Date: 04 Nov 2013 3:24 PM Title: Chapter 190
aww great chapter loved it glad they all were able to work ut there issues her and esme and her and edward
Date: 04 Nov 2013 1:35 PM Title: Chapter 190
Amazing. Loved it
Date: 04 Nov 2013 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 190
Wow. I'm glad she got things worked out with Esme. That would have driven me crazy too. Their Christmas sounds awesome. And that lemon....wow. Very moving. Several times I wanted to cry while reading this chapter. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 04 Nov 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 190
Yay! Success in few things!!
Date: 04 Nov 2013 5:26 AM Title: Chapter 190
That was amazing! I really loved this chapter so much!
Date: 04 Nov 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 190
Awesome chapter. From Esme to the cemetery to making love. It was perfect. And, thank you for the long chapter.
Date: 04 Nov 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 189
Being a little over 38 weeks pregnant, I'm doing the jig as best as I can! Lol! YAY!
Date: 04 Nov 2013 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 190
woo hoo glad she got to talk things out with esme. and Yummy ending.
Date: 04 Nov 2013 2:06 AM Title: Chapter 190
Yeah...the hotness is back!
Date: 04 Nov 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 190
Ok I'm glad they got past all this but I don't agree how they ganged up on Esme. She had a right to feel that way. Im my eyes Bella was in the wrong and in real life would not be as easily forgiven by everyone, no matter what her reasons were. Sorry it's just my opinion.
[Report This]Date: 04 Nov 2013 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 190
Absolutely loved it can't wait for more
Date: 03 Nov 2013 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 189
I was pretty sure you'd give out the death sentence, and I'm do glad you did;) this excuse of a man has no reason to stay alive!
Date: 03 Nov 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 189
i really liked the last couple chapters. im so glad that bella got through her testimony, that aro is going to die, and that bella is making progress, letting edward touch her scars, feeling better, knowing she wants to get everything back. cant wait for more!
Date: 02 Nov 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 189
The next best thing would be if he was painfully tortured & killed prior to meeting his painless death sentence. Which in the US takes about 7 years to carry out after all legal actions are exhausted.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 1:50 PM Title: Chapter 189
So glad they found him guilty...although lethal injection is too easy of way for him to go out.
[Report This]Date: 02 Nov 2013 5:21 AM Title: Chapter 189
*both hands are raised and a party has started* loved it. He finally got what he deserved. See ya next time.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 189
raise hand lol great chapter loved it glad she can close this chapter of her life and gets to move on more
Date: 02 Nov 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 189
Woo hoop. Can't wait for her to get the closure she needs.
Date: 02 Nov 2013 3:04 AM Title: Chapter 189
Oh wow, thatw as amazing! I really loved this!!!
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 189
I am so happy and sad for Bella. My heart just aches that she's a shell of her former self, but I am very happy that she will be able to close that chapter of her life and try to move forward and that Aro will never again be a threat to her. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 02 Nov 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 189
im clapping about the death part for aro. figured you would do that. so happy tha thse got to see her dad.
Date: 01 Nov 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 188
Will be glad to get this part over. Would like to see a little stress free lovin
Date: 01 Nov 2013 10:58 AM Title: Chapter 188
great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2013 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 188
I hope Aro has been initiated!!!
Date: 01 Nov 2013 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 188
So sweet to see the joy Bella could feel while Edward touched her scarrs!
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 188
Thanks for the update, can't wait fro Aro to burn! Also, if you wanted to say Little One in italian then it's piccolina, piccolo is for males, so you basically called Bella "little boy" LOL Just wanted you to know, can't wait for the next chapter. xo Mina
[Report This]Date: 01 Nov 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 188
Loved it. Can't wait for the verdict and punishment for that monster.
Date: 01 Nov 2013 2:08 AM Title: Chapter 188
That was amazing! I cannot wait to see what happens next with the verdict!
Date: 01 Nov 2013 1:32 AM Title: Chapter 187
That was amazing! I really loved it! Gah, will Edward talk dirty in other languages?
Date: 01 Nov 2013 1:24 AM Title: Chapter 188
okay, so a big transition chapter. I'm sure the jury is going to put Aro away forever no questions there. And I'm happy to see things going better with Bella and Edward. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 01 Nov 2013 12:37 AM Title: Chapter 188
Well next is th verdit. She seems to be getting better
Date: 01 Nov 2013 12:12 AM Title: Chapter 188
Cant wait for verdict. I'll ignore what I know about the law and assume he'll die quickly. LOL
Date: 31 Oct 2013 2:08 PM Title: Chapter 187
She's going to trust him with herself again, yay!
Date: 31 Oct 2013 12:41 PM Title: Chapter 187
great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 31 Oct 2013 4:49 AM Title: Chapter 187
Loved it. Bella is making bigger strides toward her recovery than she realizes. Can't wait for more.
Date: 31 Oct 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 187
Poor b. She's got a long way to go.
Date: 31 Oct 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 187
Not sure if I have mentioned it, but this story has turned into so much more than I expected when it started. It is really a beautiful story.
Date: 30 Oct 2013 11:16 PM Title: Chapter 187
sweet chapter.
Date: 30 Oct 2013 11:08 PM Title: Chapter 187
Poor Bella! Again I <3 Ed!
Date: 30 Oct 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 187
Awww, they needed this chapter. It sucks that it took the trial to get her to that point, but this is a major step for her and having Edward support her and tell her he loves her and she's beautiful despite the scars is what she needs. And I like how it progresses from his hands over hers to just his hands. That could have gone much differently if it were not slow and gradual like that. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 30 Oct 2013 4:02 PM Title: Chapter 186
I bet Aro is so embarressed now that everyone knows he has no testicles. In his world that is a big thing. He will look less manly. I am so proud of Bella. She didn't let him get to her. She stayed strong.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 186
Aro definitely is psycho
Date: 29 Oct 2013 5:58 PM Title: Chapter 185
Can understand B's nervousness
Date: 29 Oct 2013 12:43 PM Title: Chapter 186
ARO is a piece of s... and should be held in prison on a metal table until the end of time!!
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 8:47 AM Title: Chapter 186
Well done Bella!!!!
Date: 29 Oct 2013 7:02 AM Title: Chapter 186
raises hand great chapter loved it glad she got to say her side
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 186
I'm hoping Aro isn't going to try and ask for another trail since his attorney doesn't know what she's doing. Aro just keeps digging himself in deeper and deeper.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 185
I'm looking forward to the cross examination.
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 6:17 AM Title: Chapter 184
One question from the defense attorney... hmm... something doesn't feel right about that.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 186
I liked this, especially that aro blew up when she sai he had no testicles, lol. Can't wait for more!
Date: 29 Oct 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 186
No doubt Aro is evil. Death would be too good for him, let the bastardized suffer.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 3:45 AM Title: Chapter 186
Yeah! Good job bella
[Report This]Date: 29 Oct 2013 3:41 AM Title: Chapter 186
Loved it! Bella will go a long way toward her recovery now that she stood up to Aro in court. Oh and in case you didn't see it through my iPad while I read the author note *both hands waving high in the air*
See ya next time.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 3:34 AM Title: Chapter 186
Awesome chapter to a great story.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 186
That was amazing! I really cannot wait to see what will happen next in the trial!
Date: 29 Oct 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 186
Oh my he is beyond evil. I can't believe that he thought he could question Bella. I'll be happy when he is put to death. Loved it
Date: 29 Oct 2013 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 186
Aro was always evil but now I think he's boarded the train to coocoo town.
Date: 29 Oct 2013 1:20 AM Title: Chapter 186
i have a feeling aro will regret messing with edward and bella after this trial. i am glad bella was able to get through this and hopefully dont suffer from this. keep up the good work
Date: 29 Oct 2013 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 186
lol<----hands up for Aro being the devil incarnate. I KNEW he wasn't done and that something was going to happen while she was on the stand. There was no way he was going to be quiet and that's a lot of photos that Phil entered into evidence. Poor Bella having to go through that. But I think, this trial will be good for her since it's closure to what happened to her. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 186
I was a bit scared for her, with not knowing what shit Aro would produce in her testimony, but you proved once again what a great author you are in creating this very nice judge;)
Date: 28 Oct 2013 8:10 PM Title: Chapter 185
I'm very curious with what's coming next. I hope Aro is not going to try to intimidate Bella.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 185
lol at least he got her nerves settled and shes calm although horny at the moment before entering the courtroom. im glad that they are getting this out of the way. i hope that she can get through and get on with her life with no issues left. keep up the good work
Date: 28 Oct 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 185
great chapter loved it
Date: 28 Oct 2013 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 185
SO amazing! I cannot wait to see Bella's testimony!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 3:03 AM Title: Chapter 184
Oh wow, that was amazing! Only one question from Aro's "attorney"? Hmm...
Date: 28 Oct 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 185
What a kiss!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 185
Sorry I'm not reviewing every chapter. I've been reading on my phone and don't like to review on it as much as on a computer. I've liked the last couple chapters but I'm so ready for Bella's turn.
Date: 28 Oct 2013 2:12 AM Title: Chapter 185
Hmmm, I just have to wonder, if Aro isn't fighting anything, what's the point of going to trial? Why didn't he just sign a plea deal and be done with it. There's got to be something up the Defense Attorney's sleeve. I don't trust it and I'm thinking that they are going to give Bella more shit on the stand to frazzle her and try to torture her some more. I'm not liking how this trial is going, something else has to be going on. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 28 Oct 2013 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 185
Edward was a great distraction!
Date: 27 Oct 2013 11:35 PM Title: Chapter 184
Lol for aro getting a rookie
Date: 27 Oct 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 184
Goodness! Your story vanished from fanfiction! But I'm so glad I found it here! Amazing chapter!! I cannot wait for more!! Xoxoxoxoxoxo
Author's Response:
I pulled it from FFn because they, well, suck...I'm glad you found me over here! ;-)
Date: 27 Oct 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 184
wow, really bad public defender ;)
[Report This]Date: 27 Oct 2013 4:30 AM Title: Chapter 184
I look forward to every update. Edward's testimony went well. Hopefully Bella's will go just as well. I can't wait to read more. Thank you for writing and sharing your story with us.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 2:43 AM Title: Chapter 184
another great chapter but the defense attorney should probably do another kind of law in my opinion.
Date: 27 Oct 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 184
Something doesn't seen right.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 10:20 PM Title: Chapter 184
Hope this goes as easy for Bella.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 184
Love this story! Can't wait for the update, hearing from Bella on the stand will be interesting.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 184
Basically they're wrapping it up for them ..
Date: 26 Oct 2013 7:25 PM Title: Chapter 184
Wow. Aro's attorney SUCKS. She can't fight worth a crap. This is going to be an easy win for the Prosecutor. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 26 Oct 2013 7:12 PM Title: Chapter 184
That was all she was gonna ask? Wow!!!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 184
Loloved it
Date: 26 Oct 2013 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 184
Very anticlimactic indeed...
Date: 26 Oct 2013 6:44 PM Title: Chapter 184
That was quick and dirty
Date: 26 Oct 2013 6:28 PM Title: Chapter 184
Great chapter, Can't wait to see how bella goes...I have a feeling Aro has something up his slimy wizard's sleeve ;) I Don't review very much, but I just wanted to take the time and thank you for all the time and effort you put into your stories. They help me escape the stress of my day and enjoy intriguing plot, sexyy characters, hot sex and hilarious banter. You are a great Author, which you probably already know based on the immense love of your stories! Muchos love, Hrandrlover1