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Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 95

They are such teases!
This night should rock both their worlds unless you have something else planned.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:17 PM Title: Chapter 94

Bella can already interpret the short kisses as her special morris code for I Love You! She is in the same boat as Edward. recognizing the feeling but not able to say it face to face. It's enough for now.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:12 PM Title: Chapter 93

I have a bad feeling about leaving Charlie all alone! Mario is a good shot but not able to attack due to his mangled leg. Francesca is a liability, or is she. Can she shoot?

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 92

At least Charlie will keep himself at arms length away from the plotting of Aro's demise.
Is Emmett the one what contacted the Feds in the first place? Is he working with them to bring a stop to his families mob ties and end the Volturi threat?

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:59 PM Title: Chapter 91

Oh ya, she heard you. Not so stealthy, Masen.
Let the family mayhem begin!

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 90

She has opened up a whole new world to him on the form of sexual play.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:42 PM Title: Chapter 89

They are both aware that the other has said IT out laud. Just not when the they are both in the moment of admission. It won't be much longer now before the ILY's are spoken face to face.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:18 PM Title: Chapter 88

He is a very adept lover for having no first hand experience. She must bring out the ravenous desires of a very imaginative Edward.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 3:05 PM Title: Chapter 87

Again with the panty drenching words!
Edward is in love with Bella. Why is he waiting to tell her?

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:59 PM Title: Chapter 86

He just lied again, didn't he? Why is he known at the bureau as Edward Cullen if he wasn't adopted?

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:41 PM Title: Chapter 85

Well, Bella's pretty close in her assumptions about what Edward is hiding. I just hope his loyalty and devotion to the family will play a large part in her forgiveness.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:35 PM Title: Chapter 84

the ILY's will come out soon enough and then reality will hit full force and the truth is revealed.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 2:03 AM Title: Chapter 83

Well, they are definitely using their imagination to get each other off.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:56 AM Title: Chapter 82

She's such a bad girl. She promised Edward her orgasms. His timing should be that of interrupting her just as she is about to focus on falling off the pleasure cliff.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:49 AM Title: Chapter 81

They have a furbaby! I love it. Allergic reactions excluded, Edward is very much take by another cute female.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:42 AM Title: Chapter 80

Edward finally gives in to Bella's teasing ways and you make the motion sensors go off! Argh!
Time to play bodyguard.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:37 AM Title: Chapter 79

Edward's getting a guitar for his birthday!
It's time for Edward to share the bits of his life after adoption. This may very well aid him in striving to make a future with Bella.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:30 AM Title: Chapter 78

Edward's guilt better not send him away. Thinking he can protect Bella by being out of the picture doesn't fit this storyline.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:22 AM Title: Chapter 77

I'm not sure I felt the true support and love of a mother from Esme's reaction to her sons dilemma. I hope Carlisle will produce a respectable option to shelter the del Cigno family as the truth is revealed.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:14 AM Title: Chapter 76

I'm looking forward to the resolve you have chosen on the matter of Edward and Bella's love affair.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 75

I think Edward should concede. I needs to let Bella know he appreciates her desire to please him.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 1:03 AM Title: Chapter 74

The results will be the same whether he admits that he loves her or holds it in; once his true occupation is revealed. The hurt will initially be the same.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:54 AM Title: Chapter 73

Bella's leaning to read him so very well.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:46 AM Title: Chapter 72

Bella's love for him should be a happy trigger not one of impending doom and gloom.
They make for a very sensual pair.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:39 AM Title: Chapter 71

He is a very quick study!
Wow, that was intense and so worth the wait.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:25 AM Title: Chapter 70

I guess Bella's migraine has resolved.......
A commanding Edward is so sexy.

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Date: 13 Mar 2014 12:09 AM Title: Chapter 69

They both have very deep emotional scars. Someday I hope they will be able to put them move past the hurt and build a future.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 11:55 PM Title: Chapter 68

Maybe Carmen could help Bella understand this emotional roller-coaster ride? Until Esme enters the picture there really is no other mother figure for Bella to go to in times like these.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:39 PM Title: Chapter 67

They are emotional taxed right now and the discussions will show their inexperience when communicating with a partner.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:33 PM Title: Chapter 66

Just another growing point in their relationship. They'll figure it out!
Jane has me a bit worried though.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:30 PM Title: Chapter 65

A sense of foreboding lingered in Edward's confession.
Bella is still struggling with identifying the feeling of loving someone other than immediate family.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:24 PM Title: Chapter 64

Another opportunity to do a little exploration of each others bodies! Oh Yeah!

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:18 PM Title: Chapter 63

How can Edward tell her that he hopes to minimize Charlies penalties once the hammer falls?
Will Emmett then go down at the same time?
Bella needs reassurances that her life will continue beyond her father's downfall.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 62

Playing house seems to suit these two really well.
I like how easily they can tease each other yet know when to back off and just be.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 7:04 PM Title: Chapter 61

He is crankin up the heat!
Serves Bella right for pushing him. He played that one well!

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:57 PM Title: Chapter 60

The passion continues to build! Very sexy undulating hip action! He even explored her chest. His experiences are expanding with the pressure in his pants. haha

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:41 PM Title: Chapter 59

Just let it happen Bella......
How close is the del Cigno villa to the Volturi compound?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:34 PM Title: Chapter 58

He sure is smooth with the word foreplay! I think he won't have any problems becoming rapidly proficient at loving his girl.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:25 PM Title: Chapter 57

The hunt to take down the Volturi begins.
In the mean time I hope Bella and Edward have an amazing time in Italy.
Maybe even finish falling in love.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 56

Will Alice and Rose compare notes on Edward's transformation in the presence of Bella?
Are the Feds going to follow Charlie and his family to Italy?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:12 PM Title: Chapter 55

How did Carlisle pull off Alice and Jasper getting the call to visit Edward after the explosion?
Did Rosalie let it slip that Edward is involved with Bella?
Alice picked up on his non-discomfort holding Bella's hand. How will she address the issue?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:07 PM Title: Chapter 54

Edward's constantly being saved by the horn, knock or imposing father! Bella might be getting a complex is Edward doesn't act soon.
Is his FBI status holding him back from the physical side of his dating Bella?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 6:02 PM Title: Chapter 53

Yea, my husband mentioned the fact that it was hard to let go of his daughters when the serious relationship entered the picture. Each guy had to pass the test of treating his daughter with equal measures of love, respect and the desire to take care of them for the rest of their lives. They are now both married to their best friend. It was time to let go.
Charlie is experiencing this same feeling.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:50 PM Title: Chapter 52

Retaliation is probably the wrong answer but I'm with Emmett, this hit too close to home.
Charlie has a very big decision to make.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:45 PM Title: Chapter 51

Will this be the turning point for Charlie? Will he consider giving up this life to ensure Bella has a father to watch her get married, have grand kids and grow old enjoying a less stressful life?
What kind of protection could the feds offer his family?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:37 PM Title: Chapter 50

The black SUV was obviously the culprit but why didn't they get the make and model so Edward could call in some assistance from his FBI buddies. I suppose it would blow his cover.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 49

That sixth sense has kicked in for both of them. Just glad that Bella is paying attention.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:23 PM Title: Chapter 48

Such a needy little princess. haha
I like how Edward is now using his new found kissing skills to keep Bella quiet!

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:18 PM Title: Chapter 47

I can't blame Charlie for waffeling on the thought of his daughter being with someone 24-7. But he didn't have a problem with her having one night stands in his house. That is messed up.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 5:09 PM Title: Chapter 46

Edward must have been watching a little porn to know some of the ways to entice a woman's body into submission like that.
They are both in love....when will it blow up in Edward's face that he is a fed?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 45

That was quite the build up! Yeah, they finally experienced their first kiss.
Will Edward introduce Bella to Esme?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 44

They are going to explode soon if that first kiss is delayed much longer. hahaha

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 43

Not a spectacular start to the date but the night is still young. Bella's confession of her sexual past was not a awkward as I thought it might be.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:35 PM Title: Chapter 42

So sweet. I like how Charlie and Bella can push each others buttons without a negative undertone.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:30 PM Title: Chapter 41

They are both nervous about how to proceed. That's just adorable.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:21 PM Title: Chapter 40

He is really good at the cuddling part!
Kevlar doesn't protect the head!

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 39

Will we get a peek into the life of Rosalie and her Heir apparent for the mob?
I like the idea of a fun first date before the heavy dining and dancing thing.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 38

Will Edward's email inbox be blown up by Carlisle's concern?
Hope Rosalie can relay the fact that Bella's touch is a healing balm to Edward's weary soul.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:53 PM Title: Chapter 37

Bella's the one jones'in for a Kiss!
That first date won't arrive fast enough for her.
How will Rosalie take to the idea that Edward is in a relationship with Bella? Will she be reporting back to Carlisle on her findings?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:47 PM Title: Chapter 36

I'm grinning like a cheshire cat!
Such an adorable admission and hopeful approach to learn how to be with Bella.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 35

Charlie should have let Edward dust James at the grave site!
Nice personal touch with the Stumblina story.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 34

I saw that coming. I hope Carlisle is somehow brought in on this new development. The case needs to change it's focus.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 33

Well, Charlie and Emmett both seem to approve of Edward's new title.
He will not be staying away until force by his other job. That will be heartbreaking for both.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:16 PM Title: Chapter 32

Charlie knows his daughter's every dream and desire. He is just helping the couple move in the right direction. Emmett is not going to let this new turn of phrase slip by him. hehehe.
If only the FBI situation could be resolved with a little collusion from the del Cigno family.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:09 PM Title: Chapter 31

The internal battle ensues.
Will the Volturi even care if Edward is classified as Bella's boyfriend? What difference would it really make? He is in the way of getting to Bella no matter what the title of his presence means.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:03 PM Title: Chapter 30

Edward just did the unthinkable.....he showed Bella his vulnerability! I'm not surprised that she had already picked up on his discomfort when being touched.
Show time, Volturi in the house.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:51 PM Title: Chapter 29

Charlie is pushing for Edward and Bella to be in each others presence. He may want something more for his daughter after all.
I can't blame Jacob for his actions. He is grieving but he also knew that Billy's job was to protect Charlie at all costs. Even the cost of his own life. Sucks for the people left behind.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:43 PM Title: Chapter 28

Their partnership is beginning to gel.
The physical contact should have Bella lite up like a Christmas tree!

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:38 PM Title: Chapter 27

At least Bella has some domestic responsibilities.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:33 PM Title: Chapter 26

Edward did better throughout that ordeal than I thought he would.
Will Bella comment later on his moody behavior?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 25

Did anyone notice Edward's flinch as Uncle Cenzo touched his face?
Angie just figured out Bella's got it bad for her bodyguard!

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 24

His touch issues are still very apparent but seem to be relaxing a bit in Bella's presence.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:05 PM Title: Chapter 23

Did Edward or anyone else for that matter hear the little princess getting off?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 22

A good father daughter moment to set the pace of the future between Edward and Bella.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 21

Bella's upset because Edward is is limits now due to his status as bodyguard? I'm sure Charlie already figures there will be some sort of physical connection between the two. He doesn't seem upset with the idea.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 12:59 PM Title: Chapter 20

Wondering if Carlisle senses the new found loyalty to the del Cigno family?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 10:10 AM Title: Chapter 44

loving it

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:41 AM Title: Chapter 19

Charlie has such a cavalier attitude towards Bella's exploits. But I guess if he is the shining example from which Bella follows, she is right on track.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 4:34 AM Title: Chapter 18

The princess needs to reign in her emotions!
She will always be his 'little one'.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:50 AM Title: Chapter 17

Shouldn't Edward be the least bit upset by her response? Will Emmett question his meeting Bella at the club?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 16

Edward earned his keep!
Did James get away?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:38 AM Title: Chapter 15

Edward's becoming attached.
Maybe he can find a way to exonerated Charlie and his family by taking out Aro's group and going straight?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:32 AM Title: Chapter 14

The heat is about to be turned up.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:25 AM Title: Chapter 13

Powerful first meeting for both of them.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:20 AM Title: Chapter 12

Edward is a loose cannon based on his history.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:14 AM Title: Chapter 11

Who was the informant that wanted out of the organization?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:10 AM Title: Chapter 10

How did Aro get the jump on Charlie? Was he bidding on James' need for munitions? Is that who James spoke to through the headset?
Wonder how this new house guest will fare?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 3:02 AM Title: Chapter 9

I'm afraid Charlie will be a fatality in the up coming chapter.
At least Bella now knows Emmett is her half-brother.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:56 AM Title: Chapter 8

Not a promise Emmett can keep.
Didn't Bella think about Emmett's description of Edward? So very much like her dream guy.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:49 AM Title: Chapter 7

Emmett must realize why Bella has set up this lunch meeting. She has to stay somewhat on top of the family business.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:44 AM Title: Chapter 6

How did Emmett get taken in by Edward?
How funny is it that Leah had to tell Jake to stop his dalliances with Bella. Haha.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:36 AM Title: Chapter 5

Very interesting father daughter dynamics.
I don't think a thigh holster will deter a man on a mission to get his rocks off. Haha.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:32 AM Title: Chapter 4

Smooth move Edward. Leave her wanting more......

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 3

Daddy's going to have a fit if rage when he finds out. Is this where Edward makes an appearance? Angie is a bad influence.

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:22 AM Title: Chapter 2

Wondering if Renee let any of her husbands business acumen fall from her lips as she screwed around with Aro?

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Date: 12 Mar 2014 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 1

Found this story through completed fics.
Looking forward to a fast ride through the eyes of a mafia princess.

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Date: 09 Mar 2014 10:47 AM Title: Chapter 43

loving it

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Date: 07 Mar 2014 12:28 PM Title: Chapter 42

love it

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Date: 05 Mar 2014 12:01 PM Title: Chapter 41

loving it

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Date: 05 Mar 2014 3:55 AM Title: Chapter 39

love it

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