Date: 31 Jan 2017 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 23
Good God finally!!! For Edward being a Dom, Bella sure as shit gets her way most of the time. But I digress...I do want to point out that a week of birth control wouldn't do a damn thing to prevent pregnancy so until the end of January, she could very well get pregnant.
Date: 24 Jan 2017 10:12 PM Title: Chapter 16
Maybe I'm being sexist but I think Edward needs to fire Bella. She's a horrible assistant, she thinks she knows everything because she's addicted to TMZ and she just doesn't have the backbone for the industry she's trying to become a part of...a girl who really was career oriented would NOT get involved with her boss, let alone have him be her DOM at home and her boss at work. As Shakespear says "the lady doth protests too much". I for one am sick of her being so self righteous and having zero capacity to learn. I don't care who Angela is to her, that is Bella's relationship and I think what happened from Angela inviting herself when to her knowledge Bella is working, to Edward making Bella tell her about their relationship and him inviting her to stay when Bella didn't want that was probably more demeaning then Edward spanking Bella. At this point I think he is a grade A ass hole and she is an impressionable girl that he is taking advantage of...it's like watching the slowest rape in history!! And, GOD PLEASE have Emmett hook up with ANYONE other than Rose because a woman like Rose wouldn't put up with the crap that Bella, Esme, or Alice seem to be comfortable with. But, at least Carlisle and Jasper or nice to their partners and don't treat them like their subordinates
Date: 18 Jan 2017 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 12
Bella seems so nice to everyone but Edward...it's kind of weird...I almost wonder if she's mentally unstable in some sense? Like the thing with Lauren. She seems to somewhat pride herself on professionalism but she should at least tell Emmett about Lauren. Just for some perspective and stuff. I get her not telling Edward but it's like she is a glutton for punishment? She kind of comes across as a wimp
Date: 11 Sep 2014 10:56 PM Title: Chapter 4
When she was turning fifty? Was that supposed to br fifteen?
Snce she is writing this story toward the end of her life, she's saying that when she turned fifty, she gave up one of the journals so it could be autioned off for charity.
Date: 25 May 2013 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 18
Will u also be posting part 2 here??? I truely do love reading this story!! I truly rater read it form here though!!
Thank you so much. I do plan on putting up the whole story over here and eventually update here as well as fanfic.net at the same time. But the uploading is a lot more time consuming on this site so it may take awhile before I have the whole story up to date with fanfic site. Hope you will keep on reading. I'm actually working on a Edward pov that will take place a couple of years in the future. Hope you will check it out when I post it. Thank you again.
Date: 24 May 2013 1:34 PM Title: Chapter 9
Oh Edward you poor man.
I feel sorry for Bella she doesn't feel very good about herself at all :(
I am now all caught up and really haning out for the next udpate....pretty please :D
Thank you for reading, I hope you will continue on :-)