[Report This]Date: 20 Oct 2021 11:29 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Epilogue - Ad Astra Per Aspera
awesome
[Report This]Date: 18 Oct 2021 11:07 PM Title: Chapter 23 - As Wide as the Wind's Home
scary
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2021 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Gifts
read this before but got the urge to read again
[Report This]Date: 16 Oct 2021 2:52 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Gifts
read this before but got the urge to read again
[Report This]Date: 07 Dec 2018 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Thief of Faith
so Benjamin is burned is he the man who was after Bella in the tunnels?
Date: 20 Mar 2017 8:04 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Epilogue - Ad Astra Per Aspera
I read this last year and it's one of my favorite stories. How scary and precognitive of you at how this story has so much meaning in 2017 America. ("As it turns out, you were right about the people being easily manipulated into going against their self-interest," James said. "I played on their fears, their prejudices, and their greed, all in the name of 'freedom', wrapped in a pretty package of patriotism. I was surprised at how easy it really was." ) Freakin scary! JS
Date: 27 Feb 2016 11:03 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Epilogue - Ad Astra Per Aspera
I finished your story this morning. I wanted you to know that I don't normally do sci-fi stories but your story with tail flicks an alien Edward and all was very, very enjoyable. Thank you for your boundless creativity. Cheers! ;-D
[Report This]Date: 06 Nov 2015 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Outtake - In the Fever, Dreaming
thank you soooo much for sharing this AWESOME!!! story on here for us ;D
Date: 26 Oct 2015 4:00 AM Title: Chapter 33 - Outtake - In the Fever, Dreaming
First read this amazing story as you wrote it and never forgot it. So thrilled to see it showcased at TWCS and enjoyed it as much as the first time. Your talent and imagination are awesome. Truly a story I will always remember and count as a favorite. Thank you. XOXO,Cheri
Date: 07 Apr 2015 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 25 - Thief of Faith
Ugh how hard is it for them to see that Benjamin is the bad guy???? Hello him bragging about being computer smart gave the suspicion but his burns are what just sealed the deal for me
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 32 - Futuretake - Nessie's Mating
Of course she married Jared. That was really the only way for her in the end. She could never be happy doing what Laurent suggested.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 4:33 AM Title: Chapter 31 - Epilogue - Ad Astra Per Aspera
Wonderful ending. Really enjoyed reading this.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 30 - As it Should Be
Sweet chapter. The part with Tanya had me tearing up. I'm so glad they are all back together.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 3:12 AM Title: Chapter 29 - The Long Road
You made me cry in this one. That was a beautiful chapter.
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 1:38 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Didyme
So glad Edward and Bella are back together
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 12:41 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Dénouement
So sad that Tanya died. Thank goodness she showed Bella how to use the staff. Such a sad chapter, with Tanya dying and losing the baby. Then to end up on Didyme's doorstep
[Report This]Date: 26 May 2013 12:22 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Scattered
OMG!! The ship went down?? What the heck happened?!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 11:39 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Thief of Faith
I think Ben was the one chasing Bella in the tunnels! I bet he also had a hand in shutting down the defence system. Amun is creepy and James has gone beyond delusional.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 11:18 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Zeros Taught Us Phosphorus
I loved the Christmas celebration. So sweet. I think they have to leave the baby with Carlisle and Esme. James is delusional!! I wonder what Emmett has up his sleeve?
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 10:13 PM Title: Chapter 23 - As Wide as the Wind's Home
So glad they had the service for those that died and the drone memorial was perfect. T?het were heroes and should always be remembered as such. Well, it looks like this baby is meant to be!
Date: 25 May 2013 9:42 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Requiem
Two traitors dealt with. No get James and anyone else involved.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 9:09 PM Title: Chapter 21 - High Treason
So glad everyone is back together. James so has to die!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 20 - A Kingdom of Ash and Snow
Bella has truly step into the leadership role her people need. This is who she was always supposed to be. So glad Edward is safe. We now just need to find Rose, Alice and the babies.
Date: 25 May 2013 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Outtake - In the Fever, Dreaming
wonderful bonus chapter. Loved seeing key parts from E's POV and his backstory with his "parents"
Ty for writing and sharing with us all
Date: 25 May 2013 7:32 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Futuretake - Nessie's Mating
Glad she did the right things for her at the end.
Date: 25 May 2013 7:17 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Epilogue - Ad Astra Per Aspera
Sweet chapter. Go Rose. She be a good mom. Hope B decides to have another. lol for School Marm Esme.
Date: 25 May 2013 7:11 PM Title: Chapter 30 - As it Should Be
Glad everyone is back safe together. Buh bye Felix. At least he did the right thing in the end. Alice and her shopping.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 7:08 PM Title: Chapter 19 - This is the Way the World Ends
Such devastion! Jasper is right, those responsible will have much to answer for
Date: 25 May 2013 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 29 - The Long Road
Glad James is finally dead. Hope Didyme is ok. Nice that she sent the baby with Tanya. aww Angela.
Date: 25 May 2013 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 28 - Didyme
Glad D and B got to talk things out.
Date: 25 May 2013 6:45 PM Title: Chapter 27 - Dénouement
Glad Tanya told her how to use her staff. Poor B losing the baby. Glad Didyme didnt turn her in
Date: 25 May 2013 6:37 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Scattered
hmmm Sounds like Ben is the culprit this time. Knew sending the women away was a bad idea.
Date: 25 May 2013 6:06 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Thief of Faith
hmmm is Ben the guy Bella burned in the tunnel? LOL for Em getting caught of course. Amun is an annoying twit. James has really gone off the deep end.
Date: 25 May 2013 5:55 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Zeros Taught Us Phosphorus
Cant blame B for being uncomfortable with the worship thing. Gotta love Em. I'm all for keeping family together, but doing what is best for the baby is smarter than "daddy or mommy" rights.
Date: 25 May 2013 5:32 PM Title: Chapter 23 - As Wide as the Wind's Home
Memorial is good idea. Felix is delusional to think E would let that baby go back to those wankers.
Baby is meant to be I guess.
Date: 25 May 2013 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 22 - Requiem
Wonder if what Jessica told Bella that night was all true. Go bad ass Rose
Date: 25 May 2013 4:58 PM Title: Chapter 21 - High Treason
Rose is so cool. Strawberry shortcake--ROFL. Glad Alice is better and the babies are safe.
Date: 25 May 2013 4:49 PM Title: Chapter 20 - A Kingdom of Ash and Snow
Bella's doing a great job. Loved the kill bill reference.
Date: 25 May 2013 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 19 - This is the Way the World Ends
Go Bella. Glad she got out ok. Poor Em. Rose is a quick thinker huh?
Date: 25 May 2013 4:22 PM Title: Chapter 18 - God Hates a Coward
Wow James really is desperate huh? What a coward.
Date: 25 May 2013 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 17 - What Happens on Kebi
oooh Jessica is a skank as always. ROFL for using her clothes as a toilet though. Her Hubby is just ewwww. Glad they left when they did.
Date: 25 May 2013 4:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - When I'm Gone
I had just found this story two days ago and could not stop til I finished it. I cried like a baby at the funeral for Tanya. The whole story was really great and something was constantly happening. I loved this Edward because of his protection of Bella and the cuteness of their babies. I've read one of your other stories before but I did notice you have so many completed ones. I'm going to add you as a favorite so I can start reading those.
Date: 25 May 2013 4:00 PM Title: Chapter 16 - Winning Hearts and Minds
James' version of freedom reminds me of many countries versions. lol for needing to pee.
Date: 25 May 2013 3:51 PM Title: Chapter 15 - Meet the Empress
good interview. glad b did it. woo hoo for marriage.
Date: 25 May 2013 7:55 AM Title: Chapter 18 - God Hates a Coward
Well that was probably why Jessica wanted them to stay. If the space port was blown up, they wouldn't be able to land on Volturi. I hope everyone comes out of this okay!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 6:58 AM Title: Chapter 15 - Meet the Empress
So glad Edward and Bella made the right decision
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 6:31 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Forevermore Free
I'm so glad Alice and Jasper are talking again.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 6:12 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Emancipation
Wow, so much happening. Poor Alice. I hope they work things out. And a big NO to the king of Por Tangeles!!!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 5:01 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Adjustments
Wow, James needs to be stopped. He's completely insane!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 4:42 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Miracles
James is a nasty bugger! I truly love Rose and her fierce protectiveness. Between Rose and Tanya, no one is getting to the royal family. Two baby girls now!
Date: 25 May 2013 4:14 AM Title: Chapter 14 - Forevermore Free
WOw Rose is a pushy one huh? Poor Drones. The Haves really hate the havenots huh? ah well
Date: 25 May 2013 4:03 AM Title: Chapter 13 - Emancipation
uh oh for Jazz almost killing her. Good plans for the drone stuff though
Date: 25 May 2013 3:48 AM Title: Chapter 12 - The Palace and the Hut
James is trying to get everyone killed jeez.
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 3:47 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Incubation
Oh my!! A girl is supposed to be a happy occasion in a society with a dwindling female population. Edward needs to see that, yes indeed, he fathered a girl!!
[Report This]Date: 25 May 2013 3:22 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Vitamins
I really am liking Rose and Bella had twins!!
Date: 25 May 2013 2:46 AM Title: Chapter 11 - Adjustments
oh wow. Psycho zealots cause trouble not matter what planet they live on huh?
Date: 25 May 2013 2:20 AM Title: Chapter 10 - Miracles
Oh E You really need to suck up now. Bella handled it very well though. James is a wanker. good plan Em.
Date: 25 May 2013 1:55 AM Title: Chapter 9 - Incubation
Glad Rose is happy with Em. Yey for Alice having her baby. Tanya is so sweet in this one. Oh No you didn't E???
Date: 25 May 2013 1:48 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Vitamins
Glad Rose is settling in. Hmm Lauren is getting even creepier. Awww twins.
Date: 25 May 2013 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 7 - Repentance
Dont like that they all attacked her (verbally) like that. Think she had a right to be upset/scared. His parents and James story sucked. Glad Carlisle was there for him though.
Rose is hilarious.
Date: 25 May 2013 1:07 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Quickening
Wow her parents were real pieces of work. Poor Jacob
Date: 25 May 2013 12:56 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Two Souls, Joined as One
Sweet ceremony. Yey for babies coming!!!
Date: 25 May 2013 12:44 AM Title: Chapter 4 - The Darkest Secret
glad Jazz was so cool with the news. Glad B is settling into her ruling role. Lauren is a sneaky one I think. aww for proposing
Date: 24 May 2013 11:36 PM Title: Chapter 3 - O, Brave New World
the leash thing is pretty pitiful. But society puts leashes and collars on most of us even if they are just figurative.
The religion thing is cool though that they are all allowed to worship as they want. The shopping was cuteesp for her new pet.
The baby thing reminds me of China and the 1 child rule and preference against females.
Date: 24 May 2013 11:21 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Gifts
hmmm the drone thing seems ominous. Tayna is very protective huh? hmm so alice gets visions huh?
Date: 24 May 2013 10:58 PM Title: Chapter 1 - When I'm Gone
Wow Lauren isnt very happy is she. Wonder what Bella's back story is for wanting suicide? just because of Mike?
Tailward. Hee hee.
Glad I get a chance to read this again.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2013 7:54 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Quickening
Wow, totally did not see that coming. Poor Jacob.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2013 4:52 PM Title: Chapter 5 - Two Souls, Joined as One
Aw, so sweet. I loved when Edward called to Alice because Bella was leaking!!! On to read more!
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2013 3:45 PM Title: Chapter 4 - The Darkest Secret
Oh, I loved this chapter. Poor Alice!! So glad she was able to tell Jasper her secret and everything worked out. I LOVE Edwards proposal attempts!! I wonder how big the next animal would have been had Alice not told Bella what was happening! :)
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2013 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 2 - Gifts
Still sooooo many questions!! I really am loving this so far. Can't wait to read more.
[Report This]Date: 24 May 2013 6:01 AM Title: Chapter 1 - When I'm Gone
I've seen multiple posts on Facebook that this is a must read. So I decided to give this a go. I must say that I was totally absorbed by this from the get go. I have tons of questions and I have to get used to an Edward with a tail. I totally would have fainted, too. :). Looking forward to reading more!
Date: 23 May 2013 11:27 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Outtake - In the Fever, Dreaming
I love this story SO hard - I can't even express myself. Best of the best. ALL the feels. Made me laugh & cry ugly tears. Really good!
Date: 23 May 2013 10:10 PM Title: Chapter 1 - When I'm Gone
I love this freaking story!!! I read it on fanfiction. It's in my top ten favorite. :)
[Report This]Date: 23 May 2013 8:58 PM Title: Chapter 2 - Gifts
I read this story a while ago on another site but until I started reading it again on here, I'd forgotten just how good it is! I'm so looking forward to being able to read it in one go. It's fantastic (: