[Report This]Date: 26 Sep 2013 4:37 AM Title: EPILOGUE
I absolutely loved this story, I laughed and couldn't stop reading till it was done. I think it is one of the best I've read.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 7:12 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Wonderful way to finish up. ROFL for Bella the baby making machine!! Good luck on the next story and contest.
TY for writing and sharing.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 45
Sily kids. Glad he finally appologized.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 44
At least he let her talk. Can't blame her for leaning away. He was a wanker.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 43
interesting story about the charm
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:40 PM Title: Chapter 40
Glad Em told was a moron he was. Skankya needs to really pay. E is a goober.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:39 PM Title: Chapter 39
James is such a prick. Hope he gets an incurable dick disease and all his hair falls out. Wonder what B saw in the papers.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 38
aww B realizes it and does the righ thing. But why was she kissing the sleeze.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 37
Ugh E def overreacted. Awww nice kid.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:17 PM Title: Chapter 36
Hope Skankya gets whats coming to her. Biatch. Ewww james?
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 35
ugh this DNA thing sucks.
Date: 19 Jun 2013 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 34
awww so glad he ended it before they did something they'd regret
[Report This]Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:56 AM Title: EPILOGUE
Job well done Ladies! I enjoyed this little tale from beginning to end. Looking forward to more great stories from you guys!
Much Love!
xoxo
Date: 14 Jun 2013 3:52 AM Title: EPILOGUE
Omg that was awesome!!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 7:22 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Always love your stories
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 1:56 AM Title: EPILOGUE
i so loved this story
it was a love story and i am glad they got their family and a hell of alot of kids wow 7
their family will stand the test of time. they are one soul
thank you, loved it
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 43
hot damn love it
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 1:05 AM Title: Chapter 42
wow charlie you go
so sad crying wow
[Report This]Date: 13 Jun 2013 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 41
love em, sad about edward man oh man how can you fix this
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 11:35 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Omg I'm so excited for everything!!!! Ahhhhh I love you guys you ate amazing authors and just gah can't even explain it!!!!! Will readers be able to read the ropin a sitter story and how soon will it be for your bdsm story and can't wait for July!!!!!! But it's so far away!!! Also have to tell you about how much I loved this story so amazing!!!!! Can't wait for everything new you have coming!!! Oh and can I have the link for the contest you're in so I can check it out??? Can't wait for your new stories!!!!!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 10:56 PM Title: EPILOGUE
what a great ending thanks so much
Date: 12 Jun 2013 10:21 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Great story! I cried when the kids came to the game on the buses and during the proposal. Loved the story! Thanks.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 9:05 PM Title: Chapter 45
Loved it thanks so much for the great story. He did good with his make up
Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 44
She doesnt think she is good enough for him
Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:42 PM Title: Chapter 43
How cool is that.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 42
Edward is luck Charlie dosent kick his ass
Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:24 PM Title: EPILOGUE
So sweet....love it.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:24 PM Title: Chapter 41
Ya he jumped the gun.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 8:05 PM Title: EPILOGUE
I am looking forward to your future projects! They all look promising. Great story! Thanks for writing.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 40
Oh man Edward you really fucked up!! I hope she gives you hell for it!!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 39
Oh man Edward you jerk!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 7:21 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Loved loved loved it
Date: 12 Jun 2013 7:20 PM Title: Chapter 37
Oh man Edward your going to regret what you did!! Your jerk!!!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 45
:) loved this story
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 45
You got my vote!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:41 PM Title: Chapter 45
LOVED it. I would have voted for it! It was a very sweet story and I really cannot wait to read the epilogue and see how our cute couple is doing. I hate to see it end.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 45
brilliant. just brilliant
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 44
Hmm, he just told her she was his soul mate and she leans away instead of pouncing on him. Poor Bella.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:36 PM Title: Chapter 44
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:30 PM Title: Chapter 42
ok, never mid Edward - Charlie will you marry me ?
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 43
That's perfect! I love this story!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:14 PM Title: Chapter 42
Way to go, Charlie! I love how you write these misunderstandings but clear them up fairly quickly.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:05 PM Title: Chapter 43
Nice twist. Love it!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 43
Of course they're soulmates!! The charm was just waiting for Edward to find Bella.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:54 PM Title: Chapter 41
There is still time. Fix it Edward! I'm glad you didn't drag out that misunderstanding.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter 41
Ahh, Edward, you didn't think it was going ot be that easy, did you?
Date: 12 Jun 2013 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 40
Oh wow! Didn't see that coming. Can't wait until Edward grovels.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 11:18 AM Title: Chapter 39
What on earth could Bella see in the test results that experts didn't see? But, yeah!
Date: 12 Jun 2013 11:16 AM Title: Chapter 38
Bless her heart. She just tries to give it back and her luck turns to crap again.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 37
Awww. That's sweet.
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 40
wow edward so quick to jump to a conclusion
did you ruin the good gal in your life
should bella give you a second cehanc
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 40
Bella is a true friend and she loves him no matter how shity he was to her.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 39
How about all tonight and epi tormorrow hey a girl can dream lol. They are both in pain I cant wait til they get this figured out.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 38
She is going to fix him that is all she wants poor girl.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 37
I think he just riped out Bella's heart.
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 36
OMFG what was that for. Please let him lisent to her
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter 39
wow poor bella
how quick your luck can change
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 39
love this story. Cannot wait for more
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 35
he is so sweet is his luck good when he is with bella
Date: 12 Jun 2013 3:01 AM Title: Chapter 34
Great first date and rounding bases lol
Date: 12 Jun 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh man I bet James tried to kiss her and it looked like they kissed oh man Edward don't be stupid!! O.O
Date: 12 Jun 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 35
Aww he didn't see Bella's necklace with he's charm lol :) loved it!! :D
Date: 12 Jun 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 34
Aww I loved it!!! :D
Date: 12 Jun 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 35
Poor Edward. He was so hot for Bella he didn't even see his own necklace!
[Report This]Date: 12 Jun 2013 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 35
i am glad edward is so accepting i just feel bad for him
Date: 11 Jun 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 34
I love it! I love them. Can't wait for more.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 33
Excellent 1st date....please let him find his picture!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 33
woo hoo first kiss!!!
Date: 11 Jun 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 32
glad he lays it out.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 1:44 PM Title: Chapter 31
oh wow....lost his wallet now? poor thing
Date: 11 Jun 2013 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 33
Yes, very hot first kiss. Yum! Very cute couple. Bella needs to think about the necklace and have a lightbulb moment.
Date: 11 Jun 2013 11:39 AM Title: Chapter 32
Bella is too cute! Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 33
oh they are moving forward yeah
love it and bella is standing strong. she is her own person and doesn't care what others think. i love it and i hope she stays stong. her mom is missing out on a great person that she is
love it
Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:40 AM Title: Chapter 33
Very hot such a conection they are a match
Date: 11 Jun 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 32
They are both so excited that it is a date