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Reviewer: ladicullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 201

Oh I hate to see this end I have so enjoyed this amazing journey thank you for this wonderful ride.

Reviewer: Mada Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 1:11 PM Title: Chapter 201

Fantastic story - thank you

Reviewer: iza Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 12:22 PM Title: Chapter 201

Thank you for the story- I like it very much....

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 9:34 AM Title: Chapter 201

I guess I cried more in this chapter than on some other completed fics...

 

It was an amazing ride once again you took me on, and I'm forever thankful that you wrote this!

CU soon Sweety,

ps. Another big thanks for all the lovely pics you put on your blog&tumblr, they never stop to be inspiring;) 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 8:46 AM Title: Chapter 201

loved this story

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 7:23 AM Title: Chapter 201

Great ending

Reviewer: tumblejunky Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 6:27 AM Title: Chapter 201

Awe! *sniff sniff* it's all done! Loved the whole story! :D Thank you for writing it! 

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 4:20 AM Title: Chapter 201

great ending loved it great job

Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 201

amazing

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 201

AWE!!! Loved it!! You must do an outtake - we need to know if they have more!  So good, the whole story was so good.  Can't wait for another story from you.

Reviewer: GreenEyedLove06 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 201

Have absolutely loved this story

Reviewer: sarasue Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 201

thankyou so much for this wonderful journey of words i'll be waiting for the next xo

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 201

Sweet...loved it....thanks so much!

Reviewer: sonogal Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 8:07 PM Title: Chapter 200

I can't believe we only have one more chapter. I love these characters. I love your stories in general. You are very talented.

Reviewer: chrisbraddy Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 3:15 PM Title: Chapter 200

AWWWWW  I love love love this story!!!!

Reviewer: neffi1957 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter 200

Great chapter, hate to see it end.

Reviewer: Shaunacey Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 200

Super good

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 200

That was an amazing story! I'm so sad to see them almost gone...

Reviewer: ocdcullen815 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:57 AM Title: Chapter 200

love, lovee, loveee this story!! i rate u up their with one of my favs in a mafia story sexylexi and the storm series :D to me thats quite an honor, i hope u feel the same~~~ i cant wait for the epi!!! ty so much for the great story and sharing with us all

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 200

loved this

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:35 AM Title: Chapter 199

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:33 AM Title: Chapter 198

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:20 AM Title: Chapter 200

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:16 AM Title: Chapter 199

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 198

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 6:06 AM Title: Chapter 197

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Reviewer: tumblejunky Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 4:05 AM Title: Chapter 200

YAY!!!!!! *sniffles* 

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 3:19 AM Title: Chapter 200

Awww. I'm glad she went to the ceremony and the proposal was BEAUTIFUL! Thanks for sharing! 

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 199

YAY!! Edward was able to make it there in time! Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 200

aww great couple chapters glad he was able to make it in time

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 200

Woo hoo for Bella. Em is such a goober.  Awww for proposal

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 199

Woohoo for Leslie!!!! Carlisle is funny

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:33 AM Title: Chapter 198

awww betting Edward shows up.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 197

Ah. Ang is still a judgemental biatch. I like Felipe too.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 196

Go Bella!!!! Glad she is getting better with intimacy again.

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 200

AWE!! A tissue waring would have been nice!! Loved it!!

Reviewer: hotmama4jd Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 1:34 AM Title: Chapter 200

I can't believe this wild ride is almost over!!  I have enjoyed every word of this great story.  Thanks so very much for sharing it with us!  I am so ready to read the epi, but yet so sad too!!  Love ya!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 200

Awwwwww!  Love it!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 199

Oh boy!

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 11 Nov 2013 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 200

Great proposal.  So sad that you will be done as I will miss them.

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 198

It's almost over :(

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 11:56 PM Title: Chapter 198

Too bad we didn't get more Felipe, he seems like he woukd be a fun character. I'm sure Edward is going to make graduation. It will be sad when it's over.

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 198

Awww, Poor Bella. I'm betting that Edward IS going to make it and it's being kept a secret and that's whey Esme was so insistent. I love that Felipe has hired her on and that he thinks her book will be a best seller. That's got to be refreshing for Bella. Thanks for sharing! I am SO going to miss this story.

 

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 10:30 PM Title: Chapter 198

Good job Bella!

Reviewer: LaPumuckl Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 197

I'm glad she had Felipe to help her through this, he sounds really nice!

Reviewer: WAL70 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 197

NO! IT CANT BE ALMOST OVER, I WILL MISS THEM!

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 197

I like Felipe. I'm glad he's there to help her. And I want to smack the hell out of Angie and Jessica. Who does that shit. Bunch of bitches. And that sucks that Edward may not be at her graduation. I really hope he's able to get there for that. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 196

Well, I'm happy to see Bella recovering and becoming more of herself and working through her issues. That they can reconnect in physical ways like that is an awesome sign and I am so totally with you. I want an FBIward. He's so freaking awesome. Thanks for sharing! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 197

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Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 8:06 PM Title: Chapter 197

Poor Bella :(. Way to take down Angie!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 196

Lucky girl!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 196

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 4:07 PM Title: Chapter 196

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 3:41 PM Title: Chapter 195

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 3:35 PM Title: Chapter 194

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Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 195

great chapter loved it

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 9:00 AM Title: Chapter 193

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Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 192

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Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 195

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Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 10 Nov 2013 5:38 AM Title: Chapter 195

Loved it. I can't wait for more. 

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 195

I think some smexy times are gonna be happening, lol. She's missing her man. What would you do? LOL. I love his surprising her and her reaction. Oh and yeah, totally knew he'd buy a ring. But TWO? What the hell is he going to do with TWO rings? Thanks for sharing! 

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 194

Gotta Love Leslie.    

Willy.... ROFL  

haha

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 11:04 PM Title: Chapter 195

awwww what a nice surprise he did

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 195

Yummy Edward time!

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 10:59 PM Title: Chapter 194

Wet Willys that is a great bar in savannah!

Reviewer: coulierb Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 10:38 PM Title: Chapter 195

I really loved the long chapters. These are good but...

Reviewer: yvonnev Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 9:32 PM Title: Chapter 194

Awe sweet, he showed up with no notice.  I hope she is excited to see him.

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:00 PM Title: Chapter 194

Awww, that was nice of his boss to tell him to go see his girl, but dude, he was kind of crude in the way he said it. But, still, I like it. And just look at rings, my ass. You know he'll buy one. Can't wait for Bella's reaction to him being home for the weekend, though. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 194

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Reviewer: edwards_girl_4_ever2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 5:44 PM Title: Chapter 194

I hope we get to see him and Esme ring shopping.

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 9:07 AM Title: Chapter 193

Glad bella went to irina and just didn't internalize it.

Reviewer: beng26 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 193

What surprise could it be... good or bad? 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:13 AM Title: Chapter 193

I completely get where Bella is coming from. I can't imagine how lonely and unimportant she's feeling right now. She needs to take Irina's advice and open herself up to someone new and work on her trust issues. She should choose a woman to befriend and hang out with, a man may make her feel intimidated.

I don't see why she couldn't still go visit Edward, though. Instead of talking on the phone they could have some quite time when he got home. She could have always found something to occupy her time during the day while he was working.

Reviewer: amcullen Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 7:10 AM Title: Chapter 193

Loved it :)

Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 193

Poor Bella! But, Irina is right. Once Bella's busy, time will fly by and they'll be together before they know it. Thanks for sharing! 

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 193

Listen to Irina, Bella!!!

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 192

SO amazing!  I cannot wait to see what happens next.  Perhaps some Skype sexing ;)

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 09 Nov 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 193

I would be lost too :(

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 11:10 PM Title: Chapter 192

Sniff!  I am so sad :(

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 10:50 PM Title: Chapter 192

I'm wondering if they'll experience any problems with the distance, such as jealously or self-doubts, etc.?

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 192

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Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 192

Awww, Parting is such sweet sorrow. Thanks for sharing!

Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 08 Nov 2013 9:54 PM Title: Chapter 192

Aww separating sucks

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 191

A new chapter in their lives is beginning. I hope all runs smoothly for them.

Reviewer: angels2 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 10:26 PM Title: Chapter 6

loved it!

Reviewer: loventherussian17 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 11:34 AM Title: Chapter 191

great chapter loved it

Reviewer: Maria11 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 11:09 AM Title: Chapter 191

Snif!  I am sad they will be apart!

Reviewer: debslmac Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 6:39 AM Title: Chapter 191

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Reviewer: lilsunnysaunt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 191

Aww, I'm glad they drove instead of flying and got to bond some more. Thanks for sharing! 

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 6:02 AM Title: Chapter 190

Beautiful. So realistic.

Reviewer: RAH07890 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 191

SO amazing :)

Reviewer: teamswitzerlandmom Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 191

Great chapter. They deserve happiness and a new start. I can't wait to read more. 

Reviewer: tff Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 4:23 AM Title: Chapter 191

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Reviewer: theladykt Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 191

ugh sucks that they will be apart for awhile.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 07 Nov 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 191

Hope the separation brings them closer.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 9:53 PM Title: Chapter 189

That verdict reading was even emotional for me. Hopefully it allows Bella to move forward. Having Charlie there for support was one of the best things anyone could have done for her.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 188

Thank goodness this ordeal is just about over. Bella, and Edward need this closure.

Reviewer: Banshee69 Signed starstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 06 Nov 2013 9:24 PM Title: Chapter 187

Love how tender Edward is with Bella.

Reviewer: Plumcrzy62 Signed [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 6:25 AM Title: Chapter 190

Great chapter.  Glad Esme and Bella made up and that she and Edward were able to reconnect.

Reviewer: jupiter2005 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: 05 Nov 2013 1:23 AM Title: Chapter 190

im glad that they got their first love making out of the way and got her through it with no panic attacks. congrats girly even im proud of you bella, i hope that their small seperation for his and her seperate schooling goes over well. keep up the good work

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