Date: 12 Oct 2016 12:10 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Such a cute story - thanks so much!
[Report This]Date: 29 Jul 2016 9:21 PM Title: EPILOGUE
awesome drabble fic thanks for sharing ;D
Date: 24 Nov 2015 7:47 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Thank you for writing and sharing your story!
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2015 7:04 AM Title: Chapter 8
Oh Boy~ this is gonna be a doozy
[Report This]Date: 22 Jun 2015 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well he dosen't seem to be hurt too bad after the fall... there seems to be no limping, gimping or bumps~
[Report This]Date: 21 Jun 2015 10:00 AM Title: Chapter 3
Nice that Edward is choosy... loved that he just left her standing there... did not take her to long to sidle up to a new one. Smart Man...
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:28 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Beautifully wrapped up as always! My word you ladies do nice work! This was a great little story and a real fast read, and I really liked it a lot!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:49 AM Title: Chapter 45
I loved when she jumped on his back and promised never to kiss anyone ever again! That was too cute!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:44 AM Title: Chapter 44
Maybe because she's afraid to stealhis good luck again? Or perhaps she still feels hurt about what he accused her of being?
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:37 AM Title: Chapter 43
No wonder his mother told him the charm would help him find his true love! Now we have to hope Bella forgives his nasty temper!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 42
Absolutely, Charlie is the best! I just hope Edward can make things right between him and Bella!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 41
It is strange and wonderful at the same time, that Emmett is the voice of reason in all this! I think Edward realizes just how bad he has messed up this connection he has with Bella!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:14 AM Title: Chapter 40
Makes me wonder if Mr. Cullen can crawl on his belly like a snake? Here he was a foulmouthed ass to Bella and she still saved his ass!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:05 AM Title: Chapter 39
I hope Bella gets a chance at James when he isn't wearing a cup! Then I want her to slap Edward, not too hard and only once! Thank God for Charlie!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 11:01 AM Title: Chapter 38
And all I can think about is how he acted when she was trying to give the thing back! What a damn mess!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 37
That was so unfair of him to not let her explain! I hope Edward remembers what Emmett said about not fucking up and losing his true love!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 36
Oh thee of little faith! This is not going to go well, I can just tell! I just wonder how that kiss happened and why!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 35
Come on, nobody loses a DNA test, unless they were "persuaded" to do so! Edward is getting way more than his share of shitty luck and it's not fair! (I know, life isn't fair, but I feel so bad for his situation!)
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 34
I hope Charlie will be happy his baby girl is dating his favorite Mariner. With all the bad publicity right now, he might not! I like that Bella writes in her journal and has some great stuff to write about!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 33
Oh yes! The chemistry is over the the top! Then again, I guessed it might be!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:16 AM Title: Chapter 32
After that heartfelt declaration, how could she think it was anything but a date?
Date: 10 Jan 2015 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 31
First his good luck charm handed down from his mother, now the only picture of him and his birth parents,gone! I could cry, I'm feeling so bad for Edward. Thank heaven he has Bella for moral support, if nothing else!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:59 AM Title: Chapter 30
Though they give him a ration, I really think Rose and Em are trying to help Edward. Let's see how it goes!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:55 AM Title: Chapter 29
Emmett is amazing all of a sudden, with these pearls of wisdom!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:46 AM Title: Chapter 28
I hope when Edward discovers the necklace is on Bella, that he doesn't accuse her of stealing it!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 27
Smart move on Mr. Cullen's part! Glad he has shown up for dinner and overnight. The shower probably helped, too after the smoke fro the kitchen fire.
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 26
Well, is he coming over or not? Make up your minds, you two!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:24 AM Title: Chapter 25
I'm kind of disappointed that she would believe any of the crap on the news!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 24
Haven't all the readers figured out that Bella's good luck and Edward's bad, both come from her posession of his medallion?
Date: 10 Jan 2015 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 23
Oh yay, they meet again! Maybe now things can even out for both of them!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 8:05 AM Title: Chapter 22
Okay that could very well happen to anyone in his position, a sports figure or other celebrity type. That seems to be par for the course with some greedy publicity seekers!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:54 AM Title: Chapter 21
I suppose some will find this amusing, but it's starting to get kind of mean, in my opinion. How about giving the poor guy a break?
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 20
I'm almost afraid to see what else is going to happen to Edward! It was amazing that UW came through the way they did for Bella's scholarship and housing! Sure does look like whoever has that medallion has all the luck!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 7:26 AM Title: Chapter 19
It's very sweet of Bella to give her dad the car she won. She just can't believe her luck is gpoing to stay this good. Probably about like Edward can't believe his is going to stay bad!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:56 AM Title: Chapter 18
That necklace must have some powerful mojo, Bella is having wonderful luck!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 17
Okay, if she has Edward's good luck medallion, why isn't it working?
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:39 AM Title: Chapter 16
I bet I know where that necklace of his went to! When Bella got her charm bracelet tangled around his neck, and it broke, his good luck charm must have been entangled! Once they figure it out, that will be the way for them to get together! This guy is having the devil's own time of it, with false stories and being arrested and a scratched up car and being on the no-fly list! What a mess!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 15
Is this secret magical story? How else would the poor guy never get stopped and still have outstanding tickets? Makes no sense to me, anyway! Sure sounds like Edward has inherited Bella's crappy luck!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 4:22 AM Title: Chapter 14
Hooray for Emmett, a true friend and wiser than Edward believed him to be! Okay, if he knows who she is and where she is, he's bound to remember her dad's a cop. I bet he can find her if he wants to bad enough!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:51 AM Title: Chapter 13
It has to be Bella's bad luck at work in Edward's life, poor baby! I think he's silly to worry about her age, before he gets to know her!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 12
I'm just crossing my fingers that he's having as much trouble forgetting her as she is forgetting him!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 11
So, what's the big problem? It's not like she's sixteen, so I can't see that they couldn't date, she's of legal age after all!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 10
That was a perfect way to get rid ofm the slimy James Hunter! What makes him think he's God's gift to women? Yuck! I loved that Edward heard and liked the way Bella got rid of the creep! Even better that they played pool!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:25 AM Title: Chapter 9
Charlie is the best as Bella's dad, goes without saying! Poor Edward, having such a bad game, but at least he's not hurt!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:21 AM Title: Chapter 8
It's cute that Bella wants to keep the Mariners safe and picks a White Sox player, and cuter that Edward gives her a signed bat to hit with. Her dadis just going to be in heaven!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 7
Well, at least Edward isn't seriously hurt. Too bad he didn't get Bella's number when he wanted, but she knows where to find him after the game!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh please tell me Bella's bad luck hasn't rubbed off on Edward! Just when they have met and Charlie's dreams have come true!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 5
The instant I read the words banana peel, I knew who would slip on it, just sure as the world! Sure glad Emmett sent Edward to the rescue so they could meet!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:30 AM Title: Chapter 4
That goodluck charm from his mom seems to really work for Edward, despite the fact he hasn't yet met his soul mate!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 3
I just read your author's note, answering the two questions about Bella's age. It amazes me that people can read something and not remember it a couple days later! Oh well, if it weren't for people, we'd have no fun at all! This chapter, with the pushy broad wanting Edward to give her something to remember him by, was a hoot! The box of condoms, with his picture on the top was hilarious! I hear stuff like her hitting on him happens in real life, too! Must get to be a drag!
Date: 10 Jan 2015 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 2
Charlie surely does love his Mariners, and I suppose the Seahawks, too especially now they've won a superbowl! Matter of fact, a lot of long-time loyal fans got that big reward! Yay!
Date: 09 Jan 2015 11:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I officially love Charlie(really always have!) for not giving up on his daughter, unlike her mother! Poor Bella, she must really have been born under a black cloud!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 4:33 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Perfect ending. Loved this story.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:43 PM Title: Chapter 45
OMGosh! !!!! So glad that Bella let Edward explain. Something that he should have let Bella do from the beginning. Glad she forgave him.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 44
She is thinking that she is not Edward's mate.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:27 PM Title: Chapter 43
Love it !!!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 42
Go Charlie! !!!! Go Charlie! !!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 41
Love Emmett! !!!!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 40
Emmett is one smart cookie in this story. Can't wait to see Edward's reaction.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:12 PM Title: Chapter 39
Ok this explains everything. Wow things can look a lot different than they really are. Glad she went to Jenks and told him what she thought the problem was with the test.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:07 PM Title: Chapter 38
Ok now we know how she found out it was Edward's necklace but why was she letting James kiss her?
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 37
What the heck just happened in this chapter? Why was Bella is with James?? How did she know that she had Edward's necklace? This chapter is just out of the blue .
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:00 PM Title: Chapter 36
WHAT in the world is going on? ?? I am so glad I do not have to wait for the next update. I am so off to read the next chapter! !!!!
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:36 PM Title: Chapter 35
Tanya is doing something on her end of the test to make it come back like that. She is putting something in the boys mouth to make it do that. That is my theory.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 34
Love this chapter
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 33
Hot hot hot. Can't wait to see what the media says about them dating.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 32
Wow he was just blunt and to the point. Lol
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 31
I hope to goodness that Edward gets the picture of him and his birth parents back. That is really sad.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 30
Lol. Emmett and Rose crack me up. Glad Edward asked her out.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:14 PM Title: Chapter 29
Emmett speaks wise words. Edward needs to listen to him.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:11 PM Title: Chapter 28
This Rose seems pretty cool.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:06 PM Title: Chapter 27
Glad Edward took her up on her offer.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:00 PM Title: Chapter 26
Poor Edward. I think if I were him I would crawl in bed and stay there and never get up. Lol
Date: 28 Aug 2014 1:48 PM Title: Chapter 25
Well now Bella knows what has been going on with Edward
Date: 28 Aug 2014 1:45 PM Title: Chapter 24
Glad they have reconnected.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 1:42 PM Title: Chapter 23
They finally meet again.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 22
Edward seems to be having worse luck then when Bella had bad luck.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 21
Wow Edward just can't win. That is awful.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 12:46 PM Title: Chapter 20
So glad that she is going to college.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 19
Charlie is so sweet. I wished I had a medallion like that one. I need some good luck.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 18
So the medallion is working for her now. Maybe it will help her meet Edward again
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 17
So how did the medallion end up with Bella?
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 16
So he did lose his necklace.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 15
Wow bad bad luck
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 14
Love Emmett
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:42 AM Title: Chapter 13
Seems like Bella's bad luck has rubbed off on him.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 12
Poor Bella
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 11
No I was not expecting that
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:27 AM Title: Chapter 10
Love that she was looking for someone else. Lol. James seems like an ass.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 9
They have changed each others luck
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:17 AM Title: Chapter 8
Lol.she picked a White Sox player so a Mariners player would not get hurt. Lol
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 7
Glad I found your story. Can't wait to read more.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 6
Oh no. He is going to have bad luck now.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 5
Well they have meet. Now will Edward become unlucky or will Bella's luck start changing and get better.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 4
So Edward has not always had a charmed life.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 3
Edward seems nice and not cocky.
Date: 28 Aug 2014 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 2
Bella really has some bad luck.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2014 11:14 PM Title: EPILOGUE
Wonderful story!!