Date: 22 Sep 2015 1:49 PM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up
It was really a good story. I liked how you showed all the characters. But there is one thing i always wonder. Bella got paid for her mistakes individually. She had to live in guilt, couldn't move in a relationship. But edward though he was miserable he good really good bargaining. He may had not moved forward emotionally. He did love tanya and had her company physically. I wish edward could suffer more... All in all it was good.
Date: 19 Oct 2014 6:53 PM Title: Chapter Nineteen: Mean
I don't get how it was Bella who had to stop the wedding when they haven't seen each other for 3 years and it was his choice to have this wedding no matter how wrong? I mean who in their right mind would stop a wedding to tell her ex that she still loved him after all of this time?
Date: 27 Aug 2014 11:48 PM Title: Epilogue: Never Grow Up
Love the perfect ending. I am sad that this wonderful story has come to an end. Thank you for sharing with us.
Thank you so much for all of your reviews, and for taking the time to read the entire story. I am so glad you liked it 😃
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:30 PM Title: Chapter Twelve: Cold As You
Iam gad that Bella and Embry are still friends. It was a sweet idea Brook had. I just hate that it ended badly. Wow Edward's family had a bad reaction to Tanya being there. I hate that Edward is settling for 2nd best.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 3:19 AM Title: Chapter Seven: The Story Of Us
My heart breaks for both of them. I think they both are wrong. They have invest so much time in their relationship. They have said that they have learned to talk about their problems and work through them bur apparently not. Bella and Edward both need to tell each how they feel and why.
Date: 27 Aug 2014 1:34 AM Title: Chapter Four: The Other Side Of The Door
Wow they have been together for over a year a have not said "I love you". Wow that is just about unheard of now days.
I can not believe that Emmett did that to Rose. I don't blame Rose for being mad and hurt.
Date: 17 Sep 2013 7:44 PM Title: Chapter Twenty: Love Story
Sorry I haven't reviewed in a few chapters but RL sucks!
Glad that Bella got to say her piece but I really wished she had kicked him in the balls too. He deserved it.
Chapter 20: Love the progress that they have made. They truly seem to be on their way to true happiness.
Caution...Rant Ahead: What the Fuck? Where the hell does Edward get off being angry about a drunken one night stand that Bella had a couple of years ago? He's been fuckin and saying I love you to the same skank for the past tree years. He was going to marry the bitch. Again he needs a good swift and hard kick in the balls. Oh, wait, I earlier declared that he was a pathetic, Balless asshole so maybe she should just shove a pineapple up his ass. Rant over.
In all seriousness, I liked the way you brought them back together. Bella definitely deserves to be happy.
Can't wait for more!
hahahahahaha Sorry you see Edward in such a bad light, but I'm glad you're still reading :) Thanks for your review
Date: 17 Sep 2013 1:55 PM Title: Chapter Twenty: Love Story
I am so glad that Brook and Sebastian found each other as well. Bella just needs to move in with Edward, so Brook can move Sebastian into the apartment.
Aren't you the little mind reader? :) Hope you enjoy next chapter
Date: 21 Aug 2013 7:57 PM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now
Too easy Bella lol. Im so glad we've reached the wedding.
Wil they have a heart to heart after, will Edward feel bad knowing Bella never moved on?
Sooooooo many question lol
I hope I'll be able to answer them all. Thanks for the review :)
Date: 21 Aug 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter Eighteen: Speak Now
Woo hoo!!! Finally!!! (throws confetti in the air, fist pumping, marching around the room wielding a imaginary baton). Can you tell, I'm happy with the way this went...but I can't wait for the fireworks when Tanya is given the awesome news! Update soon please.
Thanks so much for your review! Can't wait to see what you think of the next chapter
Date: 09 Aug 2013 6:36 AM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable
This is one of the most stupid Edwards I've come across. Now I don't even want Bella to stop the wedding.
He is selfish, point blank. Went to the 1st woman and declared his love (seems he gets that feeling so easily) and expects his family to drop Bella for his new chick.
I want a Bella that will kick him to the curb. Make him work for forgiveness. Because all I'm seeing is your whole relationship was lies if he moved on so quick (emotionally and sexually) while your still being faithful in a sense.
No he doesn't deserve you.
Lol sorry for my Dr. Phil moment, but these things get to me.
Love how its coming along.
First I thought you were flaming, but then I read the end haha. Thanks for the review and I hope you like how the story wraps up
Date: 08 Aug 2013 1:02 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable
Edward has already lost himself. He is marrying someone just because he doesn't want to miss Bella anymore. He needed someone to fill that empty space. Unfortunately, no one can fill that void fully.
Thanks for your review :)
Date: 06 Aug 2013 1:18 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable
As long as she is Mrs. Cullen at the end of the day. That ends the thoughts of him ever loving Bella. He has his love that is what he wants. Bella is going to stand up in a church and interrup him from the woman he loves. He does not care about Bella at all. over and over. If Tanya is horrible then he got what he wanted.
All will be revealed in the next chapter :) Thanks for reviewing
Date: 05 Aug 2013 9:26 PM Title: Chapter Seventeen: Untouchable
I am not understanding Edward right now. Anyway, don't stress about a posting schedule. As long as you don't leave me hanging, it's all good.
Thank you for understanding and for your review :)
Date: 02 Aug 2013 9:33 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent
"i've been waiting for so... long
for a mirracle to come
for THIS mirracle to come
everyone told me to... be strong
im glad i waited, thnk god things are finally picking up. i couldnt stand another chapter of him pretending to be inlove with that controlling banshee. and i cnt fuckin beleive what an asshole he's beeing knowing how close his family and Bella are. uugh! even though i have a very strong feeling he's just jealous of their close relationship. he can be such a dumbass sometimes...
(sorry 4 rambling...i cant help but type what i think most times).
Loved the ramble! haha Thanks for your review
Date: 30 Jul 2013 10:44 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent
OMG E you really are a moron..... and a selfish one too with that comment about Bella. What a Jerk. LOVE Sebastian right now. Whorena and Skankya are on my shit list too with the comment about the ring. Greedy biatches.
Loving the nicknames! They make my day haha Thanks for your review :)
Date: 30 Jul 2013 4:44 PM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent
Gah!! I hate that Bella is hurt and in the hospital but I'm crossing my fingers that she meets a HOT ASS Dr. to get her all better and so she can have a little HAPPINESS!
Edward is pathetic! He is a patheic, balless asshole. Oh and he's selfish. Personally I think you should just let him marry the hag and be a pathetic, balless, selfish Puppet for the rest of his life. I have all respect for him.
Okay rant over. I am not a fan of Edwards at all right now but I love where you're going with the story right now. Keep up the good work!
Can't wait for more!
Thanks for your review! Hope you like how to story unfolds :)
Date: 30 Jul 2013 3:30 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent
Ok, after all of this I am trying to see why Bella would even want Edward. He is entirely selfish, going so far as to want her to be alone when she is struggling to survive. I think he is irredeemable at this point. I want her to scrap her actions in the prologue and find someone who might actually care if she lives or dies (like anyone else on the planet).
And, I think she was totally wrong in not supporting him when he said he was going to Italy. But, his actions have been utterly ridiculous since then.
Thank you for your review :)
Date: 30 Jul 2013 1:46 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent
OK, Alice is right: Edward is an asshole. he didn't even ask what happened to Bella or how seriously she was hurt! He should know that it must be serious if his family flew all the way to Arizona to be with her. As far as marrying Tanya, WTH? He left Bella because she tried to tell him what to do but he's going to marry Tayna so she can tell him what to do. Huh?
He most definitely makes no sense right now. Lets hope he gets his head on straight. Thanks for your review :)
Date: 30 Jul 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter Sixteen: Innocent
YES!!! It's about time he admitted he's settling on Skankya! And OMG poor Bella! And what's with Charlie not dropping everything when he life is in danger? Oi.
But on the good news, we're almost to the wedding!! *happy dances*
Date: 25 Jul 2013 4:17 PM Title: Prologue: Speak Now
Forgot to say that I went back and read EPOV in chap 12. It still doesn't change my mind. He says he's not over her but yet he's so wrapped up in the differences between Bella and Tanya. The feeling I got from his descriptions of these differences is that he's relieved and sees Tanya as an improvement to waht he had before. He says that he wouldn't have let her pass him by which tells me that he had already moved on before he ever asked her out. He talks of his and Bellas relationship as passionate and all consuming like it was a job.
Bottom line, he held his stance. He never even considered that maybe their words were spoken foolishly. It's like he just said, well, that's done and just concentrated on the big boobs and blond hair.
Maybe it's because you've been a lot more descriptive with Bella and her feelings and anguish. We get to feel her regret and broken heartedness. With Edward, not so much. So no. I think he has glorified their relationship in his mind to justify his anger and leaving her but I doubt his heart was ever truly that involved.
Keep up the good work. The angst is killing me but I can't not read.
Date: 25 Jul 2013 3:55 PM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted
So...Not...Fair! I really thought Bella was going to get some happiness but noooooo! I realize that Bella is doing this all to herself but come on, give the girl a break. He doesn't give a shit about her, let her move on.
Still holding to the belief that Edward never truly loved Bella. This with Tanya has been all too easy for him.
Okay, with all that being said, I will trust there is an HEA. I'm very interested to see how you weave that one. Now, if I can just get past psyching myself up for two days before I can read an update. I think the angst is giving me an ulcer.
Can't wait for more!
Date: 23 Jul 2013 12:28 AM Title: Chapter Fifteen: Enchanted
I thought this was supposed to be about Bella and Edward but it doesn't seem like it
Not everything as it seems, things start to change next chapter :) It is most definitely E&B HEA
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:34 PM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World
You are so right, I didn't like this chapter. I mean, come on. Why can't Bella be happy too? Why is she still being punished for her mistake three years later? It's obvious that Edward isn't dwelling on things. I'm beginning to question if he ever really loved Bella as much as he claimed he did. I mean, he moved on and never looked back but then again he was taken in by the big boobs and blond hair. The only person that seems to be 'surviving' is Bella cause Edward is living his life to the fullest, the asshole that he is.
Okay, rant over. You're doing a great job with this story or else you wouldn't get these kind of rants out of people. I believe we'll get our HEA just I hate going through the angst to get there. Keep up the good work and I can't wait for more (and maybe some happiness for Bella, please)!
Thanks for your review :). Thank you for your compliments also. Don't fret, there will be HEA. I promise!
P.S. Not everything is as it seems. For your questions on Edward, review his POV of Chapter 12 :)
Date: 16 Jul 2013 3:40 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World
Aww, jeez. He's so in love and Tanya seems nice. How in the heck are you going to make this story work??? More, soon!
Thanks for your review :). Don't worry, you'll see
Date: 16 Jul 2013 12:23 AM Title: Chapter Fourteen: A Place In This World
Bella needs to grow up and at least *try* to move on and Edward is deluded if he thinks Tanya is where he belongs. On the other hand, they are still very young and have time to learn.
*eagerly waits for some of the happily*
Thanks Cat :) Don't worry, all will be revealed soon
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:47 AM Title: Prologue: Speak Now
See right there she is wrong. bella needs to leave them alone. Everyone has moved on she needs to . It is over he chose Tanya.
Thank you for taking the time to review my story. I appreciate that you have a different view on how you would like this story to go. I did make clear up front that this will be an E&B HEA story and do not intend to change that. I'm sorry you aren't enjoying it. Perhaps you may enjoy Mafia Princess by tufano79 more.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:46 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile
See right there, let b live her life and leave them alone. Family needs to stay together. Alice will just have to suck it up and forget B in front of Edward and Tanya. Cause we know that is permanent.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:41 AM Title: Chapter Twelve: Cold As You
Let him and Tanya be happy. She is what he wants. He left B. He .. you know you wrote it. Why ever would you want to hurt her again? Why do you girls that write FF. Think Bella is so easy she will take his shit and come back for more? At one point she needs to say. You know what you are not worth it edward, not at all.
Date: 13 Jul 2013 7:03 AM Title: Chapter Eight: Come In With The Rain
Then you take her to interrupt his Marriage to Tanya. Why? He must love her or he would not have asked her. Bella is the selfish bitch remember. The one he left. Why make Bella into a clinging vine. He will never want her, so let it go and set her up with a life. You have the power in this.
Date: 09 Jul 2013 7:51 PM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile
Can't blame Bella for not going knowing E is there and all. Alice shouldn't have invited her when she invited E.
Thanks for your review :). Unfortunately a theme in this story is selfishness, and Alice wanted them both there. She didn't think about them before she acted
Date: 09 Jul 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter Thirteen: Tied Together With A Smile
Wow, that was intense. Poor Edward must feel devastated to feel unwanted by his family.
Thanks for your review, I do agree with you, it was a very tough day for him