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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 12:18 AM Title: Chapter 9: Outtake

HOT



Author's Response:

Hehehe You read & reviewed before I could get back on the computer. :) So my reply for all of them is THANK YOU! :)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 8

Ok I thought it would be cool that they stayed a 3-some....but ok

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 7

Where is this all going to go?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 19 Jul 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 6

Freaking a!  Lucky lucky girl!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 5

Lucky bitch!  Sooo jealous!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 4

Strange so they are going to share her?

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 3

They sure are free with their gifts!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 2

Pretty hot together

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 18 Jul 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow!

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 16 Jul 2013 12:18 PM Title: Chapter 8

Thanks!

Author's Response:

No, thank you! :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 15 Jul 2013 3:33 PM Title: Chapter 8

Beautiful wrap. It's all about experimenting, growing up and knowing what worked then, may not work now. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! That's exactly it. :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 7

Thanks! I thnk you are ending too soon ;)

Author's Response:

Hahaha Sorry. ;) I'm working on something else already. hehe

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 14 Jul 2013 5:32 AM Title: Chapter 7

Hmm...I think the "sharing" may be coming to an end??



Author's Response:

Yes, absolutely. ;) Thank you!

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 8:34 PM Title: Chapter 2

OMG, Jen. This is so hot! I may need to go read something really boring and dull in between chapters, like the manual for my dishwasher, just so I can cool off. This one is great!! I love Bella and Emmett together, a lot!!! Don't pay any attention to anyone giving you grief about this story. Bella and Emmett aren't even related. And you can't help who you have feelings for. 

Thanks for another great chapter, and for reminding me about the pictures. I'll definitely go check them out. Love the banner, btw. I'm assuming it is the work of our mutual friend. ;)

I'm off to read about my dishwasher. 



Author's Response:

Hahahaha

Thank you very much! :D

Yep, Bethy did a great job on it! ;)

Reviewer: sophdrea Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well, damn, Jenny, you just got right down to it, didn't you? No warm up for this story... just straight from the first sentence to "inferno"!!!  I know you don't know what compelled you to write this, but I'm very glad you did. If you do figure it out, and it's something I can send you in the mail, please let me know. I'll have a large supply of it on the way to you.

This is so hot, girl. I've never read a Bella/Emmett story before, but I have to say that I like it! Thanks for the fun. I'm off to read more!!

P.S.  Thanks also for throwing Edward into the mix. He always helps to heat things up!



Author's Response:

LOLOL Thanks! I appreciate it! :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 13 Jul 2013 1:08 PM Title: Chapter 6

Lovin' it! Thanks ;)

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 2:58 PM Title: Chapter 6

That was.....hot....no more words. 



Author's Response:

Thank you! :D

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 5

They get hotter! Yes please!

Author's Response:

Hehehe Thank you! :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:21 PM Title: Chapter 4

Edwards back! Yesssss

Author's Response:

Yes, yes he is! :)

Reviewer: beachlover Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 3

Jake never works!

Author's Response:

LOL Nope. :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Jul 2013 10:45 AM Title: Chapter 5

Love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you!!

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Jul 2013 2:13 PM Title: Chapter 5

Thanks for the warning!  Very hot....



Author's Response:

Hehe Thanks. :)

Reviewer: flyrbrd Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Jul 2013 1:23 PM Title: Chapter 4

Love it!

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awesome, as always!!!

Author's Response:

Thank you very much! :)

Reviewer: mizzdee Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Jul 2013 3:46 PM Title: Chapter 4

Awww...what a sweet date. I'm glad Edward was such a gentleman, settling for just a kiss goodnight and nothing more. Great way to end a perfect date.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Daphodill Signed [Report This]
Date: 06 Jul 2013 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 3

Emmett's so hot. Jake's disgusting. Glad he won't be in the story any more.

Em is sweet and sexy,I'd be so weak in the knees if he acted all possessive over me.

I'm very curious about what is up next.

Author's Response:

Hehehe Nope, he's gone! :) Thank you!

Reviewer: cmg1218 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 3

Thoughts are excellent awesome hot

Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 3

Yikes!  I get Emmett's confusion and how they both tried to forget. Looking forward to how Emmett leaves the picture & Edward enters!



Author's Response:

Emmett will be around (in THAT sense. ;) ) until the last couple of chapters, so... ;)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Jul 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 1

:)

i forsee a bit of jealousy, confusion, guilt and a whole lotta hurt.

Threesomes may seem sexy, exciting, naughty in theory....but I don't think it's realistic.  Just my opinion but I don't share ;P

However, nice to read....as long as we get the E/B HEA eventually. 



Author's Response:

LOL Nah, this story really isn't very realistic, but that's the fun of fanfiction! ;) Not too much jealousy, a little guilt, but no hurt in this one. ;) And yes, definitely an E/B HEA! :)

Reviewer: Daphodill Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jul 2013 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 2

Emmett is my favorite guy, so whenever he gets attention, I'm all for it.

What will.Charlie think about this changed relationship. He's not stupid, I'm sure he's had some suspicions.

Edward's coming back into play, sexually? I hope Bella doesn't get caught up with him. I always liked her best with Em.

Nice chapter with the sexytimes. Looking forward to more.

Author's Response:

Hehe Thanks.

Well, I stated in my summary & stuff that this is an Edward/Bella HEA. ;) And yes, Edward comes back into play sexually. I just couldn't see a HEA for Emmett & Bella in this, sorry! And nah, Charlie won't find out. :)

Reviewer: cleocleo22 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 2

Hey there! 

i loved these chapter and thanks for the story



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: JayNahNah Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Jul 2013 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 2

Very hot....but I see some issues later. 



Author's Response:

Thanks! :) Mmm, probably none I haven't thought of. ;) What are you thinking?

Reviewer: Chiisuture Signed [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 8:27 AM Title: Chapter 1

sounds interesting i can't wait to see how bella and the boys are going to handle this



Author's Response:

Hehe Thank you! :)

Reviewer: KCLutz4475 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 02 Jul 2013 3:23 AM Title: Chapter 1

Im ready for more



Author's Response:

LOL Thanks! More on Wednesday. :)

Reviewer: chicca923 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 1

Just amazing! I'm speechless! The plot is intriguing and now that I've seen the first chapter written I can't wait for the rest to be online ! 



Author's Response:

Aww, thank you! :D

Reviewer: Daphodill Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 8:12 PM Title: Chapter 1

My mind is absolutely blown. Is Emmett jealous now? It was a little squicky that they'd been sibs for so long, wouldn't they feel more familial? Maybe that's what Emmett's problem is, he's conflicted.

I want to know what is going on in his head. Bring on more sexy times. I love me some Emmett!

Author's Response:

No, he's not jealous. He is indeed conflicted and will be off and on for just a bit. :) Thank you! LOL

Reviewer: paola2208 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1

Hot, hot, hot.... Can't wait for the next one.



Author's Response:

Thank you! :)

Reviewer: Jojo657 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jul 2013 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 1

Wow 



Author's Response:

LOL Thanks. :)

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