Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:47 PM Title: Chapter 171
Much as I want them to stay together, you're right. She needs her independence back. She needs to recover physically and emotionally from her ordeal. Do I sense a growing closeness between Rose and Emmett??
Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:37 AM Title: Chapter 171
I still can't beileve FF... but im glad i can come here now and read.. Can't wait to read more.. loved all the chapters from where i left off.
Date: 12 Oct 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 171
You're right. ;) Just another twist to the story that will make it that much sweeter when they finally make it back to each other completely.
Date: 12 Oct 2013 3:29 AM Title: Chapter 171
That was amazing :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2013 2:54 AM Title: Chapter 171
Great chapter. You're right, she does need to gain her independence back. I was just worried how Edward would take it but he seems to be doing better at the end of this chapter than the last one. Besides, Bella is right. Adult sleepovers are pretty fun. :)
[Report This]Date: 12 Oct 2013 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 171
I kinda figured it was that. I am glad they talked about it. :)
Date: 12 Oct 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 171
Thanks for the update...I know they will get it together takes time
Date: 12 Oct 2013 1:13 AM Title: Chapter 171
Dont think she'll be living alone for long .. Hell he'll use Carino as an excuse ..
[Report This]Date: 11 Oct 2013 3:06 AM Title: Chapter 170
Poor Edward. I bet if he Asked he she would move in with him but they would be too easy for these two. ;) I'm looking forward to Bella and Charlie's date for her birthday. See ya next time.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 10:29 PM Title: Chapter 170
Aww Edward Bella is gonna stay with you
Date: 10 Oct 2013 5:46 PM Title: Chapter 170
I am so enjoying this story they have to be together forever.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 5:17 PM Title: Chapter 170
aww it will be ok edward give her time great chapter loved it
Date: 10 Oct 2013 12:35 PM Title: Chapter 170
ouch what a way to find out about your girl living on her own but there is no mention of moving yet. wander if the girls heard him come in. keep up the good work
Date: 10 Oct 2013 9:14 AM Title: Chapter 170
Ahh, poor Edward. His day sucked and now his girl is leaving.
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2013 4:13 AM Title: Chapter 170
I hope Bella is looking for somewhere new for the both of them or perhaps will be ameniable to them living together. Then again, she may need to stand on her own two feet, if only to know she can. I do hope they talk and therefore smooth the feathers that are ruffling with insecurity. I really liked this update.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 170
Is she really? She doesn't want to live with him?? Poor FBIward indeed!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 1
Mafia princess is one of my Fav stories.love this
Date: 10 Oct 2013 3:31 AM Title: Chapter 170
I love this FBI/Mob-ward
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 170
OH wow...that was amazing!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 170
What a sucky day for Edward. Dispositions suck. And then, her moving out. Yeah, bad day. Hope he can convince her not to move away. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:41 AM Title: Chapter 170
Ohhh he thinks she doesn't want to be with him..
[Report This]Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 170
Awww, poor Edward!
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:16 AM Title: Chapter 170
Awe poor Edward... I can just feel his disappointment. Can't wait for more.
Date: 10 Oct 2013 2:14 AM Title: Chapter 170
Dont fret too much Edward ... She just needs to be independant before getting back with him ..
Date: 09 Oct 2013 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 169
ive read the last couple chapters and loved them. im so glad that charlie is her biological father. i really didn't think that would be a lie for some reason. i love the bonding time and cant wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 169
lol gotta love girl bonding time. poor charlie having to suffer through it even though he is a big flirt to the female population other then his daughter. keep up the good work
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 169
Bella's mood seems to improve with the company and being out of the house.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:49 PM Title: Chapter 167
I agree with you about the FBI/Mobward. It is the best. I think we like his protective side.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 3:01 PM Title: Chapter 169
yay, the cast is off. slowly, everything is returning to a semblance of normality.....love this story!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 1:07 PM Title: Chapter 169
So loving this story so glad she is on the mend.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 169
great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 8:21 AM Title: Chapter 169
Bella needs some girly time.
[Report This]Date: 09 Oct 2013 8:10 AM Title: Chapter 168
I adode how supportive Edward is to Bella.
Date: 09 Oct 2013 6:42 AM Title: Chapter 169
Charlie is so cute. I wish her could get out of his jail time completely!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 169
Yay! She's freed of the cast and is having some girly bonding time. She needs that. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 09 Oct 2013 4:07 AM Title: Chapter 169
Yuk shopping....
Date: 08 Oct 2013 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 168
Poor B. Gonna be a hard road for her.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 6:27 PM Title: Chapter 167
wow that was so great of E to get them that time.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 6:23 PM Title: Chapter 166
Yey for Daddy Charlie.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 6:19 PM Title: Chapter 165
E is such a great guy. Can understand B's rel;uctance with everything. She has a long road ahead of her.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 6:15 PM Title: Chapter 164
awww for B going to E's place.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 6:04 PM Title: Chapter 163
Good Answer Charlie.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:54 PM Title: Chapter 162
They should have sedated her before they restrained her. Stupid people. Betting Charlie already knows.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 161
Awwww she is such a sweetheart.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 3:10 PM Title: Chapter 166
YES!!
that conniving pos!
Happy to be finding you here
Reb!
Date: 08 Oct 2013 10:50 AM Title: Chapter 168
great chapter loved it
Date: 08 Oct 2013 4:38 AM Title: Chapter 168
Edward is so darn sweet with her...eactly what she needs right now.
[Report This]Date: 08 Oct 2013 2:37 AM Title: Chapter 168
Bella is making amazing headway. She needs to count her wins and not her losses, look at where she started and where she is now. Edward is right, and he should know since he is in a similar situation. Great chapter and I'm looking forward to the next one.
Date: 08 Oct 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 168
Isn't somebody going to off Aro in prison? Wouldn't that be nice? She IS getting better....
Date: 08 Oct 2013 12:01 AM Title: Chapter 168
Poor Bella. I know it's frustrating for her, but healing takes time, you can't rush or force it. She's making huge strides and coming a long way, but she can't try to do too much or she's going to go backwards in progress instead of forward. I am proud of her though. It's a step in the right direction. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 07 Oct 2013 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 168
I want Bella to get better at a faster pace as well but she is getting better though.
Date: 07 Oct 2013 2:50 PM Title: Chapter 167
hi!! sorry FF is a pain inth ass. just came here to see all of your updates i've missed. love were this is going.
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2013 5:54 AM Title: Chapter 167
Nice chapter. Bella i sgetting better, Unfortunately Charlie has to leaver her soon, but hopefully for not that long.
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:59 AM Title: Chapter 167
aww that was sweet of him great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 167
Why do I feel this is another calm before the storm type setting? Is something gonna happen to Charlie on the father/daughter dinner date since the Volturi has some stragglers?
Can't wait for Bella to ask Edward to start sleeping in the bed with her again. They need that connection.
Date: 07 Oct 2013 3:05 AM Title: Chapter 167
That was so sweet of Edward.., did Aro die?
Date: 07 Oct 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 167
That was amazing :) I really loved this! :D
[Report This]Date: 07 Oct 2013 1:43 AM Title: Chapter 167
Loved the chapter. Bella Nd Charlie definitely deserve their father daughter time. Edward is too sweet and sexy for words. I love me some FBI/Mobward too. Definitely one of my favorite "wards" to, right up there with Baseballward.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 10:40 PM Title: Chapter 167
Absolutely loved it can't wait for more
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:58 PM Title: Chapter 167
Edward is so good to her, I do feel so badly for Bella is it has to be hard to deal with all of her injuries and physical side-effects of her kidnapping right now!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 167
Lovely
Date: 06 Oct 2013 8:55 PM Title: Chapter 166
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AWE what a great chapter! So happy for both Bella and Charlie. I think this will be a turning point in Bella recovery.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 8:26 PM Title: Chapter 167
yay edward did even better at lifting her spirits i hope that whatever happens on her b-day will not make them all lose what little work they gained with her. keep up the good work
Date: 06 Oct 2013 8:03 PM Title: Chapter 167
Even thought I haven't mentioned it, it hasn't escaped my attention that the Dr.'s name is "DuRoy"......shades of Bel Ami......It will be good for Bella to get out on a "girls"day. She needs both the time out of the house and to be with other females.....have I said that I've grown very attached to this story?
Date: 06 Oct 2013 7:55 PM Title: Chapter 167
Angela is a bitch .. how could she not visit her til now , some best friend and cousin she is ..
Date: 06 Oct 2013 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 167
Sweet...he is sooo sweet and caring. Love him!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 7:37 PM Title: Chapter 166
*cheers* im glad that aro was proven a liar and that this is one less worry on bella's shoulders i hope this will help her get past her little trust issues faster knowing that aro was a liar and was out to destroy her life. keep up the good work
Date: 06 Oct 2013 1:51 PM Title: Chapter 166
Thank god.... Thank you
Date: 06 Oct 2013 10:03 AM Title: Chapter 166
glad that part is over cant wait to see wat happens next update soon
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 166
So glad Aro was a lying piece of shit. Bella and Charlie deserve some good news.
'My asshole isn't hiding anything but hemorrhoids.' ... I laughed out loud, pretty unladylike at this.
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 6:10 AM Title: Chapter 166
Oh man, that was the result I (and I'm pretty sure all of your other readers) were hoping for. I'm loving this story and all your other work and I'm glad to see that FFn being a b**** hasn't stopped you from writing. I'll gladly follow where ever your stories go...us Twilight obsessed teachers need to stick together!
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 5:02 AM Title: Chapter 166
Loved it! And Aro's issues couldn't happen to a better guy! He deserves to have his nuts cut off as cruel as he is. But, then who is the female version of Aro's father????? Can't wait to read more.
Date: 06 Oct 2013 3:51 AM Title: Chapter 166
Yay!!! I was really hoping he was lying...and he was!! :D Thanks for the update!
Date: 06 Oct 2013 12:05 AM Title: Chapter 166
Came over to add from FF.net, can't believe they still are on that stupid kick about deleting stuff, so irritating! :) Can't wait to read more!
-Kate
[Report This]Date: 06 Oct 2013 12:02 AM Title: Chapter 166
LOVE IT!!! Thanks god! Thats a stress off of Bella so she can get back on track with Edward!!
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 11:31 PM Title: Chapter 166
I am so enjoying this story so much you are an amazing writer.
Date: 05 Oct 2013 10:19 PM Title: Chapter 166
I KNEW it was a lie!! I knew it. Thank you.
[Report This]Date: 05 Oct 2013 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 166
Looks like Aro is literally the ball-less bastard we all knew him to be. I guess his plan was to tell Bella that Charlie wasn't her father and since he was going to kill her, having that horrible info on her mind would be the last thing she thought about before she died, never to find out the truth. He needs to become some big, hairy guy's bitch in prison. That would be a good beginning to some payback for the hell he put Bella through.