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Reviewer: twi-sessed Signed [Report This]
Date: 23 Apr 2016 8:47 PM Title: Chapter 17

I have read this story straight through. Please please tell me you have plans to finish this story!  I checked fanfiction and its in the same spot as this site. I really do hope you plan to finish it!  They were finally figuring things out.  

Reviewer: MsTorres Signed [Report This]
Date: 21 Sep 2014 6:18 AM Title: Chapter 1

I started to read this assuming that it would eventually end up being E/B, however we're 17 chapters in and Edward is obsessing over Alice and vice versa.  To make it worse, they are apparently in love with each other despite not being 'mates'.  Is this story supposed to be E/B or is it A/E?

Bella and Emmett seem selfish towards Edwards feelings for Bella.  I still don't understand why Alice was friends with Bella especially regarding the situation that they were in.  The wedding excuse was lame, Bella should have been more empathetic, same with Emmett. 

The experiments seemed so Dr Frankenstein and Igor and I don't think that they actually done anything to adjust or affect Edward's love for Bella, but merely gave his brain a different way of processing things, and re-directing his thought processes.

Meh, these are my opinions on what stood out for me as a reader.

TFS

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