Date: 10 Feb 2014 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 34
Amazing that Charlie would just waltz in to Edward's room and calmly give his blessing to him and Bella as a couple!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 8:18 AM Title: Chapter 33
Pretending to be Bella's boyfriend is probably going to cause it to become real!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 32
It takes a certain type of person to do what Aro did, ordering a hit on a rival and showing up at the wake for the victim. That type would be totally unfeeling and evil, I'm thinking. It surprised me that Charlie told Aro Edward was Bella's boyfriend.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 7:41 AM Title: Chapter 31
Kind of feel sorry for Edward, wanting to do his job and having feelings for Bella. Sort of pulling him in opposite directions!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 7:08 AM Title: Chapter 30
Big step for Edward to share his horrifying childhood with Bella, and I'm glad he did. Too bad they were interrupted before she could answer his question.
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:38 AM Title: Chapter 29
It has come crashing down on Bella just how close she came to losing her father, just as Jacob and his sisters lost their's!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 28
Bella needs to stop teasing Edward and pay attention to what he tells her. It makes her better able to defend herself, after all!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 6:09 AM Title: Chapter 27
If it took forty-five minutes to put all the clothes and shoes away, that was more than a weeks worth of wardrobe! They better all keep on their toes at the wake and funeral, never know what Aro will try!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 12:28 AM Title: Chapter 26
I thought it didn't bother Edward for Bella to touch him? He got highly upset over it on this shopping expedition!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 12:21 AM Title: Chapter 25
No surprise that Edward looked great in both suits, I knew he would! Angie thought so,too, until Bella warned her off!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 12:15 AM Title: Chapter 24
Better and better it seems , now that Bella has decided to behave herself. Let the shopping trip begin! Oh yes, the haiecut, too!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 12:06 AM Title: Chapter 23
This chapter just reinforces my curiosity as to why Bella doesn't just tell Edward what she wants! All he could do is say no!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 22
I'm glad that Bella has decided to make nice with Edward. It will certainly help in his guarding of her. The custom tailoring of a suit involves a lot of touching, wonder how that will affect Edward?
Date: 09 Feb 2014 10:29 AM Title: Chapter 21
Bella is fighting as hard as she can against the attraction she feels for Edward. I guess if she hates that he's a part of the family business, she could be the one that informed to the FBI! Doesn't sound like either of Charlie's children want this life!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 10:21 AM Title: Chapter 20
I bet that getting to like the people you're supposed to take down isn't standard operating procedure for the bureau!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 10:07 AM Title: Chapter 19
Boy I'll bet he looked hot in that Gucci black leather jacket! This ought to be fun, with Miss Bella in a royal snit!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 10:01 AM Title: Chapter 18
He really is extensively inked, from the description! I still haven't figured out why Bella is so angry with Edward.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 17
Okay, I'll bite! What has Bella in such a snit, not wanting Edward for a bodyguard?
Date: 09 Feb 2014 9:47 AM Title: Chapter 16
My God! Edward is a dead shot! kind of a one man army! This most likely will cement his place in the family business.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 9:36 AM Title: Chapter 15
So Edward hasn't made the connection yet, either! Can't wait for them to meet!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 9:27 AM Title: Chapter 14
The Mustang sounds like the perfect Seattle car! The added FBI goodies will come in handy, I'm sure.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 9:22 AM Title: Chapter 13
Aha! Mutual lust at first sight! Considering his touch phobia, that's pretty unusual!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 9:11 AM Title: Chapter 12
Emmett only saw one tatoo on Edward, but I bet Bella gets to see lots more! It sounds like our Edward has some real issues, beyond wanting to take down the del Cigno family!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 8:59 AM Title: Chapter 11
I sem to remember Emmett saing something to Bella about wanting out of this life! What are my odds that Em is the informant?
Date: 09 Feb 2014 8:49 AM Title: Chapter 10
Too bad about Jacob's dad, but Bella got her dad back alive, plus the new guy is the hot guy from the club!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 8:36 AM Title: Chapter 9
Bella may have her spoiled brat moments, but she does truly love her daddy!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 8:25 AM Title: Chapter 8
She hasn't made the connection yet, so it will have to wait until they meet, face to face.
Date: 09 Feb 2014 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 7
Wonder what it is about the new guy that has Bella so nervous?
Date: 09 Feb 2014 8:03 AM Title: Chapter 6
Emmett might not be quite the judge of character he thinks he is!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 7:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
From the list of dead relatives, Aro must be very serious about wiping out the family!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 7:33 AM Title: Chapter 4
And so they meet! Looks like both of them liked what they saw!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 3
Little Miss Bella has quite the mouth on her, egged on by her sense of privilege, no doubt! I feel trouble ahead if the girls sneak out to the club, so I hope there is a bodyguard around!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 2
Quite the family dynamic, from the sounds of her description! And yes, she is definitely a spoiled little daddy's girl!
Date: 09 Feb 2014 1:02 AM Title: Chapter 1
No opposable thumbs? That's pretty harsh! I can't wait to see what you do with form, though I'm sure I will enjoy it as much as I have all your other stories I've read!
[Report This]Date: 08 Feb 2014 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 201
Really enjoyed that.
[Report This]Date: 07 Feb 2014 11:49 PM Title: Chapter 178
Really loving this.
[Report This]Date: 06 Feb 2014 11:17 PM Title: Chapter 156
I'm sure everyone wants to hug her.
[Report This]Date: 09 Jan 2014 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 201
That was an amazing story! Bella's abduction and subsequent torture was hare to read, but that was because it was so well written. I could feel all I'd Edwards emotions and fears! I cried for Bella! It was so beautiful!
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:57 AM Title: Chapter 3
Angie know how to push her buttons :)
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 2
Yes, This Bella is totally different, isn't she?? Should be interesting...
Date: 28 Dec 2013 4:50 AM Title: Chapter 1
Looks great so far! Looking forward to reading.
[Report This]Date: 21 Dec 2013 5:13 PM Title: Chapter 201
Fucking fantastic story!! Thank you! I am sorry to see it end...
[Report This]Date: 20 Dec 2013 2:55 AM Title: Chapter 177
Ahhhh...so sad...they both need to get their heads out of their asses however you have done a kick ass job with these characters! Thank you!
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2013 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 28
Damn girl you make sparring hot!!!
Marie
Twicrazreader
[Report This]Date: 15 Dec 2013 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 26
Hey T
Loving your drabble!!
Marie
Twicrazreader
[Report This]Date: 14 Dec 2013 3:23 PM Title: Chapter 67
I just love your stories!! I will have to say that you are the best writer out there!!
Date: 06 Dec 2013 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 201
Cute story, doll. Thanks for sharing
Date: 04 Dec 2013 1:00 PM Title: Chapter 190
Great chapter, love to see them going forward and rebuilding what was once there.
Date: 02 Dec 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter 128
These last couple of chapters have been great and the ILY were perfect for them. Great job doll
Date: 02 Dec 2013 4:53 AM Title: Chapter 111
Thats fawking HOT!!!!!
Date: 02 Dec 2013 4:48 AM Title: Chapter 110
Naughty naughty Edward ;) I love it
Date: 01 Dec 2013 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 106
Great chapter doll, loved their lemony time.
[Report This]Date: 30 Nov 2013 12:04 AM Title: Chapter 18
Little does he know.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 10
Looking forward to her reaction.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2013 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 8
Wondering about Emmett.
[Report This]Date: 29 Nov 2013 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 6
Yey, he has arrived.
Date: 29 Nov 2013 4:34 PM Title: Chapter 70
Just amazing. Im loving this so much. The sexual tension is just enough :)
Date: 29 Nov 2013 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 60
HOLY FUCK that was very HOT!!!!!!!
Date: 28 Nov 2013 5:07 AM Title: Chapter 42
Awwww, their first date :)
Date: 27 Nov 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 5
Love the moment with Charlie :)
Date: 27 Nov 2013 2:09 AM Title: Chapter 2
Im finally sitting down and reading this story :)
Date: 21 Nov 2013 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 201
LOVED,LOVED,LOVED IT!!
Date: 21 Nov 2013 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 66
For a top crime syndicate, Charlie seems very ill prepared and lacking in skill. Seems as though all his homes should already have alarms and guards. He also seems late in the retaliation department. No wonder the Volturi are so bold. Charlie comes across as a wimp.
[Report This]Date: 18 Nov 2013 5:52 AM Title: Chapter 2
Me likey!! Me likey a lot!! So glad I waited till it was completed because I wouldn't have wanted to wait for an update!!!
:)
Date: 17 Nov 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 201
Em is such a goober. OMG Angie is such a biatch. So glad Charlie is doing well. Father Michael sounds too cute. Esme is such a special lady. Awww the Tattoo was a nice touch. Wow two years to make a baby. But what a sweet end
TY for writing and sharing
[Report This]Date: 17 Nov 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 201
Awesome story! I loved it!
Date: 16 Nov 2013 12:19 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hey, lovend this story... I've read it in one day... But uhm... Wasn't seth gay ???? Keep writing please... I love all tour stories...
[Report This]Date: 16 Nov 2013 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 201
Thank you. I didn't think I would like it at first. After the first chapter I couldn't stop.
Date: 16 Nov 2013 4:01 AM Title: Chapter 201
That was an amazing ending to an amazing story. I will miss these two... Along with Charlie and Emmett. Is the Cupid dance an actual dance? I will have to check it out online and see if I can find anything. Thanks again for sharing.
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2013 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 201
Can't believe this ride is over! I absolutely adore this story. Thank you for sharing it. Thank you for the speedy updates, the great pix you find to accompany this tale & thanks for the epic epi. :)
I'm so sad to say goodbye to these characters but I love how you left the story.
(Ironically my daughter's name is Elizabeth and we have called her bethy from birth. I've never heard anyone else do that)
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2013 4:45 AM Title: Chapter 201
Wonderful story! :)
[Report This]Date: 14 Nov 2013 3:13 AM Title: Chapter 201
awesome story i am glad they finally got their happy ending and he got his true love and a family of his own. keep up the great writing. cant wait to read future stories.
Date: 14 Nov 2013 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 201
It was an excellllent ride...thanks!!!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 7:01 AM Title: Chapter 201
Fantastic ending. You wrapped it up really well.
Date: 13 Nov 2013 6:45 AM Title: Chapter 201
Great ending but I am so going to miss them.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 5:11 AM Title: Chapter 200
Perfect proposal.
Date: 13 Nov 2013 5:09 AM Title: Chapter 201
OMG, this was a BEAUTIFUL way to end the story. Absolutely love it and I cried SO much reading it. I will miss this story. And the lemon after the wedding...probably the hottest lemon of yours that I've ever read. Love the birth of their child. Wonderful. Oh just have to say...Angie's present at the bachelorette party....I want to strangle that bitch for that. Somebody needed to kick her ass. Thanks for sharing this story. Loved it!
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 199
I knew Edward wouldn't let Bella down.
I'm excited for the proposal.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 4:52 AM Title: Chapter 198
Edward better surprise her at her graduation ceremony.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 197
Hmm... I like Felipe, hope he's a good guy for real and not just using his position to get closer to Bella.
Angie is a royal bitch. Don't blame Bella at all for walking out on her.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 196
Bella took that challenge down with ease.
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 4:18 AM Title: Chapter 195
What a sweet reunion...
[Report This]Date: 13 Nov 2013 4:10 AM Title: Chapter 194
Leslie cracked me up.
Date: 13 Nov 2013 4:04 AM Title: Chapter 201
Aww I can't believe it's finished. Love love loved it!! Gonna miss these two
Date: 13 Nov 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 201
so this review goes for the last couple of chapters too... i've loved them! i love the growth and love that continued to occurr... and the wedding was awesome! i LOVED the ending with their own little bambina!
Date: 13 Nov 2013 12:13 AM Title: Chapter 200
so this review goes for the last couple of chapters too... i've loved them! i love the growth and love that continued to occurr... and the wedding was awesome! i LOVED the ending with their own little bambina!
Date: 12 Nov 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 201
Thanks for ride!
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2013 8:33 PM Title: Chapter 201
Loved the story. I will miss these two.
[Report This]Date: 12 Nov 2013 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 201
So beautiful and excited to they finally got their happily ever after. Loved the story from the very beginning.
Date: 12 Nov 2013 2:04 PM Title: Chapter 201
Great story... I loved the ending.... I'm sad to see it end. Thank you for sharing it with us. Can't wait for your next story.