Date: 25 May 2013 7:34 PM Title: Chapter 1
wow!!! It was amazing to finally see what Isa thinks about everything!!! I loved it!! She is ready for more and I think that Edward is too even if going 24/7 is to much for them right now!! When will she talk to him? And will they decide to live together soon? I agree with Isa, Edward using her in the alley was so hot!!!
She'll talk to him next chapter about this, and the chapter will also answer your second question. I did enjoy writing the alley scene. The words just flowed on that one.
Date: 25 May 2013 1:25 PM Title: Chapter 1
Loved the out take. Just a little confused about Isa's physical appearance. here you say she was a skinny teenager with anorexic tendencies and even now has to be reminded to eat and not just drink coffee. However, in the very first chapter, she is described as "not skinny", maybe even considered "full figured" and definitely "soft and voluptuous". That's the way I have been imagining her and loving the way Edward worships her body. Now, I am confused.
I never said she was skinny, I said that things were hard for in high school because she wasn't skinny like the rest of her classmates. Yes, she had an eating disorder when she was younger, which I've mentioned a time or two, but her parents sussed it out before it went too far. As for not always eating properly even now, well, we've all been there. I spend a lot of time at home, yet I'm known to skip meals. That doesn't make my weight change all that much. Isa has always been full-figured, her body type is hourglass, which means that she's always going to be soft and round unless she diets drastically. I hope I cleared that up for you