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Reviewer: jackieo38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Jan 2020 3:04 PM Title: Chapter 13

I hope you continue this story, I really like reading it. And I wonder if Bella and Jasper end up together and how that will happen 

Reviewer: jackieo38 Signed [Report This]
Date: 20 Dec 2017 12:44 PM Title: Chapter 13

I can see Bella leaving the force to be with Jasper

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 18 May 2016 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 13

This story is a perfect ten!!!! I'm so happy you're back and writing new chapters!!!!!

See you next update!!!!!

Reviewer: zanath Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 Mar 2016 4:56 PM Title: Chapter 13

thanks for the update.  Really like this story and the diffrent pairings.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 17 Aug 2015 1:56 PM Title: Chapter twelve

Good update

Reviewer: Katelife Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Aug 2015 7:13 PM Title: Chapter eleven

I have been drawn in to this story...eager for continuation of story...please I know it's been awhile .. But please continue this story!  Your writing is captivating.



Author's Response:

Hey... At the end of July, I started to update again... :) This is the fourth update ever since. I don't promise to update every week, but I'm going to try. Because you have review you get a little surprise:

 

She walks by me and goes immediately to the office. Isa is standing at the bar, writing on a paper. "I'm going to talk with Alice in the office."

She looks up. "I don't care if you fuck her in your office."
This made me angry. "God damn, Isa."
"Isabella," she corrected me.
"Isabella, why are you acting like a bitch?"
"Now you care!" she yells. "Yesterday, you couldn't care less."
I close my eyes and take a deep breath. "I'm sorry." I say eventually. "I'm really sorry."

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Aug 2015 8:45 AM Title: Chapter eleven

Good update



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! And I hope you stay around for the next chapter! :)

She walks by me and goes immediately to the office. Isa is standing at the bar, writing on a paper. "I'm going to talk with Alice in the office."
She looks up. "I don't care if you fuck her in your office."
This made me angry. "God damn, Isa."
"Isabella," she corrected me.
"Isabella, why are you acting like a bitch?"
"Now you care!" she yells. "Yesterday, you couldn't care less."
I close my eyes and take a deep breath. "I'm sorry." I say eventually. "I'm really sorry."

Reviewer: chritbella Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:48 AM Title: Chapter ten

I enjoy reading your story. Angela seems to be hiding something. Can't wait to read your next chapter.



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! As promised, a little suprise:

“What do you mean?” I ask her, curious at who the mystery person was.

“She met him at her graduation party for High School. It was the first time we let her go to a party.” Mrs. Webber turns to the fire place, and on the mantel stood an array of different pictures. I stand up to take a closer look. Angela looks so different in these that even I can see that I never met the same girl as on these pictures. In one of them she is smiling with each arm wrapped around one of her younger brothers. She’s wearing a classic blue, but old fashioned, dress. The dress line comes below her knees and it didn’t show any cleavage.

 

“My husband is the reverend at the nearby church,” she explains. I look at her and give her a small smile, before going back to my seat. “Angela always complied with everything we did. She had her freedom.”

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:31 AM Title: Chapter ten

Well that was way out of left field for me.   Is she trying to distance herself so she doesn't get more attached to Jasper?

Something is up with Angela too and I am wondering if she is a plant from Alice or whoever Alice is working with?



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! And here is the little surprise :)

 

“What do you mean?” I ask her, curious at who the mystery person was.

“She met him at her graduation party for High School. It was the first time we let her go to a party.” Mrs. Webber turns to the fire place, and on the mantel stood an array of different pictures. I stand up to take a closer look. Angela looks so different in these that even I can see that I never met the same girl as on these pictures. In one of them she is smiling with each arm wrapped around one of her younger brothers. She’s wearing a classic blue, but old fashioned, dress. The dress line comes below her knees and it didn’t show any cleavage.

 

“My husband is the reverend at the nearby church,” she explains. I look at her and give her a small smile, before going back to my seat. “Angela always complied with everything we did. She had her freedom.”

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 03 Aug 2015 2:15 AM Title: Chapter ten

Good update



Author's Response:

Thank you for your review! Here is the surprise:

“What do you mean?” I ask her, curious at who the mystery person was.

“She met him at her graduation party for High School. It was the first time we let her go to a party.” Mrs. Webber turns to the fire place, and on the mantel stood an array of different pictures. I stand up to take a closer look. Angela looks so different in these that even I can see that I never met the same girl as on these pictures. In one of them she is smiling with each arm wrapped around one of her younger brothers. She’s wearing a classic blue, but old fashioned, dress. The dress line comes below her knees and it didn’t show any cleavage.

 

“My husband is the reverend at the nearby church,” she explains. I look at her and give her a small smile, before going back to my seat. “Angela always complied with everything we did. She had her freedom.”

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 27 Jul 2015 8:48 AM Title: Chapter nine

Great update



Author's Response:

Thank you for taking some time to review.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 24 Jul 2015 8:01 PM Title: Chapter eight

Good update

Reviewer: AuRevoirMonCauchemar Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Oct 2013 2:37 PM Title: Chapter five

once again, absolutely amazing.

Reviewer: dreamkeeper1 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Oct 2013 9:40 AM Title: Chapter five

Good update

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Oct 2013 12:49 PM Title: Chapter five

great chapter cant wait to see wat happens next update soon

Reviewer: Lud Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 11:51 PM Title: Chapter four

Bella is the male version of Jasper., That's crazy.
She actually slept with Felix? Felix will have problems with Jasper, or it is also infiltrated the police, I think it would be good if Felix was an undercover cop, after all Bella needs help.
Kisses.

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 22 Sep 2013 2:51 AM Title: Chapter four

great chapter loved it

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter three

Yeah he's acting way too nice, sweet, weak to pull off being apart of a crime family....Toughen him up please

Reviewer: scareDcat Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 9:04 PM Title: Chapter four

Ooooh! He's falling fast :)

Reviewer: thackebeil1 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter two

Jasper is coming off a little soft to be a mob boss...I know she's not suppose to know this about him yet and all but normally mob people carry themselves in a certain way and exhume power. He just comes across as a normal every day nice guy

Reviewer: ilykate8 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2013 6:09 PM Title: Chapter four

love it

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Jul 2013 4:12 AM Title: Chapter three

Love it cant wait

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 29 Jun 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter three

Loved it, can't wait to read more .

Reviewer: LBD Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 23 Jun 2013 12:49 AM Title: Chapter two

Great story. I hope you update often.

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Jun 2013 4:32 PM Title: Chapter two

Another great chapter , cant wait to read more

Reviewer: TillITryIllNeverKnow Signed [Report This]
Date: 04 Jun 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter one

Nice set up.  One or two things though: Bella would be in the 15th precinct and her dad would simply be referred to as the Police Comissioner of New York City or comissionerod the NYPD.  

I'm looking forward to your story!  Thaks for the hard work!

Reviewer: lonely_angie17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter one

Good start, can't wait for more!!! 

Reviewer: jamiebaker68 Signed [Report This]
Date: 01 Jun 2013 7:00 AM Title: Chapter one

great start cant wait to read more

Reviewer: belissa Signed [Report This]
Date: 31 May 2013 10:38 AM Title: Chapter one

I love it, love it, love it... I sooo can't wait to read more

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