Date: 28 Nov 2020 12:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
I read this story every year since I found it and it still is one of my absolute favorites. Characters are solid and interesting. The plot is face paced and mysterious and fun. It's a wild ride please keep it here. If not would you be willing to share a pdf? Bravo again! Happy Holidays!
[Report This]Date: 25 Feb 2019 12:33 AM Title: Chapter 42
I loved it all thank you
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2017 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 42
Lissa-thank you. I have read written in the stars and this one and I must say this one was hard to beat. I felt for Bella when she was so close to dying but what a surprise ending. Usually I look at the end of the story but this time I didn't and I strongly believe that it was in your favour I didn't. If Edward never ages does Bella? I got confused by that part. It was fabulous and just a sit on the edge of your seat, nail-biter. I absolutely adored all of your characters and especially Dave. He was so cute and the way he interacted with humans and their "puppies" was a hoot. I could go on and on but I have tears and so I will end with thank you a million times over.
[Report This]Date: 27 Jan 2017 4:06 AM Title: Chapter 42
Lissa-thank you. I have read written in the stars and this one and I must say this one was hard to beat. I felt for Bella when she was so close to dying but what a surprise ending. Usually I look at the end of the story but this time I didn't and I strongly believe that it was in your favour I didn't. If Edward never ages does Bella? I got confused by that part. It was fabulous and just a sit on the edge of your seat, nail-biter. I absolutely adored all of your characters and especially Dave. He was so cute and the way he interacted with humans and their "puppies" was a hoot. I could go on and on but I have tears and so I will end with thank you a million times over.
[Report This]Date: 23 Jan 2017 6:46 PM Title: Chapter 7
Oh Lissa, this is beautiful and scary and sit on the edge of your seat excitement. I haven't enjoyed suck a piece for a while and this is magnificent. I absolutely love the idea of angels both fallen and "real". I am so very sorry you have had so few reviews as I think more people should read this especially now. I'll send more reviews but suffice it to say that the work you have finished is not going unappreciated. Thank you for your time and writing strength.
Date: 29 Feb 2016 11:14 PM Title: Chapter 30
Way to kill the asshole Jenks. I love him btw. And that was an exciting chapter. What's the point of Jasper? I mean even Bella doesn't even really acknowledge him. I fill bad for him I mean Dave gets more attention and actual dialogue too. Your story is so so good and original!
Date: 29 Feb 2016 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 27
Please don't make Bella addicted to Amun's mystery scrip. Please don't let Bella's brain emplode. Please let Edward heal okay and not be fucked up from he trauma. Please get rid of Amun. Please give this group some Devine intervention. *holds hands in prayer position bows head.* *winks*
Date: 29 Feb 2016 9:23 PM Title: Chapter 25
Where is our Edward? And now Amun can read Bella's thoughts shouldn't he know his creepy behavior isn't wanted then? Also Jasper sure is taking a back seat even with his sister. Odd!
Date: 29 Feb 2016 8:29 PM Title: Chapter 22
Can we kill off this Amun douche now? It's creepy territory!
Date: 29 Feb 2016 7:27 PM Title: Chapter 19
I knew it fucking Amun! Stupid Bella! Who leaves their fuckhawt Angel to have dinner with a criminal you don't know? Good looking or not. Does he have like the power of persuasion or something? Fucking Bella Swan!
Date: 29 Feb 2016 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 18
Finally Bella think about the bigger picture. Amin is lusting right? And please don't let Amun get in the way of Bella and Edward. I agree with Edward he's bad news.
Date: 29 Feb 2016 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 12
Bella is crazy if she dies Edward fades and that is a sin. My god I love this angel Edward. BTW the world could use naked, sexy, pancake loving angels just saying (mean no disrespect people). I thought Written In The Stars was excellent but this very enjoyable. Please don't let any of the Angels fade in despair.
Date: 29 Feb 2016 1:28 PM Title: Chapter 7
You are killing me with this! This is fucking awesome! ;-D I hope the 3 fallen angels don't suffer in the end. And is Esme at the facility the same as 'yucky chocolate' Aunt Esme?? Carry on...
Date: 29 Feb 2016 12:04 PM Title: Chapter 4
I am loving this story and this Edward is fantastic! He is lethal, loving innocent all in one. He and Bella will make a killer team once they get their rhythm and maybe catch a break and a good nap. Carry on...
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[Report This]Date: 24 Jul 2014 8:25 PM Title: Chapter 42
AWESOME!!!!!! ;D i LOVED THIS STORY ;D thank you so much for posting it ;) thought of doing any f/t? ;D
[Report This]Date: 06 Jan 2014 10:01 PM Title: Chapter 42
I have loved this just as much if not more the second time around! Wouldn't mind having my own naked angel w/soft blinding white wings. Just sayin'! ;)
Date: 24 Dec 2013 1:17 PM Title: Chapter 42
Great - just like always :-)
Date: 20 Jun 2013 3:11 AM Title: Chapter 42
When i first found this I noticed there were no reviews and although this might be short, but i read this whole story in 5 hours i couldnt stop lol. I loved this and I am glad you shared it. Great writing and amazing bella and edward...my only sadness is that carlisle and esme dont seem to end up together.