Date: 13 Feb 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 140
Guess I'll just have to grit my teeth real hard and try not to cry, won't I?
Date: 13 Feb 2014 6:59 AM Title: Chapter 139
As long as you have Edward save Bella, all will be forgiven!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 6:49 AM Title: Chapter 138
That slimy bastard, calling Charlie with the pretense of not knowing, and letting her father hear his child scream! I hope so hard that something truly awful will happen to him! Riley with that bloody shhet is sure as hell not a good sign!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 6:34 AM Title: Chapter 137
Quite the agent, but I can understand why he wants to quit. It's a wonder that he was able to do the job this long as it is!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 136
I just knew Rose would have a civilizing effect on Emmett and sure enough she has! Good thing Edward can compartmentalize or he would be going crazy right about now, thinking ofwhat may be happening to Bella!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 6:08 AM Title: Chapter 135
And here I thought you liked Edward and instead you're beating hell out of him every time he turns around! Not nice! Beat him up too badly and he won't be in shape to help Bella!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 6:03 AM Title: Chapter 134
Great that Edwaerd let the girls hug him! Now maybe he can clean up and rest a bit. He has to recharge to be able to find Bella!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 133
I'll just have to keep my fingers and toes crossed until they get Bella back! I know Edward will find her, but what kind of shape will she be in? Thank God the FBI is on the job, that should help. Plus, Emmett will get to see Rose again!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 5:37 AM Title: Chapter 132
I think Edward is about to find out who informed to the bureau, and it will be Charlie!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 131
It's almost making me sick, thinking of what could be happening to Bellaright now! I bet Aro has her and he would do anything to hurt Charlie and what better way than hurting his baby girl?
Date: 13 Feb 2014 5:20 AM Title: Chapter 130
That was a bad pistol-whipping Bella gave Edward! But it sure doesn't warrant what just happened to her! Who the hell has drugged and taken her?
Date: 13 Feb 2014 5:10 AM Title: Chapter 129
That's why I didn't bother raising my hand against drama. It's about here anyway!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 128
I'll hold these good images in my mind when the bad stuff comes to pass, as I know it must!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 126
If he can't yet tell her all, at least he can love her in this shabby apartment, that's all he had!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 125
Come Hell or high water, Edward is telling Bella he loves her. I guess he's hedging his bets, in case she discovers his secret and has a really bad reaction!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 124
Oh yuck, what's he going to do, let the rats watch them? If Bella sees something at Edward's apartment, it won't go well! I am glad, however, that they caught Heidi before she could spill about Bella's bodyguard. Aro doesn't need to know that.
Date: 13 Feb 2014 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 123
You can almost feel something is about to happen!
Date: 13 Feb 2014 1:01 AM Title: Chapter 122
I know kind of what you have in mind for the future of this story. When Bella learns the truth about Edward she'll hate him for lying and throw his ass out. This will result in them both being miserable until they find a way bck to each other. I will hate it so much, but realize it has to happen!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 11:12 PM Title: Chapter 121
The odds are probably fifty-fifty that Angie wants to make up with Bella for her sake alone. I guess it's not so bad of her to want to make up with Ben also. Bella may forgive her, who knows?
Date: 12 Feb 2014 11:02 PM Title: Chapter 120
Charlie is really starting to scare me! He's so sure that he will die and leave Bella, so he wants Edward to promise to care for and love her. No hardship for him there, as it's what he does already!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:53 PM Title: Chapter 119
I guess Edward gets a pass until he's healed and back to normal, not only in bed , but from Bella's questions about Alice and Jasper.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:44 PM Title: Chapter 118
This ought to be interesting, two males bristling over a female! Wonder what Riley is going to try?
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:34 PM Title: Chapter 117
Sure sounds to me like Charlie could be the informant, but then , so could Bella!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:28 PM Title: Chapter 116
Sounds like Edward is lucky he isn't any worse than he is! Poor battered Edward! They sure are taking good care of him, though, especially Bella.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 115
Thank God Emmett and Charlie got to Edward in time! No tears shed for Demetri, that's for sure, and I hope they beat hell out of Felix and get him to talk! Poor Edward, beat to hell again, just like when he as a kid!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:06 PM Title: Chapter 114
Hey, come on, I know Edward is tough but two against one hardly seems like it will turn out well!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:57 PM Title: Chapter 113
What an inhuman monster, to chain his child to a bed for a week , no food, no water, no bathroom! I just cringe when I think there probably real people who do that to their kids! I like this plan of Edward's and that he and Carlisle are trying to help Charlie.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:40 PM Title: Chapter 112
Guess Edward has been keeping Bella so busy she hasn't had time to contemplate the odd run-in with Rose and Alice!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:33 PM Title: Chapter 111
I'm afraid Edward has been totally corrupted by his new -found addiction to sex with Bella! Quite the exhibitionist, too! I love it!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:11 PM Title: Chapter 110
My computer would not cooperate and send my reviews for chapters 107 and 108, for some reason. Didn't want you to think I fell off the wagon. This watching over Twilight while Charlie is away sounds like it's about to become a lot of fun!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:03 PM Title: Chapter 109
Bella is sharp and quick to see something fishy about Rose and Alice. Can't wait until she starts putting the clues together!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 12:20 PM Title: Chapter 106
First time not withstanding, Edward should receive some sort of reward! Bella is such a lucky girl, to be loved by that beautiful, flawed man, just as he's lucky to have her heart!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 11:50 AM Title: Chapter 105
A lovely, touristy, shopping day. The heart pendant was perfect, especially with the accompaning words! Too bad Bella saw the text from Carlisle, it will cause questions!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 11:38 AM Title: Chapter 104
I was just angry at his evil dad, but the vow by Bella to buy Edward a Sylvester cat toy made me cry! Lighting a candle for both their moms was so sweet!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 11:23 AM Title: Chapter 102
Sounds like a great birthday plan to me also!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 11:12 AM Title: Chapter 101
Good for Bella setting her dad straight, and good that she and Edward had a nice trip to Venice. This promises to be the best birthday he's ever had!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 11:03 AM Title: Chapter 100
I'm glad Jessica laid into Angie and even happier that they all went back to Charlie's. Now it's just Edward and Bella on their own!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:54 AM Title: Chapter 99
Considering what happened and then Angie's attitude, I think it's a great idea for them to go a day early to Venice.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:31 AM Title: Chapter 98
The monster that fathered Edward would barely qualify as human, in my opinion! That poor little boy and that poor abused woman, my God what a thing to live through!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:24 AM Title: Chapter 97
Sure I would worry about Edward, this assault is affecting him as much as it did Bella!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:09 AM Title: Chapter 96
Poor Emmett, he needs a girl! If he knew the beautiful blonde he pines for was FBI, maybe he wouldn't want her quite so much. Rather brazen of Bella to dare Edward to make her come on the dance floor!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 10:02 AM Title: Chapter 95
As all the fangirls would say, OMG! Edward is finally ready! If he backs down, Bella may hurt him!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:52 AM Title: Chapter 94
Surprisingly, Emmett hasn't tried to embarass Edward about Bella nearly as much as I thought he would. He only cares about his cousin, after all.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 9:38 AM Title: Chapter 93
Actually, Rome, followed by Venice doesn't sound too bad! I think Edward might have a really nice birthday!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 92
That really went better than I thought it might, despite Emmett's snarky mouth! Though I'm glad Em pointed out that Charlie can't be publicly involved in Aro's demise.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:22 AM Title: Chapter 91
I really hope you meant that comment, things will pick up now that Charlie's here, in a positive way!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 90
Bella seems to have created, if not a monster, at least a guy without nearly the inhibitions he had a couple months ago!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:59 AM Title: Chapter 89
Okay, so only one last step for them to take together physically, and one last admission to each other!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:49 AM Title: Chapter 88
Inexperienced he may be, but it must be countered by a natural talent! The guy is good, just ask Bella!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:32 AM Title: Chapter 87
Boy, he managed that pretty gracefully, and didn't piss off Bella, either!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:27 AM Title: Chapter 86
What is he about to tell her? Could it be a for real declaration of how much he loves her, or is he going to laugh it off with a silly joke?
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:09 AM Title: Chapter 85
Bella is really kind of taking a leap of faith here with Edward. I admire her bravery to tell you the truth!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 7:03 AM Title: Chapter 84
As intuitive as Bella is, especially about Edward, he's going to have a tough time hiding his true identity from her!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:55 AM Title: Chapter 83
They just keep getting closer and closer to final consummation of their feelings for each other! He must have the restraint of a saint!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:44 AM Title: Chapter 82
It must be miserable to be that allergic to cat dander! Edward must love Bella a bunch to put up with that misery so she can have her cute little kitten!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:37 AM Title: Chapter 81
At least it wasn't Jane, just a darling kitten that makes Edward choke up and sneeze! Wouldn't you know it would adopt him instead of Bella? Hope they have Allerest in Italy!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:24 AM Title: Chapter 80
Just when she almost had him talked into it, too! Who the hell is trying to get in the house?
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 79
I'm thinking Edward is correct, Bella will get him that guitar, just because she saw he kind of wanted it. Besides, then he could play romantic guitar music for her, then piano. What could be better?
Date: 12 Feb 2014 6:11 AM Title: Chapter 78
Poor Edward, torn between wanting to be honest and how much he cares for Bella, and the draw of an experience he's never had! No wonder he called his mom!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:48 AM Title: Chapter 77
It's a hell of a situation for him to be in, in love with last girl he should be in love with. On the other hand, how can he refuse the one in all the world who can touch him with impunity? Who holds his heart, as he holds hers?
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:15 AM Title: Chapter 76
I know Edward can't confess who he really is, but I bet he wishes he could! I would make life so much better.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 5:06 AM Title: Chapter 75
I think Mario should call it a draw!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:58 AM Title: Chapter 74
It almost makes me weep to think of that poor defenceless little boy and his abused mother, at the mercy of that monster called father! I know how Bella feels, wanting to go back in time and make him pay, but sadly, Edward already took care of it, one hundred times!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:51 AM Title: Chapter 73
Edward is going to have to prepare himself for the touchy-feely Italians!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:43 AM Title: Chapter 72
Edward is certainly a fast study where Bella is concerned. It's amazing that he has no problem with her hands on him and everyone else panics him!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 71
Bella can't recall being that tired because no one ever had her that turned on before her release, and it's tiring! Total relaxation!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:19 AM Title: Chapter 70
I think Bella is about to have at least one of her dreams come true!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 69
I hope they continue with twenty questions some time soon. It's always interesting to hear musings and inner thoughts.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 68
It would be nice, and very helpful, for Bella to have a mother figure to confide in and get advice from. Guess they will just have to muddle through the best they can.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 2:01 AM Title: Chapter 67
Good for them to work on this communication thing, it can only help!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 1:40 AM Title: Chapter 66
Don't much care for the fact that Jane may have followed them to Italy. If she tried to kill them once she will do it again!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 1:28 AM Title: Chapter 65
These heart-felt declarations between them are getting to me! I'm guessing that Bella doesn't recognize this feeling for what it is because she's never been in love before. Kind of like Edward that way!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 1:19 AM Title: Chapter 64
I wondered if the swan tat would catch his attention! Should have known his eyes are all over her body!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 1:10 AM Title: Chapter 63
Sounds like Edward is trying to convince Bella to make more of her life than she has thought of doing.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 62
Nice that they are working together in the kitchen, her cooking and him cleaning up after. Sweet that he thanks her for taking good care of him!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 61
Guess I would have to agree with you, he could rub anything he wanted to, all over me!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 12:50 AM Title: Chapter 60
Made me smile that Bella could hardly wait to get Edward into her bedroom, and now that they have provided each other a little relief, she wants to feed him! Thata girl!
Date: 12 Feb 2014 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 59
Kind of a sad little conversation for them to be having. It's different from the stereotype of experienced olderguy and innocent young girl. I like that you have swapped the roles around.
Date: 12 Feb 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 58
I can see where Edward would be a fine distraction for takeoffs and landings.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 11:33 AM Title: Chapter 57
Of course he loves her, that's why he can sleep with her and have her touch him all over. That hug he and Carlisle shared nearly had me in tears too!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 11:26 AM Title: Chapter 56
I was never worried about his feelings for Bella. This guy may have emotional problemsstemming from his childhood, but he's really gone on this girl! I'm just glad his colleagues are keeping his secret!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 11:20 AM Title: Chapter 55
I loved that you named them Rathbone and Greene, and switched his and hers last names! I wonder how much trouble Edward is in for being close to Bella? It may become a problem if they go to Italy!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 11:04 AM Title: Chapter 53
Let's hope their troubles don't follow them to Italy! Why doesn't Edward understand why Charlie's upset?
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:48 AM Title: Chapter 52
Run Edward, Bella just had a nightmare! What a night they have had!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:39 AM Title: Chapter 51
Lots of scrapes and gashes to repair. These two are just lucky Edward got them out of there in time! Luckier they weren't shot after the explosion!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 10:28 AM Title: Chapter 50
There's that bad feeling, come to life! I think now Bella finally has the idea that someone wants her dead!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 8:31 AM Title: Chapter 48
I hope Bella is right about there being safety in numbers at the club. Interesting dynamic between her and Edward , I never would have thought she would be willing to go at his pace!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 47
Billy Burke/Charlie is my favorite dad, too, plus he's cute! Now that he's made amends to Bella and Edward over his attitude, I hope their relationship progresses!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 7:16 AM Title: Chapter 46
Once he got going, there was almost no stopping him! Not that Bella wanted him to stop, but her dad had to put on the brakes. She didn't seem to appreciate it, either
Date: 11 Feb 2014 7:06 AM Title: Chapter 45
Now she knows why she's been willing to wait!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 6:48 AM Title: Chapter 44
I'm not sure even onion breath would deter Bella form her announced goal!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 6:36 AM Title: Chapter 43
Drags are awesome, used to go years ago when friends raced! Tons of fun! Bella is very observant, she noticed at once that the Mustang was different, inside and out!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 42
Bella gives really good advice here! Just be yourself and have fun!
Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 41
Cousin Angie is kind of clueless concerning Bella's feelings for Edward, and his for her! Jessica is a little closer to understanding I think.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 5:34 AM Title: Chapter 40
Hope Emmett and Charlie have no troubles tonight! Just because they don't see Aro or James doesn't mean they are gone! Charlie is smart to not let down his guard.
Date: 11 Feb 2014 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 39
I wonder if the interior of Edward's Mustang has been upgraded, too? Emmett's idea for a first date actually sounds like a lot of fun!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 38
Rose is kind of right about Edward having real feelings for Bella. It's probably not smart to fall for someone you're investigating undercover!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 9:49 AM Title: Chapter 36
It surprises me that Edward would willingly share the disaster that was his first sexual experience! He must really like this girl to open up to her like that!
Date: 10 Feb 2014 9:10 AM Title: Chapter 35
Someone needs to eliminate James, and perhaps Victoria also! Nice send off for Billy Black from the sound of it.