyone on that Rez is crazy. I don't understand this loyalty. And Bella not pressing charges? When she described it at beginning of the story she said Jacob hit her. When he actually tried to rape her. Why didn't Charlie insist this is crazy. Cray!
Date: 25 Oct 2017 2:40 PM Title: Chapter 44
Charlie should go back to the force he's the chief not P.I. Charlie. Chief sounds better. Jacob isn't dead because the cliffhanger (no pun intended) left things too open. Besides I really want him dead but drama/angst says he's not done. *le sigh* The cds of Edward with his mom was a great gift! I do think the angst could be spread around because Bella is getting her share and so is Edward. Jasper seems to be just chilling and we know he has the calm to handle a storm. Share the love. Final thought clearly they should stop having public sex because one of Bella's creeptastic stalkers is always watching. Lesson learned??;-) JS
Date: 25 Oct 2017 2:02 PM Title: Chapter 43
I send you much love and mucho respect but that chapter riled me up. I thought Jake descended from wolves what's up with the nine lives? WTFWT?! I can only guess with his giant ass cliff diving at night means he'll be back to further torture Bella and Edward. Those cops, seriously were they going to do their job? If I was Bella I would NEVER set foot back in forks. Charlie would have to visit me wherever. JS
Date: 25 Oct 2017 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 40
So I was wrong about the type but he does have cancer. So sad hope he stays okay. I realize that news over shadows the dating Sue for a year thing. But they started school 4 months ago and in that time both of Sue's kids have been involved with Bella's stalking by Jake. Is that drama going to come up? Charlie is aware right so how does hat work? As I said before how awkward and not cool.
Date: 25 Oct 2017 9:09 AM Title: Chapter 37
So let's back track all the way back to chapter one where Charlie didn't look so good and was really tired and pale and when Bella went to ask about it she got side tracked. Now cut to chapter 37 (2 1/2 months into the school year) and Carlisle is doing a clinical trial for testicular and prostate cancer. Hmmm...Is this a coincidence? Curious minds. I like the shorter chapters I think if I read it WIP I would have loved them long but reading it complete makes me anxious for certain drama resolutions and wondering how much will be covered since we have yet to finish a semester yet. Also I hope Charlie doesn't end up with a Sue. That will be all kinds of awkward with Seth and Leah and their Jake obsession. ;-D Again curious. Carrying on...
Date: 24 Oct 2017 11:24 PM Title: Chapter 32
Okay I'm confused did you change some things? First where did the panic attacks come from? All this stuff happening and not one until now. Also when did she get on Ativan? How did Emmett know when he just found out about Jake a few chapters back. Only Charlie knew. Now she tired to hurt herself and was diagnosed with depression? Maybe you changed chapters around. Anyway...? Also kids (Edward & Bella)when you don't know where your cray, cray stalker is stop having public sex. JS ;-)
Date: 24 Oct 2017 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 30
I just realized that his story is 100 chapters and we are only after Halloween before thanksgiving in the school year. Are you going to cover all the way to hea graduation, marriage and children like 10 years late? I thought it would originally be more drably but you are indeed writing beast chappy' s. Just curious. ;-)
Date: 24 Oct 2017 2:12 PM Title: Chapter 27
Okay enough kids are you talking to Charlie? Does he know what's going on? If so why the hell would you go home for Christmas when the stalker who gives you sick violent dreams is a few miles away. These asshole never care about restraining orders. JS
Date: 24 Oct 2017 10:19 AM Title: Chapter 25
Okay elephant in the room Seth the photography minor is an hour away and believes Jake is a saint and Bella is a whore? Um discuss? Does Charlie know any of these new developments? So get the sex haze but come on prople!
Date: 24 Oct 2017 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 24
So glad Bella didn't run but she went from badass to baby. Getting pissed about Tanya? Sure be upset but you weren't in a relationship the day you met and pulling all your friends into your drama is well...Bella. Also Emmett knew this why is he pissed. Cray, anyway nice make up. Also Bella sweetie pot meet kettle your ex is a violent stalker who sent photos of you two around campus so outdoor sex...not wise babes. JS
Date: 23 Oct 2017 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 21
Trigger warning for the rape dreams maybe? Why did the girls leave Bella asleep in the dorm with the door unlocked? Or did they? Obviously this other person is the one taking pictures right? Also it's so clear to see how much you love music in this chapter. I felt the love and knowledge. ;-)
Date: 23 Oct 2017 2:54 PM Title: Chapter 17
So that's how indeed Jake got her number from Charlie's phone. I thought Bella would draw that conclusion when she asked. Oh well...Why would Charlie want to be friends with billy if billy takes the side of his abusive son who stalking his daughter. Confuse me?!
Date: 22 Oct 2017 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 3
Giving Alice that background and ADHD assures her annoyances will be allowed because...damn! Skank Tanya, oh Edward. I hope you always gloved up with your own condoms chicks like this plot to deceive. I love both songs profiled nice choice.