Date: 26 Oct 2013 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 183
She can do it. I predict this will be what finally healed her and allows Edward to touch her.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 2:24 PM Title: Chapter 183
Poor scared b. Glad she'll at least have e to focus on
Date: 26 Oct 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 183
Wow this is still soooo damn good...
Date: 26 Oct 2013 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 183
That sucks Edward had to have a second surgery, but I am glad that he's finally healed. And I like seeing them working together as a couple and regaining that strength. That trial is going to SUCK for Bella. Thanks for sharing!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2013 5:39 AM Title: Chapter 183
They seem to be getting stronger physically and emtionally everyday little by little. They need each other to get through the trail, glad Bella has finally realized she needs Edward.
Looking forward to the trail.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 182
Anxious for the trial.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 5:23 AM Title: Chapter 183
That was amazing! I cannot wait to see what happens during the trial!
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2013 5:12 AM Title: Chapter 181
That couldn't have been a more perfect exchange in that moment.
[Report This]Date: 26 Oct 2013 4:59 AM Title: Chapter 180
I can hardly believe Edward would walk completely away, but I understand his point of view. Bella can't go on pulling and pushing him in and out of her life. It's not fair to him.
Looks like he has went all out for their date.
Date: 26 Oct 2013 4:21 AM Title: Chapter 179
Glad to see Alice give Bella some quality girl time and helping Bella get ready for her date with Edward. Also, glad they are getting a second chance of happiness, they both deserve.
Date: 25 Oct 2013 11:29 PM Title: Chapter 183
I am glad they are working through their issues and getting stronger physically and emotionally!
Date: 25 Oct 2013 8:18 PM Title: Chapter 183
I'm so glad they she didn't shy away from him again but seeking him out for help now:)
Date: 25 Oct 2013 8:09 PM Title: Chapter 183
great chapter loved it
Date: 25 Oct 2013 4:04 PM Title: Chapter 182
Can't wait for aro top get what's coming to him
Date: 25 Oct 2013 3:18 AM Title: Chapter 182
Loved it. She has a lot of making up to do.
Date: 25 Oct 2013 2:35 AM Title: Chapter 182
That was amazing :) I cannot wait for more!
Date: 25 Oct 2013 2:30 AM Title: Chapter 181
AWWW!! That was amazing!
Date: 24 Oct 2013 10:43 PM Title: Chapter 182
Awe! I love them so much!! Both of them have grown so much!! I'll be sad when the story is over! But I'm excited for what you have next!! :)
Date: 24 Oct 2013 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 181
They can be so sweet.
Date: 24 Oct 2013 2:10 PM Title: Chapter 182
great chapter loved it
[Report This]Date: 24 Oct 2013 4:47 AM Title: Chapter 182
I have to agree with Edward and Bella about this chapter (so to speak) of their lives being over soon. They deserve their HEA. Edward is definitely the perfect boyfriend for her, he gets her anxiety/touch issues and can protector her from further harm. See ya tomorrow.
Date: 24 Oct 2013 3:37 AM Title: Chapter 182
Good lets get this out of the way!
Date: 24 Oct 2013 3:35 AM Title: Chapter 182
Well, I'm happy they are making progress and growing stronger as a couple. I think the trial is going to freak Bella out an maybe set her back a little, but they'll get through it. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 24 Oct 2013 1:36 AM Title: Chapter 181
Awwww! I want Aro to be beating everyday in prison before you fry him. He should have the same fear poor Bella did. :)
Date: 23 Oct 2013 8:32 PM Title: Chapter 181
LOVE IT! SOOO GOOD!
Date: 23 Oct 2013 6:20 PM Title: Chapter 181
Awwwwws right!!!
Date: 23 Oct 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 181
aww im glad they are going to make this work. also proud of bella and her big step in kissing him without freaking out. keep up the good work
Date: 23 Oct 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 181
aww great chapter loved it
Date: 23 Oct 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter 181
I'm so happy they finally got things sorted out.
Great chapter. Thanks
[Report This]Date: 23 Oct 2013 4:28 AM Title: Chapter 181
*hand raised high in the air* if you send Aro to Texas, we'll take care of him. As Ron White says in his show, in Texas we believe in the death penalty. Where other states are abolishing the death penalty, Texas is putting in an express lane!
This was such a cute chapter, and these two definitely deserve some happy times. Can't wait for more.
tsm
Date: 23 Oct 2013 4:27 AM Title: Chapter 181
I am so glad that their dinner is going so well. The both deserve to be happy and I would like to string Aro up by his balls!!!!
Date: 23 Oct 2013 3:57 AM Title: Chapter 181
def an awwwww moment.
Date: 23 Oct 2013 3:46 AM Title: Chapter 181
So much for slow! LOL
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2013 11:53 PM Title: Chapter 180
WOW! I can't belive we are up to 180 chapter this is truly an amazing feet!! U truely have capivate & intriguied me!! Thanks 4 all ur hard work & thanks 4 the frequent updates. I most definatly give this a 10 star rating!!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 98
I've been reading a lot of horrible and cruel shit in the fandoms, but I'm almost dared to say this was the worst one... You're great Sweety!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 180
I am so glad that Edward is not going to let Bella hurt him again. He just needs to lay it all on the table. Bella will either be smart and not hurt Edward again or bye bye.
Date: 22 Oct 2013 7:31 AM Title: Chapter 180
Really, he was going to walk away....
Date: 22 Oct 2013 5:03 AM Title: Chapter 180
I liked this. I'm glad he knows to let his heart heal if she walks away again. Can't wait for more!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 180
I totally like Rose in this story. And it's nice to know a bit more of Edward's background. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 22 Oct 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 180
It makes me sad to see everyone hating Bella so much. I don't agree with the way she left, or the way she pushed Edward away, at all. But I understand her need to feel independent again after everything she has been through. She was doing what she thought was best, even though everyone disagreed with her. And at that age, who didn't do stupid things and screw up every once in awhile? I'm certainly in no position to cast stones. And unless one has gone through the kind of experience she has, I don't think anyone can know how they would act during the aftermath. Many people push away the people they love. Does it make it right? Certainly not, but it happens.
All that said, my hope is that she has truly learned her lesson this time. And if she hasn't, he is absolutely right to walk away. He cannot keep letting her hurt him the way she has been, intentional or not. And he needs to be honest with her about that intention.
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:42 AM Title: Chapter 180
Loved it! Very romantic. He did great.
Date: 22 Oct 2013 2:10 AM Title: Chapter 180
i hope this is a new start and better round of being together after all they been through i hope they get there happy ever after. keep up the good work
[Report This]Date: 22 Oct 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 180
Bella is so ridiculous, saying that Edward lives "frugally". From the pics on your blog, one can see that he has a very nice condo, nice car, & a good education - what more could a single man ever need or want?!
What she fails to realize is that he's not frugal - he's smart - not wasteful like her stupid ass. She's the kind of idiot that will blow all of her money, if given the chance. People like her disgust me! She's had it easy all of her life, never having to work for, or earn a thing - having everything handed to her...and she doesn't truly appreciate it, or realize how lucky she truly is! She thinks the world owes her something, & easily passes judgement on others. She looks down her nose at everyone, including Edward, like the spoiled little princess that she is!
I wish Edward would've listened to Esme's advice to leave Bella alone, cut his losses, & play the field, instead of listening to his heart that's sadly blinded by one-sided love right now. :(
I hope she blows it again, & he keeps his word that he will walk away, so that he can have a chance at finding true love & happiness with someone who deserves him - not Bella!
If they ever get married, which I hope not, he better get her to sign a prenup! She'll bleed him dry & then dump him when/if he can't spoil or cater to her.
Date: 22 Oct 2013 1:11 AM Title: Chapter 180
I am totally in love with this story! I just dont understand why everyone is beating up bella for trying to heal and get the real bella back on her own...yea the way she left wuz wrong...but he hurt her too. ..and they should all get over it...this is between edward and bella...not edward bella and his whole family.........on another note I feel bad about his history... its very tragic. ..
Date: 22 Oct 2013 1:00 AM Title: Chapter 180
Wow his history is blacker than we knew
Date: 22 Oct 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 180
Poor Ed...rose is right though
Date: 21 Oct 2013 10:42 PM Title: Chapter 30
Now they're getting to know each other;)
I thought it was a great idea to introduce him as her boyfriend, and hopefully he won't be against this too much *lalala*
Date: 21 Oct 2013 8:53 PM Title: Chapter 179
awww they are too cute. Glad Alice and Rose are there for her.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 7:21 PM Title: Chapter 179
So cute. Loved it
Date: 21 Oct 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 179
I am so happy that they are working things out slowly. Bella has been hurt, but so has Edward and she needs to remember that fact. She is the first person he opened up to and she was cruel to him. He just did what she asked, even if she suffered from tempory insanity. He didn't want to hurt her. He didn't think of himself, but that was all Bella did.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 1:38 PM Title: Chapter 15
Interesting that he took a liking to Emmett;)
I'm curious what his reaction will be to bambina being his little one...
Date: 21 Oct 2013 12:17 PM Title: Chapter 4
And heres Edward;)
Date: 21 Oct 2013 12:11 PM Title: Chapter 3
Mean people would say with such friends you won't need any enemies;)
Date: 21 Oct 2013 10:53 AM Title: Chapter 2
It doesn't sound like Bella is the happiest, if she's spoilt...
Date: 21 Oct 2013 10:41 AM Title: Chapter 1
I'm going to give this a try now, even if I'm really late into this story...
let's see how fast I can catch up with you
Date: 21 Oct 2013 10:22 AM Title: Chapter 179
aww great chapter loved it
Date: 21 Oct 2013 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 179
This was good. Can't wait for more.
Date: 21 Oct 2013 3:44 AM Title: Chapter 179
Loved it can't wait for more :)
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:26 AM Title: Chapter 179
Awww. Love the girly bonding time with Alice, but love the descriptions of what they are wearing for their date. They need this. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 21 Oct 2013 2:15 AM Title: Chapter 179
SO amazing! I love it!
Date: 21 Oct 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 179
Cool off they go
Date: 20 Oct 2013 10:57 PM Title: Chapter 178
I liked this. I'm glad to know that he wasn't actually one of aro's men. I'm glad that Edward went to her and they could talk, and I'm glad they are just going to date and start slow. Can't wait for more.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 8:41 PM Title: Chapter 178
Glad they're on their way back.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 8:02 PM Title: Chapter 177
Is this the beginning of a reconcillaiton?
Anxious about what the deal is about Randall being free.
[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 176
Good for Esme. A little inconsiderate of Emmett to call Edward wanting help after the way Bella treated him, especially when he just had surgery, even if they didn't know he did at the time.
Date: 20 Oct 2013 3:13 PM Title: Chapter 178
great chapter loved
Date: 20 Oct 2013 1:52 PM Title: Chapter 178
Glad they are making progress and I'm not hating Bella as much now, she really pissed me off leaving like that.
Date: 20 Oct 2013 8:02 AM Title: Chapter 178
I'm glad they are finally moving on. Thanks for the update.
Date: 20 Oct 2013 5:47 AM Title: Chapter 178
I'm glad they talked and got that all straightened out. Thanks for sharing!
Date: 20 Oct 2013 3:07 AM Title: Chapter 178
That was amazing! I am so happy for them!
Date: 20 Oct 2013 2:02 AM Title: Chapter 178
Glad they are going to do the dating thing.
Date: 20 Oct 2013 1:59 AM Title: Chapter 178
Thanks for the update..
Date: 20 Oct 2013 1:39 AM Title: Chapter 178
I do think they need to slow down and recaptured what they love about each. Dating is a start. They both need to get better mentally and of course physically.
Date: 20 Oct 2013 1:15 AM Title: Chapter 178
Edward is so right in how he's dealing with the whole thing. I feel for him but they'll get there!
Date: 19 Oct 2013 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 1
I get it, believe me I do...I just can't stand Bella as a person/character, & if my son were dating someone like her, I'd be so disappointed...livid. :(
Please do something with Emmett, though! I'm sick of him treating Edward the way he does, & always getting away with it! He definitely needs to be taught a lesson or two, too! Not only does Emmett get away with everything, but he also seems to get "rewarded" too - like getting his daddy's house/businesses/money, staying out of jail/trouble, a relationship with Rose, etc. - NONE of which he deserves! He never has anything bad happen to him...but I think it's time he was knocked down several notches - he deserves it! He's worse than Bella in some ways. :(
If Edward can't get the proper respect/treatment he deserves from Bella, then he damn well should get it from Emmett at least! LOL ;)
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2013 9:29 PM Title: Chapter 177
Grrrrrrrrrrrrrrrr! I CANNOT believe how EASILY he forgave her! It's complete & utter BULLSHIT!!! Hopefully when he wakes up, he'll come to his senses, & leave! He can forgive her if he wants to, but I don't think he should be with her!
This story is just going downhill with all of this because the ONLY one who ever seems to suffer or pay for anything is Edward! And keep in mind that everything that is/was done to him has been unjustified!!! Bella & Emmett deserve their comeuppance SO MUCH!!! Two spoiled, stupid pricks. You, the author, need to give it to them!
I mean, all she did was say she was "sorry". How LAME!!! Then she had the audacity to order Edward to arrest someone & then wanted him to soothe her. WTF?! I'd soothe her alright, with my foot up her bony ass! I wouldn't have even went over there in the first place! Edward's a glutton for punishment, because that's all Bella will ever be, not to mention her nasty ass family - namely Emmett.
If she isn't made to suffer any consequences from her bad choices/decisions, then HOW the hell is she ever gonna grow up or mature...or maybe have a chance at being a better person, or ever learn to appreciate Edward?! People keep mollycoddling her, & giving in to her every whim, & it ISN'T doing her any favors! If Edward really wants to help her, then he'll leave her alone for a while...let her learn her lesson for once.
And Emmett...he NEEDS his idiotic fucking face smashed in! Can't he be shot, run over, or have the shit beat out of him?! PLEASE!!! He DESERVES it, & so much more!!! He needs put in his place, BIGTIME, otherwise, he's always going to be that way, & Edward DOESN'T need or deserve that shit, least of all from him!
Edward's had enough abuse in his life, & he doesn't need any more of Emmett's or Bella's added to that! Edward has been NOTHING but GOOD to ALL of them funkballs!!!
The audacity of Emmett is staggering - not believing Edward. WTF?!? Doesn't that dumb f**k realize that regarless of whatever Edward was doing, he didn't have to even come over there at all?!? Like brother, like sister, I guess - unappreciative assholes!
In all honesty, Emmett SHOULD be in jail right now, right along with daddy, not only for his criminal involvement, but for his cowardly, brutal assault on Edward! So, he should be kissing the ground Edward walks on!!!
Author's Response:
I do not condone Bella's behavior. She is acting like a spoiled rich brat. However, everything she's ever known has been thrown into upheaval. Some of it is due to her behavior and some of it is due to her kidnapping. To put it lightly, she's screwed up in the noggin. Edward is a bit of a pansy, running to her aide each time, but he loves her. If there was a way to make her apology more heartfelt, I would do it, but she's battling demons...as is he. However, they will ultimately help each other heal. Edward knows what she's dealing with and how to handle it. Bella needs his strength, but also to grow herself. She's still a child, in many aspects. Spoiled to a fault and had every whim catered to her.
It'll be a long process...no doubt. Have faith.
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 176
I agree 100% with what Esme said, except she shouldn't have taken Edward to Bella's! Not only is he just recovering from surgery, but she should've stuck by what she said, & let Edward realize that he can't always go running to Bella...but, since she's going with him, she should at least, as Edward's mother, give them a piece of her mind - but since Bella's out of it, she could give it to Emmett, & let him relay the message later! However, Esme shouldn't do it in front of Edward & upset him, or make him think she is overstepping her bounds, because she wouldn't be - she's just being a concerned, caring parent who isn't going to stand idly by & watch people take advantage of her kind-hearted son.
Again...Edward SHOULD NOT run to Bella when she needs him. Doesn't that defeat the whole purpose of her wanting her "independence" & space?
Anyway, it's Bella's fault once again that she's even in the position that she's in - both before & after! So why have sympathy for someone who keeps bringing on their own misery & destruction? Being kidnapped didn't teach her a damn thing! She's still hard headed, stubborn, immature, spoiled, ungrateful, & selfish! NOT a winning combination! Edward SHOULD steer clear of her!
Bella was & has been nothing but RUDE, inconsiderate, & thoughtless, only caring about herself as usual...so Edward should do the same in return. And Edward was wrong when he said that she doesn't have family, because she does! Emmett is her half-brother - let him deal with her whiny, weird ass! Not to mention she has a doctor, & money to afford more care if needed. It's not like she's some poor little destitute girl who has nothing & no one. She CHOSE to alienate herself, & Edward from her life...so why fix that for her?! She NEEDS to do that for herself, or else she's NEVER going to grow up or learn a damn thing!
And Emmett, once again, sounding like an expectant douche, like Edward should be beholden to Bella, who has done nothing but be an ungrateful bitch. Just because Edward didn't answer his phone, what's it to Emmett where Edward was?!? Again, RUDE!!! It's NONE of Emmett or Bella's business where Edward was, or what he was doing. And once Emmett heard that Edward had just had surgery, he should have NEVER still expected Edward to come clean up he or his sisters mess! But that just goes to show you how rude & inconsiderate they are! They both have such a sense of entitlement, & I hate it...hate them! Her whole family sucks, despite Charlie's sudden kindness & accolades for Edward.
If Edward runs right over everytime like their little indentured servant boy whenever they call or need him, what's that showing Emmett & Bella? It's showing them that they can use & abuse him whenever they want. :(
Besides, has Bella or Emmett ever been there for Edward, or done a damn thing for him?! NO!!! Thank God for Esme, or else he would've had to go through his surgery alone.
I actually was kind of excited for a brief moment when I thought that Edward might be attracted to or interested in Dr. DiBuona. He should move on! Bella DOES NOT deserve him, AT ALL!!! Besides, Edward doesn't need all of her baggage & spoiled princess bullshit in his life. He needs & deserves a good woman, & Bella certainly ISN'T it! Plus, I think it would be a little pay back & a lesson for Bella to see or hear of Edward with someone else. She'd have no one to blame but herself!
Date: 19 Oct 2013 7:42 PM Title: Chapter 177
they really need couples counselling too I think.
Date: 19 Oct 2013 6:42 PM Title: Chapter 177
Glad to know it's moving forward. And glad Edward told her it would take time to forgive her. They are like two peas in a pod with their experiences now. They will heal better together I think.
Date: 19 Oct 2013 3:36 PM Title: Chapter 177
im glad that he was able to get through to her and find out who it was she saw to be able to get things handled before someone else got hurt. i hope he will make her work to earn his trust back after what she did but he should work to make her want him back after all she has been through. keep up the good work
Date: 19 Oct 2013 2:29 PM Title: Chapter 177
He got her out of it pretty fast. Loved it
Date: 19 Oct 2013 1:32 PM Title: Chapter 177
Good chapter, I just wish it was longer!
[Report This]Date: 19 Oct 2013 8:51 AM Title: Chapter 177
idc about the lemons..... yeah u make em hot... i just bella to get her shit together and stop hurting edward :(